My God. What's wrong with you? You make stories, but can't go through them. Why, on this site, you post stories way faster than AFF? Talking about "MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!"
Oh, and it can't be completed at chapter 19. No offence, but it, seriously, looks shitty.
email isn't real.
Don't Worry About It- Thu 29 May 2008
My God. What's wrong with you? You make stories, but can't go through them. Why, on this site, you post stories way faster than AFF? Talking about "MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!"
Oh, and it can't be completed at chapter 19. No offence, but it, seriously, looks shitty.
sexylittlemommy- Mon 16 Jul 2007
luv it luv it so good and funny
Kags21- Sun 15 Apr 2007
wow what a way to end it, stiil hot lemon
DarkAngel495- Sun 15 Apr 2007
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Ahhh...ThaNk You!! ThaT solveD aLl
mY ProBlemS, PleaSe reView?
*SigH* You tyPed LonG beCauSe
oF me, SORRY!!! oi ThanK you
Again!!
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naru- Sat 14 Apr 2007
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow!!!! i love those lemons and the smut!!!!!!!!!! keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!! it seems like im a really horny person right??? cause i am!!!!!!!!!!!!
DarkAngel495- Fri 13 Apr 2007
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I LikE ThE ChApTeR, SoRRy I CaNt
HeLp U AbOuT ThE MuSe ThIng, It
BoThErS Me, Do U KnOw WhAt Is
ThiS BeTa ReaDer ThINg AnD The
ChAllenge? AnD AnOthEr ThinG......
WhAt Should i Do To VeRtIfY My
StUpId EmAil??? I SoORRYYy I JuSt
HaVe Sooo MaNy QuEsTioN In MinD
AnD i Am GeTTing A LiTTlE
PaRaNoId So PleAse AnSweR My
QuEstiOns??? ThAnKs!!! KeEp ThE
GoOd JoB!!
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ThanK yOu]
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Sadiya- Fri 13 Apr 2007
although that was the end =(....that was a nice way to end it!!! =)
very original, ends with a cliff lemon..i guess...and we now know dat Sesshomaru and Kagome feel more than lust for each other!! =)
that was an amazing story!! Short but SEXY!!
CONTINUE WRITING!!!!!!!! =D
P.S. if u need any ideas for fanfics, juss e-mail me and ill try to help ^_^
christten- Fri 13 Apr 2007
this waz so good i hope yu finish i like sesshoumaru so much in this story
ladyAnju- Fri 13 Apr 2007
it wasn't lame it was wonderful i loved the ending it was short and sweet
hey I thought it was an awesome story through and through
LOL!!!
Sesshoumaru is in my dream too!... wet ones..**blushes**
UPDATE SOON!!!
Irihi-chan
Lady Dragon- Fri 13 Apr 2007
-tears- that was so cute!!! but -pouts- could you just I don't know, maybe have him propose to her or something like that?? Please!!
Lady Dragon- Fri 13 Apr 2007
PLEASE write more!!! Your story is seriously on fire!! Keep it burning!!!
DarkAngel495- Thu 12 Apr 2007
PleAsE cOntiNue!!!! ^-~ SeSshiE
Is A bAd dOg ^^ PleaSe UpDaTe
moRe
^^^
ThanKYou!!!!
kuma- Thu 12 Apr 2007
awesome i like it update soon
Trice- Thu 12 Apr 2007
I enjoyed reading the lemon. It is not healthy to keep in all that built up tention! "P I think you should continue this story because I would love to see where it leads.
Kags21- Thu 12 Apr 2007
Keep going this is good, they should still argue
Sadiya- Thu 12 Apr 2007
awww.....thank u for the compliment...ill use my old name juss for u!! ^_^
THAT WAS SO HOT AND SEXY!!!
YUMMY!!!
cant wait for the next round!!!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!! =)
P.S. seriously..im dying here....cant wait for more HOT LEMONY GOODNESS
Kagomes_Inner_beast- Thu 12 Apr 2007
Wow a lemon!! I really loved it especially how Kagome hold control over Sesshomaru ! I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!
FINALLY!!!!
That was a GREAT LEMON!!!! I wonder what their relationship is going now. I mean it cant just be the physical attraction they felt for each other. DAMN!!! You got me SOOOOO hooked!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
renee- Thu 12 Apr 2007
hey this story is awesome and you always seem to make it cliffy. Hope there are more chapters to come.
ladyAnju- Thu 12 Apr 2007
i really liked this chapter the best for obvious reasons and i think you should continue with maybe a couple more chapters and go into some detail about how she came to work for him and other things but thats just my opinion but it would still be a good story if you left it here so its up to you. i will be looking for another chapter or your next story if you write one.
till next time
ladyAnju
this was great, please continue it
Nice! Very hot!
I can't wait for the next update!
swtdrm01- Thu 12 Apr 2007
Only one word can describe this chapter: steamy. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Tori- Thu 12 Apr 2007
Sizzling yet again, I swear everytime I read your work I leave wanting more. So what else can you dish out? Ohhh maybe Kagome has been a bad girl and needs to be locked up XD disobence will not be tolirated so says this "sephy" XD.
Rowdygirl- Thu 12 Apr 2007
this is so funny! i love it. can't wait for the next update, but one thing: wither = shrivel, think dead leaves; writhe = 'his tongue caressed her ear, his teeth nibbling the lobe, she gasped, writhing with desire beneath his hard body, moaning as his hands...
Sorry, anal retentive about that sort of thing.
WOW!!! This FF is getting funnier n funnier!!! But Sesshou's gonna love his surprise!! **wink wink**
clover_babe- Wed 11 Apr 2007
loved it.
i like the concept of this story. keep it going!
Nice sexual teasing. Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
This is so hot, I'm addicted to it
Red-smartiez (Sadiya)- Wed 11 Apr 2007
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I sense a lemon!!!!! =)
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!!! =)
P.S. cant wait for lemons =)
P.P.S. i think updating three chapters is pweety good too
naru- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Update!!! I want that lemon!!!!! Thanx for mentioning me!!!!!!
swtdrm01- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I loved it. It was hilarious. I hope to see the next chapter soon.
ladyAnju- Wed 11 Apr 2007
OMG!!! this is a really great story plz plz plz update soon
Trice- Wed 11 Apr 2007
As always another good chapter! I can't wait to see what you have instore next for our favorite couple! "P
Brooke Boone- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Finishit the email me
bluemoon_175- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Haha i can't wait to see what happens next, so you have got to update asap please.
luna- Wed 11 Apr 2007
i think you should do a lemon already this is too much too wait for
luna- Wed 11 Apr 2007
i think you should do a lemon already this is too much too wait for
OMG you said that my sesshomaru has a fat ass WRONG WRONG WRONG but damn that was funny ^_^
Awesome story. Keep up the good work.
DarkAngel495- Tue 10 Apr 2007
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PleaSe rEviEw! I lIke uR sTorY! I am
InteResTed oN whAt iS gOing tO
haPpeN neXt!
^^
ThanK You!!!
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Gryphonwills- Tue 10 Apr 2007
Great chapter please keep it up!
Trice- Tue 10 Apr 2007
This story is getting very interesting. They already have a lot of tention whether sexual or not. I will enjoy seeing this little game as I read more chapters.
naru- Tue 10 Apr 2007
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Good story!!!
please update soon. i want more. ok so i like , no its like love, to read and i really like your story.
Kags21- Tue 10 Apr 2007
This is so good
Sadiya- Tue 10 Apr 2007
MAN!! that was HILARIOUS!!!! the 'game' that Kagome and Sesshomaru are playing is so...HOT!
U GOTTA CONTINUE!!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ DO!!!!
P.S. can not WAIT for lemony goodness!!! =)
I can't wait to see where you are going to go with this story. Keep up the great work!!!!
Trice- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I like the story and I would love to read more. It seems the conflict between the both of them should be very interesting.
I like it a lot! That was some kiss.
Irihi-chan- Mon 09 Apr 2007
LOL!!!
Kags got spunk! Poor Sesshou! UPDATE SOON!!! **on knees begging**
Irihi-chan
Tori- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Indeed this is sizzling, I like the Boss, and the defint Kagome stories, I rarely find one that keeps Kagome definte, she usually turns to mush. I like this fire your igniting.... Keep it up.
Germaine A.- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I liked it! You should update more! I want to see how it all turns out! I'm more than sure it'll be a lemon.. Hehehehehe.. Just kidding.. Great, now you think I'm a big fat hentai.... T_T...
-- Germaine A.
Germaine A.- Mon 09 Apr 2007
I liked it! You should update more! I want to see how it all turns out! I'm more than sure it'll be a lemon.. Hehehehehe.. Just kidding.. Great, now you think I'm a big fat hentai.... T_T...
-- Germaine A.
Nice chapter...I like how she stood up to him... That was pretty funny...
Can't wait for the next chapter...Sounds like an interesting story so far....
Well take care
Mari
Sadiya- Mon 09 Apr 2007
i like ur idea A LOT!!! its original and hilarious!! XD! I personally, LOVE Kagome's persoanlity in this story! very fiery! I bet Sesshomaru loves our little miko's personality too! Can't wait to see what will happen next! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!! =)
P.S. lemons pweeez =D
bluemoon_175- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Sounds like a really good story and i can't wait to see what happens next.
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