Reviews for Masquerade by Sada
kiba- Fri 16 May 2008
gradualwisd0m- Fri 25 Apr 2008
I will most DEFINITELY be recommending this fic to others. Wow!
Aureza- Fri 21 Mar 2008
Brainshake- Fri 22 Feb 2008
There's one thing I'd like to point out about the grammatic. The grammatical tense changes in the middle of the story. Is this intentional?
Besides that I have nothing to complain about. Except the heavy, sudden and unexpected angst that totally brought me to my knees. But I supposed that was very well written by you, seeing as it almost brought tears to my eyes. I just didn't think it really fit in with the rest of the humor in this story.
Still, it touched me deeply, and I've had a good laugh many many times. :)
Arcana Mortalitas- Fri 01 Feb 2008
thehotty- Mon 21 Jan 2008
~TH~
Tainted Sins- Sun 20 Jan 2008
Loved it, also can't wait for next update for Slip of the Tongue.
-Sniggers- Ten...
Sango- Sun 20 Jan 2008
I laughed in most of the chapters, characterization was wonderuflly done, emotive language - 10 out of 10, couldn't stop reading until the end, and i nearly cried when Sesshomaru died!
This fic is one of the best. :)
kelsey- Wed 05 Sep 2007
Oreostar90- Sat 18 Aug 2007
F.L. Secret- Fri 20 Jul 2007
I love it, lots. :] From start to finish in one night... 3
Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
I have to say, I was depressed when he died...but it was an unconventional and completely unique ending, and I like that.
You write WONDERFULLY. Very few people have the skill you do, especially with humor. You're amazing, I can't tell you how many times I just cracked up, out loud. I'm sure you know how that it is to actually laugh yourself breathless when reading. Maybe a grin, but laughing yourself senseless...
I've said it like every review, but I truly loved this. You're most definitely gifted. I'm SO favoriting this. And reccing it.
Thank you for writing this!
-Krys
Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
Holy crap, I think I'm gonna read it again.
I'm seriously in love with your story. And I love how Seshoumaru says 'roll with it'.
I love you!!! *glomps*
lol.
Krys- Mon 09 Jul 2007
I'm going to live for many, many years (from laughing).
I really hope you continue writing to entertain me all those years.
I.
LOVE.
THIS.
-Krys
Krys- Sun 08 Jul 2007
I was planning on reviewing once I'd finished the story, but I had to send one now. This story is HILARIOUS. It's very rare to find a fanfic so full of humor that isn't forced. It just comes so natural and so often - I really, really love this story already and I'm not that far in. I can already tell I'm going to keep it as a favorite, and I'm going to rec it on my ff.net profile, too. It's so original and unique - it's freaking brilliant, and I just want to thank you for writing this.
I've laughed enough to add another 5 years to my life. You'll probably be getting more reviews from me as I read on...
-Krys
Cosmos Writer- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Snow Ahriman- Wed 23 May 2007
Asmodeus- Tue 22 May 2007
InuWhisperer- Thu 10 May 2007
Darkness- Fri 04 May 2007
Raye:SesshyFan- Wed 02 May 2007
Ah, too bad.
I ENJOYED this fiction so much! I wonder why it wasn't even nominated for the awards. Seriously. It had me laughing from beginning to end. I almost choked on my taquito-yes, a chicken taquito while doing so. That never happens-seriously-it never does since I have complete control with my.....mouth?
Now I'm just being weird.....but, besides that, this is now one of my favorite fanfics, the top of humor ones I have read to be more exact. I cannot wait [patiently] for another story as humorous as this one, or more than this, in the future :P
~Raye:SesshyFan
Chelsea- Sun 29 Apr 2007
angel87- Sat 28 Apr 2007
please feel free to write as much as you want. I am eternally hooked!!!!
angel87- Sat 28 Apr 2007
please feel free to write as much as you want. I am eternally hooked!!!!
MorningStar- Wed 25 Apr 2007
i absolutely love how you brought him back!!! *tears* if i had a chocolate covered sesshomaru you would definitely be allowed to sample some. hmmm... chocosessho.... mmmmm.
anyway, i loved this story, thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Lady Ashira Taisho- Wed 25 Apr 2007
Something-or-other- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Ah yes. You scream for ice scream, I scream for ice cream, we all scream for ice cream, but we all scream ourselves hoarse for Sesshou-induced orgazeems. I know. I'm a hentai. :D
Silent Nox- Tue 24 Apr 2007
"MOM, JI-CHAN! THE BIRDS AND THE BEES ARE ATTACKING THE SHRINE!!!"
So sad that he had to interrupt them, I'm sure he would have been even more scarred had he caught them further along the the act ^_~ But I guess no smut is a good trade for the innocence of a little boy~
NOT!
SS
PS. Lovely finish, and I REALLY look foward to the next chapter of Slip of the Tongue.
Leunra- Mon 23 Apr 2007
Thank you for giving us a good ending. I cried my eyes out with the last two chapter and this made up for it.
lilmoe30- Mon 23 Apr 2007
That was one of the most funniest and heartfelt stories I have ever read on this site. Thank You. Thank You so much for writing it. You are truly gifted!!!
LynLin- Mon 23 Apr 2007
One day, a girl was on her computer, bored out of her mind. Then she remembered that she had been in the middle of reading a wonderfully entertaining Sesshoumaru and Kagome fic a while ago. She wondered how the hell she could have forgotten. So, she searched high and low for it, but sadly, it was in vain. The fic was missing.
She remembered the author's pen name started with an S, so she went searching there. There was nothing even vaguely familiar. She was appalled and saddened.
Months later, she went on the computer again, remembering the missing fic. She looked through the recommended fics, but got sick of seeing bad fics being recommended. She then tried looking for the authors again, and SUDDENLY, SHE RECOGNIZED SADA. WTHECK, she though.
And then she re-read the entire story of Masquerade with glee. The end.
And that's what happened to me. My gosh, I was so happy when I found this again. I was just wondering where your other fic went? I remember it had something to do with Kagome being reincarnated as a boy? LOL I wanted to know where that went. And I was sure that Masqurade had tons more reviews and votes than it does now. What happened? And why the heck couldn't I find it for so long?!?!
Sorry for all the questions. Anyway. I'm happy, albeit a little confused about the ending. Why Sesshoumaru remembers everything, what happened in the last fight, what happened to Masao and Leiko, etc etc.
Long review. Hmm. GOOD JOB.
-Lyn
Sirinya- Mon 23 Apr 2007
But 96,000 yen ... is WAY WAY TOO MUCH ! no one walks around with $960~ bucks >_. that crazy for a book >_>;
karla- Sun 22 Apr 2007
Kanela- Sun 22 Apr 2007
And I missed your story! You know I did...and I followed *cof*stalked*cof* you and your advances...
I'm almost crying (not really, I did so last chapter, when he died) because this is the end! The End of Masquerade!! Cannot believe it...I enjoyed this fic so much, laughed so much, cried so much (due to my laughing)...And made me wonder so much! (Like when would you update, why was it deleted, when would you come back, how were you gong to kill him -because I knew you were killing him-, etc..)
I sincerely, undoubtely, adoringly love you.
^_________^
Kanz.
Oh! And you mentioned me! *giggles*
Kjinuyasha- Sun 22 Apr 2007
And I get the title... it matches with the little story at the end. This is the type of story I'd wish to never end... but an excellent ending it was... It was an ending... right? (LOL)
Thank you for an excellent read...
Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha
Kai- Sun 22 Apr 2007
ChaosWingDragon- Sat 21 Apr 2007
~Chaos
Violetcarson- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Rain- Sat 21 Apr 2007
They're characterization was just so believable, and Kagome's thoughts amuse me to no end.
They last couple of chapters seemed kinda rushed, and you skipped the fight scene, so I kinda didn't like that, and I didn't really like the whole Sesshomaru dieing and then coming back human. It did make alot of sense and I was glad that you didn't take away is award winning personality though.
But ya, Overall it was a really great fanfic, and I am definitely going to put this in the wordpad of good stories to read when bored... Hope to see more from ya.
itachiiyoubastard- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Brittney- Sat 21 Apr 2007
P.S. i am not a conceited person. My friend made my email account so she chose that address. I just don't want you to think badly of me & not know me so i decided to leave this for you.
Something-or-other- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Tana-san- Sat 21 Apr 2007
royalbk- Sat 21 Apr 2007
^_^ Kagome and Sesshoumaru are back together *insert squee here* and this story had the perfect finale. Two people trying to have a go at it like animals while the little brother is watching *snickers*
hidden- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Jessica- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Mir- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Mir
hidden- Tue 10 Apr 2007
i need a fluffy-pick-me-up
Tiegrsi- Tue 10 Apr 2007
Kanela- Tue 10 Apr 2007
I missed seeing this title so much, you know I did....And you killed Sesshoumaru! How- why- what?...Naa..I already knew..
I'm so glad this story is up again, I really missed it, as I'm sure many other readers did.
I'll be expecting next chapter on the brink on my seat. *nods*
I send you a huge sloppy kiss ^^ (do not try to wipe it!! I'm watching you!!)
-Kanz
jade- Mon 09 Apr 2007
WiccanMethuselah- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Let me explain myself, though. After having a perfectly miserable Easter holiday, I stayed up all night reading this story. I cried my eyes out for a good 20 minutes at the end, but I DID manage to forget some of my own problems for a while. In addition, I had the advantage of releasing those endorphins through crying over your story that I probably wouldn't have without reading it.
BUT ... big BUT ... I am still DESPERATELY hoping that there is some way to pull something 'warm and fuzzy' and, overall, satisfying out of such a tragic circumstance. Hopefully, without the well-worn pregnancy thing - especially since he said it couldn't happen anyway. Eh, I'll sit back and wait - as patiently as possible - for the promised next chapter. In the meantime, THANK YOU for a story that made me laugh a lot more than it made me cry ... and, in the process, made me forget about "real" life for a while.
;)
~~Wiccan~~
phxazkyote- Mon 09 Apr 2007
GleefulSorrow- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Leunra- Mon 09 Apr 2007
That was soo good I missed this fic! Why did he die?!?!!
Very few fanfictions made me cry and this is my friend, I'm telling you now is te second to make me cry. The first was "Flowers on the Moon" if you read that you already know why...if not read and find out.
I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter, until then.
fake name?- Mon 09 Apr 2007
fake name?- Mon 09 Apr 2007
hasu86- Mon 09 Apr 2007
-hasu86
oh Please- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Sess is wonderful in your story. And the humor is sneaky. (shagged like a rabbit) too funny.
But that death scene was heart wrenching. I sure didn't see that coming. Just like real life. And as it turned out, all the times she said SHE could die tomorrow, and it was him instead. But, at least he had no regrets about loving her.
Poor Kagome. :`(
Keep up the good work and I hope you update that last chapter soon!
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*sulks* Realistic stories tend to go that way...
Oh well. I'll patiently wait here for the epilogue.
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*wipes tear*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
It's really, really...sad.
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
A love these well written lemons that don't need any vulgar or suggestive words to *sarcastic* make the readfer understand what's going on* \
*rolls eyes* So...reading forward.
P.s: That quote with the 'and again and again...' has just become one of my all time favorite!
flyingteapot- Sun 08 Apr 2007
The newest chapters left me in tears, reading them made me achingly feel so much for Kagome. Sesshoumaru dying was definitely a surprise and strangely, it made me wonder again why your story is named "Masquerade"...Hm, don't know if I made any sense there. Anyways, I'm looking forward to what you have planned for the ending. Last week I nominated "Masquerade" for the Single Spark Annual Awards in several categories and it was accepted but now I don't see it in the final voting list, I don't get it...
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*pouts in a corner* Well, I suppose it will be all the more interesting when it does happen. With all that pent up sexual frustration...
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*big puppy eyes* You promise on the fluffy Mokomoko-sama?
*grins* Already I see the signs...and they make me so happy. Hatsuho is here to make Kagome jealous and speed things up a bit.
Laini- Sun 08 Apr 2007
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
After this whole 'confession' I'm quite positive that Kagome will never, ever touch sake again.
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Well, at least he called her name just now. That's definitely an improvement...
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*smiles* They finally kissed...and now, let the battles of wills begin. Kagome is stubborn, Sesshoumaru even more. He wanted her, she wants him but won't admit it yet...and Inuyasha will just swing in the story like an idiot to disrupt their sexual tension.
*pats Inuyasha* And make Sesshoumaru jealous! @.@
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
itachiiyoubastard- Sun 08 Apr 2007
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Huh. Imagine that coming. I didn't know that Masao and Leiko had acted so...freely during their courting period. Or whatever it was.
Still no hope for SK anytime soon.
...
Damn.
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Sun 08 Apr 2007
'Oh Dear God! Have I read this before?'
I have just finished reading the prologue and I just had a deja vu type of thing happening. Was this posted before?
Trust me! I will finish reading this story and review at the end. I was just wondering if this was up before.
Well, onto chapter two! or one? I think the first 'chapter' was a prologue or something.
Toodles!
-Ashley
P.S. Great freaking work so far!
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
The things that would follow would turn me into a grinning fangirl.
P.S: Love the little conversation in the ending AN. *snickers* Sesshoumaru threw Kagome over his shoulder. That makes me happy...even if they are for now only Author Notes
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Like the quote: Kagome opened her eyes and stared into Sesshoumaru’s, surprised that - for the first time - she was looking down at him. Sesshoumaru stared back at her, expressionless and cold...and hot.
*sighs* You remind me of Remirands in a way. *applauds* Very well done. Inuyasha is not in the story...though I'm not really fond of him.
*smirks* Let's see what he does when he notices the tension between Sesshoumaru and Kagome.
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I like it when authors don't write Kikyou - dignified, once kind, poised Kikyou - like a whore or something. Excuse the language please. Kikyou is too much of a lady, even if she hates Kagome, to be treated as otherwise.
*smiles* I love the story of Leiko and Masao. Can't wait to read the last, hopefully, part of it. ^_^
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*giggles hysterically*
When he was sure she was asleep Sesshoumaru slammed his head back against the tree.
*already rolling on the floor laughing with tears*
*wipes tear away* This chapter was priceless! Sesshoumaru...you poor thing. She's trying to seduce you and you're not even reacting. *snickers evilly* Well...at least it would be good if she did try to seduce you.
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Kagome: What do you mean readers? I'm the one who has the problems here!
Me: *glowers* Well neither of us would have problems (I'm not the patient type you know) if you would just pounce Sesshoumaru and...*strangled voice with laughter* molest him. Think about it. It might give him something to remember for years to come.
Kagome: *blushes to her ears*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
*grins*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
And now to see why Leiko went nuts. Dun dun dun dun...
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I want some Sesshoumaru/Kagome interaction soon...more than the usual 'Die girl'/'Unfeeling bastard' kind of interaction. *zooms to next chapter*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Kagome...tsk, tsk, tsk!
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
This story is truly hilarious. I'll probably sit in front of the computer, reading and remembering how Sesshoumaru killed the damn leaf. *snickers*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Both I think! *gives you chocolate*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I'm going to, at the risk of annoying you, mention how much I love your sense of humor. The way you ingrain it in the story, makes the characters come alive. They're more than just the characters from the anime.
*smiles*
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Your story is hilarious. Kagome and Masao have this edge to their sense of humor that always compells me read more.
Probably why I love 'Slip of the Tongue' too!
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Poor Kagome...she expected to look like a demon, but didn't really anticipate it. *grins* And Masao is a pervert.
I'm glad that none of the gang will be in this story for now. It would make things more complicated for Sesshoumaru (except Sango. I love Sango! -.-')
royalbk- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Oh, I have every intention of reviewing every chapter! Onward horsie!
Mir- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Thank you for coming back and posting this story.
Mir
Sidhe- Sun 08 Apr 2007