you must continue this story!!!! I am really into it and can't wait to read more. update soon

wow...you wrote a fic on here I never thought I'd see they day...just kidding good job please continue

Oh CoNtIneU! I LikE This! If NoT

cONtineu....WeLl

^^LovE iT!!!!

Yeah...you're going to continue this. That was one hell of a beginning. The funny thing is that I've seen this plot before; believe me, it's nothing new. However, the way you started your story is the most tactful and even the most believable.

Take caution to stick to the original personalities and work with the complications (not just hers - lol) that come with a demon/human mating (please don't do that whole "I bit your neck so we're mated" crap). And don't forget more angst...but add in a bit of happiness - or at least hopefulness.

BTW, you're friend that challenged you to write this...yeah, she's winning so far. This story is so far from smut that it's almost funny.

Thought you should know.

I'll be waiting for your continuation.

please continue!!!!
i'm waiting for your next update.

Wow. I really hope that this isn't a one-shot, because I want to see more. MOREEEEEEEEE! Please update. :)

yup needs more.

great story continue

hey this is very good....plz update as soon as possable!!!!

O M F G!!!!! Please please please continue this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This can't be the end! *whines* I love it too much already!

Continue????Damn well better!!! And like the previous review, it would be nice not to have a death scene. I mean you rated it NC-17 and there's nothing hardly PG in this chapter. So, do please continue.

yea, continue it!!!!!

Loved it! I hope you update soon and frequently!

Ooh this is really good I cant wait to see whats next update soon

you better continue

Plz don't quit writing this it sounds very good so far and it would be a shame to leave it hanging like that

oh YES please! Do PLEASE continue this story!

SURE AS HECK BETTER BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean this is a great beginning to a great story......though please don't kill Kag, the pup, or Sessy off....permanently at least.....
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!