I'm sure "Short. Adorable. A Must Read" would not rank high in an author's "Perfect Review" List so I will try to come up with something more meaningful, somehow.

[ I could rack my brains for an interesting review with well-rounded critiques and useful suggestions, but frankly, your short story put me in "pure praise" mood, so I will simply approve of your writing style and admire the ingenuity of the characters' humorous interaction without bothering with my usual nitpicking.] :)

1 Suggestion: Post more stories.

this was a great story, truthfully I would like to read more on what happens. I know it is complete but I hope you add more to it.

I really enjoyed how it was almost entirely dialog, it was very provocative. Almost too provocative because now I want something more. What you wrote is wonderful but it lacks full closure. You've opened up possibilities, possibilities that readers will want you to explore.

Anyway, wonderful job.

That was a tease, now I want a full story for this. Please, pretty please, with a naked Sesshy on top.

I like this one already---very well written, witty, humorous, and your Sesshy and Kagome are right on character-wise. Great Job!

Oh this was so fantastic. I wasn't sure about the one line paragraphs, but you changed my mind.

They were to the point and had enough detail to tell me what was going on.

Good job!