I loved it and it did make me cry. It was a sad ending, but a very beautiful love story.
chibilee- Wed 21 Mar 2007
oh my god! that was the epitome of the tragic heroine/hero story! *sniffle* i ususally don't like these kind of stories cuz i'm such a sap and all but i did enjoy reading it. i had to since i enjoyed your other fic so much i had to check this one out also! love the lyrics. man i wish i could listen to that song! you know last night i was watching the repeat of the sex and the city final and reading this fic reminded me of the line carrie says to alex when they were breaking up. it was somewhere along the lines of "i want the all consuming, inconvient, can't live without you love!" i can say that sesshoumaru and kagome fits into that category. sad but nice one-shot.
judzea- Wed 21 Mar 2007
This was a hauntingly beautiful story. I watched the video first, then read the story. Then I went back and re-read the story while listening to the song. Very nice, indeed.
Poor Kags, basically, dying from a broken heart, and neither will be able to touch one another again. A ghostly whisper of a beautifully sweet sad story.
I loved it! Very well written. :)
Tana-san- Wed 21 Mar 2007
As per your email, I come straight here to read this and as I brought up the page Casacada's "Truly,Madly, Deeply" was playing in the background. Talk about tears...on my...you SHOULD be proud of this. It is totally beautiful, loving and heartfelt. Excellent work by a very talented young writer. Jen
gina- Tue 20 Mar 2007
wow.. that was so sad!!! it left me longing, i could feel her pain.. and sadness.. wow.. =)
Omg so sad!! I watched that video too! Made me cry!! ;.; But thank you for writing it!! -huggle-
Kimonno Rose- Tue 20 Mar 2007
OMG!!!
This was so SAD!!! I loved the twist, it only mad it all the more wonderfully sad. I needed a tear jerker at the moment. This one-shot is really wonderful. Keep up the good work.
Kimonno Rose- Tue 20 Mar 2007
OMG!!!
This was so SAD!!! I loved the twist, it only mad it all the more wonderfully sad. I needed a tear jerker at the moment. This one-shot is really wonderful. Keep up the good work.
sapphire1022- Tue 20 Mar 2007
wait is she alive or dead because I am so confused. But its so like awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! SO SAD
ok. i'm just a little confused. so is she really dead and her spirit catces glimpses of him when he comes to visit her grave, or is he the one who's dead and he keeps returning to try to meet her while she waits, so that she catches glimpses of his spirit? it's a good story. I just can't tell which way you meant for it to be taken.
aww this really kinda was a tear-jerker! but it was great, and i did like the lil twist. poor sesshoumaru =( great job though =)
This was a heart warming story,,, I enjoyed reading it... You did a good job writting this.. I cried a little... I thought Kagome was the one that died in the end.. But i thought that it would be of a broken heart,,, not lonliness from waiting for him... But I really like your stories you are a good writer...
Take Care
Mari
YallRCrazy- Tue 20 Mar 2007
:: cries :: OH MY GOD!!!! i have never ever really cried over a story but oh my god.. so beautifully written.. if i was evil i could totally see a whole story revoloving around this where she's trapped in the limbo.. but you know i wouldn't write it or want it written because then this one shot would not be as beautiful as it is.. but yea!! great job.. but no more.. i don't have that many tears.. hehe
i thought we had an agreement no more making me cry it's not allowed!!! grr... but that was soo sweet... omg and the twist, ahh... grr.. i don't cry... :P
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