i loved it!!!! i just wish there was more at the end. but i still loved the end
Fishiepower- Mon 12 Nov 2007
I love this!!!3 =]
Sapphire- Mon 12 Nov 2007
No, this story is perfect. I don't mind Kagome being a bit cold-hearted. It kind of suits her. And your right. The way Inu-Yasha have been acting, he messed up a long time ago. Karma's a bitch. Now he and his kuro ex-miko mate can't have children, and Sango and Miroku aren't really their friends. Anymore. Kikyo got what she deserved - she want to be a normal woman, and she got, just not a human Inu-Yasha. But hn. Who cares? This is awesome. If I can rate, I would give this a 10/10! :D:D:D Although, I wish you tell us about Rin and Shippo.
snowbird- Thu 08 Nov 2007
Yay!!!! He got his arm back. (does a dance jig) Thank you. I don't think Kag became cold and hardhearted. I think she had a right to protect her emotions from someone who used to trample on them. You don't let someone like that back into your life even as a casual friend. I'm sad to see the end of the story. Also, (laughs evilly) I'm glad Sess and Kag are having lots of children. With all those children around him, I imagine it's hard for him to keep up his stoic facade. [laughs at the image of a bunch of little ones constantly harassing him] I thank you for a cute, enjoyable little story.l
Chaos_Queen77- Wed 07 Nov 2007
I would just like to say that, i love the fact that you made Kagome turn inuyasha away. i have read a lot of fan fic and evey one i have read she forgives him. it is not right the bastard does not deserve it all the time. i love that fact. and i loved this story. Can't wait to see more fics from you.
Chaso
DemonQueen17- Wed 07 Nov 2007
This was very harsh, but Inuyasha had it coming. Karma can be a real bitch and Kikyo is as well. Whatever happens with them, they'll need all the luck they can in trying to start a family.
Silver Countess- Wed 07 Nov 2007
I love the writing and how very straightforward this is. It doesn't beat around the bush. I can't write like this and I'm constantly amazed at people who can pull this kind of writing so well. Kudos and hope to see more stories soon.
faye- Wed 07 Nov 2007
Good story! Not too "dirty." I liked it even though Kagome was having multiple children at once, which I think is a little much, I see that a lot in other fictions too. Give the poor girl a break, I'm not sure how many women could handle that rich youkai or not!
Demon'smoonlightlover- Wed 07 Nov 2007
I agree with you comment. They way Inu acted in the story, i got what he deserved and So what if others don't agree! It is your story! I think that people sometimes forget that detail whenever they comment on others story. If it is in the story the author wanted it that way. Anyway i liked it. Don't let other peoples opinions stop you from writing more. :)
Ana- Tue 06 Nov 2007
Damn straight the hanyou doesn't deserve it! That's the reason he never learns, its because he's alweiz being forgiven, so he's got it stuck in his head that if he does something wrong, it'll be ok! Grrr.. Insensitive jerk!
Ahm, anyhow, wonderful story! Keep it up!!
K.M.- Tue 06 Nov 2007
I really liked it. it was a different spin on the whole Inuyasha leaves Kagome story. I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you write more stories in the near future.
snowbird- Mon 05 Nov 2007
Wow. I like what you've done with this story so far. Are you keeping it within a guideline of a few years or many years? If it went beyond 2 decades (20 yrs?), then his arm would have slowly regenerated. I like him better with both arms. I never liked it when Inuyasha took his arm in the anime. He eventually does get it back but it's way into the manga. Anyway, I'm anxious to read what you have planned for their future.
what an interesting fic. i hope you continue to update
Ana- Sun 28 Oct 2007
*gulp* Well, that was an interesting way to use fruit ^_^
Anyhow, So, what's gonna happen next?
Inu and the bitch still alive?
How about Kouga and the others?
Did they join in the final battle?
I wanna know what her pups are gonna look like!!!
Update soon! Bye!!
Liked your story very much especially when Kagome kicked ass during the challenge. Excellent.
Update soon.
*hugs and smiles*
Metis- Thu 19 Apr 2007
Reducing the idiot population. Nice. Here's hoping for holy power resistant full youkai pups! Hanyou are SO annoying! And insecure. Nice!
swtdrm01- Thu 19 Apr 2007
That was awesome and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope they are full blooded and maybe even in inu form.
Alejandra- Wed 18 Apr 2007
Hey! Loved your story! The part that I liked the most was were Kagome submitted to Sesshomaru. So please continue updating soon.Bye!
DAMN ... DAT WAS ... HMMM ... INTERESTING!!! UPDATE SOON PWEASE!!!
grilka63- Wed 18 Apr 2007
Very nice, looking forward to the next chapter! PS, nice length to the chapters as well!
*grins* I like it! But I want more *begs you on hands and knees with the biggest, widest, cutest puppy dog eyes you've ever seen* ^_^ haha, I like this fic, it's interesting and well thought out, please update soon!
Metis- Sat 14 Apr 2007
Hmm. I like it. Very logical and decisive. It may seem a bit fast, but I'm tired of drawn out stories at the moment anyway. May they only have full youkai pups! Hanyou are too irresponsible, unstable, and insecure.
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