hey I love this chapter and i love the story. i hope to see more soon.

I know what you mean about missing spell-check (as I can't spell myself).

The story though, overall its pretty good.
Some might say that Kagome's thoughts are unrealistic, but when I was her age and younger I felt the same way quite often. Abuse (whether mental or physical) tends to do that, especially if the person tends to be emotional to begin with. (Okay I'm off my soap-box now.) You portay her very well. InuYasha screwed up royally.

-aura

I love this story. Update

sweetheart i'm not flaming you but you really need a beta to help with your spelling. other than that your story is very good.

nice, very nice I hope you update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I like this story so far so keep up the good work. By the way this has nothing to do with the story but when you read the last 2 lines the deviders below them look as if their moving. Might just be me I've yet to sleep and its 9:00 in the morning I've been up for almost 24 hours so sorry. OK going to shut up now.

BYE BYE

I think that this is going to be a really good story. Please keep it up and update soon.

very good please write more i am very interstead in what happeneds next.
thank you