I have to say this is a good fanfiction, but i have to remark on the length of the chapters. they are really short and it would be a hell of a lot funnier if they were lengthened.
Cio,
Iro - Chan
have kagome make him learn the dreaded makaraina. i think i spelled it right. you know that line dance that had everyone going crazy for about 2 minutes. lol OOHHH and he has to give her foot massages too. or how about making him let rin put flower wreaths on him.
tilayha
Slm_candle- Thu 31 May 2007
| Hey I love it but please don't make Kagome mean. PLEASE. thx
Magykrider- Thu 31 May 2007
| that wa soooooooooooo frickn' awesome!!! update soon!!!
UniconEva- Wed 30 May 2007
| Oh this is to funny,I can't wait to see what they do to Sesshoumaru next.Plz update very soon
| LOL Poor fluffy-kun lol not. Love the story and can't wait for more chapters.
Sesshoumara21- Wed 30 May 2007
| This is the funniest story that I have read in a long time. I probably would not go for the apron thingy unless he is naked underneath. Have him rub Kagomes feet and give her a massage.
Sicilia- Thu 08 Mar 2007
| hahahahahHAHAHAHAHa I know I know make him cook and serve breakfast :P hahaha
Sicilia- Thu 08 Mar 2007
| hahahahahHAHAHAHAHa I know I know make him cook and serve breakfast :P hahaha
Riko: I'm crazy so I have made up my mind on helping you weather you like it or not! ^-^
Iris: -.-o She's my friend and she's on my computer. You have no clue how many other people she has reviewed useing my name and I have to go back and tell them it's not me but my crazy friend who can't shut up,so I'm just going to let her run wild and hope she falls asleep soon. I'm so sorry she found you. Please don't yell at me. T.T
Riko: That aside. I'll be up ALL night working on idea's for this fic. I love it so far and I can't wait to help. ^-^ I don't care if you hate my idea's but if you don't mind I will probly start a story like this one if my idea's are usless to you. Well I'm gonna go think!
Riko,the insane.
Sicilia- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| Oh yeah really fun
Sicilia- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| Oh yeah really fun
Smexii- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| Oh my god, I love it, first one I read today I actually liked. If you could, could you send me a email when it is updated.
Slm_candle- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| WOW! it's finally happened. fluffy kins is under kags spell
Metis- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| Just remember Kagome. What you do comes back to you.
Aldrea- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| fun indeed
Tricia- Mon 05 Mar 2007
| Yay a longer chappy so far very entertaining. Keep up the good work. Do we get to learn soon who the two demonesses are to sesshy?
I like so far. Will you tell what the bet was that he lost?
POST SOON
hugs and puppies
tricia- Sun 04 Mar 2007
| Good premis chapters need to be longer it is hard to get into a story whenre chapters come up as one to two paragraphs in length.
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