loved it! Funny, sexy, silly, all the best stuff in a story. Just sad for poor Jaken.
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Awwww! That was soooo cute! Loved it!

OMG LMAO I had such a good time reading your fic. But there should be a warning saying if you are sick you might die from coughing from laughter. It was great!!!!!!!!!!! I have never read one that was so funny. I only wish it was longer or a part 2. But you did really good.

zomg. badong! Kung-Pow! x3

Oh my, that was good.

That was good, there's nothing like a great lemon after a hilarious story like that. WOW. That was one of my favorite story funny stories. Sesshoumaru drunk how funny is that.

That was awsome!

I like your lemon. I hate lemons that drag on with insane amounts of foreplay.
The best part, however was the part about Rin seeing them. Absolute brilliance.

OH MY KAMI! that has to be the most funny/serious/romantic.horny story i've ever read. it was awesome, and half the time i could keep my laughter hidden in my shirt so i didn't wake up the entire family. this story was great! I couldn't stop reading it. *glares at other fics that she has been reading for days that have yet to be finished* this was compeltely awesome! DEfiantely 10 all the way through!

Yay!! That was great! Hahaha.
Excellent work ;)

Kanz

I kind of like Jubei. He's a stand up gu- uh... slug. I promptly pronounce him best Original Character EVER.

This chapter was as touching as it was hilarious, though I wonder what Kagome would say if she ever found out about his near miss with Tsuki. ^_~

Thanks for sharing this little bit of love in a box.

hahahahaha...if i wanted to laugh, i would just read the author's notes. great story, very hilarious!

awesome!!!! I loved this fic and hope to read more works from you!

Let me first digress…gotta love Sesshy being etiquette conscious whilst downing his sushi..yes, I have to think of it that way rather than be grossed out lol!

Now onto the finale.

So like, have you noticed, both seem to have a thing for the others ASSets? Hehehe…lovin it! The food fight was delicious to say the least especially the attempt of dignity by Sesshoumaru with his own version of a cornucopia atop his silvery tresses *snicker*.

Now, I thank you profusely for Kagome’s punishment of The Big Sexy Dog. Who knew, he was into a little spanky-poo, not to mention her slamming him up next to a tree. His favourite weapon of choice for everyone when he is pissed off LOL! I rather liked that bit.

You managed quite nicely to give humour to the max, titillation, and yes love. I enjoyed it thorough, even Rin having her first lessons in sex education ROFL!

Absolutely charming, few handle humour well. Ya did a good thing woman! A very pleasurable light read! Now, about Spark….*wink*.

It's over? NO!! *waisl miserably* It can't be! Now where am i going to get my fix of sexy play and nughty desires with unresolved sexual tension? Ah, le sigh, well i guess i shall simply have to write my own, ne? *laughs maniacally* oh the possibilities!

But at least you went out with a bang...*snickers* and what a bang it was ;P There's nothing like a good romp in the dirt with everyone's favorite demon lord...but you know...the hot-spring is right there...and you know it's going to be calling to you and begging that you make use of its wonderful, steamy, sweaty embrace as your two characters cleanse away the soil from their last ride and start making a new mess XD lol that's what suckered me in the last time i tried to stop a sex scene there...and i can only hope the hentai bug bites you as well. Hard. And preferably in a place that stirrs your inner beast...you know, the lioness within?

Lol anyways, thanks bunches for this lovely little fic. I enjoyed it immensely. Its been a wild ride....*snickers again* sorry my mind is a permanent resident of hentai-ville.

But...errr...to wrap this up. THANK YOU *bows down* And here's to you getting another chapter up for Spark very soon! WhooHa!

Cheers

That was awesome! I hope to read more of your work really REALLY soon! Great job!

-River

Ahhh, a nice end to the story!

Great story! As I tend to review at the end of any given story, I have to tell you that I loved the food fight scene (when he chucked the deer at her) -- my boyfriend had chosen "Animal House" for the night's entertainment, and when I read that chapter, I actually felt John Belushi should show up, and yell "Food Fight!" Anyway, really good story. . .you should write humour more often, and although I love "Spark" this was a nice change. Please update Spark soon!

I will not have Sesshy dipping his wick elsewhere. THAT WICK BELONGS TO KAGS! Now, i shall go and read...whilst looking for his chastity belt *snicker*

evil. pure evil. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed,....i've been so busy!! Please update again soon! I'm so anxious to see what happens next!

I am so thrilled that you have been reviewing (and I am assuming) enjoying my fics! I love your work! Both this and "Spark" are two of the select few that get my attention. What can I say? I'm busy girl what with writing 4 fics at the same time! Only the bast of the best can hold my interest, and you are most definately in that group. I'm also excited to see where you go with the Challenge that I also took up! Can't wait! *squee!*
Anyhoo, rambling now! But, if you ever want to collaborate on something, just hit me up! I would totally make the time for that! ;)

~omizumaru

Aww, I wish the story didn't have to end so soon. But I'm really excited for the last chapter! ^_^

-River

He ran away.....HE RAN AWAY!!! Oh man, that would piss me off, too!
Jerk! I can't wait to see what revenge Kagome has planned for him!
Love the slug, by the way. He seems like a pleasant creature....minus the mucus, of course.

I want Kagome to make Sesshomaru jealous at the ball with koga and i want her to rub it in his face real good and make him feel like an asshole in a way he real has it coming.

Please don't have him sleep with that demon. I don't like stories that have him sleep with someone else, then he gets caught, says something really nice, and then everything is ok with him and Kagome. It doesn't seem real.

You are insane, every chapter of this crazy story has me on my behind laughing like a mad person. I am so so so loving this fic. By reading this fic and Spark, you have quickly become one of my favorites. YOU GO GIRL. I hope Kagome get his ass good. I know I won't be disappointed.

ooo..this looks like it about to get even better. ^-^ loved the chapter.

I agree with Kagome, what a jerk!!! Leaving her alone in a place she's not even from. After all the hassle of getting her "her requirements" and then to turn tail and run is more of an invitation for trouble than if he were to just suck it up and admit he had feeling toward her too. Men for ages have been getting around the I love you line and he run away? Go get him Kagome! Revenge is sweeter when you've had time to cool down and "reflect" on the situation. This fic is so much fun. Jen

::cringes:: NO NO NO....no fucking of other females....please.....::begs::

I just loved this chapter as well as the rest of the story. although Sesshoumaru is being an ass. I like how Kouga was sweet to Rin. Great chapter

OH! THAT ROTTEN JERK OF A SESSHOUMARU! Poor Kagome. I hope she kicks his ass in the next chapter!

oh my gosh! this is more fun than watching a rat in a bag of vipers! this is so funny, ridiculous, and the sexual tension is fantastic. their both completely losing it! i thought love/angst kag-sho fanfics were good, but this love/lemon/comedy beats them all to pulp. I MUST HAVE MORE!

I like how they are both playing hard to get in away and how that is pumping up the sexual tension between the two. i feel sad for rin because she misses Jaken. I hope to see that lemon up soon. Great story.

Hahahaha! I love your story, it's so intense!
Can't wait for next chapter.

-Kanz

oh yes, I am very much prepared for your dirty lemon! ddiiirrrttyyyyyy.

Sesshoumaru's Freudian slips are the best. I just remembered him deciding that if Kagome left that Rin might develop and alcohol problem *snicker*...and the needless groaning just for effect. I love it lol!

Sesshoumaru's Freudian slips are the best. I just remembered him deciding that if Kagome left that Rin might develop and alcohol problem *snicker*...and the needless groaning just for effect. I love it lol!

have they forgotten about rin? sheesh they go about it all over the place next thing you know rin walks in on them. but still i love it so update soon plz.

Great chatper, I can't wait to see what happens next. These two are insane, but I'm loving every bit of it.

LOL! Damn right they deserve a delicious *banquet* after all the trouble they have put each other through. This is hysterical. Poor Kouga, always just that much late lol! Too funny, love Sesshy feigning sickness and the picnic, now that is priceless! LOL! Great dialogue and even better Sesshy points of view on the whole Kouga and Kagome scene. How dare he cop a feel of our woman's pert backside indeed. Oh Sesshy you got it bad....just as bad as Kags! This has been a joyous ride Kiska! Adorable, romantic fun!

Sesshoumaru in this chapter reminded me of a scene from Disney's Beauty and the Beast. You know, the part where the Beast tries to ask Belle to come to dinner nicely, but she just says no... that part.

I'm sorry, I'm rambling. But there was a little funny in my head and I shared my funny, but my funny isn't as funny outside as it is in... Sad Noa.

Sesshy has a hurtung tummy?! Oh, that was sooo funny!

Pure Genius.

Filthy, disgustingly fun genius.

I love the humor here, the absolute abandon with which you write character is a hoot and a half.

This story could seriously go for 50 chapters, jump the shark a few times, and I'd still read and laugh at it.

Pure genius.

::claps wildly:: I'm finally not alone!!! Some one else think's the Taiyoukai has a spanking Fetish!!!! Well, maybe more:: blushes:: Mine is a masochist and yours is a hentai...what a pair ::evil grin::

- Sidhe

Okay like...suspending my disbelief, but ahhh.... what happened to the BIG DOG's retenue?

He is the master of all he surveys...(according to him)...so what gives?

Now of course, we would have no story without this...but still I am curious. WHERE THE HELL IS HIS STAFF AND WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM? Why is the damn place such a freakin mess!

wow. i really like this fic. Very funny, and sad at points. Can't wait to see what will happen.

You know Kiska, I began “What A Mess” with a smile cause well, I like your writing style and sense of humour mixed with romance. Now, it is a pure addiction. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and what made it even better is the promise of the next one following closely on its heels.

First off, wonderful moment with Sesshoumaru and Rin, unexpected and yet expected. The gentleness shown was profoundly beautiful, that he of the aristocratic stick up his ass made the effort to comfort his daughter/ward and his admission of missing Jaken, just wonderful. Equally, the emotional sensations Kagome felt about this unusual event being witnessed by another OUTSIDE the family so to speak.

Now Sesshoumaru, fixing breakfast for his women, THAT was fabulous, though he has a tendency to do things by attrition lol…NEVER by original intent. NEVER he is a tayoukai after all..damn human females and all their sappy emotional needs. Still, a good dose of sake does well for him *wink*.

So….we intend to attempt to cater to the lithesome and sexy wench of the perfectly pert ass eh? Good Doggy! Oh and of course, my Kouga. I have no idea, but I love his impertinence and boy I can see jealousy at the doorstep with his introduction. Hmmm, will there be any furniture left to throw? LOL! Nice intro. He is irrepressible and just the ticket to take the magnificently sexy puppy RIGHT OVER THE EDGE. Good, his ego needs a bit of tweaking… but not too much.

This story gets better and better, and between the humourous tumult, and constant dormant sexual warfare, it is a total treat to read as it is like a tennis match between these two. Just delightful, fun, romantic, and scintilating. You are doing a wonderful job!

I just want to say how much I am enjoying this story. It's so nice to find a well written story that includes humor. Keep up the good work! You're doing a wonderful job!

Oh my, Good job! *can't seem to quite laughing* I love this story!

Hey! I love their fights! And can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh their smart-ass comments, his childish behavior (hahaha, so funny, I mean, he's Lord Sesshoumaru for god's sake..)
Please update soon.

-Kanz

And as a point of reference, thank you so much for allowing Kagome to truly have a full sense of self, a wicked mouth, a sensual side, not just as an adjunct, but just hilariously sexy, if there can be such a thing. She is whole onto herself. Believe it or not, THAT is rarely done. I am so tired of her being the DONE TO. I like your version of her. She is waaaay more interesting. So thanks.

The fact that you are having a blast writing this one is clearly apparent. We at the reading end are laughing hysterically too!

There were a few adorable and telling moments too like when Kagome really did think she had injured him...that said much and both realized it, but it still did not stop the fight which I thoroughly enjoyed! So onward with the battles and titillations.

You are doing an exceptionally funny and sexy job!

lol this is getting so good!! you gotta update soon!

I read this story at work and laugh so hard when I came out my office, people were looking at me as if I had two heads or something. I just had to come home and write this review. This is a damn funny ass story. Lovin it to the fullest. Please update soon.

This fic is just too fun. You hit my funny bone and I'm liking it. I hope you'll continue and finish. Slathing Sesshoumaru in soot and ashes was great. I am quite surprised she had the nerve to actually go through with it. She's really grown in the getting revenge department. And isn't she even aware that dogs just LOVE to play and are relentless to give up? After all she did throw a stick and InuYasha went running after it...Oh yes, I'll be back for more. Jen

I love this story! It is so funny! Revenge! How can you NOT love revenge?

Honestly!

Please update again when you can!

After a long hard day, this story was just the glass of lemonade I needed. Even if there wasn't much lemon in it yet, I can taste it. TASTE IT!!

Lmao I can tell you are having so much with this story. It's so funny to me everytime! Lol.

-River

omg i love i!!!!!!!plz write more i love it that gome is toturing sesshomaru!!!!ur loyal fan

LMAO!!!! YES!!! SANITY BEGONE!!!! Loved it when she slapped him!!! I think you should have poor Rin pop the "Where do babies come from?" to Sesshoumaru as punishment for torturing poor Kagome!!! ah, endless humor!

oooh shit...she's in fer it!!! RUN KAGOME RUN!!! lol update soon!

Good thing she slapped him. He deserved it!
I just hope she remains alive for next chapter.
Update soon!

hahahaha hilarious!! i can't wait to read what happens next. I love how you have both Sesshoumaru and Kagome plotting against (or rather for) each other. Beautifully written!! I hope you have time to update soon :)

This is hysterical and sexy too. Sweet torture, poor pompous puppy lol! You go Kags!

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uPdaTe SooN oK? i LoVe iT!!

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This story and I have settled down into a nice little two story house with a picket fence and a dog. We've named him Mr. Bojangles.

The arguments back and forth in this chapter were well done. It oddly reminded me of Cary Grant and Rosalyn Russell from "His Girl Friday".

Yes, I am a movie nerd. A huge movie nerd. But I bake a mean brownie.

Badong... lol
keep up the good work XD

Lmao that's funny as hell! Though I don't blame Kagome, I probably would have done the same. Lol.

-River

This fic is too much fun!

Girlfriend in a Coma is one of my very favorite songs. *loves the Smiths*

Heehee. Pit of Despair. You're just a brilliant author. I've decided that not only am I going to cheat on my husband with this story. I'm going to divorce him, marry this story and have lots of teeny weeny stories with it. (I love you Scrubs!!)

Hahahahahaha! It's so funny! Your fic made me laugh so hard people was staring at me in the library...yes, I AM at my school's library. This is how I spend my study time: reading nice fics!.
Update soon, please? Need to laugh a little more. ;)

Kanz

This fanfic is so funny lmao I love it so much!

-River

luv ur story update soon
luv pooh

yep, I must say, I love your stories. It started with Spark, and now I have moved to What a Mess. Wonderful idea, absolutely hilarious!! I hope you have time to update soon. :)

Great chapter! I think I've fallen in love with this fanfic! Update REALLY soon!

-River

Are...are you a Kami? Some kind of deity? A special type of...thingy?

You must be! I think so! Are you like a leprochan? (sp?) Very possible.

Are you wondering why I am ranting like a baboon? Yes, you probably are.

Those two chapters were some of the funniest stuff I have ever read! If you posted this, like a month ago, I totally would have nominated you for some awards!

Wicked awesome!

Keep up the great work and make sure those fingers keep-a-typing!

Chill Out! ;
--Ashley

...Oh, you are a bad, bad person. Now I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat until you update. I hate the edge of my seat.

But I love this story. I love it so much, that I'd cheat on my husband with it.

I like this fanfic already. I hope you're about to update soon!

-River

Good job so far! Sesshoumaru's slight OCCness isn't bad! Please write more chapters soon.

Oh, my god. This story is absolutely wonderful. Well written, original, and damn funny. Plus, you've kept Sesshoumaru in character.

...I.... I... I love you. *huggs fiercely*

poor sesshomaru i hope he gets his servents killed and gets new ones it just kind of tarnishes the big scary demon lord image if he dosnt have any servents and i cant see Kagome cleaning the place and looking after rin at the same time what is she super woman. i lovse the story very funny please continue and update soon.

Now THAT is genius. Pure genius. On a stick.

You've gotten me thoroughly hooked already, what with your pompous Sesshoumaru and your crisp writing style.

Eagerly awaiting future updates,
Jupe