u can make rin older to the point that she is old enough to mate with sesshomaru but he is with kagome an rin decides to turn to inuyasha. then kagome and sesshomaru walk in on inu and rin. then kikyo comes and gets realy mad. mabye i should start writing fanfiction. no ill leave to you. i like writing it just for me. so far you are by far my favorite writer. :)

that made me cry so bad, the poem

i really like the storys and the one of when Sesshoumaru killed himself was so sad to me keep up the good work

great stories so far!

wow!! i loved your "weird-sad poem thingy"!! it was soo000 good!! made me kind of sad and yet fascinated!! I LVVV ITT!!! (this is a crappy review, but hey....!!)

and also - i cant believe its ur first lemon! > lol

I liked it. Very good especially since it was your first lemon. I hate to be a nit picky and all but there were just a few minor spelling mistakes. It didn't really take away from the lemon or anything I am just a stickler when I read things sometimes :p Anyway, like I said it was very good. You should write more. I will look for them! ;)

nice ideas. please update soon.

i just luv this story and think its soooo cute!!! please update as soon as possible!!

PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! i beg u i luv this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please with sugar cubes on top?

DUDE....
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! IS that good enogh for you....i think this should count as 8 reveiws. I LOVE THIS STORY. Nice hot passion filled one shots. yes Yes YES. more More MORE!

um... is this like a series of one shots? I know that made me sound dumb but... i love them so far they are flippen awesome please pos tthe next chapter soon!!!!

chaos

I would most definetly enjoy a threesome, but no Naraku. I'd like to see Sesshomaru/Kagome/Inuyasha. You know, Kagome and her 'dogs.'

great lemons for a beginner loved it!! update soon!

good short stories there funny and full of lemony goodness

*gasp* I love this. U must write the next one. But, I like the first one better.

*blush* very good... very hot *blush*

I LOVE this ....but i HATE you(not really) dont hold out please please please PLEASE update soon.

i like the story. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I do hope to see it soon. Well keep up the great work.

Very nice one shots..can't wait to read more!

MEAN HOLDING THE CHAPTER HOSTGE.... POST IT PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!

you did a really good job..........ya kno this being your first lemon and all.anyway i really enjoyed this....work of art and hope you continue..lol at my email adrdress i deleted mine and it was the fastest i could get......hey i needed an address to let cha kno how wonderful u guys stories are but dont worry i should have a new one up and running in no time!keep up the great work..luv yah ray.........

meanie!

hurry up and update

nice story and all but...where did you hear that phrase? That you used as a title? I made up the full version a long time ago and someone leaked it out. I'm trying to find out who. "Sticks and stones may break my bones, but whips and chains excite me. So tie me up and throw me down and show me that you like me." You can find it on my myspace by the name of "Chandra". *Which i haven't gone on in forever....* please send an e-mail if you can remember who told you/ where you saw it. Thanks....

THREESOME!! Anubis, Kagome and Sesshomaru PLEASE!!!

so kawaii!!!!!!!!! i absolutely loved it

I just read both of these stories and all i can think of is that was hot. I would still like to know though how kagome ended up chained with out knowing? well as far as the threesome goes I'm stuck but I would love to see you write one with- kagura,kikyo,sango,kagome, and sesshoumaru. Sorry miroku some how got to the computer though it's not a bad idea. well post soon.

hugs and puppies

yay 4 threesome


lol

love the story. Hope to see more random lemons VERY soon.

Ooo I like these, gimme more? I have to say good job and more!
Ehem threesomes!
here they areeee:
Naraku/Sesshoumaru/Kagome
Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru/Kagome
Bankotsu/Sesshoumaru/Kagome

wow...this was detailed...um..more chapters please!!

that was HOT! next time you should do either a three-some with sess, kag, and the monk (forgot how to spell his name) or an orgy with sango, kag, sess and the monk. maybe with some bondage thrown in now that would be hot. the monk would probably want to be spanked ;)
just some ideas but once again the lemons so far ROCK please keep it up
love
friendlyasafrog

That was freakin' good you should really write threesome! :) My favorite threesome is Sess/Kag/Nar
because I have a thing for guys with nice hair.

damn this was hot an steamy....lol. that threesome idea souns pretty kool.

i guess some parings could be
sess/kag/san
sess/kag/oc(girl)
sess/kag/kagu
sess/kag/inu
sess/kag/miki
sess/kag/oc(guy)
sess/kag/nar

okay those are just some idea's...lol
u don't have to use them, i was just throuing random parings together ;p

JA NE
- Kiya-Chan

ummmmm O.O you need to redefine your idea of a not good lemon. Awesome chappy

YES PLEASE DO THREESOME NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Story but Sesshoumaru needs to Give Kagome Some Oral Pleasure.

that was f-ing hot!!! need shower, cold, now!

that was good you should try others

Ha Ha HA the title made me laugh!
liked it write more please!

Damn that was awesome for your first lemon. You could still add more to this story and I think you should. WOW

SSSSWWWWEEEEEEETTTT! that was good i mean wow you just jump started my inner pervert today.
Write more please.

hugs and puppies

u r good so dont stop wrighting them

DAMN!!! That was good. If you deside to write another lemon I will DEFFENANTLY read it.

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ItS exCelEnT!! LimEy!! WaY to Go!!

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Woooooowww!!!!!!!!
would ya please make a squle!!!

OMG, so totally go figure. hey, maybe you can help me with some of my problems.... for my story? anyway, great lemon, keep it going, darl. luv ya 4eva,
angel

I say for your first lemon it was not bad at all. I little freaky but that is not uncommon! "P I was entertained and I wanting to read more. I think if you attempted anymore lemons you will do just fine.

Beautiful, beautiful. The ending was very sensual and unique. I'm so into the fact that he didn't take the blindfold off. I totally enjoy your title too. So frisky. Your first time was a joy to me. Keep up the great work!

uuuuuuuuuuuuuu...
that's all I have to say..

Hehe, loved it.

Kanz

nice lemon

WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
That was pretty good, so I got a question. Will you make a squle?
I know I spelled it!!>o :I

Lol I believe you did pretty good for your first lemon. I wouldn't mind reading anything else you came up with lol.

-River

for your 1st lemon i think you did an excellent job! trust me i'm a comp sk hentai.....as of the last few months.;P

keep up the good work!
you know now kag will have to pay sess back......mb you could do a story of them in the future....mb their anniversary and she set everything up this time....just a thought....ohohoh an office scene!!!
do an office lemon for sk!!!! those are always good!!!!!

for your 1st lemon i think you did an excellent job! trust me i'm a comp sk hentai.....as of the last few months.;P

keep up the good work!
you know now kag will have to pay sess back......mb you could do a story of them in the future....mb their anniversary and she set everything up this time....just a thought....ohohoh an office scene!!!
do an office lemon for sk!!!! those are always good!!!!!

very nice lemon... bit on the kinky side but i liked it write more please

Oh, I liked it! Yay, for lemons! You might want to change the rating to NC-17 though. It goes just a tad past R. =P

nice title.
Bruce n' Charlie