Reviews for Utopia by inumaru_rapture

Silver Silence89- Fri 11 Apr 2008
Great story... had me up till 5 in the morning. :-)

Violetcarson- Sat 01 Mar 2008
Whoa! That was such an amazing ending! I loved how it was still all mysterious, and unknown, yet it answered any questions we could have had. This has definitely been an amazing fic, and I am glad I had the chance to read it. Wonderful!!!

Zyren- Sat 23 Feb 2008
holy freakin shit!
that was amazing

TheMikoShivae- Sun 10 Feb 2008
aww. love the story! can't wait for more! e-mail me when you update please!

tilayha- Thu 11 Oct 2007
beautiful as ever! I hope they find some peace after all this. once the word of the blessed couple gets out sesshoumaru could possibly get his former glory back completely!!! wonderfully done. tilayha

Any9- Thu 11 Oct 2007
This final chapter was something.
I looooved it sooo much.
How much do you think it will take for you to finish this story, if I may ask.
If you don't know I'll not insist but I will like to know.

Moon Mage Goddess- Wed 10 Oct 2007
This story has me captivated, and I adore how you have allowed Kagome to stand strong. The bond they have is legendary, and you show it beautifully!
Brava!

~Sandreline

Lady Kirara- Sun 23 Sep 2007
Alright, I just have to ask...I'm on chapter 26. Are they EVER going to go back to the present? Or does the past become their present?

~Lady K

Kagome-Chan- Sun 23 Sep 2007
YES!!!! HE CAME BACK!! After Almost 5 Years! Tsk Tsk!!!! I LOVE How Shippo and Masumi (Did I Spell That RIte?) Have Fallen 4 Each Other. And I ADORE the "She Is Entierly Your Child" Scene!! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!

Ai Shi Te Ru,

Kagome-Chan ♪

WiccanMethuselah- Sat 22 Sep 2007
Lucky me!!! Just when I'm having a terrible week, some of my most fave authors update... THANK YOU!

This chapter, while short, as you noted, was definitely necessary in the overall scheme of things. I mean, Inu just couldn't leave his family all alone forever - that isn't the way "pack" behaves, even with loss. To have him come back and prostrate himself in front of his children was an inspired move!!

Again THANK YOU for the update - it definitely took my mind off other, more unpleasant things, that's for sure!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

tilayha- Sat 22 Sep 2007
so totally worth the wait. i have missed your chapters! i can not wait to learn what happened to Inuyasha while he was gone to make him act so humble. :)

tilayha

ash- Thu 20 Sep 2007
love this story are you going to update anymore? if not then this is a good ending send me an email some time palii26 @ yahoo . com

Tensaiga- Wed 19 Sep 2007
i spent like 3 days reading this story. it was sooo good i was like one more chapter one more chapter (before going to bed). xD anyways ya. update soon.

hey i was wondering do you want to post on my website? www.justexpressing.com

Liyah- Tue 18 Sep 2007
Aww...she has my nick name.

karee- Tue 18 Sep 2007
im so glad ur back i lov ur fanfic keep th good work and please dont take so long to updat.
your loyal fun, karee

Arsenic- Sat 04 Aug 2007
Absolutely wonderful story so far! Though I am wondering about the future Sesshoumaru...I mean, I know that now that she's in the past it has changed the future, but how much of it has it really changed? I'm glad to see that Sesshoumaru seems to be getting his hope and power back! Can't wait till the next installment, and I hope you get a chance to update again soon!

Kagome-Chan- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Woa, That Was Gr8!!!! I LOVED This Chapter!! I Cried AND Laughed REALLY Hard! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Ciao Darling!!

Kagome-Chan ♥

tilayha- Wed 25 Jul 2007
this was a sad chapter. i cried for kagome and sesshoumarus loss. u have pulled me into this story fully. please update soon.
tilayha

demon13o- Wed 25 Jul 2007
wonderful!

I hope to read the next chapter soon!

It also seems that you just couldn't keep her and Shippo out of the past so in the past they will remain lmao!

I knew something unexpected was gonna roll around and it did!

hurry and update real soon okay!

Ja Ne!

*Funny Bunny*- Tue 24 Jul 2007
OMG!! I absolutely LOVED that chapter. It made me cry though when she lost her pups :( I cannot wait for the next chapter! I hope it comes soon!!

tilayha- Mon 16 Jul 2007
ssoooo not fair!!! (throwing tomatos at you) pulling me in this way and then ending it in such a state!!!! update soon or ill go from tomatos to rocks!! lol
tilayha

Zyren- Sat 14 Jul 2007
I hate you, love the fic, but i hate you.
u are evil
MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!

Tiegrsi- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Awe, that's not a horrible cliffy! It's sweet and touching! I love the new chapter :)

Koishii_Beloved- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Aww that's so sweet 3 lol. That was really wonderful! ^___^
-KB

chicke- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Tears!! i can not believe you left it there! that was to evil~

WiccanMethuselah- Fri 13 Jul 2007
OMG... you just HAD to do that, didn't you? You KNOW what that does to people, you sadist!!! Sorry, didn't get much sleep last night... not thinking straight. I almost forgot that it doesn't help to call the author names when one is DESPERATELY hoping that said author will update and relieve the suspense SOON!

I love the way you've woven Sesshoumaru's telling of his trials into his growing feelings for Kagome. And, even though I'm NOT glad you left it there, I am glad that he finally admitted what he felt. Hopefully, your obligations will calm enough for you to give us the next (maybe?) fluffy chapter soon!

As always, thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. Although the hentai in me loves the lemons in the beginning, I also love the hesitant, fumbling sweetness we're seeing now. Good stuff!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Kagome-Chan- Fri 13 Jul 2007
AMG!!!! I JUST Finished Your Other Chapter And U Already Have Another Out!! O, Your Good! I LUVED IT!!!! But Your Rite, That Cliffie WAS Evil!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!!

Peace, Luv, and Muddy Walls,

Kagome-Chan ♥

Kagome-Chan- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Awwww!!!! I Wanna CRY!! lol That Was So Sweet! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Peace, Luv, and Anger,

Kagome-Chan ♥

Jarakuheart- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Sorry! I had to do that! But I do love your work! I always remember that Utopia = goodness for me! lol It was a sad chapter, but ever so lovely...every relationship must go through some hardship, and though it's poor Rin, it does help move thier relationship along...^_^ keep up the great work!

winged hitter- Wed 11 Jul 2007
I absolutly love this storry and can't wate to read more. I love how you managed to work both a moderm world and the fudle era together and it was done verry artfully done can't wate till you update next.
WH

Tiegrsi- Wed 04 Jul 2007
Well, here's a review from me :) I like this story, and always look forward to updates...although I'm not usually one to review every chapter of every story I read. If I haven't left a review previously, you now have this one from me! LOL. Kepp up the good work. :)

aura- Sat 30 Jun 2007
All-around sweet chapter.
The snow ball fight was really cute.

Wow! Those 3 chapters went up super-fast.
Now we're all spoiled and want even more. ^_~

-aura

Violetcarson- Fri 29 Jun 2007
Ah!!! Fluff!!!! I love fluff!!!!!!
But, but, but, but what about the future Sesshy? What's happening to him? Does this mean she isn't going back to the future, did she change it irrevocably? Will they never meet in the future? Did she completely change what happens? What the hell is going to happen?!?!?! God!!! Time travel gives me such a god damned HEADACHE!!!!!!!!!

Kagome-Chan- Fri 29 Jun 2007
Awwww!! This Was a Cute Chapter! I Luv the Snowball Idea!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Peace, Luv, and Snow,

Kagome-Chan

ashley_kun- Fri 29 Jun 2007
u got 2 write more on this one because i almost died laughing when sesshy put snow kagome's shrit!!! ^-^

with all deu respect
ashley_kun

demon13o- Fri 29 Jun 2007
._. a snowball the size of a soccer ball! Oh my!

But Sesshomaru laughing! Aww he's all happy!

Okay update soon!

Must know what will happen next!

Hurry!!

Ja Ne!

tilayha- Fri 29 Jun 2007
im loving this story. it just gets better and better with every chapter.
tilayha

Strawberry Cordial- Fri 29 Jun 2007
AWWW!!! I LOVEEEEEEE this fic!!! PLEASE, you have GOT to update, and soon! This is very well thought out and I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Please! Can you tell me when the next installment will be up? Here is my e-mail address: sailorsweetie0033@hotmail.com

aura- Fri 29 Jun 2007
This is a great story!
I feel so bad for Sess and Kag right now, and I have a feeling it's not going to resolve itself between them anytime soon.
Lokking forward to your next update.
-aura

Kagome-Chan- Fri 29 Jun 2007
Woa....Tragic!! I Can't Imagine What Else They Could Have Done 2 Him! Altho....Know U, U'll Probably Tell Us. Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Peace, Luv, and Miko's,

Kagome-Chan

demon13o- Thu 28 Jun 2007
aw poor Kagome!!

-pouts about her pain-

That was mean of Sesshomaru... all reasonable but did you have to make him that harsh?

Please update sooner then you have please!!

Ja Ne!

dreamer- Thu 28 Jun 2007
yay! an update! i really enjoy your story and i always get cheered up when i see another chapter. I can visualize everything going on and it's like a movie to me!
update again soon!

Jennifer E McCormick- Thu 28 Jun 2007
I like it. It is different so do not be discourage. One question, why is he so mad at her? Keep writing and I look forward to your next part. Any one who writes a story and puts it up for all is brave. :-)

chicke- Thu 28 Jun 2007
Oh come on!! i thought there was a new chapter :-(

Please update soon!

Kohana- Thu 28 Jun 2007
Well I like your story!!! I haven't been reading as much lately but I can't wait to read more!!

demon13o- Thu 28 Jun 2007
._.

I'm still a loyal reader!!

-looks at her mutely for a minute-

I'm a good demon I am still loyal in reading from an excellent authoress!!

Please update soon!

Ja Ne!

tilayha- Mon 25 Jun 2007
inuyasha all grown up!!! its amazing what 150 yeas can do even for him. awesome chapter. cant wait for the next
tilayha

demon13o- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Another great chapter! Keep up the awesome work and finish that next chapter and have it up soon okay!

Well um..

Ja Ne!

Kagome-Chan- Fri 22 Jun 2007
This Was a Good Chapter. I Like How Much InuYasha Has Learned!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Peace, Luv, and Faded Old Jeans,

Kagome-Chan

Insanewiz- Fri 22 Jun 2007
hurry up and update!! i love you story!!

tif- Fri 22 Jun 2007
ow... pls... update soon... thankssss

Kagome-Chan- Thu 21 Jun 2007
AMG I Spent Almost All Day Reading Your Fic. I Can't Believe I Nvr Cam Across It B4!!!! But I LUV IT!! But the Last Few Chapters Really Depressed Me! I REALLY Want Kagome and Shippo 2 Go Back 2 the Future and Work Everything Out w. Sesshomaru!!!! But Wut Was w. Him Blacking Out? U Nvr Talked About It Again!! Well Anyway Please Update Soon!

Peace, Luv, and Candy,

Kagome-Chan

demon13o- Thu 21 Jun 2007
Hey she's changing history!

._.

Okay now you have to update soon so!

-pokes the computer screen-

Hey!

Hey you!

Yeah you!

Who else could I be talking to?

Hurry up and update!

Yes that's an order and no I will not leave you alone!

Update now!

Must know what will happen next so update now!

-pokes the computer screen again-

Did you hear me?

Then get to typing now!

-grins evily-

Ja Ne!!

demon13o- Tue 19 Jun 2007
lol no one can ignore Kagome's calming aura! lol!

Nice chapter, I loved it! I hope you update soon.

Ja Ne!

tilayha- Mon 04 Jun 2007
eagerly awaiting more. does she save him?? or does he get out o his own?? plus how is kagome gonna react when she sees inuyasha and kikyo?? hee hee
update soon plz
tilayha

demon13o- Mon 04 Jun 2007
oh wow you are on da as well awesome i'll have to take a look at your art, well i have one thing to say about your fic here... it is bloody freaking good and you must update soon you evil cliff hanger person! i bet you get a kick out of hearing people whine over them cliffys.

i think you should illustrate the fight part, where kagome and sess are in the forest and she gets all made and nearly purifys him to near death, poor guy. okay well i do hope to read the next chapter soon and i wish you a happy week as well as a safe week!

Ja Ne!

sesshy's_boo- Fri 01 Jun 2007
pleace this is good write more chapters for ur readers.

vaneles- Fri 01 Jun 2007
wonderful story! I can't wait for the next update! ^_^ until then... ja ne!

lovedeath1- Fri 01 Jun 2007
well i thought i would read the whole story befor i reviewed...and so far its been a really good story!! plzz update soon!! like tonight =]

Milana-Chan- Fri 01 Jun 2007
I love this story I got hooked and would love it if you would update soon. This is by far the best See/Kags pairing I have ever seen.
Also I like the fact that you dont bash Kikyo or inuyasha and Have them together Happily.

Inu_Twin: Wiz- Thu 31 May 2007
smart... real smart... i love ur story ALOT *twitches*, *every1 looking at her*... what? i'm not crazy... if u need some1 to edit your stories, i'll do it... my e-mail is insanewiz@charter.net, and my AOL IM is insanewiz1027 (that is if u have aol im) i'd really like to get to know you and what's this talk about a japanese comic? ( srry can't spell the word begins with a d... ) inform me whenever u update on Utopia and A Love Found After Centuries part 3... i love that 1 too... u suck 4 letting Naku have a kid...if ur female and u ever find a real InuYasha...I CLAIM HIM, HE IS MINE !!!! *does an evil laugh*... ok maybe i'm a little crazy... well i'm done rambling

love ya! Ja ne!
Wiz

tif- Thu 31 May 2007
hi! um.. wat hapen 2 sessh??? poor kags...

Violetcarson- Wed 30 May 2007
OMG! That was so sad!!! That little part about how those evil bastards caught Fluffy!!! How EVIL!!!! I hope they get blasted to bits for hurting the fluffinator!!!!!! Cool! Now they're with Yashy and Kik, and all the cute little puppies! How sweet!!! Can't wait for more!!! Ja Ne! And Keep Writing!!!!

Shanalir- Wed 30 May 2007
Interesting. Can't wait for more!

zenfluence- Wed 30 May 2007
A quick history lesson. For my AP Euro skills, I have to say the Dutch were actually the only ones not shut out during Japan's feudal era. It was because of their vast shipping knowledge that the Japanese accepted them into their borders

Sorry, I needed to cover that...

Love the story!
~zen

Crimson_Angel808- Wed 30 May 2007
Thank you and love the story ^_^ please continue

kura- Wed 30 May 2007
i can't wait for the next one....

Violetcarson- Wed 30 May 2007
It would be so cool if you made it Doushinji!!! There is a small spot on this site for it, but there really aren't that many sadly. Its under the images section. There are a couple cool little ones, and a short one that is tiny but hilarious. It has to do with *wink wink* condoms. There is another called RAINDROPS, which I believe is also a one-shot. Anyway, I think I like this direction, but I want to know if Sesshomaru is going to meet her in the past, thereby changing the futue? Or is present day Sesshy going to come back through the well some how? I don't know, but I'm willing to read and find out!!!

Crimson_Angel808- Wed 30 May 2007
um i really like this story but what is doujinshi

ElegantPaws- Wed 30 May 2007
Fantastic shift into a deeper sub-plot. The current chapter was wonderful. Bring it on.

WiccanMethuselah- Wed 30 May 2007
Ok, that was a shocker ... I certainly didn't see this coming, even when she and Shippo tumbled down the well. WOW - this is really getting far more convoluted than previously expected, but I'm glad we're going to get some insight into why Sessh is the way he is in the future.

You are weaving this story quite masterfully - you've certainly caught my interest completely. I will be eagerly awaiting future developments!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Violetcarson- Wed 30 May 2007
It looks like the story is going in a completely new direction now. I haven't decided whether or not I like it yet. Anyway, I'm glad you updated. Keep writing, wherever this story takes you!

Sakura- Sun 13 May 2007
u beter write more baka or it will be me and you but i love it so dont take it personal =*)

sesshyluver17- Mon 30 Apr 2007
GAH! HOW COULD YOU END IT THAT WAY!! *dries hysterically* it was sooo suprising! but I adored it!! I really loved this story! the detail is esquisit. (is tha how you spell that?) and the plot is so well thought of. I really adore this story, and this great one demands that you update soon! MWAHAHAHA!!

OR my gldhjdewsklfdso thingy will come and bite you! Kukukuku

naru- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Update!!!

Metis- Sat 28 Apr 2007
My sympathy is with Sess. Sometimes her lack of control makes me want to send her to magical boot camp. She is such an eternal teenager! (ranting feels nice sometimes)

ElegantPaws- Sat 28 Apr 2007
This is an unexpected turn of events. Wow! This is interesting.

Koishii_Beloved- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Great chapter! I really hope you udate as soon as possible!

-River

lilmoe31- Sat 28 Apr 2007
I am most definitely loving this story, I hope your next chatper is up soon.

anonnie mouse- Sat 28 Apr 2007
awww geeze don't let it be the time when he gets his concubine/slut/w/e

Chicke- Sat 28 Apr 2007
that was a great Chapter!!!

Violetcarson- Sat 28 Apr 2007
OMG! That was definitely unexpected! Cant wait for the next update!

Aly- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Ak, noooo, you can't just leave me hanging here! *shakes fist int he air before calming down* Sigh...okay, I'm calm now. Man...that was good but now I'll just going to go insane waiting for the next chapter. Update soon please!

mlmonty- Thu 26 Apr 2007
you know i'd be pissed to with lies by obmission. Becareful not to over work yourself.

Metis- Thu 26 Apr 2007
Don't you just love how they communicate? heh.

VIoletcarson- Wed 25 Apr 2007
No more terrible cliffies?!?!?!?! Then what was that?!?!?!?!?!?! If that is not a cliffie from hell, then I'm a baboon who scratches her but with fifty spoons once every hour! Honestly! I seriously suggest putting up a new chapter soon. *I* would *never* do anything about the cliffies, but I'll bet my frozen sock collection that there are other readers of this fic who would stoop to Dun Dun Duuuun!!!! Unkind words! *gasp* how awful. I think I may need therapy to sort out my split personality disorder.
(Sorry if this review creeps you out, I had a bit too much chocolate for lunch)
Muahahahahahaha*cough* Sorry. Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WiccanMethuselah- Wed 25 Apr 2007
Oh, for pity's sake, what are you going to do to them NOW??? We won't like you much after this chapter ... what does that mean, exactly? I can understand, in a sick, twisted way, the predilection for cliffhanger endings, but this is seriously worrying me.

Ah well, as promised, a review after each chapter. Somehow, I COULD see Kags getting totally pissed off over the 'mincing' of words. Frankly, having dealt with more than my fair share of guys splitting hairs with terminology, I can see getting REALLY pissed off over that one.

It's still gonna bug the wits out of me wondering what you're going to do to them next. I mean, c'mon, he's wanted her for 500 years and now you're gonna keep throwing in the monkey wrenches?

Regardless, another beautifully written chapter. Well planned and, despite your obvious workload, ON TIME, as promised. I can hardly wait until the next one!
;)
~~Wiccan~~

kat- Wed 25 Apr 2007
not really a filler chapter... but a good chapter... update when you can

Koishii_Beloved- Wed 25 Apr 2007
Wow, I couldn't imagine having that much work to do and my Junior English project doesn't even add up to everything that you have to do. Lol good luck!

-River

Aly- Wed 25 Apr 2007
*sobs because the chapter ended* Haha, that was awsome!
I love it, go Kagome...although....Sesshomaru is kinda getting ganged upp on but oh well ^.^
I wanna know what happens next!
Update soon please.

Lina- Sat 21 Apr 2007
WHOLY SHIT! This is one of the best FF i have read yet...i know im not one to say about uploading fast because its been weeks since i've updated...but you've GOTTA update soon ot meh mind will explode!!

Violetcasron- Sat 21 Apr 2007
OMG!!! That was totally evil!!!!!!! To leave such an awful cliffie!!!!! If I was a different type of person I would say 'good luck with all your work,' but I'm not so instead I'll say 'PPPPPLLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEEE WRITE MORE!! Just blow off all of the work and junk and write!!!! It s SOOOO Not fair, taht you know exactly what will happen and we don't!! Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!

anonnie mouse- Sat 21 Apr 2007
when she finds out his description of lover she'll castrate him for sure!!!!*grins evilly*
oh and the death promise is canceled btw.......for now at least!*evil laughter*
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

v1cky84- Sat 21 Apr 2007
NOOOOO....I hate cliffies!!! You are being evil ;) j/k. I can't wait until Wed. Please update soon.

Mlmonty- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Don't worry sweetie I wont threaten you with death. At least not over a story. My favorite death threat however is 'Don't make me reach through this computer/phone and strangle you'.

You should however be doing what you're supposed to instead of making another evil cliffie. School is important after all. Though I can't truly sympathise with your work load since I never went to college. Got myself married at 19. Don't try that btw girls just because it worked for me doesn't mean it would for you. I can almost promise you it would end badly.

WiccanMethuselah- Sat 21 Apr 2007
OMG, is THIS what I get for promising to review after every chapter??? Geez ... ! *shakes head, suddenly speechless*

I did, however, get a laugh out of the fact that you were writing this chapter instead of doing what you were SUPPOSED to be doing. Now you sound like my daughter when it comes to her Political Science homework for college; a typical ADD kid, who'd much rather avoid the fact that the class still meets twice a week AND she has exams next week.

Well, I did promise, even if you DID leave us with another EVOL cliffhanger of DOOM AND ANGST! Yes, DOOM and ANGST. That's what I got out of this one, but still oh-so-good at filling in the niggling details that left us hanging LAST time. In addition, of course, to opening new cans of worms - do you go fishing often, by any chance? I mean, with all the cans of worms you keep opening in this story, I have to wonder!!! (J/K)

So, let's see ... hmmm. Sesshy is going to tear up to the country place post-haste. What kind of wrenches can you toss into it before, or when, he gets there?? I think I'll ponder those possibilities while I'm trying to wait patiently for you to put me out of my misery. BTW ... *I* would never dream of threatening an author with death. Maiming, maybe. Semi-dismemberment, perhaps. Never DEATH, though. That would, obviously, be rather counterproductive, since I want you to KEEP WRITING!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

kat- Sat 21 Apr 2007
no more til wednesday... i would pout but i have another paper and a book to read before then so i won't... update soon

Aly- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Wah...I need more, I'm addicted to this fic I tll you! Haha, but it was good...gah, I hope they make up soon!!!!

Aly- Fri 20 Apr 2007
*picks her jaw up off of the floor* That...that was terrible! *wails* No!! I mean, the chapter was good, don't get me wrong, but the events, I wanna go and hit people and shake them...just GAH! Haha, okay, I need to calm down now, but it WAS a good chacpter, and a very good cliffhanger...thank-you for the new chapter!

Violetcarson- Fri 20 Apr 2007
OMFG How could you be so cruel?!?!?!? That woman had better be some long lost sister of Sesshomaru's or something! IF she isn't, then Kagome can go right ahead and purify her ass until its nothing but a pile of perfumed powder. U-P-D-A-T-E!!!!!!
BTW, good luck with that extreme work load of yours.

Metis- Fri 20 Apr 2007
uh-oh. Well, I guess my finals aren't that bad compared to your schedule. There's always someone worse off I guess.

anonnie mouse- Fri 20 Apr 2007
evilevilevilEVIL CLIFFHANGER WRITER YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm not promising against killing you if you don't update soon.....though from me you will get a 10day grace period from when you said the next update will be{25th}before I break out my sk mob supply stuff.....;P

Koishii_Beloved- Fri 20 Apr 2007
I must admit, that was pretty evil of you. It was getting SO very good! Darnit! Lol. Oh well, I can always wait I suppose ^_^

-River

Any9- Fri 20 Apr 2007
You are going to kill me!! :(( (update so late). Anyway beside that I love this fanfic. Keep the good work!

Mlmonty- Fri 20 Apr 2007
Bad, Inumaru_rapture, cliffies are bad. Shame on you. Anyway good luck with your assignments.

kat- Fri 20 Apr 2007
see if I kill you for not updating then a) i'm hypocrite cause I haven't updated my own story in over a week (stupid papers) and b) you can't update, therefore it's much more expediant to tie you to your computere ;)

update soon

WiccanMethuselah- Fri 20 Apr 2007
AARRGGHHH!!!!! How COULD you??? Oh, never mind, I know the drill ... gotta leave 'em wanting more, right? Yeah, I know you're chuckling right now too ... you're mean. But good ... OH SO good!

Ok, I'm hooked. I PROMISE I'll review after every chapter if you just please, PLEASE, don't leave us like this for a whole week again! Please?? Pretty please? With sugar - and strawberries - and cream??? All right, I'm done.

EXCELLENT chapter, way to build the suspense and anticipation. Good job!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

kat- Thu 19 Apr 2007
if it makes you feel better you aren't alone in the plethora of assignments... stupid end of the school year

WiccanMethuselah- Thu 19 Apr 2007
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story yet! I'm a dork ... sorry!! Anyway ... wow ... just, wow. Great lemons, wonderful suspense, terrific writing ... what more can I say? Oh, yeah - don't kill yourself before you finish it!!!!!! That to-do list of yours looked like a pretty heavy load.

Thanks for a bit of enjoyable reading this evening, however short it was. It helps take my mind off those things that older, mom-type people tend to obsess about (kids in school, what's for dinner, cleaning messes, animal care, etc.)!
;D
~~Wiccan~~

ElegantPaws- Thu 19 Apr 2007
Then, we as readers are honoured. With your schedule, you still managed to give us a lovely chapter, thank you. I am tired, just looking at your schedule.

Koishii_Beloved- Thu 19 Apr 2007
Lol, it seems like you have a crap load of things to do. Great chapter by the way! Thanks for the recognition as well ^_^

-River

Aly- Thu 19 Apr 2007
yay, it was good! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter...poor you, your work load is HUGE!! Haha, thanks for the chapter.

Seigyoku- Thu 12 Apr 2007
I love it. At first when i was looking for something to read it just ddint hit me to read this. i passed the name up for the last couple of days and today i just decided to read it. so i've been sitting here for the last hour and a half really into it and i'm glad i did. i really injoyed it and can't wait until you update again.

ElegantPaws- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Oooooooooooh goodie More Chappies! Woohoo! Keep going will keep reading.

ElegantPaws- Wed 11 Apr 2007
FANTASTIC JOB! Pleased to know you are extending it.

sheiba90- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I love this fic! I pisses me off hw those kids are messing with Shippo.

Koishii_Beloved- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I really love this fanfic. You're doing such a great job on it! I hope to read more soon. ^_^

-River

Tiegrsi- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I'm not normally a big fan of A/U, but your story is wonderful so far! Keep up the good work, I'll keep checking back for updates. :) I hope Kagome has many pups! :D

SesshomaruCrazy- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Iam was thrilled to nominate this story... I'm sure others migth have too....I think you are doing a great job with this story...
I think you have done a great job writting Sesshomaru's charactor...
Can't wait for next chapter...
Take Care

kat- Wed 11 Apr 2007
let us know when then editing is done so i can go back and reread the changes... i liked the yuki's daughter very adorable... update soon

swtdrm01- Wed 11 Apr 2007
I loved the new chapter. Thank you for updating and thank you for making it longer. I love your story.

Aly- Thu 05 Apr 2007
Aw! So awsome! I've been glued to my computer screen! I love this, it's awsome! Can't wait to read more, look at this, you've just gained one more hopless fan =D.

Inusbabe- Mon 02 Apr 2007
" I guess I missed some pretty fantastic spelling errors."

I never said anything but I thought staid was wrong but when I looked it up in the dictionary it had either stayed or staid. Why do so many people want the spelling and grammar perfect? I can understand when a story is written like a 8 yr old wrote it but come on it is for enjoyment and you haven't paid to read it.

Koishii_Beloved- Sat 31 Mar 2007
I really like this fanfic and I hope to read more soon. Everything is everything

Metis- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Better a twist ending than a twisted one. Thanks for all the updates, and Kagome being sensible.

kitsunebot- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Awww. Even though this is not something I would usually go for, I really like it. The family motiff is strong and I'm glad you've carried it through. I'm excited to see the reactions of the people in their lives as they find out about this relationship. I hope for a return of the awful woman from Kagome's old section.
One thing that really really got to me was spelling mistakes. The largest one by far is "staid" which actually means "serrious, grave, etc." In the instances in which you are using it you want the pass tense of "stay" which is spelling "stayed". Little things like that which spellchecker doesn't catch can be a bit distracting. Having a good beta look over everything would help.
Aside from that, I can see you're really using this story to grow as a writter and I'm looking forward to more.

AnimeFanime18- Thu 29 Mar 2007
This is really good, and I'm getting really into it. Continue? Please, for you adoring fans? T-T

Danielle- Thu 29 Mar 2007
I can see why this is the fic that everyone likes the most, it really well thought out and the grammar is on spot every scene ties in well there is no disparity in the personalities that you've given each charater and the story is developing well (if a little fast, but that's cool) I'll be looking for the reat of these cahpters.

tif- Thu 29 Mar 2007
poor ships/............ gooo kagsss!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ElegantPaws- Thu 29 Mar 2007
What a very nice chapter. Thank you. Love is requited, wonderful.

swtdrm01- Thu 29 Mar 2007
That was sad and cute. Great job. Please update soon. I really want to know what will happen now.

sesshou's gurl- Thu 29 Mar 2007
Update this now@@!!!!! That was a good ending to the chpter.

kat- Thu 29 Mar 2007
aww major mush i love it!!! poor shippo though... update soon please

Rika- Thu 29 Mar 2007
AWWWW i love this story

Inusbabe- Wed 28 Mar 2007
Sooo he thought she would leave him again and she thought he would throw her away?

Kat- Tue 27 Mar 2007
okay you have made my bad day so much better... fluff the cure of all bad days!!! update soon please!!! pretty please with naked sessho on top?

swtdrm01- Tue 27 Mar 2007
This is getting really good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

SesshomaruCrazy- Tue 27 Mar 2007
OOOoohhhhhhhh nice chapter... I thought Kagome was gonna screw it up by assuming the wrong things...
Oh well lets see what she does now...
Can't wait for the next chapter too see what she does...
Damn to have a MAN wait that long for one person...LOL...
Oh well please hurry and update I like this story...
Take Care
Mari

sesshou's gurl- Fri 23 Mar 2007
Update now!!!!! And more than one chapter this time.!!!!

Metis- Fri 23 Mar 2007
Nice.

Kat- Thu 22 Mar 2007
aww poor sessho... sniff... update soon

SesshomaruCrazy- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Again another fine chapter.... It was very well written.. I hope that they mate and she give him an heir... So what happened to his daughter... Did he ever find her... Is she still alive... What is going to happen with shippo... He has a good company that he started...
Well anyways I can't wait for the next chapter and I want more lemons...,LOL... Hurry Plz...
I like your shout out about Office Sex... Everyone has some kind of fantasy (sp?)...LMOA.....
Take Care
Mari

ElegantPaws- Thu 22 Mar 2007
I think you have done a splendid job and moved the story arch on well and yes, though Sesshoumaru is moderately OOC, it still flows. Equally am well pleased that you allowed Kagome to be a full sexual being. Nicely done.

MissTeak- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Awwww. Sesshoumaru's such a sweetheart! And hey, no worries about the OOCness, first of all it was not that OOC, and let's face it, most of us like Sess' occasional OOCness. His usual rock-like demeanour is...ummm...LOL.

But yes, on top of all that talking and romance, which I thoroughly enjoyed, was the lemony goodness which I enjoyed more!! You're amazing, girl!! You should be proud of yourself and your amazing work!:):)

Love,
MissTeak

Amanda- Thu 22 Mar 2007
OH Yea! Love IT!

Metis- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Some would say that was too quick, but I think 504 years is more than enough waiting time. May they have LONG life and lots of full Inu pups. Please?

Metis- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Yay! More chapters! And I'm glad to see how well she is doing. It's nice to have no constant attacks or rivals sometimes.

MissTeak- Thu 22 Mar 2007
And you almost made me fall off my chair with this lemon!! Wheee!! LOL and your cat too; please give the poor kitty a pat on the head for me!:)

Back to the story. This lemon was just totally hot. I think office sex is like, the sexiest of all? LOL. And the way you wrote it with emotions made it a very enjoyable read too.

Please keep up the good work - I will wait patiently in the meantime! (and stay on that chair, on course!:P)

Marcia- Thu 22 Mar 2007
doing great hun keep it up

tif- Thu 22 Mar 2007
ow how sweet go kags go sessh hopefully her officemates will not gossip about kags anymore those meani!!!!!!!!!

Koishii- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Now I have another word for you... Yay! :D great chapter, especially great lemon. Can't wait to see what happens next :D

swtdrm01- Thu 22 Mar 2007
OMG! That was wonderful. It's a shame it stopped there. I can't wait for the next chapter. Onegai, update A.S.A.P.

SesshomaruCrazy- Thu 22 Mar 2007
WOW!!!!!!! Sex in the office... Nice...
I enjoyed reading it... It was a good chapter... Nice lemon... Hope there are more.. LOL... iam a hentai....
Can't wait to see whats in the next chapters and find out what happened to InYasha and the gang... Hope they can get over the missing one another and have a happy life...
Well anyways nice chapter and hope the next one comes out soon...
And thanks for the 2 chapter in one day.. It was great reading them..
Take Care
Mari

Kat- Wed 21 Mar 2007
so wait did they mate or not... or are they currently just really really good friends... update soon please

Vulcana- Wed 21 Mar 2007
So she goes home with him. How is Shippo going to take that?
Assuming he hasn't heard what just happened.

Good Job

swtdrm01- Wed 21 Mar 2007
That was wonderful and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Koishii- Wed 21 Mar 2007
I have one word for you. EVIL! meany... that's an evil place to stop... but, I loved the chapter anyway :D

ElegantPaws- Wed 21 Mar 2007
What a great update! I love it, how terribly romantic! It warms the heart and the empathy and love shown, however reserved is wonderful. Great update! Oh, I said that already...looking forward to more.

MissTeak- Wed 21 Mar 2007
OMG. OMG. Now I want to know everything too!! LOL. That was an evil cliffie!!

I'm bouncing in my seat desperately awaiting your next update. Please don't make me wait for too long! -pleading eyes-

Alright, keep up the amazing work; I'll go back to writing "Love after Loss" now. See you!!!^^

Unseen Watcher- Tue 20 Mar 2007
Welcome back. I was looking forward to this next chapter. A very nice meeting. I hope their frankness with each other will only increase. Perhaps an impulsive comforting hug? *smirk*

Koishii- Mon 19 Mar 2007
I am really enjoying this story so far. It is hard to find a good fan-fic in the world amongst the copy-cat plots and writers who should find better things to do with their time (as I'm sure you've noticed), but you have made a really worth-while story. The plot so far is grand, and I really like getting to read something that I haven't seemingly read before.

The story is great, I love it, and I hope that you continue the great work!

Sola- Mon 19 Mar 2007
I usually don't like modern day fics...but you have a bit of a mystery here that I want solved, lol. And modern day Sesshoumaru seems believable. Please continue!

swtdrm01- Mon 19 Mar 2007
I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens next.

ElegantPaws- Mon 19 Mar 2007
A most excellent update....poor Fluffy...hmmmm......soooooooooooo like when is the next update? Greedy readers want to know.

kimiko- Fri 16 Mar 2007
I love your story!!
YAY
but it would be nice if you ....you know....updated!!!

Yeeeeeaaahhhhh =]
can't wait for the next chapter

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sesshyluver17- Thu 15 Mar 2007
NO! NOOOOOOOO! HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE! lol I love this story! so unique and detailed! and i can feel Kags emotions.... grr those ppls pissed me off... >:( anywho... I really like this story, and I hope you updat soon...

but first your paper!

Ren- Thu 15 Mar 2007
AH!!! This is so cool. I really like the story so far. Shippou is in modern Japan and everything seems to be goin well. Please update soon!

anonnie mouse- Wed 14 Mar 2007
I SO LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
oh...and don't worry about if people *cough*previous reviewer*cough* don't understand it.....it really means that they just haven't read enough fanfiction.....

helikesitheymikey!- Wed 14 Mar 2007
AWWWW! SO SWEET!!!!!!

Let me guess that the coworkers
-bakas that they are- will not keep their opinions to themselves and have a mad tai-youkai boss wring their pathertic necks!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ps I LOVE LOVE LOOOOVVVEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kimiko- Wed 14 Mar 2007
omg your story is so awsome and I hope that you can update soon
please and thank you!

ashley_kun- Wed 14 Mar 2007
this storey is awsome hope you write more

Unseen Watcher- Wed 14 Mar 2007
YAY! I like this. Modern without too many shocks, and she gets to have Shippo with her! I also love the fact that she is respected for her protectiveness by those who are worthy of being respected in turn. Fierce protection of family and friends has always been a trait I admire.

ElegantPaws- Wed 14 Mar 2007
So far so very good. I always like when someone takes the time to set up a fiction properly and brings some level of inventiveness. No one needs to read the same settings over and over again. it is nice to have a twist with the familiar. This is a very good start....it will be interesting to see how you unravel the story of his presence. I have faith you will do a fine job! Keep writing! We will read.

Lexis- Tue 13 Mar 2007
it makes no sense!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Mon 12 Mar 2007
*starts chanting* LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*changes chanting to* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOON SOON SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

SesshomaruCrazy- Mon 12 Mar 2007
I like so far.. It sounds interesting.. It was sad a little.. To have to say goodbye to friends always is.. But i wonder what she whispered to Sesshomaru that made her blush..!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter so hurry and update plz..
I hope that they meet in the furture and get together..
Take Care
Mari

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