| When I first read the summary I thought it was a cute idea. But, you really make it hard to root for or even like Kagome, she acts just like, if not worse than, the those she dislikes in the fic which takes away from her character. I'm big fan of cussing but wow I think you over did it. It was like let me get in as many curse words as I can. Curse words, I believe add an effect when used properly. It seems as though (I may be wrong, to err is human and all that) they are just thrown in every where and it took away from what you really are trying to say and the effect it should have had. It just sounds crude. Also, you may want to get a beta reader to catch many of your minor grammar and spelling errors.
SexiMikoK- Sun 18 May 2008
| This is good. please update soon. im soo glad that you made Kagome and her friends strong characters. no pushovers!!! yay!!
Kami the punk- Fri 16 May 2008
| Hey I just want to say that these fanfic rules and that most importantly your stiking up for girls that are called geeks and the nerds.That really is sweet.And keep on doing this fic because its pretty danm awsome.
Violetcarson- Mon 28 Apr 2008
Ooh! I sense an evil idea from Sesshoumaru! Bwahahahahahaha!! Poor Inu, I feel just a little bit sorry for him....maybe. On 2nd thought, nope! Bastard deserves it!
I'm so glad you finally updated! Hurry and get the next one out!
Izah- Sat 26 Apr 2008
| OMG i love this!!! ive been reading some of your stories and i must say that this one might be my fav thou its hard to choose since they are all so freaking good!!!!!!
Sicilia- Tue 22 Apr 2008
| great story i read all the chapters today, really good... hope you update soon
| weeeeeeeee i love this story!!!
I wuff you~!~!!~
Lol, just kidding. But i DO wuff your story~! Ish awesome. Is it? Yes, it is. Lol. Right, update soon plz and thx.
3~
marquisha- Sun 20 Apr 2008
| i hope u update the story soon this is a great story i wonder what sesshoumaru wants with kagome please please please update the story soon can't wait until the next chapter
TheMikoShivae- Sun 20 Apr 2008
| ohh.. i wanna know! continue!
| I like this please write more
drkkizzes12- Tue 25 Mar 2008
| i just love your stories...and your ideas!!! i now believe what you said in your prof.you are weird! but in a good way!!! great story..i hope you update.
| omg finish the story!!!!!!!!! i love i love i love
LordSesshomaruLovere16- Tue 15 Jan 2008
good job can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon
later your fan Sheena
LordSesshomaruLovere16- Tue 15 Jan 2008
good job can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon
later your fan Sheena
kuma- Wed 02 Jan 2008
| i love it keep up the good work
cassie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| i love that song! and the chapter was great!
cassie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| loved they part when sesshomaru kissed kagome really good!
cassie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| loved they part when sesshomaru kissed kagome really good!
cassie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| the first chapter is great! and i HATE i repeat HATE inuyasha!!!!!!! i love sesshomaru!! he's cool!
Nya- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| It rocks please up date soon lovin it!
Little Girlie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
| I though Inuyasha is going to make a scene on that chapter. Update!Update soon.
Violetcarson- Sun 30 Dec 2007
Okay thats very strange. I was listening to a CD, and Girlfriend played about 5 minutes before I read this chapter. Spooooooky...
Anyway, loved it, it was awesome, and waaay better than most of the song-fics I've read for the song. Now, what about the next chapter?!?!?!?!?! lol, keep writing!!!!
Jenna Lee- Sun 30 Dec 2007
hey^.^I REALLY REALLY love your story. I've been following since it began. I'm a huge fan^.^ please continue, i look forward to your next update.
Much Love,
J-Lee
| Nice to see you writing again. Kagome is so determined, what is she going to do..? Can't wait to read more so update soon, please!
| Ooh!!!!! I like it!!!!! Took you a while to update though!!!!! You left us in suspense! Not fair! *pouts* Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm guessing that is when the song shall come into play. (I'm guessing from the title) Anyway, hope you update soon, and Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
kiki- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| funny, funny!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the story could be longer (the hottness of sesshomaru *drool ^_^* please type more of i will cry you did not update for so so so long that i cryed my self to sleep thinking *when will entity of sorrows will update HAY!HAY!YOU!YOU!* so please update soon
Cosmos Writer- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| this is going to be great i can just tell. you should have them sing Animals by Nickelback, that would be awsome.
inuyasha_obsessed_13- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| I LOVE YOU'RE STORY, IT IS AWSOME .. CANT WAI T TO READ THE REST OF IT!!!!
Li- Thu 27 Dec 2007
LoL, hope the cookie's a really big one for all of us to share ^_^
Thanks for the long awaited update! I can't wait to see what you dish out next! See yah on the next chapter!
Kiki- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| OMG dat is one frikn' awesome fanfic. i can't wait for the next chapter. the summary doesn't do the fanfic justice. honestly no summary cud do it justice. it's that amazing.
karina- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| cool hope you update VERY SOON! and hope you make inu look like more of a fool 'k?
chevonne- Thu 27 Dec 2007
this is so funny. i laughed very hard. I am looking forward to the next chapters
The only thing i did not like about some of it was some of the language.
Fury- Thu 27 Dec 2007
| I love your story, it's amazing!!! Put me out of my misery and update soon!!!!
emoaiko- Tue 20 Nov 2007
| pleas update i am dieing to read the next chapter T_T
Kiya-Chan- Sun 04 Nov 2007
OMFG.......WHAT A WEIRD STORY....I LOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!! WEIRD IS MY GAME AND IF THIS STORY GOT ANY WEIRDER YOU WOULD BE MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE ASAP...BIOTCH!!!!!!!!!!!.....LOL
JA!!!!!!
emoaiko- Thu 01 Nov 2007
| omg pleas up-date the story, i loves it!!! ^-^
Chii-Chan-18- Fri 31 Aug 2007
| I thought that was fucking good, Update soon.
| That was sooo funny, OMG! This will have me laughing for days. Update soon.
| Its really good. I honestly think it needs a bit of grooming, such as characterization and a little more detail. Take things slower but other than that; its fabulous!
| I love it, it is super funny!
| dun dun duuun Detention should be interesting seeing as how everyone pretty much hates everyone else!
| OMG what a compromising position!! you know Sess liked it ^.~
| haha so Inuyasha is getting his just reward....
| hehehe... great premise for a story! I like it a lot.
marquishawright- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| oh so good and funny i really glad that u update the story i hope kagme and fluffy will get togeather soon and she beat all them bitches ass
black moon inu- Sat 21 Jul 2007
O that's right kagome beet her ass. sorry got a little into it. so detention next hu well so much fun goes on in detention so I can't wait to see what you have these girls doing. LOL
hugs and puppies
cReaTiVe- Sat 21 Jul 2007
DAAAAMMN!!!
LoL, I love fics where Kagome can stand up for herself... Please Update ASAP!!!!!!!!
eternallove_495- Sat 21 Jul 2007
| POOR SLUTTY KAGURA AND UGLY KINKY-HO, THEY DESERVE IT, ANYWAYS, PLEASE CONTINUE AND MESSAGE ME, ONCE YOU UPDATED THIS STORY, PLEASE?
Lil Yasha- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| this is so funny you had me crackin up at the end and during the story it self.I can't wait to the next chaters please PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahaha and I'm still crackin up
Lil Yasha- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| this is so funny you had me crackin up at the end and during the story it self.I can't wait to the next chaters please PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahaha and I'm still crackin up
Zyren- Fri 20 Jul 2007
WOO-WOOO!
U tell her Kagome!!!!!
lol, neways, i loved this chapter too, but it was soooo mean to make it sooo short! I hope ur chapters get longer, or you do double updates, either way i just want you to update soon.
I still think this fic is totally cute and has alot of great potential and i cant wait until the next update!
inu-baby44- Fri 20 Jul 2007
love the story and i can't wait for the next chapter, detention.
Violetcarson- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| WOW!!!! Awesomeness!!! Although, Kaggy might now have some trouble getting Fluffy, seeing as she slipped tht she didn't want either of them. Oh well, I trust that all shall go well, in the end. Keep writing!!!
toni- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| awesome
sins- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| YOu. MUST. UPDATE.!!!!
Ana- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| SWEET! I can't wait for the next chapter! It's sooo rare to come across a fic that makes Kagome THAT tough! I applaud you! Pleas update soon aight? see yah!!
alexis- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| oh my god i was laughing shocked everything ooh they got detention oh my god i can't wiat for the next chapter please hurry up and right more i love it ok thanx
SesshandKags_forever- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| OMG!!! Love every single moment of it, especially 'Kinky-Ho' i was laughing and couldn't stop becuase of it lol. Send me an e-mail when the next chapter is up....I can't wait to read the rest of the story and keep it up, I love fanfics like this it makes me laugh.
SarahhhBoo- Fri 20 Jul 2007
| OMG I LOVED IT! this is a really good story so far! keep up the amazing work!
| I LOVEEE IT! Update soon. =] Hahaha. This is such a cute plot.
| LMAO ... Go Kagome! She Is The Shyt!!! Please Update Soon I Soo Wanna See Whats Going To Happen ... Poor Kagura And Kinky-Ho!
kiki- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| love it
Define-Naughty- Thu 19 Jul 2007
That was sweat! Update soon. I wanna how Sesshomaru feels about Kagome and that kiss. O and I'm glad you like my name! I got it from my shirt...lol.
Update Soon.
marquishawright- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| i'm so happy that u update the story and it's getting really good let the geek squad get their revenge mahahaha!!!please update
karla- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! please update soon!!!! please?!?! i so was hoping this story hadn't vanished! and it hasn't! thanks for updating! i really like this story! and haha, man sesshoumaru got the lip treatment! haha keep up the good work!
ann- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| please e-mail me when it is up
Fiona- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| Hello! *waves and smiles* Great story, chick-a-biddy. :) Keep up the great writing!
Ok, so chapter five isn't really a chapter, but! that last one, chapter four, was totaly kick ass funny! im into swearing today, so sue me! ok, not really, im not working right now....
I totaly felt sorry for Ayame when kouga called her that, i've never been called anything bad before, having stayed out of the....'popular' peoples way, but made their lives a living hell hole....with ways i may tell you in my next review...;-P I hope that your next one has something happening between Kags and Kagura again, it would be funny if Kags shows how low her IQ is, and that the only way she's even passing is by fucking the teachers, that sadly is what one of the girls in my high school did, we had mostly male teachers, and she usually only passed by fucking them, which, is just plain pathetic...
well, I hope the Real chapter five is up-dated soon!!!
Ta Ta For Now!
joanne
elvira- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| wow..this two chapters where funny!!!...more chapters please!!
| OMG!!! I LOVE THE STORY, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! Are you using girlfriend by avril as your inspiration, n-ways, love it so far, update soon, cain't wait to see how you sock-it to kagura and get rid of her!
courtneycutthroat- Wed 04 Jul 2007
this fanfin is so totally AWESOME
and cant wait for the next chapter if you can will you e-mail me when the nxt chappie comes up
gerardway012292@bellsouth.net
if so thanks so much
well bye,
courtney
marquishawright- Sun 01 Jul 2007
| hell ya so luv the revenge type goos story i hope u update soon! let the girls get revenge mahahaha
Rosa Villarreal- Fri 22 Jun 2007
| I really liked this story please update soon I want to know what happens . you could e-mail me the next chapter. pretty please.
| finish. omg at first i was like"ok..." and than i was like"wow!" this may get interesting. finish finish
Jhetzel- Sat 16 Jun 2007
| Please update soon. I really enjoyed reading it.
Kat- Tue 05 Jun 2007
Hey
Please update soon!! I am totally in love with this fic so far
PLEASE
Kitty Kat
~Kakashi~Hatake~- Thu 31 May 2007
| wow nice fic! it totally rocks!!!!!!! Will Kags get Yasha back by hooking up with sesshy?
Kaiya- Thu 31 May 2007
| :'D Cool chapter!! hope you update soon! It's so funny how the classmates were like "Who're they?" XD
Violetcarson- Wed 30 May 2007
| Sweet!!!!That looks totally awesome!!! I take it this fic is based off of the song we all know and love? Cool idea, I'm loving it so far! Keep writing and update soon!!!
Brittney Dunavent- Tue 29 May 2007
| Wright more I Love it
karla- Tue 29 May 2007
| interesting! please update soon.. I like how it's going so far.. revenge is always sweet.. and even better if sesshoumaru is at the finish line!
loveXnoddleronii- Tue 29 May 2007
ooh!!
yummy!!
can't wait to gobble some more up!!!
lol
loveXnoodleronii
chibi moon baby- Mon 28 May 2007
| interesting! cant wait to read more!
| PLease please please continue as soon as you can please I really like this so far and want to read more :)
Define-Naughty- Mon 28 May 2007
| OMG! That was an awesome chapter!! I can't wait for the next one so plz update ASAP!!!
that was awsome
joanne- Mon 28 May 2007
| i like it!! so does the title have to do with the avril song, "Girlfriend?"
deviilishangel- Mon 28 May 2007
| this is great! i can't wait until they get their revenge. and kagome is right. this is definitely fun!!
mitsubaki- Mon 28 May 2007
this story is awesomeee
pweasee hurry up and reviewwww
i say its not great...its FRICKIN AWSOME!!! And exact HOW rich are they? and what grade are they in? will you have sesshy want to help them? or will they have to do some...'scandolus' things?
i can't wait for the next chapter! this story is gunna be great!
TTFN!
joanne
| OMG! Love the story and all the sayings on the shirt. Your story as so much detail and it will make it all more interesting. LOL how dare you make us wait for more awesome chapters oh well update asap. Ja ne
emoako- Mon 28 May 2007
| omg!!! that story fucking ROCKS i love u forever lol ^_^
Alluring_Assassin- Mon 28 May 2007
Hey, that was awesome!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!
I love the torment to come!
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!
Lady to the Lord- Mon 28 May 2007
| WOW. i like it! please update ASAP!!! it rocks!
Shayna- Mon 28 May 2007
Awesome Story So Far...
PLEASE Continue
Cant Wait Until Your Next Update I'll Be Lookin For It
Shayna
katie- Mon 28 May 2007
| i love it and i think you should seriously start updating fast...bc when i get interested in a fic and then come to the end of the chapter and see there is no next chapter i just want to cry to UPDATE!!! AND HURRY
Katherine- Mon 28 May 2007
Yesh do it do it do it do it! Make Inu pay mwhahahahah! Update soon kay? Because I really like the story and I really want to see what happens next ^_^
-Katherine
It might not mean much to you but... DON'T TAKE THIS FIC OFF THE SITE!!!!! And please please please please don't stop writing it.
I love stories like this. It's got some good structure and I can see this go in plenty of ways. It's interesting, and refreshing! Good idea by the way.
Keep going!!
FT
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| Continue soon please and thank you
kagomebabygirl- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| its good. i wanna know what happens. please continue
Ash- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| I love please update soon!!!
Ash- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| I love please update soon!!!
| Awsome!! I can't wait for the revenge to begin
ty- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| wow! definitely a great story in the making...hope u write more!
evandrilene- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| Dude,this fic is awesome. Keep up the good work!
Alejandra- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| Perfect! I completely loved your story. Keep it up! Bye.
| Awesome! It was so cool how they changed their looks. Please, update! ^_^
| that story rocks I can not wait for the next chapter. I think the story is fine the way it is just add more chapters lol
| this fanfic is really good
veronica cruz- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| pretty good keep going
yura- Tue 24 Apr 2007
| that was great keep writing and soon
angelindisguise- Mon 23 Apr 2007
| F***ING HELL!!!! This is brill-i-ant!!!! I was waiting for someone to do a fic to this song. i love the song, it just so fits it, ya know? anyway, keep it going, darl. it rocks so much, it just ROCKS!!! well, buh-bye. Update sooooooon!!!!!
SuckMyMushroom- Mon 23 Apr 2007
| ...I...I...I LOVED IT. Update, please!
Constitutiona- Mon 23 Apr 2007
| you have got to continue this, it is way to cool, and has a lot of potential
loveXnoodleronii- Mon 23 Apr 2007
omg
i love it so far!
please update soon.
like now!
haha
i really like it!!
I think this is pretty darn good. I love that song by the way too Lol. Great job for the first chapter! Update soon!
-River
| Sounds good so far, but you forgot to close the italics tag after the flashback.
ladyAnju- Mon 23 Apr 2007
| OMG!!!! i have been thinking of doing something like this forever but i don't have the time so thank you for writeing my dream story i hope you will update soon
khandi- Mon 23 Apr 2007
| luv luv luv it. Great beginning cant wait for the unveil and the payback lol
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