More chapters would be so nice, you know? Well update whenever you can! I love your story, it's great!
Adea NEri- Thu 26 Jun 2008
wow great last chapter kagura is not wnning this one for sure. his favorite great to hear that. can u send me an email when ever you update thanks.
aleerasuru- Sun 22 Jun 2008
i absolutly love this story please continue
wow I really liked this story please update soon!!!
Megan Consoer- Mon 09 Jun 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Adea Neri- Sat 07 Jun 2008
Wow great. love this fic. you potrail of kagome and sesshy are not tottally OOC thats why i love this fic. and your OC voya is also great
Megan Consoer- Fri 28 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sicilia- Mon 10 Mar 2008
ok you need to update sooner now, this story is getting to interesting to not update :)
Sicilia- Mon 10 Mar 2008
ok you need to update sooner now, this story is getting to interesting to not update :)
elizabeth hogan- Sat 16 Feb 2008
please update soon
Dark_Twinkle- Sat 05 Jan 2008
I'm so glad you updated, i loved the chapter and i really hope Sessho and Kags get together.
Though perhaps you could use Toya as a tool for jealousy. (Is Toya the name you got from Ayashi no Ceres btw? coz i luv that anime)
Sicilia- Thu 03 Jan 2008
you need to update soon this chapter is great
Lady Kubira- Mon 31 Dec 2007
I like your idea. Its really good and i hope it gets better. I cant wait to read what other things will happen.
I have no criticism to give you. I thought it was great and can't wait for more.
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer- Thu 06 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some chapters?
toni- Sat 01 Sep 2007
beautiful!!!!!!
this story is awesome and what about
Sesshomaru's courtesan
Sicilia- Sun 15 Apr 2007
I think you should leave it the same, but defenitly update soon
Sicilia- Sun 15 Apr 2007
I think you should leave it the same, but defenitly update soon
dyllan- Sun 25 Mar 2007
great idea for a story.
keep writing :]
This is a great fic!!! You have a very unique and original story line. It's not the same old story: 'Inuaysha breaks Kagome's heart. Kagome runs off in tears. Sesshoumaru finds Kagome and decides to take her back to his castle.' Your story is still set in Feudal Japan, (which I love) and does not portray Kagome as a simpering fool, yet at the same time, you don't portray her as some overconfident, egotistical teenager who ends up regretting her rash acusations. Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru is fabulous as well, he remains aloof and indifferent, but not heartless. Another thing that you did different from many other authors is that you portray Sessoumaru's mother, not as a warm and loving mother, but as a heartless woman who has been scorned. You know what they say, 'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.'
Also, if you still need a beta, I'd be more than happy to help, just let me know.
Ayesha- Tue 20 Mar 2007
i LOVE this fic! i love the Countess Bathory twist in it as well! this is really original and worth continuing! hope u update soon!
sicilia- Tue 20 Mar 2007
Great fanfict I love it
Can't wait for the next chapter
Aurora Potter- Mon 12 Mar 2007
That is a really good story......keep up the good work
kagome17- Mon 12 Mar 2007
please update ASAP!!! i LOVE the story its getting so interesting ^_^
kagome17- Mon 12 Mar 2007
please update ASAP!!! i LOVE the story its getting so interesting ^_^
j- Mon 12 Mar 2007
it's very good keep writing but please make chapters longer.
keep up the good work
DarkAngel495- Mon 12 Mar 2007
UPDATE pLeAsE
Kags21- Mon 12 Mar 2007
that was so good, save her, this is the first story where his mom harms her, very good
Katie- Sun 11 Mar 2007
Omg!! Noooooooooooo I cant believe you left off there how could you? Update soon or I'll cry
Define-Naughty- Sun 11 Mar 2007
Aww!! I hate cliffys...Plz update soon even if it is short I want to read what happens next!!!
youkaiqueen_sesshoumaru- Sun 11 Mar 2007
I rally like this fic. It has a good start and an easy enough plot line. I would however recommend a BETA to check for overall content. You know spelling and grammatical errors,scene transitions, etc. Keep going your doing great!!!
I love this idea and I think it's well worth continuing it. The Countess of Bathory a twisted retelling - it should be fun to see what happens and if Sesshoumaru accepts Kagome's request.
Of course he will but I can't wait to see what happens next nonetheless! ^-^
MissTeak- Sun 11 Mar 2007
Ah! How interesting. I like your idea, and am really looking forward to seeing where you take the plot.
Please update:)
lady fairy goth- Sun 11 Mar 2007
kool this is new i havnt heard of this idea before how long is this story going to be any way i hope its long and if she is of some noble blood she would be easy to marry off to lower class people or she could be transfered to a different castle or a lower nobles home to become a servent so i dont see why she has to become a concubine really i find it slightly degrading and plus why ask sesshoumaru. inuyasha is her cousin she could of asked him to send her away or somthing. sorry i like your story and im not flaming you but you could of thought of a better way to bring them together or something like sess seeing his mother in the act of trying to kill kag or somthing o well it s your story and i like it please update soon
I must say that I really like the whole idea of you doing a story on the Countess of Bathory. I think that you have a good start even though there are few spelling errors. Other that this is an awesome start to this story. I read about the Blood Countess and think that you are portraying her accurately. Please continue this I want to see what happens to Kagome and Lady Yuina.
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