really great sory, please update soon!!!
sesshou's gurl- Tue 12 Feb 2008
Up date.!!!! I command you.!!! LOL. Ja ne.
Peaches- Thu 01 Nov 2007
Hey can't wait for the next update. I'm really loving the story. Also cant wait to read what Kagura has to say to kagome about the plan her brother has to get Kagome. So plz update soon. !
Jah bless
naru- Tue 30 Oct 2007
Thanks for mentioning me and keep up the great story writhing. Tell your beta to hurry and help you finish the chapters. Your killing me here. LOL> Update soon. Laters.
alexandra- Tue 30 Oct 2007
like it how kagome and sesshoumaru got to talk it over about the whole yura thing. glad they got to talk it all over, and also glad that kagura is talking to her about the plan so she doesn't overreact - is she on kagome's side or is she on yura's side??
Chaos_Queen77- Tue 30 Oct 2007
Kagura helping... Hmm.*rubs chin* an interesting turn of events. I like it though i love when i read that kagura turns her back on Naraku... it makes me fell warm and fuzzy inside.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Chaos
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Sat 20 Oct 2007
I love it! And the monkey wrench you through in the works will definitely make for some troubled waters.
hanyou-from-hell- Thu 18 Oct 2007
wow, i like this story, keep up the good work :D
Koroleva- Wed 10 Oct 2007
this was awsome!!!! yura's a complete bitch.. and she needs to die.. but i don't doubt kagome will kick the shit out of her sooner or later... anyways ur an awsome!!! writer!!
alexandra- Tue 09 Oct 2007
interesting way to turn the story around!!
i hope kagome doesn't get too bothered by that, it happens in relationships, and you have to do is wait for him to confess and or else just ask him y he hasn't said those words yet. Keep up the good work!!
naru- Tue 09 Oct 2007
YAY!!! You actually mentioned me.!!!! You are so welcome. Just keep updating and I'll keep reviewing k? Ja ne.
Lady Selene- Tue 09 Oct 2007
Please Please continue! Awesome job!!!
Lady Selene- Tue 09 Oct 2007
Please Please continue! Awesome job!!!
alexandra- Wed 26 Sep 2007
poor sesshoumaru and kagome for being interupted again... ohh well at least we know something is up with Nararku like there always in with Inuyasha...
Great story keep it up!!
naru- Sun 23 Sep 2007
Update!!! This is a really good story. Could you e-mail when you update?? Thanks.
this is a very creative story. i hope you get the chance to read mine. update soon.
Hmmm I Wonder About Kagome's Past Well I Cant Wait To Read More ... Update Soon!
anonnie mouse- Sun 02 Sep 2007
WOO HOO!!!! Lemony goodness!!!!
I wonder if Sess and/or his beast got Kagome pregnant........
ohhh I wonder what Naraku's up to......
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
don't tease too long and let us know what shiori found out.... update soon please
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Mon 20 Aug 2007
Very nice! I was extremely entertained by this story, and hope to see an update soon.
Any9- Thu 16 Aug 2007
Realy great lemon. Please don't make them suffer from Naraku and that guy Kai. I'll love to see those two humiliated (I am refering to Naraku and Kai) and please, please update more often.
Riddick T. Dominick- Wed 15 Aug 2007
love the story cant wait till you finish it
Me Love Me Love Alot ... I Like How Your Chapters Are Short And To The Point, Anyways Update Soon Please!!!
Hey love the chapter and I have an excuse for why I have not posted a comment in so long. I've been busy because we have had people to go see, I had a friend come stay at my house for a week, and i just stared school up again. Well love the story and hope to see more chapters soon.
Violetcarson- Mon 13 Aug 2007
OMG!!! EVIL cliffie!!! Not FAIR!!!!! I wanna know what the evil bastard did!!!!!
alexandra- Mon 13 Aug 2007
great lemon, what was kagome going to ask before sesshoumaru pounded into her??
ohh well keep up the great work!
jenna- Sun 24 Jun 2007
please keep posting this story is very good
daydreamer- Fri 01 Jun 2007
this is great. i really love it and keep up the good work. although i dont like the whole sesshy talking in third person all the time it makes him sound slow.
hey do you think you could keep me updated on this fic. it is sooooo good i cant get enough. :">
Violetcarson- Sun 20 May 2007
Ah, I was wondering about her ex. Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me likey!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Black_Rose- Sun 20 May 2007
Yay! another chapter!!!! I hope the next one comes sooner! Keep up the good work!
anonnie mouse- Sun 20 May 2007
Let me guess.....they'll have trouble right when there about to mate (or close to the time), have to find the bad guys, fight the bad guys, kill the bad guys and then maybe get around to the lemon...right??
I'm also assuming that the lemon will be in 4 or 5 chaps away......unless you have them mate first and then the bad guys come in and the rest of my list will come into play.....
I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE CITRUS AND/OR LEMON!!!!!!!
how on earth did Naraku find out who Kags first was.....I mean I doubt she would blab about it around school cause she's not a slut......
Why do I have the feeling that your gonna give us a ton of cliffies before sess and kag finally do "it"??
and your probably laughing evilly right now and plotting the best course of cliffhangers for us.....
oh greeeeaaaaaaattttt.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Slm_candle- Sun 20 May 2007
Man it seems like you update like 5 chappies at a time and way too quickly for my slow brain i am reading tons of fanfics and now I want you to update.
Hazel- Sun 20 May 2007
this is reallllllllllllllllllllllly good.
Red-Smartiez- Sun 20 May 2007
ooo....mating night!! cant wait for that!!!! your story is REALLY good!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!! ^_^
P.S. lemons pweez
Any9- Sun 20 May 2007
I can't wait till the mating. Please update sooon.
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
white inu- Sun 20 May 2007
keep updating ^_^
SarahhhBoo- Sun 20 May 2007
YAY!!!! another chappie!!!!!! dun dun dun mating night 1 week away!!! things are going to get spicy hehehehe......lol anways loved the chapter and cant wait till next one
love the story and how its getting more edgy with each chapter. I can't wait for more chapters this story is awesome.
Inuyashaluver- Thu 10 May 2007
that's so awsome please please please update soon!
anonnie mouse- Thu 10 May 2007
SOOOOO are we gonna find out who popped Kags cherry??
and does sessy know him??
I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anonnie mouse- Thu 10 May 2007
SOOOOO are we gonna find out who popped Kags cherry??
and does sessy know him??
I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SarahhhBoo- Thu 10 May 2007
LOVED IT!!!!! i have bin waiting for this chapter! keep it up
I love this story so I'm always happy to see a new chapter. LOL I've had a drink like that and damn it is sour.
Any9- Thu 10 May 2007
Good chapter, I can'twait till you update.
Violetcarson- Thu 10 May 2007
WOW!!! That fic totally rocks!!!! It's funny, angsty, and it has lots of fluff! Keep writing and update soon!!!!
Black_Rose- Wed 09 May 2007
I really liked that chapter. It was well put together, but it would have helped if you had given some guidelines to the game, I'd never even heard of it before and kind of had to figure it out for myself, but don't get me wrong...I love this story!!! Keep up the good work!
Aki23- Tue 08 May 2007
please, please,please write more. i thought it was great and i like the whokle outcast thing. (loved the singing part FUNNY)
inuyashaluver- Sat 05 May 2007
please please please up date!!!!!!!!!!!
anonnie mouse- Fri 04 May 2007
okay when was the male-slut getting tested again??
I hope it's VERY painful for him.*cackles*
update update update soon... thanks
Sadiya- Thu 03 May 2007
AWESOMENESS!!!!! PWEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ PWEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!! ^_^
P.S. lemons pweez
Loved the new chapter! Please update soon! Stupid Jaken!
SarahhhBoo- Thu 03 May 2007
LOVED IT!! ive bin waiting for your new post!! i was so excited when i saw you wrote more!!!..thanks soo muh you get cookies!! *hands captaintori88, cookies*
Keep up the awsome work
i must say your story is truly intreging to me. I would really love to see how it turns out. you could make a great writer someday if you truly wanted to.
wow no one in any story really likes Kagome and Sesshomaru together. What a shame
Any9- Thu 03 May 2007
I waited toooo long for your update. Please don't keep me waiting for so long.
But to tell you the true it was worth waiting because you proved yourself to be a good writer. Please update sooon.
Black_Rose- Thu 03 May 2007
I was wondering when I would see this story updated! I still love it, and I can't wait to see what Naraku plans next to get Kagome...but I'm even more exited about seeing what Sesshy does to stop him! lol...Keep up the awesome work, can't wait to read more!!!
hazel- Wed 02 May 2007
this is reallllllllllly good. keep it up
Koyo- Tue 24 Apr 2007
awesome, I'll try and remember to read the rest later! ^-^
inugirl31- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Love the story and hope you make another chapter really soon.
I Love Sesshomaru Aka FLUFFY - Sama- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Great story please continue soon
SarahhhBoo- Tue 24 Apr 2007
I LOVE!! this story it is one of the best! keep up the good work!
I liked the new chapter! It was cool especially when Sesshomaru beat Naraku up! Hilarious! Anyway, update soon!
Sadiya- Tue 24 Apr 2007
GO Kagome!!! she really showed Naraku that a woman can do damage!!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!! ^_^
P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez =D
DarkAngel495- Tue 24 Apr 2007
pLEAsE uPDAtE sOOn!! i WAnT To KnOW tHE nEXt CHaPTER!! sOrRY i REAlY HAvE NO TiME nOw BuT pLEAsE DoNT hATE mE
this story is awesome can't wait for the next chapter.LOL and loved the part where Naraku gets hurt always a funny point lol
Any9- Tue 24 Apr 2007
This was nice! Thank you for your update. Please continue with the wonderfull work!
Black_Rose- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Another great chapter!!! I can't wait to see more!!!!
Trice- Mon 23 Apr 2007
This little story is getting more interesting as I read more chapters. This last chapter was interesting and I can tell this is not the last we have seen of our evil friend.
sweetninja56- Mon 23 Apr 2007
damn chapters 12 and 13 were bad ass fuking funny please contiue your story asap:)
Slm_Candle- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Cool, Now update. o.o 0.0 @.@ lol
I just want an update. Thankiers.
Any9- Thu 19 Apr 2007
I foud "A single spark" site 5 days ago. Today I discovert your fanfic. Let me tell you that is one of the best and I want to see it finished. I will wach after your updates every day so don't keep me waiting to long. Thank you and keep the good work!
Sadiya- Wed 18 Apr 2007
2 words.......utterly amazing!!!!!
Kagome's father is so kool!!! he suggested that they should spend the day together!!! man, shes lucky!!! Yura is such a bitch and Sesshomaru is and will always be HOT! i wonder who was watching them??????????
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!! =)
P.S. lemons pweeeeeeeeez
DarkAngel495- Wed 18 Apr 2007
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HeY UpDaTe sOOn!! I wAnnA
KnoW wHat WiLl HaPpeN nExt!!
HeY I Love The New ChaPPy!!!
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Thank you. i know I am. lol j/k Anyway update soon!!! Can't wait!!
InuHanyouRin- Wed 18 Apr 2007
I love this story, and I don't mind spelling errors. Keep up the good work
(Don't mind spelling errors!)
I love this story. It's great I can't believe in character and yet out of character you've gotten all of them to be. This is a high school story that I actually like there aren't many out there that I can stand. I like this one however and can't wait for the next chapter.
this story is so awesome can not wait for next chapter and to see yura get her ass beat lol
jenna- Wed 18 Apr 2007
plz keep posting its very good
Black_Rose- Tue 17 Apr 2007
YAY!!!YAY!!!YAY!!!
that should be a romantic date. the park and health clinic ha ha ha
hazel- Tue 17 Apr 2007
Naraku and yura need a life!
swtdrm01- Tue 17 Apr 2007
That was awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
great fic... keep up the good work
Trice- Tue 17 Apr 2007
My, My My.... It seems we are starting to get things warmed up with our favorite couple. I also see in the near future a rocky road ahead of them with evil lirking in the shadows. It should be fun to see how all this turns out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
mangadreams- Tue 17 Apr 2007
really enjoyed the story!!!
ok i would just like to say......I FREAKIN' LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! it is amazing so far...keep up the AWSOME work!
swtdrm01- Mon 16 Apr 2007
I hope you get to update soon 'cause your story is getting more interesting with each chapter.
nicole- Mon 16 Apr 2007
can you write more please
haha, Yura has pudding hair. shes a whore, no one needs her. Kagome'll get her back for anything she attempts to do....
ok i thought your chapter was pretty cute and funny. can you write more please
OMG!! Sesshomaru actually singed!!!! Please update soon!!! I need to know what is going to hapeen next!!!!!
I laugh my ass off. LOL. just had to tell you that. Iaughed so hard i cried. keep it up.
hugs and puppies
Love it!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!
continue to write this i like pudding part
Black_Rose- Sat 14 Apr 2007
I was happy to see you updated again! Would it be asking too much if I asked you to e-mail me when you update? It would mean a lot to me cuz I love this story! Thanx! here's my e-mail address if you decide to e-mail me: artist_angel88@yahoo.com
Trice- Sat 14 Apr 2007
Another good chapter once again! This chapter had me laughing. I can't wait to see what you have instore for our favorite couple.
Sadiya- Sat 14 Apr 2007
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER!!!
Sesshomaru is realy a committed guy when it comes to Kagome!! And Yura is totally a bitch and a slut!!
That part where Sango threw the pudding cup at Yura was HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!! That's something Sango would do!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ
CONTINUE N THANK U!!!!!! =D
P.S. can t wait for the lemons =)
DarkAngel495- Sat 14 Apr 2007
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Aw,I EnJoyEd It AlL!! I ThiNk YurA
hAviNg The CuP tHinG on The Head
iS ExcElEnT!! I wOndEr whAt ShE
wOulD Be LoOk LikE!! ThaNkYou!
UpdAtE More....
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hey I think thats awesome how sesshomaru made up with kagome. And in my option Far away was the perfect song. Hope to see more chapters. And hope yura gets her ass kicked.
kasey- Sat 14 Apr 2007
this is cute fiction and i love to read it.it makes me laugh keep up the great work darlin
black moon inu- Thu 12 Apr 2007
This story is sweet and really does go with the drama at a high school. Keep up the writing and post soon.
hugs and kisses
please oh please write more
Hahahaha! Please update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Silver lily frost- Tue 10 Apr 2007
YOU HAD BETTER CONTINUE IT, WHEN YOU DO , E-MAIL ME RIGHT AWAY WITH THE UPDATED VERSION, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sadiya- Tue 10 Apr 2007
AWESOMENES!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY LIKE KRAZZZY!
so, Kagome is not so happy wit Sesshomaru, buh Sesshomaru is determined to make Kagome his! and then...Naraku wants our little miko to himself. Why do i smell trouble? well, the more trouble, the better it gets!! =)
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!! =)
P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez
Trice- Tue 10 Apr 2007
The more I read this story the more and more I want to read more. This story is very funny and I look forward to reading more.
Yay! I love the fact that you update, like, all the time. Whenever I get on the Internet it seems you've already updated! Way to be on the ball! Keep up the good work!
Yayyyy! another awesome chapter! I don't know what else ot say then keep them coming!!!!
Hey i love it, it is great, can you please continue
Angel
ohhhh i'm really loving this story. can't wait for more.
beii16- Tue 10 Apr 2007
geez guys can be such idiots *shakes head*
i love it. you are a good writer. please update soon. i dont like to beg but i will. i really like to read and your story has got me addictied.
swtdrm01- Tue 10 Apr 2007
I loved it. I'm glad Kagome put him in his place. Please update soon. Great work.
Midget- Mon 09 Apr 2007
| dude, TMNT was awesome!! I saw it like last week, i'm in australia by the by.
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