you just put in every childs and parents worst nightmare into your story. good job!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Other than the spelling erroes and typos this was a very good story and i liked it very much.

Chaos

That Was a Gr8 Story!!!! And Thank You So0o0 Much 4 Letting Me Know When the Lemon Starts and Ends!! and I Will DEFINATLY Be Reading Your Next Story! ^^

With Love,

Kagome-Chan

is he alive again im confused but i still love it sequel it

wow that was awesome

Wow, I was surprised that it ended! It was really good though!

-River

awwwwww!!!! its done!! =(
that was a good lemon though!!

continue writing!! ^_^

AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS COMING TO AN END!!!!!!
YAY!! A LEMON!!!!!1
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!!! ^_^

P.S. cant wait =)

That Was Beautiful!!!! The Garden Thingy Was a Nice Touch!! Way 2 Go! ^^ Thankyou For the Wonderful Read!!!! But I Don't Really Like Lemons So....Can U Let Me Know If There Is More to the Next Chapter Than Just Lemon, and I Can Just Skip Over That Part When I Read It? Let Me Know!! Arigato! ^^

With Love,

Kagome-Chan

OMG!! THEY LIKE COMBINED TOGETHER!! DUDE, someone need to draw a pic of Kagome like dat! I think she would look hot! anywho, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR!!!! MAN!!! I cant wait for the next chapter! OMG!!.....the nex chapter is the last chapter....NOOOOO!!!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE AND THANK U!!!! =)

P.S. one more lemon pweez

AMG!!!! HES DEAD!! I Cried! No, Really, I Sat at my computer and cried when that happened. But i DO Like the fact that his ghost came back...but im scared! I Want him to come back to life or somthing!!!! They have to be happy at the end....or....i'll cry again! lol you have a good style to be able to make me cry! please do your best with the last chapters! ^^

Kagome-Chan

Well, i finally got around to read this! you portraied everthing nicely, i even found myself aroused -even with my huge stomacke- when they first kissed in that park where those pixies were...
I hope you make two more chapters, so we can appretiat the lemon all the more!
And, perhaps you could make a epilog, sorta? Tell us about their lives, and about their kids, and if KAgs makes her buisness, and what happens with every one else,including Neon...
And, if she stays as a youkai or not...lol!
Well...TTFN!
joanne

I really enjoyed this chapter but I really hated how you left us hanging! "P I never did have much patience. I look forward to reading the conclusion of this story. It is very entertaining and I always find myself laughing at some of the conversations that take place in the story. Again I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters.

That great !!! Sorry tookn't e-mail faster!!!

OMG!!! juss two more chapters!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!! =)

wow your story is getting really good can you please update asap

awwwwwwww! its almost done!! it was an AWESOME fanfic though! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THHANK U!!!!!!!!! =_

P.S. more hot lemons pweeeeez

I am really enjoying this story. It is very good. I must admit I will be very sad when it comes to an end but knowing what I read in the previous chapters it will end with a bang. I look forward to reading the upcoimg chapters.

it was a bit confusing, but after rereading it over, i got it!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!!!! =)

P.S. more lemons pweez

P.P.S. e-mail me when u update it =)

well from what you said earlier if she doens't love the person and said person tries something he'll get fried to a crisp....

GO SESSHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you did a remarkable transformation of him I think....

btw FLUFFY AND KAGGY BETTER HAVE PUPS AT THE END OF THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what I don't get is why Keade removed the Shikon from Kag....I mean seriously her mom could loose it in the washer or something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was another good chapter but I do have to admit that I was a little confused concerning the barrier and how everything went down but as I read further I got it. I look forward to reading the next chapter because I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow... That was different then i was expecting...
I figured Naruka would come for the Jewel...
I hope Sesshomaru's family can get to here before Naruka does anything bad to her.... I hate when she gets raped by him... I know its part of some story lines but i feel sorry for that girl....
Well anyways hurry with the next chapter i can't wait for an update...
Take Care
Mari

Naraku strikes again eh? *Sighs* Evil evil man... Anywho, Great chapter!

please write more i really like it

that was interesting.........very good...almost comedic

Nice Chapter... In comes Naraku !!!!
Watch out Kagome and Sesshomaru.... lol....
Can't wait for the next chapter,, i have enjoyed reading this story and have been checking for updates daily... Don't want to miss if you update...
Can't wait for them to get together...
Their mating should be interesting...
Well anyways take care and hurry plz...
Mari

I really am enjoying this story. The only thing that didn't make since to me is the last chapter. I would think that Kaede would not call Kagome out like that knowing her life could be in danger. I would think that she would do it privately. I guess it is part of the story but it just through me off a little. I still love the story and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I loved it I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!

I so loved this chapter. It had me laughing hard. It was tooooo funny! I look foward to reading the next chapter. Things are really getting interesting for our favorite couple.

OMG!! WALKING IN ON KAGOME HAVING AN ORGASM!!! THAT WAS HYSTERICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i was falling off my chair and crying!!
u gotta continue!!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!! =)

P.S. more hot lemon scenes pweez!! =)

That was pretty messed up lol. I have to admit, I believe I would have a heart attack. Talk about embarrasing...but anywho, Great Chapter!

I loved it. I hope that on the next chapter they finally become one, mind, body, and soul. I can imagine some kind of barrier around the room, not allowing entrance to anyone, not even the strongest of all, while they consumate their love. Not stopping until in the end for both auras to be as one. This is what I hope, but I know it will be upto the writer to choose the story's course.

OMG!! DID U JUST SAY LEMON!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!! =)

P.S. cant wait for the lemon!! =)

I love the story!!!!!
I can't wait to read more please write more soon.

Can't wait for the rest! This is great! : D

yay!!!! that was good! now, that Sesshy has made a move.....mayb Kagome will start to fall for a sexy demon! u shud add in Kouga! that'll add more drama n competition!!! =)
PWEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =_

P.S. cant wait for lemons

WOOOWWww!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAaa!
Damn that was really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neon Is a baka (fool)!!!
So I loved it, I'm wondering when the new one(s) are or is coming out! Bye, your reader
Faby

WOW!! YAY!!! HE KISSED!!! now, there will be a lemony goodness!!!!!

PWEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeez

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE LEMONS ARE COMING!!!!!

PWEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEZ PWEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez

I can't wait for the next chapter. That was wonderful.

love the part where kag tells neon off... yay another chap... keep up the good work

i love it!it is so good!

i love it!it is so good!

Hey the new chapter is great! I love your story so much!! :)

PLEASE tell me they kick but to the ground!!
Bye,
Faby

that was good!! i cant wait for Sesshy to kill Neon!! PWEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeez...o and i have an idea....u shud include Koga n have him go after Kagome, this way, Sesshy will have two ppl to compete with for Kagome

Wow! That was wonderful, she totally put him in his place. You should have Sess go after her and leave the baka to their fathers.

i want to read more

WooHoo I want to see some Neon bashing:)

too short too short... you're a teaser.... more please...

OMG! A FIGHT!!!!! i already noe who is going to win tho.....PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeez

^_^ This is getting good. Please keep up the good work.

Hell ya he will and we all pretty much no it!!!!

oo, now Sesshy wants to taste our little miko! hopefully it will lead to a lemon......i noe, im a hentai...........PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez

I really like how this story is going ;D
Can't wait to see more... and specially about Sesshou's plan ^_^
And more about this Neon guy ^.-
Hope see you soon
Ja nE

continue writing!!!! =)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your story is like so cool and nice!
Angela

PWEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeez

like it can you write more please

AWESOMNESS!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!1 =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeeeeez

I think Inuyasha's mother's name is Izayoi, yup, Izayoi =) I love how the story is going so far, have lots of fun writing it and see you next time =D

WOW!! if i were Kagome's dada, i wud rush over to see my daughter!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeez

Um, Japanese people don't have middle names. Just an FYI.

that was soo sad!! Poor Kagome is burned!! maybe, wen they get to their father's house, Kagome will feel better in more the one way!! *wiggles eyebrows hentai style* XD!! PWEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N
THNK U!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez =)