abosluty amazing! I totally loved that! it was so sad and passionate, and oh so heart melting. You got every detail perfect, and just... wow!

Awww...I think this story was sweet. The ending says it all. I do not think it needs a sequel but if you decide to do one, I will definitely read it.

Great job :)

AWWWW!!!!!!
Ya know the perfect sequel is if they have maybe four kids and another on the way and they plan on doing a homebirth with the kids watching and helping and before the due date the youngest wants to know where babies come from and gets maybe 5 or more different versions.....

anyhoo I LOVE THIS STORY AND YOU SHOULD DEFINATELY DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was sooooo beautiful i smiled i cried and i hugged my boyfriend. I loved it