plz typ more or i will cry

Phew...I'm so glad Sesshoumaru looks the same. YAY!

Although I don't really care for the Phantom of the Opera (something about possessive men really ticks me off), I find the relationship itself between Eric and Christine - perversity and innocence - to be most intriguing.
I just wish you would invest some more time in your chapters. That doesn't mean you should write more scenes, mind you. But you should try to make the description of the scenes at hand more elaborate. As it is, it reads as if you're merely scratching the surface of the story, flying through the characters' interactions. This still needs a lot of work, but I think you're on a good path :)

Hey, thanks for responding to my challenge! I really enjoyed the story so far and I hope that you continue to write. And I send you my thanks. Keep up the good work.

Lady_Sesshoumaru

reply to review:
????? the phantom was at least 15-25 years older than Christine she was about 15-18 and he was 35-40. so Sesshomaru would have to be older than her to keep along the plotline. but to the authress do what you will with it I have read the customary first two chapers and will leave it at that. not to do with your writing it is verry good I just don't like phantom of the opera cross overs I am a purist when it comes to both storys. thank you for not combineing it with Laroux's version though.

I Love Phantom of the Opera AND Inuyasha! I always thought that double-sided mirror was kind of perverse.

I hope Sesshoumaru isn't an old man in this fic. Can't wait for the next chapter.