love the story sofar please write faster and if you can write newer chapters please es[ecially when he marks her as his life mate

awww i want more, what happened to the elusive bachelor that was sesshomaru?

your great sessh/kag writer ^^ I love your fics. this one was great by the way. and I loved "boy's locker room" as for the twelve year old well...personaly they should have read the warning and what the hell was a 12 year old reading it for anyway O,o lol.

Hey!

Great story. One line in it really caught my attention " bewitched me mind, body and soul" mainly because I heard it on Pride & Prejudice..
Anyways, awesome story!
-Alyssa

you did a terific job! i love the ending. i think that you should write a sequal about how their relationship progrfessed or something. i just don't want to stop reading. you've got me hooked. so hooked that i accually finished this story today. can you beleive it? well anyways, hope you write back. i love your work!

i want a sequel. ;.;
but anyways your totally awesomez0rs :D

NEVER! NEVER I say could we get enough smutt and NEVER could we get smutted out. ESPECIALLY by a writer who knows what to type namely you...whew.

it was a greatr story from what i read but my comp wouldn't let me read the endind or chapter5.but otherwise i give this story a 2 thombs up.

Great Fic!!!

just wanted to say that i very much enjoyed the fic. if you're gonna spend two weeks with someone might as well be sesshoumaru! lol

ahh that was such a good last chapter, i never would have they would meet like that! it was great! i love the smut! I hope you have other fics, for as i love ur smut and story lines

This fanfic was awesome! I absolutely loved it!

-River

sigh... im sad and happy sad becaues the storys over happy because i got to read a hot lemon! magnifico by the way!

wow thats was an awesome ending to a really great story. Hope to see more stories from you.

Ban got off easy. I was savoring a particularly nice image of him hanging from a flagpole. I like this fiesty Kagome. I was hoping she'd grin when she found out who it was.

i loved that ending!!! kags gives a mystery lap dance... it was great

You are a good saxs solo, sex personified. You are sensuality, what a gloriously erotic ending. Until next time. Brava!

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i LoVe iT!! DaMn!! iM HorNy!! Hay!!!

FiNiShEd FIc!! YaY!! NiCe!!

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That was sad...But there's so many conections between them, that if they want to see each other again, it would be hard! Hope you update again soon!

UPDATE!!!!

great fic... very sexy and hot... update soon....

i just keep falling in love with this story. hope you update soon

*drools and begs you for more with big, pleading eyes* haha, that was awsome, but sad that there's only one more chapter *sniffs and gives a watery smile* I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter =D

I'm sooo happy i decided to check this fic out, it was great! Full of lemony goodness, i hope it all works out!

Very nice, indeed. This story had me fanning myself it was so HOT!

*Grins* Well done...hope to read more later.

that chapter was so sweet!! ^_^

cant believe dat the fanfic is coming to end!!!!

PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!! =D

P.S. one more hot lemon pweez

oh they had so best get back together soon... i think this is my favorite lemon thus far... update soon

awww that was so I cried and smile man this is good.

Aww only one! I love this fanfic! But I suppose it had to end sometime. *Sighs* Oh well. Great chapter anyway! ^_^

-River

hey I know you said your ending this but the way you played out this awesome story you could make it to where he meets her in the city and bank gets all possessive and take it from there. This story has a ton of stuff you could do with it. It would make it longer but I bet it would turn in to the best story I've read.

im sad to know this story is ending but happy becaues i get a new chapy

im sad to know this story is ending but happy becaues i get a new fic ...

Awww..LasT oNe? Soo Aww....I

am gOnnA mIss ThiSs Soo

Much ....Now I am WonDerIng Wat

will HapPen To The End And

ThaNkS to YOu!!!!!!!! Hey DonT hate

Me Ok???? *SnIff* But I ReaLy LikE

IT........... KaSi DaHil Sa Lemon.....

hahahah

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SalAmAt!!!!!!!!

AWWW...

cute CHPT! UPDAET UPDATE UPDATE UDPATE UPDATE!!

this is sooo good; and i loved it at the end when he suddenly told her about himself.
i think i want you to plan my next romance... lol

ya know after the vaca they should still see each other and she should find out she's pregnant and Sessy and she could even have more fun when she's pregnant with his pup.....
just a thought.....

Congrats on the nomination and good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

wait.....if she bit him does that mean he's her mate?? better question WHERE did she bite him!?!?!?

yay! u put some fluff in there too!

nice. seriously a big fan of urs!

Love the post coital revelations. Sensual yet sweet. Nicely done.

OMG! its almost coming to ana end!!! u gotta continue!!! u juss gotta!!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!! =)

P.S. cant wait for more lemony goodness

i love this story!!!! plz plz update soon

loved the mirror lemon very nice update soon

wow that was banging! lol can you plz email me when you update would love u even more =^^=
shoibhan318@hotmail.com

Just reading it made my heart speed up and WTF. Kagome why you bite him? lord..... round um...20 lol

Wow...great stuff. I wonder if they will fall in love or will it just be a physical relationship. After their holiday, I wonder if they will keep in touch *smirking* no pun intended, then again maybe the pun is intentional *giggles* :)

Nicely written...update soon.

Love the story so far! Please update soon! Can't wait!

I liked the story. I can't wait for the next one.

Awsome, please update!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

What's that old adage...ahh, "absence makes the heart grow fonder"...umhmm,nice comeback. You are really amusing and this is totally smut oriented. You maked good smut though. Very arousing and enjoyable to read. On another note, school is difinitely more important than writing fanfiction. Education is a must these days.

WEEE updates lol. Lovin the smut too by the way hehe. Im sry but Sess/Kag gettin hot 'n heavy against a tree is too hard NOT to read lmao. Update soon,lovin the fic! ^_^

great chapter! nothing wrong w/getting it rough once in a while. lol yeah, i know all about college work overload. i'm in the middle of it but i'm using the excuse of easter holiday to put it off and read your fic. i think if these lemons start being repetitive then maybe you could describe them differently. you'd be amazed at what a difference a couple of words here and there could make. but what do i know i don't write smut just read them! lol anywayz, i'm looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully it won't be too long. ^_^

Well worth the wait! Excellent update, totally sexy as usual. You do it so well, not to mention we got quite a bit of the internal dialogue of both parties which helped strengthen the link. Well done, humourous, sexy, hot, creative and just plain good hentai fun. Write on!

awesomeness!!! u updated it!! and u noe wat...i think the hard sex made up for ur absence! that was AWESOME!

PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!!! =)

P.S. cant wait for more HOT lemony goodness!! =)

That was great! Lmao I loved it! I cant wait for more! Please update as soon as you can

write more, write more, write more, write more!! pleeeeaaaase!!!!!!! i love the story so far. you are really talented. thanks for the lemon.

the to be cotinueds are driving me insane. but it's a good story though. and what do you meen that there's no plot. i thought that the plot was that sessy and kagome were going to play around a bit then fall in love. that's what it so far sounds like.

Hi Hasu-san!

I just want to tell you how much I am enjoying this wonderful story of yours. The idea is refreshing, the writing style is good, and you're interactive with your readers in the author's note...all these have blended well into the perfect concoction of a great story!

I loved that lemon. It was yummy! LOL. I like it when authors make their lemons sensual instead of simply trashy, and yours was enjoyable:)

Please keep working hard on this; I am really hoping to read more. Till the next chapter, take care!

Love,
MissTeak

i just finished chapter two. these to be continueds are killing me. thanks for explaing what those weird foods were. and are they really foods? anyways, the story is good so far and i love the way you discribe MY sessy.

YAY!!! the smut fest has arrived!!!!!!!! PWEEEZ PWEEEEEEZ PWEEEZ CONTINUE!!!!! im literally on my knees and typing!! PWEZ PWEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. cant wait for more lemony goodness =)

Hmmmmm, how sinfully delicious! Write on this delightful lemon fest.

Hmmmmm, how sinfully delicious! Write on this delightful lemon fest.

You know i read nc17 for a reason and that last ch was it

Your story is great, there is nothing else to say.
I'm still sitting here having a stupid grin all over my face.

smut on my friend smut on!

ur stories are awesome! keep writing.
good smut and plots =)

hot.






that's all i gotta say. loved it.

I do believe the it is unhealthy to laugh too long, seeing as your stomach ache’s and your eyes water. You have convinced me of this. Your A/N was so outrageously funny I about croaked. ‘before I knew it, I had Sesshoumaru inside Kagome and hell, I gave up’ *almost dies again* It is so true though! As I told my friend, give a dog a bone, but don’t try and take it away. And smutting out? Well, the worst that could happen would be that you short out but sooner or later you’ll end up rebooting. Keep it up! Oh, and don’t mind the 12 year old! They re just 12, after all and have no idea what great lemonade is made of. You make a perfect concoction^^. The ever vigilant,
~Chaos

I hope to read your next chapter soon! Oh! Is it going to be smut only, or is there going to be a bit of a plot as well? Just wondering. I'll read anyway! XD

Lmao. Smut is good. Really good. Rock. On. Smut! lol Great chapter!

Who said one has to have a plot to write a semi-smutty love story between our most beloved pair, Sess & Kags? *LOL* and *evil grinning afterwards* >;}

Excellent start...right to the point and no mish-mashing around.
Please update soon. :)

OMG! This is sooo great.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

o.0 liked it very very much.

LOL. Love the fic,and the tension. Its so funny to see a sexually frustrated Sesshoumaru,lmao. Update soon,cant wait to read more ^_^

i cannot wait for the lemony goodness!!!!!! PWEEEEEZ BRING OUT THE FORE PLAY SOOON!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeeez

Oh good you're back! I hope they stay on equal ground, or she even gets one up on him! Let's just say that whoever's the most smug, I root for the other one. Equal smugness is the best. heh.

Awesome! ^_^ Please keep up the good work!

Oh the suspense, I can't wait for the smut. I happen to be a avid reader and I always look forward to a good smutty story. From what I have read I am pretty sure that you will do a great job on this story as well. Anyway update soon and keep up the good work.
Sakura

Another good chapter.. I like the little flirting going on between them.. It was kinda cute...
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens...LOL...
I wouldn't mind some lemony goodness... LOL..
Well Take Care and hurry and update plz..
This story is very interesting...
Mari

I found the plot it was to get them together and have them have a GREAT vacation together. How many places at the shrine can they "defile" with hot sweaty.... you get my driff.

You are an amusing writer. I've read a few of your fics and you are humorous as well as hentai. Sometimes the mindless and plotless sex are just what this reviewer needs. Thanks for the foreplay...now on with the mad, wild,passionate monkey dance!!!!

OMG!!!!

U gotta update soon!!! it's getting way too hot in here!!!

can you please write more i really like ur story

i really like this fic, cant wait to see what happens!

o.0 more please!

...moving along nicely ....more please....

Welll i like it so far... Could be a very interesting story... Can't wait for the lemony goodness bewteen them... I like the Boys Locker Room hope this is just as good... I do enjoy reading my Smut... LOL...
Iam a hentai what can i say...
Take Care and hurry with the next chapter...
Mari

Ohh!!! Sesshy is going to haev dinner wit Kagome! maybe sparks will fly at the dinner table!! Hopefully, there will be more than sparks, maybe a LEMON!! LOL!! XD!! PWEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. cant wait for the LEMONY GOODNESS

I like this so far hasu-san. I can't wait for more.

Get on with the fluffyness. I know, build up the story line. But in a hurry!! Update soon please.

Oh good. She has an attitude, isn't impressed with money, status or species, and can be sarcastic and cutting one moment and compassionate and loving the next. Have fun Sesshy! (evil laughter)

/This/ ought to be interesting. Here's hoping that she's just as strong-minded as he!

I am officially a major fan of yours....I love all the stories you've posted so far....i cant wait to see how this one turns out

Another good chapter. The first meeting seemed to go rather well, though I wish it would have been longer, though! In any case, thanks again and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Short chapter! Please update soon. Just to let you know I read Boy's Locker Room, and I am a perfectly legal 20 year old, and i thoroughly enjoyed it. So don't worry! Write as much smut as you wish, and I will read!!

yea i hate having to tell people when the sex is going to start. it just cuts off the mood...

** and here is the intercourse part, if you are not of age please refrain from reading**

just after you read a great kiss scene, its not right!!!

oh well.. i love this fic so far ... update soon.

LoL Scar! Scar!!!! LOL Ha... what's a 12 year old doing on this site anyway??? Parents now days... they let their children do any and everything without adult supervision... Oh, by the way wonderful way to start off the fic... and what ever you decide to do... plot or not... I'll be supporting you. I enjoyed Boy's Locker Room hehehe. ^_^.
Look out for my fics.... I actually plan on updating soon. LOL

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

hentai ,lemony, what the hell is this?well I will just skip it anyway and just so you know, Iam that 12 year old kid your talking about !!!!! YOUR FANFICS ARE INTRESTING AND SEXY AT THE SAME TIME, I DONT KNOW THE RIGHT TERM

I love your stories! please please put the next chapter out soon!

And to the AN... a 12 yr old shouldnt even be reading it! They should know to stay away from smut. But dont change how you write because of that... They should... wait a few years before reading >_>;

I hate you! -.- UPDATE!!! I want to know what happens...NOW!!!

loved the first line.

:]

update soon!

YES! YES! YES!! another lemony goodness fanfic!! OMG!! U R MT FAVOURITE AUTHOR!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!! PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. can NOT wait for the LEMONY GOODNESS!.....byt he way, ur lemons are the best!! = )

P.P.S i'm a hentai at heart too!!!!

P.P.P.S. e-mail me sum time!!! =)

YES! YES! YES!! another lemony goodness fanfic!! OMG!! U R MT FAVOURITE AUTHOR!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!! PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. can NOT wait for the LEMONY GOODNESS!.....byt he way, ur lemons are the best!! = )

P.P.S i'm a hentai at heart too!!!!

P.P.P.S. e-mail me sum time!!! =)

Oh and out of curiosity....why oh why would an underage person TELL you they are UNDERAGED and reading your work? HELLO....you can READ, you got the WARNING...like anything else, YOU HAVE CHOICE...DONT READ IT. DO NOT OFFER UP your opinion on SAID with your MANY YEARS OF EXPERIENCE "raised eyebrows".

Dear Lord.....DONT GET ME STARTED....!!!!

There is plenty of fodder available elsewhere WITH THE APPROPRIATE RATINGS for you...for whatever reason, THAT doesn't seem to appeal to you. Wonder why? Here is a word for you Sanctimonious....look it up!

Oh and out of curiosity....why oh why would an underage person TELL you they are UNDERAGED and reading your work? HELLO....you can READ, you got the WARNING...like anything else, YOU HAVE CHOICE...DONT READ IT. DO NOT OFFER UP your opinion on SAID with your MANY YEARS OF EXPERIENCE "raised eyebrows".

Dear Lord.....DONT GET ME STARTED....!!!!

There is plenty of fodder available elsewhere WITH THE APPROPRIATE RATINGS for you...for whatever reason, THAT doesn't seem to appeal to you. Wonder why? Here is a word for you Sanctimonious....look it up!

I can already tell I am going to thoroughly enjoy this...whether you decide to take a PWP approach or to actually have a plotline with a good dollop of perpetual "rutitude"...either way, it is going to be fabulous.

I love the concept, in fact, the stories that have the most profound effect and the strongest reactions from readers tend to be focussed and give a chance for proper dialogue and intimacy. A wicked combination.

Go forth and WRITE ...we will read.

ElegantPaws

'It had been precisely two weeks, four days, and eight hours since Sesshoumaru had rutted with a female.' ....

What a way to start a story! For some reason, when I read that line, I bursted out into giggles. So funny!

Great idea by the way! Absolutely wicked! I can't wait for the update on this! (or Boy's Locker Room [what a hot fic])

Please update when you can!

Byez!

-[Ashleyx3]

I like the way you started out the story. I'm assuming that the grand child that just arrived is...Kagome? If so, it seems like perhaps our Sesshoumaru is in for quite a vacation. Thanks for the writing and I eagerly await the next chapter.

That was a pretty good beginning. Can't wait for more!

Aww, your story doesn't scar kids, it might even be good for them to read about how declicious it can be instead of finding it out in real life and THEN be scarred for life XP And plot smlot, who needs plot when you have smut~ If I throw down a year supply of chocolate down that hentai hole, will you stay there forever? :D

PS. This IS a review telling you how totally awesome your fics are XD

update.. cliffys are no fair

You are my hero. You smut-alicious writter you! I wrote my first smut chapter ever and I can't seem to post it. Oh, the shame! The embarrassment!! So I opt to read other people's smut. It makes me feel better about myself. ;D Well, I've bored you enough with my little story, I can't wait for your next update. so update soon!