wow your not to obvious are you? ^_^;
Sesshoumaru is going to be half Italian isn't he? That's my guess. Did you want a name for sesshoumaru's mother? If my assumption is correct I would pick Isabella, It seems rather high rank to me ((wasn't there a queen by that name? or one with a name close to it? I think she was Spanish though.)).
This is a really nice story I love when someone shys away from the normal fanfic mold everyone always does ((this leaves for a really boring reading when every one's is the same)) this is the first one where they portray InuYasha as the lawful son and Sesshoumaru as the bastard. (( of course, the exact opposite is implied in the actual series yet never said.)) I've also read quite a few of your other ones also and your name is going down on my mental fanfic-writer check list for updates ((I only have 5 others on this unwritten list which is very prestigious since I can barely remember the names of my class mates much less fake pen-names of people off the internet ^_^;))
My favorite part of your stories is that you are one to do your homework. Like a professional writer ((and unlike most fanfic writers)) you actually research the topic you go into not guess or make things up. Because of which I salute you Lady Symone and I will say I'm waiting ((more like fidgeting)) for your next chapter in this and in Dekigokoro.
my dearest regards ((and apologies for making this so long))
Post Script: if this seems in anyway inflammatory please flame me on my grammar which I doubt is legible. >.
lmao and sorry for the formality ^_^; idk y I do that some times.
Violetcarson- Thu 03 May 2007
I really like this fic. I cant wait for the next update, and then hopefully some Sesshomaru/Kagome fluff!! I love fluff!!!!!
My Favorite Names R Arianna, Bellia, Erminia, and Graziana!!!! I Hope This Helps!! Onegai, Update Soon! ^^
With Love,
Kagome-Chan
Violetcarson- Fri 27 Apr 2007
I say
Alessia
Antonia
Eulalia
Ilaria
or Santazza
or, whatever you happen to choose
YAY YAY! We Hear From Her!!!! lol Thanks For Putting Up That (Sort of Chapter) This Is One of My Favorite Stories! Please Update As Soon As You Can!
With Love,
Kagome-Chan
Any9- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Please, Please update sooon! I don't like Kagome's dream (hope is a dream)!Please wake her soon. Anyway I like your story. Don't let others put you down just because they don't like something you wrote. I think you should keep writing because in my opinion you are a very good writer.
Noacat- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Izayoi! That's how ya spell it.
Yasuna nodded her blonde head vigorously, and Aoshii smiled in thanks.
“Konnichiwa, Shihoko-chan. That would be greatly appreciated.â€Â
I am not entirely sure why 'konnichiwa' is here... I'm positive he is not saying Hello, but instead, thank you? Which is Arigatou gozaimasu. ^^;; Other than that, Its a good chapter
Please Get a New Chap. Up Soon!!!! I Almost Died Waiting So Long!! lol Your Next Story Sounds Good As Well, I Will Probably End Up Reading It, Since I AM a Dance Teacher, I Can Help U Out If U Have Questions About Cerrtain Dances....Only If U Want of Coarse! ^^
With Love,
Kagome-Chan
Something-or-other- Sat 14 Apr 2007
Though rather short, this was a pretty good chapter. I'm eager to see the next. I have personally not read many stories, if any, that are like this one. I love reading stories that are not typical or actually have original plot-lines, instead of cliche, overused, done-to-death plot-lines. As for the little tidbit you learned in Health, I have heard of that as well. I suppose it varies for each person, and you are probably right. Some people write their sex scenes on personal experience...others just write on what they know or have read or have learned. An interesting tidbit nonetheless. :)
Again, I love your story and I hope you continue it. It's hard to find good stories nowadays, and this surely is a great story.
DarkFang1990- Sat 24 Mar 2007
I think its a wondful story and you share such wonderful historical information. But as soon as I read he had a herim Its a downer to hear because if just means there other wemon in the pictuer and thats a bit awkward and and a bummer for him to still have once hes with Kagome. I think alot of your reviewers would agree. I also hate Kagura soooo much and think once they get to gether you should have him get rid of it just a rightful thing to or even before that. Otherwise the reader feels a bit bumed that theres these other wemon still hanging around. Well thats just one suggestion I do like your story and I will keep reading it unless Kagura and the herim stays in the picture...with all do respect keep writing you have talent ^^
Chiyori- Fri 23 Mar 2007
I just found your story and Im reallly glad I started to read it.
Its nice for a change to find a story that doesnt have tons of lemons etc in it because they dont really add much to the story for me.
So its pretty refreshing.
And I cant wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work =]
Ooh...O.O wow! omg! She has no idea she's playing with fire!! Well, maybe a few burns'll teach her! -snigger- Love it so far, and no worries about not having citrus. Not all good stories need it. You're story is a great story, and a ltitle citrus may not add the desired effect. Love it! update soon!
anon- Fri 23 Mar 2007
I basically checked your story to see if you got my review and see if you replied, so I must say I do accept your explanation and apology; and also I owe an apology since my words were not put in a too polite way nor with an explanation. I have to say it was because in a previous chapter in the author's note you wrote concubines, I took it as that, even though at first I didn't notice the quote marks with it. Your explanation and also a fellow reviewer pointed out that it doesn't necessarily mean he's 'having his way with them' or that it should be taken in that context. So thanks for that. I guess as long as you don't write Sesshomaru saying he spent a night with a woman to deny his growing feelings for Kagome like some other stories do, I'll still read your story. So, this chapter was good again with Sesshomaru and Kagome interaction, and his thoughts and reaction. I hope there will be nothing romantic going on between Kagome and her bodyguard, who I like by the way so don't make me hate him with any romance between him and her. So, good job and be careful of some misspelled words.
Reis- Thu 22 Mar 2007
::points:: You haven't really said anything about it but if the seraglio is what has everyone up in arms maybe they should be aware that just because he has one doesn't mean he uses it. It's generally a thing one is expected to have and it's not like they are all bimbos or something, they're generally women of much higher esteem than what we would label prostitutes. Most people misuse the idea of the harem in their stories. I'm proud of you for your portrayal of it.
Other people can only hurt you or bring you down if you let them. Don't let what people think bring you down, especially if you know that they are misinformed.
::Points:: You're story is wonderful and I can't wait to find out about Sesshoumaru's back story.
I am saddened to hear of your hurt. I do hope people can reword themselves into a non-hurting manner. Thank you for the story and the lesson on Kimonos. i had no idea there were so many layers!! my lord it must be heavy!! ^^
anon- Wed 21 Mar 2007
Since I don't see my review, it must have been me. I think you're taking it out of context. I even said you had me with you in the story. The part I didn't like was the concubines. Like someone else wrote, there are too many stories that have that idea, so that is why I said it was overdone. I didn't insult you personally or even say the story was crap. I was just pointing out an overused idea that I didn't think was really needed in the way you were writing the story. I had liked the way Sesshomaru was written and the look into his past and his reaction to it, so that was why I was, I guess you can say, annoyed when I read he had concubines. What real purpose does it serve? I liked every other aspect of the story, but that. I think you're making a mountain out of a mole hill by saying my previous review was a flame, because all I said was a part of your story was overdone. How is that offensive? Sometimes you got let things roll off your back and move on, and not let the littlest things bother you or make it something it's not.
Momo- Tue 20 Mar 2007
I am sorry to hear about the verbal abuse you have recieved. You are a wonderful person who has decided to use her own personal time to write a story for all of us to enjoy. Critisism is welcome, but there is obviously a fine line. I thank you for your wonderful chapters and hope to see you again =)
Rowen- Tue 20 Mar 2007
Did you delete the flames? 'Cause I didn't see any. I like the story and although it can be hard you just have to ignore unhelpful criticism. I mean what would the world do if J.K Rowling had taken people burning her book personally. Millions would cry. Now I doubt you’d have millions cry if you stopped but I would.
Something-or-other- Tue 20 Mar 2007
This is a great story that I can honestly say has me hook, line, and sinker. You have great talent. Thank you for sharing your story(s) with us, they are truly great. My hat is off to you.
Very well written...unfortunately I have read to many harem ones to my displeasure, although yours at least is historically correct and one can see the evidence of your hard work.
Again, this story is very good, I'm just tired of playboy Sessho.
-Dani.
I'm gonna read some yaoi! ^_^
Sesshy's angel18- Sun 18 Mar 2007
This is going good and interesting how slowly sess is falling for kag.Update soon.
Marulover- Sun 18 Mar 2007
I like your story and where it's going, it's different, and I always like that in any of the stories I read. I hope you keep writing, and will do it soon! Please update!
Sesshy's angel18- Sat 17 Mar 2007
This is a great story and glad you updated.Update soon.
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