Why is this darling story on hold? I love it! Please come back and finish it. I like how Kagome is upsetting Sesshoumaru's neat little world and playing havoc with his emotions.

loving your story so far so keep up with the good work! update asap.

You rock! Please keep going!

yay~ am i 100th??

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love you lots~!!

Why does the miko sincerely need new clothes? Sesshomaru seems to be admiring her current state of dress lol. This story is coming along very nicely, I look forward to Jaken's return.

I loved this chapter!
I probably said this before, but you really write the best stories. I love them all!

I love this story, it's just so humorous! I can't wait to read more of it.

hahaha... Sess is having a hard time dealing with Kagome's current clothing! I love it... he is slowly succumbing... mwahahaha...

Although I do wonder what type of clothing you will put her in. It should be interesting to see.

Great work! I hope you have time to update soon!
~Kanazawa

oh ho, what a way to wake up in the morning!! I do wonder, though, what has Kagome terrified?

oh no! Jaken is going to hasten a reunion between Kagome and her friends that I am not sure she is ready for!

wow! Is it just me or do your descriptions (especially of eyes) get more and more breathtaking with each chapter? Wonderfully done!

beautiful scene at the water! I loved how you described Kagome's eyes-- and how you had Sesshoumaru compare them to his own. :)

cute! Sesshoumaru is going to go with Kagome to the hot springs... *wink wink* There could be something going on here...

wow, that was such a tender moment! well written!!

oh Sesshoumaru-- you knew you were going to save her... it was just a matter of time... stop trying to deny the inevitable. :)

Okay next chapter!

oh the wonders of Rin and the magjc she can work on Sesshoumaru!

wow, yet another great story from the wonderful omizumaru! I am looking forward to chapter 2! Onwards and upwards.

P.S. Interesting idea for a plot-- not too many authors actually have Kagome die... ^.~

its just so good!! I love the updates!! keep them coming please!!!

Oh, I must have missed your last update 'cause I just looked and found another chapter! LOL. And what a wonderful chapter it is! I totally love it!

This little scene was so cute. They almost appeared as a family enjoying the day out. Did Sesshoumaru honestly think his "reaction" wouldn't ever happened because she's a human? Every male reacts to a beautiful female willingly or not....unless he's gay...but then again too, I have known many gay males to have a "reaction" even though they preferred their own sex. I was glad to come online tonight and find one of my fav writers. My laptop is sick again and I really wish they'd get their **** together and fix it right the first time. I'm stuck sharing with my daugther again...jeez, I'm spoiled. Now I'm off to read your other fics. TTFN Jen

aweee I think sesshy's cothes fit kagome juuuuussst fine!

yey! you updated! *does a happy dance*

i love how rin just "helped" them along.
i do so enjoy your updates. thank you, you made my night.

so glad to see a new chapter from you! please update soon!

Poor Sesshy, if he doesn't get Kagome some clothes quickly, they are going to most likely find themselves in a situation that they will possible enjoy. lol

This Is a Cute Little Story!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Peace, Luv, and New Kimonos,

Kagome-Chan ♥

Why Sesshy, darling...feeling a little overheated are we? That horrid child....sniff...then those long firm tanned legs...oh dear, best rush to that village...kami only knows what could possibly happen and a ningen at that tut tut...

Nice one! Lovin it, sexual tension...and where exactly is that horrid little toad...wonder if he has reached his intended destination...oh it does intrigue...nice one!

Two updates one day...well done and decidely different from each other... and perfect....AWESOME!

This is such an intresting story! I love it. I noticed that you used something from the 3(I think) Inuyasha movie.Please keep up dating.

This is an intriguing story. I'm dying to find out just what Inuyasha did to so totally erase that memory and you are just going to drag it out til we want to maim you.

I thought that was an interesting thing to do to kill nightmares and then to wake up that way---YAY!!!!

How do you keep all the threads of all these stories straight in your mind? I work a job and keep three other people on track with their jobs and college and can barely remember my name. much less theirs.

Your ideas may come from the suggestion board but the stories are completely original and none of them sound even remotely the same as something else you have written.

You and a few others that I watch for are my stress relief, my guilty pleasure. Keep feeding the need.

Til next time, Deb.

Arigatou for another chap!!!!
Ur story is so good. i read all nine chps in a day. so absorbing!^__^
eagerly waiting for more.

Thanxs again!

Superb use of Ah - Un *wink* enough said. Out of the mouths of dragons...as they say.

Well done.

I trust you enjoyed your time off? Chapter 8 continues to be wonderful. I smile whenever I approach this piece, you are doing a masterful job...I wonder if anyone notices what a totally cerebral piece this is to date? I rather love it. I like how he lulls Kagome into restful sleep. Oh Jaken...you annoying little imp. Let the games begin.

MORE PLEASE! IT'S SO WONDERFULLY WELL WRITTEN WITH A WONDERFUL PLOT! MORE MORE MORE!

YAY!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Yay! I'm so glad you have updated. I was certain that this was going to be one of those never seen again fanfics.

Yay! I'm so glad you have updated. I was certain that this was going to be one of those never seen again fanfics.

Yippie Skippy!! Ideas, writing ... GOOD STUFF! So was the ending on this chapter - I loved it!! Ah-Un does certainly know more than we get to find out about, don't you think?

Excellent chapter, nicely done, as always. I will be waiting eagerly to see where you take things from here!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

YOU'RE BACK!!!
I am so happy! I totally missed your updates. So I definitely am happy that you will continue with your fics.
I was smiling like crazy while reading this chapter. He was totally caught. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yay! A new chappie. :) I'm glad you had a good vacation, and look forward to your updates!

welcome back!
*don't ever leave us again grin* heh... i mean... oh bugger... anyway, i love this story and i'm so glad that you updated.
hehe... i just love rin to pieces.

This is such an awesome story. I am so glad that you desided to take up this challenge, you are doing a wonderful job.

Keep the great writing coming. I look forward to your next update.

Yeah, I'm pretty darn addicted to this fic. Beautiful writing and an interesting premise. Can't wait to read more!

can't wait for the next chapter....

aweee cute! well, except for jaken he's just an ass head.

Wow I love how the story is set up. It's so beautiful the way you describe kagome and sesshoumaru's features. You don't just say hes hot but you give him more emotion. I don't mean it as bad, 'cause he's always so emotionless, but you give his emotionless-ness more of a feeling. Does that make sense? Well keep writing I love it so far. Update soon!! ^.^

More MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im such a baby arent i? LOL!!!!!!!

wow..add more soon

YAY! Another chapter! XD
I definitely can't wait for more. Like if Kagome wakes up to Sesshy still holding her like that. And definitely am looking forward to finding out where the rest of the group is and what exactly Inuyasha did. This fic is just too good!

Ah, how sweet! I hope Jaken gets his ass kicked!!!!!!! Never liked that little ball of slime!!!!!!!!! But, just one thing, does this mean it was Yashy who did that to her? How EVIL!!!!!!! Oh, the suspense, its killing me!!!!!!! I can only be saved by another update!!!!!!! Preferably VERY soon!!!!

Ahh yes, another step into Sesshoumaru's confusion and slow seduction of the fair Kagome. I'm always pleased to see another chapter from any of your fics. They are all keeping me very happily entertained. *bows in thanks* Jen

Iz awesomz! I'm a little nuts too, but im peanuts

Iz awesomz! I'm a little nuts too, but im peanuts

Jaken, Jaken , Jaken...I see a swift kick in your future. Let the games begin. Very nice update.

Finally! I am reviewing one of your stories. (take that laziness!)

You have to know that I loved it - otherwise I wouldn't have reviewed the story. I'm quirky in that way. ^_^ The interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru doesn't seem hurried at all. Even if I can't stand Jaken at all...at least the malicious one in your story.

Hope that he doesn't intend to find Inuyasha or someone from Kagome's group. That would be painful - especially since she doesn't remember anything yet!

Another good chapter. Interesting that Sess fell asleep with Kagome's neck still in his mouth, lol! I wonder what Jaken is going to find out......

update update update please

I love this story, but I like all the stories you have going right now. :) I'm off to read 'The Telling' now! Thanks for your continuing updates!

Your work truly is wonderful. I always find myself smiling when I see that you updated.
So yeah, I can't wait for the next one.

WOW that is some serious flattery. Congratulations, though, I think you do deserve it. My favorite review is the one I got 'Guilt' tell me it was 'beautiful'.

p.s. Woo Hoo 'the telling' is back

It is us, the readers, that should be honored that you choose to share your wonderful abilities. Your stories are incredible. They are witty, insightful, moving, sweet and hopeful. It is a rare talent you have that you weave a tale so carefully and beautifully. I myself am a relatively new reader of yours, but I am now completely hooked on all the stories you offer. And am always gladdened when I see a new update. Just continue to write as you do and that is all the thanks a reader like myself could ask for. Great job as always!!! Now...about that nagging for an update...nah, I'll start nagging in the next chapter! :)

“I also see a campfire.”

I smiled a lot when I read that line.

Why? In her recognition for Sesshoumaru not seeing abstract thought as even vaguely logical or just plain and utter nonsense.


Kagome’s allowance for this, with the particular statement above is the key. She sees the humour and understands his predilection to not SELECT to understand the pattern of one’s stream of consciousness and what is more, HE understands that SHE understands and that dear girl, makes all the difference.

My little Hentai has once again peaked her less than innocent head out as Sesshy begins to wonder about all that lovely warm female pulchritude that is our Kag’s well toned and very long legs…hehehehehe….so like Sesshy you should endeavour to find out if they are just that soft and warm at your very earliest convenience. That convenience being based on “Plot” and its ever present repression of its “Talented Author “Queen of Hentai” lol….but I can wait, you just keep drooling dear boy.

Thank you again for a great update…this fiction is incredibly quiet but in a rather nice way…and so they are off in the morning…wonder what is over that horizon…

Hmmm, you know, most writers don't appreciate their own work but that's why you have fans. What gets me is that here on this site people are more apt to be kind then any other sites. That's what gives this site it's appeal to me but the only thing that does bother me some is that there should be alot more reviewing to encourage those with talent to keep on going. I know alot more people read than review because I used to be one of those afraid to leave my email address and I think that's what causes people to review less and rate more. You aren't required to leave an email address to rate a fic. It is a shame though because this site has so many wonderful and gifted writers that deserve acknowlegement for their hard work. You, my friend, should take seriously what your reviewers say here on ASS. They have seemed to me to be very honest and loyal to those whom they have found worthy to be praised and you ARE worthy. Your fics may have short chapters but you are updating at a phenomenial rate so I, myself, don't mind short chapters. It keeps me coming back every night knowing you'll be there. And you are taking on several fics at once and not failing in any of them. If you are doing all you own beta work, it's amazing. I was not very good in English class but from what I can see, you are doing a great job. As I have already told you in your other fics...you have a new fan in me. And yes, this one is my favorite so far but I'm a sucker for romance and Sesshoumaru being curious about Kagome and being totally confused with his own actions. Mine you, not the same old scenario but one like this that he had no real thought to even bother until Rin added her fuel to flame his curiousity. But one the other hand, I just seem to be totally hooked on the others as well. Jen

Absolutely amazing! Damn, you can definitely write!!!!!!!!!!!

OoooOoooOOOooo I likey!! A lot!! I can't wait to see where this one goes!!

than k you! Great Chapter... Truly a great author!

"The unfathomable blue, dark as the deepest trenches in the ocean, seemed to bear the weight of all the world’s sorrows and the levity of all it’s joys simultaneously." That may be one of the most moving and beautiful descriptions I have ever read, I had to read that line again and again...It was incredible....Wow.... Ok I decided that your stories are all addicting! lol...Now when is the next update? Me...Greedy? Nah, never.. ;)
btw...I do hope that you are feeling better, and no rush on the updates until you are better....And then, well, there may be a tad bit of nagging! :)

Ok..so no lemon, this time...but the looks they gave each other defy the obvious...it WILL happen. You can't put these two together without them doing the mad,wild,passionate monkey dance. It just wouldn't be right. They are destined to jump each others bones until they can't walk. Heck, who cares about walking when it's not a necessary thing when having sex. This one is my favorite of your new fics. It has potential greatness. Jen

Ok..so no lemon, this time...but the looks they gave each other defy the obvious...it WILL happen. You can't put these two together without them doing the mad,wild,passionate monkey dance. It just wouldn't be right. They are destined to jump each others bones until they can't walk. Heck, who cares about walking when it's not a necessary thing when having sex. This one is my favorite of your new fics. It has potential greatness. Jen

hah hah! so yeah, no lemon. but the chapter was still very good. definitely can't wait for the next one.

Wow... Nice chapter... I have enjoyed reading this story... Your writing is good...
Can't wait for other chapters... And I sure hope you put some lemons and limes in here too...
What happened to the Gang... Will this be explained later...
Well take care and hurry and update..
Mari

This story has the makings of greatness. It is so incredibly well written and lyrical almost.
'Having said that, my favourite observation in this chapter, is Sesshoumaru taking stock of self...in the waters. Rather brilliant. Because so much of this is internal dialogue, your writing proficiency is at peak. It is a glorious read and keeps the reader wanting more. Oh yes, you have a winner and tons of intrigue.

You changed your author name I like it. I like all your new stories as well. I'm sorry to hear that you have a blood infection and I hope you get better soon.
Jane :-D

:_: I wanna kniow what happened. ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter

Hot naked Sesshoumaru... now that's something I could think about all day. XD Wait a minute, actually, I do! I think my husband is starting to wonder why I have a silly grin on my face all the time. lol
Anyways, I definitely am looking forward to the next chapter. Your fic is just soooo good!

Feel better and at the risk of sounding placating...quality is always better than quantity. An excellent little bijoux of a chapter.

Oh and "Plot" might well have a point about you *snicker*...we hentai's must stick together LOLOL!

Good night.

I hope they are naked in the spring that would be to good!! Any way Update ASAP or I cry!

Sometimes I like to write stories without an outline. It's always interesting to see where the characters take things.

Now that they are going to the spring, it makes me wonder what they will want to do next, haha XD

MD

good start, please make the chapters longer, i only say this cuz i can't get enough !

awww.... such a tender moment... wonderful... Im so proud of sess he could be mean the next day... oh well i can wait to find out what happened to the rest of the group... see ya the next update

Another amazing story!
Well, I love this one too and am dying to find out what happens next. Like where the rest of the Inu gang is and what Sesshy plans are for her. Can't wait!

One of the primary reasons I enjoy your writing style is the deft and yet minimal use of words to set a three dimensional moment in the readers mind.

Without question, it is a rare and wonderful skill to imbue a scene with not only mood, but a strong sense of place and time. The words flow, the feelings are set, and as a reader you are in that moment with the character and therefore pulled inexorably into the story’s unfolding.

One of the best examples follows.


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The moonlight shone down upon the pair, lending dim lighting and dark shadows to an already surreal scene: a dead woman, naked by the waters of a calm spring, her only vigil the most powerful demon in all of Japan. The heat of the waters from the spring met the cool air of the newborn evening and birthed a roiling fog. The blazing corona created by the dying light of the setting sun was gone from around her head, leaving only shiny ebony locks, long as her watcher’s and heavy with the spent blood of her life. Her skin was pale, the unearthly glow of the moonlight washing over her prone form and accentuating her pallor from blood-loss. Her body was snowy perfection, unmarred but for five deep slashes that crossed her back One lithe arm, stretched out in the direction of the taiyoukai, ended in a small and delicate hand, palm facing the sky and fingers curved, as though beckoning to him from the underworld.

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Already, I am mesmerized. Well done.

I really am liking this fic. I'm curious as to where you take it.

:D

Absolutely, positively exquisite...you are sooooooo on target and at full writing form with this. Brava!

*grins* That was awsome! Haha, I love this, can't wait for more! I love your writing, sigh...such feeling ^_^

This was surprising . She didn't fuss like I expected. Oh the questions I have now but I won't ask as you are doing a fine job fulfilling answers with your quick updates.

The silent musings of Sesshoumaru have really been wonderfully laid out in this piece. InuTaisho would be proud *smile*.

I rather like when you are bored, you do most excellent work and give us as readers a banquet of delicious reading fodder.

Yes Sesshoumaru, despite your very best efforts at calculated indifference, you do have something to protect...the very essence of life. Well done...as always *smile*

Mmm. Cashews.

He would not have been Sesshoumaru had he not thought the idea of reviving her through. He is a stratigist and a warrior, not to mention his statis as taiyoukai. But when his logic said leave it be, I knew Rin would win out. That and he always seems to have such a curious side, the need to know...So, now he's in trouble with himself. If things don't go the way he intnds he has no one to blame but himself but I am sure he'll blame everyone and everything for bringing her back. Good beginning...don't get too bogged down with all the fics you're working on. I hear writers block is a real hazzard when you got too many pots on the fire. Jen

very nice indeed. Excellent characterization!

I like the first 2 chapters. Tensiega will not be so easily dismissed, right? And who in their right mind could deny a child's tears? Even Sesshoumaru has a soft spot for Rin. Ok, so now I'm off to check out your other work. Great start and a good story idea. Jen

Wow, two very different fics, on the same day? You ARE good! Not that there was any doubt, of course! Right? Right!!

I like the mental image I get of Sesshy being shocked into silence by little Rin. That seems like something that would never, in a million years, happen, so of course, the imagery is irresistible! I am guessing (which, we know, is a bad thing for me to try) that he's going to revive her. That's as far as my guessing goes tonight!!

I'm intrigued, and looking forward to seeing where you plan on taking this one. As always, the writing is concise, evocative and oh-so-readable!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

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I LoVe IT !!! UpdaTe SooN!! ThaNks!!!

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I love it. How is that for simple? Another great start with an entirely different writing voice. You are skilled with a quill. Equally, I love the subtlety of the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Rin and the depth of emotions shared. There is an intrinsic warmth and carrying that with sparing text you have beautifully shared with us. A marvelous beginning, now onward. I know I love it already.

We can feel the emotional trepidation he is feeling towards Kagome and his intrinsic need to get the hell out of Dodge, and yet, responding to the needs of his ward/daughter, we know, he will do the right and honourable thing… He always does actually.

Keep going girl, you have another winner.

OH, this is really good^^ I likes it much. Please up date soon so i can read

like it so far.

I can't wait for the next update I think this could be a really good story.
Sakura

^.^ Aw, so cute...er...okay, not cute as in bubbly, fluffy cute but cute as in...touching moment cute.
Um...ya, okay that probably made no sense but oh well.
Thanks for the update it was great!

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iT's iNteResTinG!! oNegai, uPdaTe

sOon!! i WaNt To KnoW wHaT wiLl

HaPpeN NexT!! i LoVe IT!!

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Interesting enough. I'll be watching this one.

I love this story! Update soon!

So far, so good! Can't wait to see chapter two.

Muhaha, I love it! It's awsome, but I want..er...need more!! I'll go insane if you just leave it like that! Please update soon!

omg... I can tell this one will be good!! Please write more soon!

another one yes me too I don't think I should have but I come up with some really good...funny ideas. lol Good first chapter can't wait for some more updates. The telling was awesome lol

Chelsea
Magnificent Chaos