That was sooo good i loved it you have to write more

Well I for one would love to see more to this fic. Maybe what happens when InuYasha finds out and what not but I do think it could use more. I thought it was great even if you don't add more to it.

About the rant that you had to reply to:

I completely agree with you, Tiegrsi, about the 4th one being the one everyone would see and say, hey, its over. I'm actually kind of surprised you were able to read that other persons rant considering all the typos, but thats just me commenting on someones bad double-checking skills.
A Fantasy Made Real probably would make a good story if you extended it... And changed a whole bunch of stuff so that it could continue. But we wouldnt want that. I personally think it's perfect as is.
Lata!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was an awesome story and I am sorry you are not continuing it. If you ever decide to add more to this story know that I will be waiting with baited breath!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I am sorry, i was having a bad day as well. I'm in my last trimester in this pregnancy, its my fifth one, and i should be used to mood swings by now, but sadly im not...
I do sincerly apologise! I guess my hormons had gone up to sky scraper level, and well, i was hoping to get more of your lemons in that one-shot...a lot of stuff had happened to me that day, and i guess i am also to blame (ok, i get most of it...99% of it). I guess i didn't read the part where it was your first time posting here, or the part where it posted all those extra pages.I truly am sorry! I really didn't mean to take my anger and frustrations out on you, i usualy take'em out on my tredmeal...and my husband...
I know you may not accept my appologise, but im appologising anyways. I usualy never come on here when im mad for this exact reason, i dont read everything in the chapter, i only skim, and i usualy think the wrong things, and dont think my words through. I shouldn't have gotten on here that day, and i am DEEPLY regretful of what i said, because it was all frustration and anger at others, and not at you.

ok, i want to point out, this WOULD make a great full length more than three chapter story, and that the last 54-5 chapters ARE POINTLESS! i mena REALLY! we get the point on the fourht chapter, which isn't really a chapter at all! you get our hopes up when you add a 'chapter' only for us to see it say "Sorry blah blah blah...' those last four are really a waste of time for us to read, and if i wasn't one of your readers, i would go as far to say that im surprised that anyone considers to even review& read your stories when you did something like that! it was uterly foolish and a show of stupidity. Now, i also know that you mostlikly got a lot of reviews requesting you continue this one-shot into a story, and thats mostlikly why you even put those four chapters in there, but that doesn't mean you could have made the 6th 'chpater' one saying that no matter if everyone on this site beggs you to continue that you wont, and that nothing will change your mind....or something along those lines.
now i am done ranting, and i wish you the best of luck on what ever story you are focusing on at the moment!
TTYL;
joanne

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

its hot keep it up

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This would have made a really good story. I wish you had continued because i love it. I also love you other story Family Secrets. I cant wait until you update. will you please send me an email when you up date Family Secrets or you create more stories.

VERY SEXY! EXCELLENT!

Nice lemony goodness. I would like to read more...would like to know what happens after their tryst.

Good job :)

OMFG! that was incredible! the best damned fiction ive read in such a long long time...and trust me im a sessxkag nut! I think I may have read like all the fics i could find about them! And im being serious about that. Wow u really are an incredible writter that fic had me drooling and anticipating every word to come. So very well done. props to you. So graphic and detailed and it was the perfect combo between pain and pleasure, not too much one way or the other and i also liked the fact that u didnt have them seperate right away...its very intamate when two ppl stay together afterwards...most men dont get that though so it doesnt happen often....lol....But seriously...very good. very very good.

Growling... what a good idea! That hasn't been mentioned much in other fics. I'm also glad that they didn't immediately separate. I prefer the idea of continued closeness.

ouch hotness!! i wished there were more chapters, but hmm those were delicious!!!!!

Very nice, hot and heavy story, thank you! It makes the romantic in me scream for joy... No thanks for that, now it will be even harder to find a guy :P I do hope that this is not where the story ends because I would love to read about the reactions of the group, what happens to Naraku, how Kagome handles being the new Lady of the Western Lands, etc. Thank you very much for writing this. Xxxx Aria-Chan

I'm sorry for my first review, you just added the last two . I'm happy now, that was good, I loved it. keep up the good work