Um... im sorry but are you EVER planning on updating? - and im sure you know that the last 2 chapters are the same. but still,,, this story is really good. :P
Bizarre Lemon (nope, my name has nothing to do wit- Mon 12 May 2008
Hi!
I just wanted to tell you that I love your story! It's very well written and the portrayal of the characters is one of the best I've read.
I hope you'll update this fic, I'd really like to know how this will end :)
yay for updates! it seems the next chapter with sesshoumaru wil be entertaining
hey, love your story! (:
its really interesting and all, so keep up the good job :D
Shanalir- Mon 24 Dec 2007
Really great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!! Chapter 14 was posted twice, though, so you might want to double check that.
daniela gonzalez- Sun 23 Dec 2007
hey in the last part of the end of the last chapter it was repeated twice from the former chap but dont care just hope to find out what happens nexts
Violetcarson- Sun 23 Dec 2007
So, yet again, the great Kagome falls prey to a kidnapping, and, yet again, the great Sesshoumaru attempts to find a way to piss his brother off royally. What else is new?
So, what I wanna know is, when is Sesshoumaru gonna realize that Kagome is not, in fact, where she is supposed to be? Le Gasp!! Kagome did something she probably shouldn't have!!! Oh, the horror!!!!!!
I know, Sarcasm is bad. But its just sooo much fun, isn't it?
Great chapter, by the way!!!
Kiko.- Sat 10 Nov 2007
I love you.
A lot. xD
Anyways, you rock. A ton. Your writing is simply marvelous, and I love you character perspectives. Captive Audience did just this. It captivated me, and I had this really odd feeling. It was like that I was trapped in there with them. When Kagome was talking about not being able to distinguish the time changing, neither could I. It was simply wonderous, and I love you. A LOT!. 3
~Kiko.
Becka- Sat 10 Nov 2007
I need to say thank you for writing this. It's keep so close to canon, isn't just blindly leaping into OMG SEX/ILU stuff and the characterization is fantastic. I literally let out a little cheer in chapter 11 when Sesshomaru helped Kagome, got close to her thigh and did not automatically start humping her.
After reading too many horrible AU/Band/OOC fictions, I adore this one. I hope you can update soon, because it's a very good read!
Becka- Sat 10 Nov 2007
I need to say thank you for writing this. It's keep so close to canon, isn't just blindly leaping into OMG SEX/ILU stuff and the characterization is fantastic. I literally let out a little cheer in chapter 11 when Sesshomaru helped Kagome, got close to her thigh and did not automatically start humping her.
After reading too many horrible AU/Band/OOC fictions, I adore this one. I hope you can update soon, because it's a very good read!
Jessica- Wed 24 Oct 2007
I love this story! Its awesome, i hope you update soon! Email me when you do!
Much love,'
Jessica
Thea- Wed 24 Oct 2007
oh please, please, please update! i greatly enjoy your story!
it would be so sad if you were to leave it hanging, especially here!
I'll keep my eye's open for your update ;)
Thea- Wed 24 Oct 2007
oh please, please, please update! i greatly enjoy your story!
it would be so sad if you were to leave it hanging, especially here!
I'll keep my eye's open for your update ;)
Mystic Hanyou- Wed 17 Oct 2007
I love this. I really good. And different. I like your charactorization of Sess and Kag. Even Kouga was good. Interesting explaination of why Kouga hasn't taken Kagome away. Can't wait for more.
i wasn't going to read your fic, but i'm glad i changed my mind. it is quite enjoyable. keep it up!
Violetcarson- Fri 31 Aug 2007
Oh crap. Thats not good. What happened to Sesshoumaru?!?! I hope you update soon!!!!
Victoria- Fri 31 Aug 2007
That was amazing!!!! I hope to read more soon!!!!!
Roxanne- Fri 31 Aug 2007
AWW PWEASE UPDATE!!!!!! I was soo disappointed that theyre were no more chapters left !! UPDATE THIS INSTANT! hehe love the story=D
Victoria- Wed 22 Aug 2007
I love your story!!! I hope to read more soon!!!!
Mika- Thu 02 Aug 2007
wow, thats a great FF...just read it, I really like it!! I would be scared to death to, if I wake up, with Sessh infront of me, and his poisened Claws...O.o So sweet, how he lets her sleep on his mokomoko-sama^^Could you message me, when you update again?^^
Shanalir- Thu 02 Aug 2007
wow, that's a neat development. Poison contrlo used to eradicate gangrene. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Violetcarson- Thu 02 Aug 2007
This is such a cool fic! I love it!
karla- Mon 30 Jul 2007
awesome! please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next with our lovely couple!
anon- Mon 23 Jul 2007
i really like it. kagome is asking really good questions that we would all like to know the answers to. good job i cant wait to read more.
Sola- Wed 18 Jul 2007
Very interesting story. I am adding it to my favorites, and I hope you update soon! Thanks!
Shanalir- Wed 18 Jul 2007
Love the new chapter! The added detail is great! Can't wait to read more.
rowdysgirl- Wed 11 Jul 2007
fucking brilliant!!!!!
good title, it's kept me captive. i can't stop reading and i'm damned near as tired as kagome!
Shanalir- Sun 08 Jul 2007
The newest chapter is really great! There's a lot of thought that Kagome is giving to a number of important issues that she never had time to consider before. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
autumngold- Sun 08 Jul 2007
Thank you for the new update!! I'm so glad that Kagome is trying to free herself!! Obviously Inuyasha is never going to find her!! I hope, however, that Sesshoumaru doesn't leave Kagome alone to heal!! Hopefully before she digs out he will be able to heal himself, then her powers shouldn't effect him so much?!! (Can you tell I just want Kagome and Sesshoumaru to stay together?!!) This story is marvelous!! Post more soon please!!
Shanalir- Sat 30 Jun 2007
Love the new chapter, can't wait for more!
autumngold- Sat 30 Jun 2007
Even though Sesshomaru was wrong about the future's children being forced to solve it's problems and keep it safe, in a way he was right!! Don't we seriously hope that our offspring will somehow learn enough to correct all of our and the future generations mistakes?!! Excellent update!! I just wish somehow that Kagome and Sesshomaru won't separate when they get out of the cave but will band together to defeat Naroku!! (Or however you spell his name) Thank you so much for the updates!! You are really spoiling us with two updates in two days!! I can't wait to read more of this incredible story!!
Isis- Fri 29 Jun 2007
Oh I just love this story. You have a wonderful sense of humor that shines through at so many points in this story...Doggy bundle? What a great visual of a dog Sess circling then flopping down!!! That was priceless. And "don't give into the dark side'? Ha...I really love this story, it is amazing how interesting you can make a story that takes place almost entirely in a cave!!! Great work!!! Now hurry and update!!! lol...!
autumngold- Thu 28 Jun 2007
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the new chapter!! I am really enjoying this story and I can't wait to find out what you have planned next!! Will Sesshomaru and Kagome be able to get her unstuck? Is Sesshomaru well enough to try? Please come back soon!!
autumngold- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Please update this story soon!! I just found it and love it!! It's so excellent how you show Kagome and Sesshomaru's respect and interest in each other changing into an almost friendship!! I can't wait for more!!
Jessica- Sun 10 Jun 2007
By FAR, this was the BEST opening chapter I have ever read. I have beta'd a few fics, and am thoroughly enjoying this one in it's first chapter. KUDOS!
Isis- Thu 31 May 2007
So glad you are posting this story here! I love it...I look forward to every new chapter. And thank you for taking the time to nurture the characters and form their relationship. It is so nice to see an author who enjoys the build up to a relationship and appreciates the fact that you need to know the person and understand them before love can ever bloom! Great work..really!
Unseen Watcher- Sat 28 Apr 2007
I remember this one. Glad you're back....I hope
karla- Tue 20 Feb 2007
hmm do i smell romance in the air? i hope so lol! please update soon, i really like this story.. its sweet and a little bit on cute too! keep it up!
Faye- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Wow!! I think that's the most Sess has talked in...well...EVER!!! Thanks for updating! Finally things are starting to go their way!!
Isis- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Wow...I really, really like this. The character development is fantastic, and the idea of them being forced together although not quite new, is still a wonderful plot device and you use it so well!! I cannot wait for the next chapter of this, I am so glad I found your story!!!
hazel- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Sesshoumaru caring for KAGOME?!?!?!?!!? HELL FREEZE THE HELL OVER!!
Unseen Watcher- Sat 17 Feb 2007
And so the learning curve plummets a bit, but there is a possibility of it struggling up and trudging on.
Unseen Watcher- Sat 17 Feb 2007
Ah, I like this version of Sesshoumaru. He's certainly responsible and not what he appears.
Unseen Watcher- Sat 17 Feb 2007
I'm glad to see she's gained some diplomacy, and heaven knows she needs to shut up and think a lot more than she does. As for her untrained powers, she should study with Kaede and tell impatient hanyou where to shove it!
ness2g5- Fri 16 Feb 2007
I'm really liking this story... Its different from others that ive read with sess and kags trapped together.... Cant wait for the update...
ness
Unseen Watcher- Fri 16 Feb 2007
That ought to be an interesting scen in the morning. I wonder what will happen next?
Unseen Watcher- Fri 16 Feb 2007
A very interesting situation. I wince at the thought of her legs. Their interactions ought to go onto interesting paths.
ren- Fri 16 Feb 2007
Ohh. This is a cool fic. Stupid Inutachi gang is moving away from the crater though. When i read it i was like WHAT?!?! NO!!! Kagome's wandering mind was funny though. It would be great if she did find the answers to those questions. I look forward to your next chapters.
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