I loved it, though i wish you would have given more in the end, instead of ending with i love you's. I always like to hear what happens after.
ren- Sat 16 Jun 2007
wow. another chatper. thanks. i hope that they get together again.
ren- Sat 16 Jun 2007
wow. another chatper. thanks. i hope that they get together again.
is that the?! it can't be the end!! it was too good! please, if it was th end, make a sequel, or wite another story.....
Inukamisashi- Sun 27 May 2007
Short but nice. Pls do update also your other story "Robin Hood". Thanks!
oh man it's been so long since i read this! I loved the chapter and the fact that Kagome kinda gave him a hard time but ddnt totally reject him in the end...update! ^^
hazel- Sun 27 May 2007
WHAT THAT WAS IT? ..your shitting me right? mannnnnnnnn I wanted her to say "No, I moved on!" something like that shit oh well.
update update update please
Nice chapter. I really enjoyed reading it.
-River
don't keep us waiting long
can't wait for the next chapter hurry plz lol
Please write more soon I wanna know what happens.
gina- Mon 23 Apr 2007
omg ur back!!!! i love there chapters!!!
i can't wait for more!!!!!!!!=)
angela- Sun 08 Apr 2007
Update
i almost cried as i read this ......can you write more please?
kogome- Sun 08 Apr 2007
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Tana-san- Sat 07 Apr 2007
Alright!!! It's getting better with each new chapter. Thanks for not speeding into the friends turned lovers thing. This keeps it interesting and keeps me coming back. I know you put them in bed together but it was for a good cause. I don't understand the Naraku thing. Are there two of them? Ewww. I'm glad she got away from him before he raped her. That would be sad. I've read some where that happened and it's always sad to see Kagome violated. Well, maybe this will get Seshoumaru off his butt and actually talk to her. Why does it always have to be so hard to tell someone you care about them? We are some really screwed up creatures sometimes. I think I'd rather know if I'm liked than to be left hhanging in the wind but most people are afraid to lose the friendship if they tell them their feelings. I think it's more torture to keep watching the one I love being with others when it could be me. Seems Sess is thinking along the same lines now. He should have just kissed her way back when but some say everything happens for a reason. Maybe all he went through with Kaguya will make him a better mate for Kagome? Who knows? Sorry for the rambling...thoughts just keep pouring out of my head in the wee hours of the morning when normal people sleep.
hazel- Fri 06 Apr 2007
that was realllllllllllllllllllllly good. awwww
lomeelen- Thu 05 Apr 2007
are mr. naraku and naraku the same person?
Sarah- Thu 05 Apr 2007
Terrific story, even if Sesshoumaru is a little "DUUUUHHHH" when it comes to Kagome's feelings. Isn't that just like a man :)
Quick question. In chapter one, Kagome's boss was also named Naraku. Did she go on a date with her former boss? Or is this another Naraku. Two Naraku's....creepy :)
Please update soon :) :) :)
Kai- Thu 05 Apr 2007
Yay! Finally Sesshoumaru is getting it. I think...He's quite dense in this fanfic. A little OOC? Anyways, now that the ball's rolling I can't waitfor things to heat up. Keep on going! ^_^
Little Girlie- Thu 05 Apr 2007
is he dense or what? I hope things could heat up with these two.
ElegantPaws- Thu 05 Apr 2007
You know, this little story is gaining some rather pleasant legs figuratively. Nicely done. A romance is blooming nicely.
inumaru_rapture- Thu 05 Apr 2007
...well I feel stupid as hell...I got all mad last chapter about him dating when I had misread. ehehe... oh well!!!! ^^;;;;;;
I love this chapter, and I hope to sedate the hentai in me with some lovely lemons next chappie? -nudgenudge- whaddya think, Marulover?
swtdrm01- Thu 05 Apr 2007
The suspense is tormenting me. Please! one of them has to make a move.
AnimeFanime18- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Ah, how the tables have turned. Sesshomaru, stuck watching Rin while Kagome goes on a date!
inukamisashi- Fri 30 Mar 2007
oohhh!! can't wait! thisis so nice! i love this fic from the moment i read the first chapter. looking forward for the next installment! ^^
inukamisashi- Fri 30 Mar 2007
oohhh!! can't wait! thisis so nice! i love this fic from the moment i read the first chapter. looking forward for the next installment! ^^
Byjinder- Thu 29 Mar 2007
You gotta update! I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction.
gina- Thu 29 Mar 2007
wow.. that was great i so didnt see that coming!!! awesome=)
swtdrm01- Thu 29 Mar 2007
I'm getting very excited. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
brnxwidy- Thu 29 Mar 2007
its great update soon
Ooo this is getting good. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Trice- Thu 29 Mar 2007
First of all, all I can say is that was cold how you ended this chapter! "P
I can say I was not expecting that at all. It was a very good read and a lot of stuff came out in the open. I was wondering how long it was going to take you to let us know how Kagome got those scars. I look forward to reading the next chapter and to find out who Kagome is going out on a date with. Things are starting to get very interesting if I say so myself.
ElegantPaws- Thu 29 Mar 2007
Hn
Interesting development re the date, looking forward to how this all works out. Nicely done.
omg! "would you mind watching rin while I go on a date" wtf?! he better be preparing something rally friggen nice for her!!! omg. lol thanks for updating! See you soon!...that is...when you update again! ^___^
Little Girlie- Mon 26 Mar 2007
I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
MidnightTimberWolf- Wed 21 Mar 2007
Cool story I like it.... So who did Kagome have a fight with? Inu Yasha ... Well I can say that there will be a shocked Sessoumaru in the morning.... I wonder where it will lead.... Update soon.
ElegantPaws- Wed 21 Mar 2007
Very nice, looking forward to the next chapter. My only query, why did she not think of getting him a doctor? Beyond that, rather nice.
ooh the more reviews the faster you write eh? _swaps review board_! ^__^ naw i won't do that! Just update soon okei!?
So COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like this story!!
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well this was a nice chapter.. It was heartwarming her taking care of him... I still want to know what she did to get the scare that he keeps refering too... Iam sure i can guess what it is from.... Well anyways i like how your building the relationship and not just throwing them into steamy sex... Although i wouldn't mind reading a good lemon between them but now is good too build the relationship...
Please hurry and update i so enjoy reading this story...
Take Care
Mari
Interesting start.
heather- Fri 16 Mar 2007
i love this story please update soon ( will sesshoumaru ever find out that kagomes in love with him ?)
inukamisashi- Fri 16 Mar 2007
i like this story!! so cool and touching!!! can't wait! keep it up! ^^
Dun Dun Dun...I'm even wondering what had happened
Kai- Fri 16 Mar 2007
So...It's almost 2AM and I found your story for a late night read. It's great! Some of your verbs are off- passive voice. Yada yada. My english teacher is getting to me. ^^' But otherwise, it's goinggreatso far. Eveyone can relate to unrequited love. I can't wait for more!
gina- Thu 15 Mar 2007
amazing story so far!!! i want to read more!!!! =)
AAAAAAAAAAAH! T_T I thought there was more than that. Please update soon!
Aurora Potter- Thu 15 Mar 2007
ohhhhhhhh I cant wait for chapter 3!!!!!! ^__^
Trice- Thu 15 Mar 2007
I really am enjoying this story. It is very interesting how you are slowly revealing parts of each others lives in the past so we can better know the characters. Even though Sess is OOC I think it suits him for this story. I look forward to reading more of your story.
bluemoon_175- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Ahh i can't wait and see what happens next.
I like this chapter... It was heartwarming and fun... I like the story so far... Its different seeing Sesshomaru as a nicer type person then mean all the time...
Can't wait for your next chapter so please hurry and update...
Take care
Mari
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Thu 15 Mar 2007
Hmm. What was that mark? Dun Dun Dun Dunn!
LoL.
I couldn't help but think that they must eat dinner REALLY late at night if they go to bed right after dinner. Oh well. Whatever floats.
Great chapter! I absolutely love the story! I'm glad that you won't be zooming into the whole relationship thing to fast. I myself made that mistake in one of my stories, then again, I did that because I was getting kind bored of it and blah blah.
Any ways!
I love the idea! One-sided love is a bitch though, ne?
Keep on writing!
Luvs; Your Friendly Neighbourhood Spiderman ... er ... Girl;
-[Ashley x3]
ioke- Wed 14 Mar 2007
awesome story! i cant wait to read your next chapter!
WhisperingDreams- Tue 13 Mar 2007
Love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!!
Liz
swtdrm01- Tue 13 Mar 2007
I loved the new story. I feel so bad for Kagome. I know how it feels to actually love someone and only wishing it was you that he see you instead of others.
Tana-san- Tue 13 Mar 2007
This seems to me to be a good start. Please don't rush the storyline to quickly. Friends turning lovers is such a good foundation building for a solid relationship as they already know each others likes and dilikes, quirks and such. You've touched on the unrequited love scenario and that surely makes sense that Kagome would then judge all other guys by the one she truly loves. It makes for a lot of ways this fic can go,but don't put them in bed too quickly. If Sesshoumaru did indeed love Kaguya even though the end was bumpy, then it makes sense that he'd tread lightly before just going all out. Are you going to give us more explaination into his life with Kaguya and how she died? Are he and InuYasha are good terms and are they youkai or human? So, many questions and I've been needing some more to read as my other fics get back into update mode. It's hard reading sooo many fics at once so I tend not to overtax my brain anymore. But this is another type of storyline that I've read before and I rather like watching how each authoress takes her spin on it. You girls come up with the most entertaining things for the same general topic. So, I'm in...I hope I can be encouraging to you. TTFN Jen
Kimberley- Mon 12 Mar 2007
omg! that was such a great chapter! i really do wanna read more so i hope u update soon ^^!
p.s. i have a really strong feeling that im gonna love this fic =D!
helikesitheymikey!- Mon 12 Mar 2007
*starts screaming* SESSHOMARU IS A TOTAL AND COMPLETE IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*warning rant begins*
I mean he should have at least tried the dating thing with Kagome when they where younger....and if she's as close a friend as it seems wouldn't he have wanted her opinion of the woman he might marry....I mean he figured out himself that noone knows him like Kagome does.....
BUT THERE IS ALWAYS HOPE FOR OUR FLUFFY IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heather- Mon 12 Mar 2007
i love this story please update soon
Celes Prye- Mon 12 Mar 2007
I like the story and the way it is leading! ^_^ I really hope you add a new section soon so that I may enjoy it as much as I have done this one. Poor Kagome ='(
Well damn. She was let go quickly lol. I hope to read more soon
This is so good!
Great idea, spelling, grammar, the whole shebang!
Please update again as soon as you can.
Gosh, Sesshoumaru can be a blind baka sometimes, ne? So...Inuyasha-ish.
Ja Mata Ne!
-[Ashley x3]
bluemoon_175- Mon 12 Mar 2007
Sounds like a good story and i can't wait to read more so i hope you update asap please.
Ok this sound pretty interesting.. I like the first chapter so far....
I can't wait for the next chapter..
I think this is going to be an interesting story far what you are writting so far..
I enjoyed it .. Plz hurry and update..
Take Care
Mari
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