| Well, this is a really interesting idea. I can't wait to read about exactly what happened with the 'massacre' of the village. Cool fic.
Moonsapphire- Wed 08 Aug 2007
| I absolutely love this. You write so well. :D
Drianax- Wed 01 Aug 2007
| Good fic! I just wanted to let you know that using proverbs from "Poor Richard's Almanac" and/or "Hamlet" is an intriguing way to move the plot forward. As for telling you if there are any grammatical errors in the first chapters, no there isn't (that I could find, anyway). This is a good fic -- please update it soon!
Grrrr...cliffies=bad. Cute little Rin=Good! :P
OMG I loved how you portrayed Rin in this chapter. Awww. OK, back to the review. Inuyasha is an ass, and poor Kagome :( Luckily our fav demon lord has the Tenseiga, eh?? :P
Update soon :)
| I like this story. Update soon please :) Very interesting premise. 10 stars and a brownie for you :P
DarkAngel495- Fri 06 Apr 2007
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Oh pLeaSe updAte mOre! i Am
eXiTed On WhaT is GOinG To
Hppen NeXt!
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DaRkChoBitZ
Ashley- Thu 05 Apr 2007
| Well, that was really interesting. A nice start for a story. Good job!
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