I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I, for one, am glad you left her human but immortal. I like immortal because of being mated to an immortal demon so they can remain together. It is rare, and I mean rare, that I enjoy a story with her being hanyou or youkai. Oh yes, can't forget Sango. I like what you've done with her character. I guess I'm one of the few readers that likes her being paired with someone other than Miroku. Please update soon.

Oh I Love Ur Story ... Its Awesome!!! Update Soon!!!

one word:whoa.
take care and have fun writing the next chapter.
good luck.

um.... THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! You must update and fast. Dude now i wish i was in Kagome's place.

um.... THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! You must update and fast. Dude now i wish i was in Kagome's place.

very interesting! I really like how you did the time line... I've recently been studying Japanese history in the Muromachi period! ^_^ Please update soon, you have a very charming story and it is very well done.

I'm so glad you're okay! I was so worried when I read about all the heat and storm fatalities over in Romania and hoped it was something so simple as a lack of internet!

Oohh...sexy Sesshoumaru!

I likes the progressive metamorphasis. Interesting concept, and even more compelling reality!

This story is amazing! Please continue with it.

i really like ur story, esp. the way u describe things. it is clever and enjoyable all at the same time. i can't wait to see or read the next part. til next time (*smiles*)

Hey! I love your plot bunnies! I send them cookies! Carrot-flavored with choco-chips!...although I wouldn't eat that combination...
Anyway, girl, I love your story! Yes I do *nods* But I gotta tell you, when I read the "metamorphosis" thing-y, I dreaded that you'll come up with the typical Kagome's-gone-a-demoness issue..Umm, and I still don't know much about, but certainly hope it will be just for our dear Taiyoukai.
Do not misundestand my statement, I would still like your story. Very much.

Again, say hi to your plot bunnies! and don't frget their cookies! ^w^

-Kanz

Good job I like it

wow good story.... keep going hehe

I LURVE IT :D

I really like this story, and I hope you update it soon! However, when I went to read it, chapter 1 was actually chapter 4. . .it might be a mis-loading of the fic, but when I originally read the fic, chapter 1 dewalth with Kags and Sango travelling the world and dealing with heartbreak, before coming back to Japan. Or am I mistaken? Anyway, update soon!

Yippie Skippy! More surprises!! Like more fluffy stuff?? Loved the byplay between Sango and her mate - sweet, sexy and extremely warm & fuzzy (purring ... lol!)!!

I'd say your 'plot bunnies,' and whatever other cute, furry creatures are inspiring you, are doing quite nicely so far. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

You go girl! Kudos to the "Plot Bunnies" BRING ON PART II.

Hn, what could be those changes in our BIG DOGGY?

interesting...

ohohohohoh! does he get a double fluffy!?!?!?{tail like his dad}

ohohohohoh! does he get a double fluffy!?!?!?{tail like his dad}

Keep her asleep. She just Might do that stupid running off thing. Centuries haven't rendered her much more cautious. Sometimes I wonder just how easily she can toss aside survival instinct.

HOLY SHITNESS..!

UPDATE!!!!!

...oh! please update soon! i saw it on the recently updated and was hoping you had! :-( *pouts* i so want to know what happens next!! :-D *offers cookies for an update* haha .. but seriously... update soon! i really like this fic!

I have thought of some sort of barrier protecting his place from the modernizing era before. You won't hold it against me if I finally write something and use it will you (although it's different and involving Kags as the mastermind)? Please? I've got to write my ideas while they're still original! *sigh*

puppies... i like puppies... they're cute and cuddley... but for lord almighty... that's a lot... can't wait to see sessho as a dad update soon

Poor Kags. (snicker)

YAY! Here's to hoping they're all full youkai. That'll take those idiots aback! HAH! And they're cuter too!

I like it. Quite original and I'm glad she didn't have to lose her sister, though I'm sorry about Miroku. So much was done in the first chapter yet it didn't seem rushed. This story has a playful, relaxed feel to it that I like.

you have out done yourself .. im quite impressed .. i love the story .. its really quite origanal so i give you a cookie >.

Oh, man, see I decided that it was my civic duty to return the favor but then I read this story (and, you know, the rest) and i DIED! But in a good way. It was like, whoa. ♥ Was it bad that I laughed when it was mentioned that Sesshomaru was unhappy with Rin? 'Cause if that was bad I'm sorry, but I giggled maniacally. Also, thankyouthankyouthankyou for your reviews. They're my favorites, but don't tell anyone else. At this point I think you just left the review about Masao and Kagome's legs, so I'm a little scared what you're going to think when you get to chapter 28. Don't hate me.

So, yeah. You're now one of my favoritest author-friends. Got a problem with that?

-Sada (If at any point in this review you felt scared, just ignore me.)

i sure as hell hope she grows two more boobs before she has those puppies! her nipples are gonna fall off nursing those bad boys! lmao! well ah yes you did amazaing on the lemon! i very much enjoyed it! especially the whole up against the wall bit! please update soon! i love this story!

I love this story!! But what happened to Sango when Kagome mated?

OMG!! FOUR PUPS!! MAN!! Kagome is going to a hav a HUGE belly!!!
the lemon was very fast, but HOT!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!! =)

P.S. more lemons pweez (add foreplay *grins a hentai grin*)

Wow. Loved it!

I'd been waiting for a good lemon to surface! What category was this fic nominated for again? LOL

I like the progression, and the scene where Sesshoumaru decapitated that cat demon was so sweet. Only a Sesshoumaru fan could understand...

Intrigued, and ready to see how Kagome handles whatever else you plan to throw at her! I do love a good Sesshoumaru plot where he is actually a good, decent demon-with homocidal possessive/protective tendencues towards Kagome, of course.

Give yourself a chance, your lemon was fine. I like the idea that this story will be longer than you previously anticipated. I love the interaction between the two. Any woman in her right mind with that male would be the world's biggest hentai...glad you are letting her enjoy her mate and he her. You are doing a good job. Keep up the good work and let your characters continue to talk to you...they will tell you where they want to go.

So that was an amazingly enjoyable short fic! I demand more though, you see with just two chapters you managed to catch my attention and I want more as soon as possible!

I'm glad you decided to continue this. I think it's a wonderfully unique idea, with Kagome and Sango being joined by the Shikon as they have. And Kagome's relationship with Sesshomaru. I would, however, love to suggest a topic for a next part...instead of being from Kagome or Sango's perspective, how about one from Sesshomaru's? I found myself dying to know what he was thinking during the two parts you had written...or, say, after Kagome had left him to go back to China because she was tired of being a mistress. That would really be interesting. Looking forward to whatever you post next!
-AG

NOOO YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS DAMMIT!!! Im like plastered against the computer screen reading and then there's this cliff hanger. I WILL NOT ACCEPT THIS. Okay im back to normal now. Please update soon. ^_^

On a serious note, I like th idea of a series of one shots where they keep meeting up over time. Curious to see how you handle this...a very different theme...thus far delicious...then again...I like sensual...and you are doing a fine job...wooooooooooooooooof!

If you are muts I am deleriously insane....
"Slower is for later priestess. Now it shall be fast and hard."

THUD!...WRITE ON!

Good second chapter! You said that this story would be a coolection of one-shots, but will they be dealing with the over-arching plot of Sess/Kag? Did Sess take another mate? Or is he just wallowing in concubines? And who is Sango's admirer? Have we met him before? update soon, please!

Man...i CANT get enough!!!! That was HOOOOT!!!! Please update soon!!!!

how are you going to leave it off like that? that is soooo wrong.

yes yes... i am very much here... and very much drooling! ... litteraly i am having saliva problems from how hot that fic was!! haha and yay!!!!! *gives many cookies* thank you soo much for continuing this wonderful fic! this was awesome! can't wait to read more! please update soon!

I think Sesshoumaru is a very hot bastard. I am enjoying your story. I am glad you have someone for Sango. I would be pleased if you would continue.

i so love this story!!!

I love this story!!!

Umm....Are they ever going to mate or are they just going to be fuck budies thats all I want to know.

Oh, she needs to cut his royal ass off. As gramma always said: Why buy the milk when you get the sex for free?

Good job btw. I'm totally mad at Sesshoumaru. And the hint of lemon was greatly appreciated.

hehe that was good... can't wait to see what the next one shot you do is

and don't be so hard on yourself you really are a good writer

That was a very unsatisfying end to a very well written story. You left many loose ends that need to be continued. What happened with Sango? With Rin and Kohaku? With Shippo? What happened with Kagome and Sesshomaru? I know the characters other than Kagome and Sesshomaru were not really main parts of your one-shot but you mentioned them and didn't finish what you started.

At the end I was exspecting something more between Kagome and Sesshomaru. Maybe a conversation, or hell even sex? I say that if you either did a sequel or another chapter you would have an impecably written story, interesting, satisfying and full of all the other great things one looks for in a story. I recomend that you continue this fanfiction for the sake of not only your readers but for yourself and your brilliantly written story, it deserves a porper ending.

This is not to be taken as a flame for I have enjoyed you story until the end, but more of a pleading and desperate out cry from myself. I would love for more of this so I can be left with some peace of mind. Thank you for you time and I hope you consider my words carefully.

*fans self* woa! .... okay i think i need a cold shower now! .... that definately was hot.. eventhough it really didn't go into any lemony details... it still held that erotic flare! haha... lets put it this way.. it didn't need to give details... it was that good! i mean just wow! i have never read anything that wasn't a lemon and get worked up like that! you have talent.. and one hell of a way with words! i'm tempted to trash my pride and beg on my knees for a continuation or sequel! you really should continue this or something! and for the record.. the end wasn't the only awesome part! it was a perfect one-shot if you decide to leave it as such. the end didn't leave you wondering what would happen next.. and i thought it would be choppy with the time skips.. but it wasn't, you did a very good job of conveying just enough information to know what was going on, but at the same time leaving an air of mystery... like i am just left wanting more! you have definately wet my pallete and now i must go see if you have other works for me to read and i sincerely hope you add more to this ficlet.. because while it doesn't leave you wondering.. it definately makes you want to read more on what happens to them throughout the centuries... and to get the nitty gritty about how the other characters came to be as they were... well enough chat for one day, please keep up this marvelous work!

I really liked it! Great job!

I LOVED it!! The best non-smut non-instant-death one-shot ever!

Do you realize the hyphens (-) I had to use?

~zen

That was BRILLIANT!

interesting one shot... i like it... now you just need to wrap up the sango loose end... update soon

are you absoloutly crazy!? write more. the cliff hanger is driving me crazy.i love the story. pleeeeaaase write more.

Good one-shot. But it has the makings for a full-length story, don't you think?

wow. I highly enjoyed this!!! ^_^
I'm assuming that this is an one-shot, and i usually hate those, but i really really REALLY like this!

well, great job. ^_^