Wow this is really really well writen.
I hope the next update comes soon!

Wow this is really really well writen.
I hope the next update comes soon!

I love the idea that you're not going to tell us what's written in the note left by Kagome. I think it's a much better idea to leave it to the reader's imagination. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I wonder what Rin and Jaken are doing in Sesshy's absence. It seems like he's been gone, what, week now? Maybe um...3 days at the least? Keep up the great writing!

You're killing me. You're KILLING me. WHAT'D SHE WRITE? WHY- why? Ugh, I would stop reading this fic if I wasn't such an OCD addict and would be driven insane by not knowing the end.
Sesshoumaru and Kagome BETTER end up happy and together, that's all I have to say.
Though a large part of me does agree with Kagome's decision to hide away from both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in the future..
Just make Kagome end up happy then. Pur-lease?

Simply marvelous. I am very excited.

EP

I'm so excited you're updating! I'll be checking back!

It's good to know that you will update soon! *grin*
I can't wait!!

Bring it on girlie! I am actually reserving a part of tomorrow evening to read. Itching to see where you are going with this.

See....everything occurs for a reason. There are no co-incidences...*winkZ*

EP

yay... good to hear your are continuing the story......

i really like the fic you did. I am just wondering where it is headed. I hope you update soon.

So. Awesome. . ;~; Continue pleeeeeeaaase. I think I'm going to cry. D:

This is so awesome!!!

Your FanFic is alsome! I absalotly love it! Go Sessy!!!

please keep this is up i would like to know what happens,

Hey I love the story!!! Please update when ever you can!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing!!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter is up!

Very sad chapter 'cause I'm not sure if she's gonna stay with Sesshy or not.
Definitely can't wait to read more!

please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!finish the story....i can't wait to finish .i love the story..i hate cliffys.please hurry

I'm Sooo Loving This Story ... U Gotta Update Soon ... I Wanna Know Whats Going To Happen Next ... Poor Kagome And Poor Sesshomaru!

WTF! Why is she leaving? ...Oh, regret...
But that's no excuse, she chose! What is she going to do? certainly not leave him...right? aaaargh! I need the next chapter!!! *runs around in circles*

^^

Thank goodness I recognized your name from another story I'm reading of yours and check this one out. You have such good plots, at first I was antsy at the thought that you were going a little to pro inuyasha and feel that again now but I'm so into what will happen next because it seems to be any inu's game for kag's heart. Rooting for sess as always though :P

Very glad to see it back. So Kagome is heading into real trouble. Personally, I would head towards the well. Rock and a hard place. Facing her feudal family ..specifically Inuyasha, and what is more, awakening the sleeping beast within Sesshoumaru who we know will follow once he notes her absence. Oh boy...! Update soon.

And a very happy EP I am too for seeing this one back. Oh I particularly enjoyed Miroku being able to use the SIT command on our delusional hanyou.

I definitely do not like where the story looks like it is going. Afterall Sesshoumaru is trying to keep Inuyasha from ruining Kagome life. If Kagome stays with Inuyasha they both will be dead within a year, right? Besides, Inuyasha will always see Kagome as Kikyou in some way. She is an idiot if she goes back to him. Sesshoumaru truly cares for her in both eras.

How the h*ll does ANYONE walk away from a half naked Sesshomaru?!! HOWW!!!! Anyway, update soon, please, can't wait to see what Sessho does when he realizes his little mate is gone!! AWW Poor Fluffy!!

This story is incredible! I can't wait to read more of it.

nnnooooo! she can't go 2 inuyasha not after all that man, i know it was hell tring 2 think of all that but come on
with all due respect
Ashley-kun

YES! SCORE! Finally you've updated. I've kept track of this story for a long time. It seems the writing only gets better and better throughout the story as you're experience grows. I'm sure the next chapter will be even greater then the last, so I'll wait for it!

hey,
I am so happy to see you are continuing this story... I cant wait to see kags come to her senses to how rediculous she is being leaving sess... see ya at the next update

Wow...I mean, wow! This story is great, it made me laugh, made me hate you and then made me love you. You played with the characters emotions so well, I can only wait for you to update this and Much Needed Healing. Mainly the last one because it still has some unresolved issues with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. ^^

Okay, I'll be watching you little AR freak ;) haha, you're quite unique.

kudos!

Hello ^___^

Just wondering if you had thought about who Kagome is going to stay with.
By that I mean;
1. Will she stay with the "past" Sesshoumaru in the feudal era
OR
2. Will she leave the feudal era & live with the "modern" Sesshoumaru

Just very curious =)
Apart from that I reckon this fanfic is really interesting.

You are one funny funny gal. I like your stories i find them amusing and light. Refreshing. And your chapter lenghts are great. like a snack, just enough that i can bang through a chapter before i have to go to work or whatever. ... was that enough ass kissing. I certainly think so! anywho thanks for taking the time to write!

Hello, me again. I decided to check this story out, since I enjoyed Healing. Guess what? I like this one even more! Very nice job. I don't believe that I've come across one where Inuyasha is actually trying to persuade Kagome to choose him so whole-heartedly. It's actually left me feeling bad for the guy. I don't suppose Sess would share? I mean... it would be a win win situation, right? Well, for Kagome, anyway. I've got a feeling that you are not headed in that direction with the plot, but the hentai in me will keep my fingers crossed. Don't worry over the chapter length complaints. Honestly, I've written everything from 5,000 words per chapt to 9,000 wpc. When the story is good, they will always want more. It's a sign of success.

"InuYasha,sit"! Miroku has that ability to subjugate him! This chapter was awesome!

while the lemons are very entertaining i find myself enjoying the story itself more. this is the first fanfic that i have read that has pitted sesshomaru and inuyasha against eachother for kagomes affections. and having sesshomaru show up as his future self was an unexpected and delightful twist. i am looking forward to it if you so choose to continue this story.

OH MY GOD! THIS IS SUCH A GREAT FANFIC! YOU SOOO NEED TO UPDATE SOON!

That Story was the SHIT. I loved it :)

Oh my goodness I absolutely love your story!!! I thought it was pure genius I tell ya! Pure genius!!! Well keep up the good work I can't wait for the next chapter hehehe....

Yea! It's back!
I just read the whole thing from the beginning again.
Just as good the second time around!
Don't mind small chapters at all if they'll be coming more often.
And absolutely LOVED that Miroku got to sit InuYasha!
Haven't seen that before anywhere, and I read entirely to much fanfiction (if that's possible)!
^_~
Keep up the good work!
You're coming to be one of my favorite authors.

yey! i love this story, in case you didn't know.
how cute is Sesshy when he's in love?
so frikkin cute! thanks for the update, now when can we expect some more?

Thank you so much for updating. I had been trying to imagine what was going to happen and just had so many different scenarios that I couldn't wait to see what you decided on. Please keep this one going as I have really enjoyed it.

Woot! How did I not see this story here before? You have some VERY HOT scenes! Nicely done. :)

I am just happy you are updating this one again thanks so much . This is a great story

Aw man I felt so bad. I had forgotten about this fic. BUT!!! I am SO happy that you had updated once again. I never knew that I had missed it that much until now! ^_^

-River

Awesome story. I definitely love this one too, though I am very sorry that I never reviewed before.
But yeah, you are very talented. And the lemon in this fic... WOW! So good!
Definitely love reading your work and can't wait for more.

my dear myself and many others would be happy to beta if you decide you want one remember not to overwork yourself for something you do for fun

Hehehe! Yay! Miroku made a crater, Miroku made a crater lol...THAT ASS...that priceless, befuddled, ignorant, overbearing, 2 brain celled....never mind. GREAT UPDATE.

You know, it is rare to see the character of Shesshoumaru outright enjoying the flaunting of victory over an opponent...but him "pissing" on his property with the lick and the caress was great. Loved it! Yes, very happy reader here...

Inuyasha is an idiot.

OMG!!!!

this story is soooo good! i honestly don't care about inuyasha! lol. i'm just happy that sesshomaru was FINALLY able to get with kagoome! ^.^

cant wait for the next chapter! keep up the great work!

OOOHHH!!!!!!!!! please update soon.........It was left on a cliffy (o.0)>

*is a musshy pile of goo at your feet because she over-heated reading your fic* Wow...yup, wow, this fic is amazing, I mean, mind-blowing, print it off and hug it amazing. (okay, so I didn't actually print it off but you get my drift) I can't wait to see what happens next!! Thanks for the great read!

I was disappointed in this chapter -shakes head- IT WAS WAAAY TO SHORT

Yaaaaay I'm glad your muse is back I was missing this story!

Dear God, I know InuBrata loves her in "his" own way, but he really needs to use his brain on occasion. He is way too much fire and tumult and very little else...still, I do feel sorry for him. That being said, I cannot imagine the shit he is about to get his sorry little cute ears into by interrupting the new couple...nice update and yes, well pleased said muse shortened her vacation...have a wonderful night, thanks for BOTH updates! Made my Sunday evening.

I loved your story so far. Well done. I like how you keep your story true to the characters and make their emotions feel so real. You don't seem to bash Kikyo and Inuyasha in this fic at all which is good but you do display the true irony of their situation for what it is. Extremely eloquent. I couldn't have done better myself.

Anyone who can write a story this good deserves to take a vacation once in a while. ^_^
I'l (*try*) to be patient, and hope that the (*evil*) plot-bunnies will leave you alone until *you're* ready to write again. ^_~

OOOHHHHHHH no... Well at least it is ending on a good note... For now...
I have really enjoyed this story you have done a good job on it so don't think other wise... I'am sure other agree with me...
We at least got the hot sex between them... (Fanning myself)
Well enjoy your vacation and hopefully you will come back to us soon...
I guess I'll have to SIT (thump) and wait for next chapter... LOL..
Hurry back we will miss you and your muse...
take Care
Mari

*Smile* Happy lazy hazy vacation days contemplating your navel and watching lady bugs on leaves...those are always the best vacations.

no worries. Enjoy your vacation, little muse!!! -waves-

We meet Sess Mom? You giving her a name? Enjoyed the fic so far!

hey what i think is that since you know how inu and sess are brother, so in the past, kings and royalty use to married the same women. so why dont u do for them to share kag cuz i think is sad how inu is going to end up alone, without kagome after he showed how much he really loves her..

hey what i think is that since you know how inu and sess are brother, so in the past, kings and royalty use to married the same women. so why dont u do for them to share kag cuz i think is sad how inu is going to end up alone, without kagome after he showed how much he really loves her..

Ahem.....(paddle at the ready with Eeeeeeeevil look in eyes)....sooooooooooooooo oh quilled one....ahem...what is new...and fabu in your life (begins singing under her breath trying desperately not to look DESPERATE)....soooo like...(looks around screen to see if next chapter has been misplaced)...yep, well I shall go back to my little corner sigh..sigh...sigh...looks furtively at paddle...hmmmm...nah, we looooooooooooooove moondoggie (chuckle)....

ur story rocks can't wait for u to update
luv pooh

Now, I don't normally send reviews (usually because I can never think of anything to say), but I feel this story warrants it (especially after reading that A/N).
You are NOT a crappy writer, I've seen SOOOO much worse than you (I've been reading Fanfiction for 5 or 6 years now). To whomever sent you that review: This is OBVIOUSLY a Sess/Kag story otherwise it would not be posted on a SESS/KAG website, which is so clearly shown.
You have stated several times the notes at the beginning/end of the chapters about how this WILL be a sess/kag story, but it has to start off Inu/Kag...which is completely understandable, I must say, because it makes the story more realistic...It stays true to the anime's roots. Which I must applaud you on, because I have a very hard time with that.
In conclusion, this is an excellent story, I absolutely LOVE it, and if you can't stand the (i.e. read the WHOLE thing) then get out of the kitchen, I say. haha. =]
I hope you continue with this story, and if anyone out there doubts that this is sess/kag please refer to the last chapter. (which I loved very much) XP
Sincerely,
A.J.

you dont suck!!! i love this story! please keep writing or i'll be very sad...

AAHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOO! IF YOU STOP WRITING I'LL CRYYYYYYYYYYYY. I'm addicted to reading this story. ou are NOT a crappy writer. Mika luffs you! till next chappi, take care and don't stress too much even tho work is a pain as always :)

WOOT WOOT this is one of my fav stories. I come on everyday to check and see if there's an update. Keep it coming ^^^

Ahhh I think, correct me if I am wrong, that this entier site is DEVOTED to Fluffy and Kagome...THAT is the focus...so that and the delicious nasty pretty much clears it up as to who got whom...as it should be. Everyone here, is here cause we like that pairing...so no, I dont think we are confused on the matter. You keep writing, we will keep reading...

No! Don't end it due to the stupidity of one person! I also think that we worshipers of this fic would hunt down that person and hog-tie them

Cheers!
~zen

How is this for direct?

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

Do you think that is enough of a hint?! Cause if you remain unsure more than happy to HINT some more!

i love this story and i cant wait unill u update. i love Sesshy and Kags fics

Well, I understand that IT IS a Kag & Sess fic because it is on this site and the previous chapter pretty much summed it up.

my eye started twitching when u said u would stop writing the fic....NEVER DO THAT AGAIN!!!! now cant wait for tues. happy dance

I get it now. He wanted to change history. welp not history but damn you know. She been with him and not Iunyasha. Got it!

YOU ARE LATE WITH THAT NEWS

you don't suck at writing. you are pretty good.

Oh please don't stop writting this fic. It's really good. I think the whole InuYasha bits fit really well considering the manga and anime where she is in love with him and all that.. It's nice to see someone finally writing about her conflicting emotions between the two. It's better to write it out than just ignoring her feelings for InuYasha completly, but i also think it's pretty obvious from her reactions that there's a bit more there with Sesshomaru than meets the eye. Keep up the good work :D

~Sess

They probably haven't read the entire fic because it is most obviously a Sess/Kag fic. Anyway don't quit writing because people can't keep there crap straight. Well I look forward to the next update.
Sakura

Personally I love this fic and I can't wait for you to write more. So please ignore the person who wrote you that review. But I would love for you to read my story Lost In the Pain/ Starting Over. It's not done yet but I value your opinion and would to see what you think I should do with the story now.

wonderful. Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I was grounded. well anyways, I can't wait for your next update. until then... ja ne!

You don't suck!! keep Writing!!! ^^

If you want I'll be your personal lead cheerleader. If you sucked I so wouldn't give you my happy dances trust me, and I wouldn't make sure to review after ever chapter I read. I usually can't keep track of the fics I like because there are so many, but I have yours down thats saying alot. SO on that note if you stop writing all together I'll cry and then I'll find you and your muse and put you both in front of the computer until it sinks in ~crys out~ I WANT TO READ YOUR STORIES. ~sniffle sniffle~ OK POST SOON.

hugs and puppies

As you so eloquently I don't not think you suck and I think least of all that you should stop writting I mean really it would be such awaste of talent if you just stopped writting and besides Im quiet interested with the next story with your teaser, yes I think I will rather enjoy this new story six, three, and two. Well until the next chapter is posted jane

Please keep writting, this is one of my favorite on-going Sess/Kag stories.
Whoever said it was Inu/Kag hasn't read far enough and doesn't get that conflict makes stories more interesting.

I can see how it kinda looked like a Inu/kag at the start and in some of the later chapters. But unless you read between the lines and have a half way decent understanting of all the chr that you portray. Most wound not see it tell chapter 24. As far as I'm consered This is a wonderful story that has many twest and turns that if you miss even a small somthing you wont understnad what will eventully happen. I really hope you do keep up with your writing and dont let the effects of one sway your unique writing style.

~Dragon~

I like this story, it is pretty good, i especially like how you kept it slightly unsure as to who she would end up with, i mean it is slightly obvious seeing as it's on the sight it's on, but i liked the suspense none the less, oh and is this the end? kinda seems like it... if i'm wrong please let me know

~Dark

i really dont understand this story its suppose to be sesshoumaru and kagome to me it sounds like inuyasha and kagome im kinda upset could you explain this to me why it look that way.

NEVER REALLY THOUGHT ABOUT HOW COOL IT WOULD BE TO GET KAGOME WITH SESSOMURU... JUST STUMBLED UPON THIS SITE. GREAT JOB TELLING IT IN A REALLY CREATIVE WAY THOUGH. HOPE TO HEAR MORE :)
HALEY

haha not funny post a chap already........................................................................................................ please! preatty please!

This story is by far the epitome of an engaging, well-organized and excellently written fanfiction. I love Sess/Kag fics and The Telling is one of the best I have ever read. The continuation of your gift would be greatly appreciated as it seems to entertain me immensely. And there is nothing wrong with being a little hentai. But there is something wrong with not being able to admit it. Glad you and I are true to ourselves, eh?

Brava! I love the chapter...lemony goodness indeed. I like your interplay of time and space. Well done! Now rest those fingers, there will be no spanking for you *chuckle*. Mind you not too much rest, this is a wonderfully enjoyable story. WRITE ON dear MoonDoggie!

Hooray! Very nice and intense lemon.

I thought she chose sess? the preview is confusing me > !! oh well upadate its a amazingly awesome story!!!

I'm CONFUSED!!!!!!!!! what happen? She didnt mate with Inuyasha or.........dear god never mind.

Well the good news is I read the new chapter before it got me, the bad news is when I looked and found it in the room it was on fire. (maybe I shouldn't have read it out loud). OH and I have to say THANK you for dedicating that worning to me. I can't wait to read more of your stuff all you'll have to do is say it's your and point me in the right direction. (I'm bad at maps so that wont work, sorry.)
~SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~

hugs and puppies

PS by the way as soon as I say the worning I went and got ice and turned on the AC and a fan. Just so you know I live in Minnasota so that tells you how cold it isat night up here. OK love ya and now for sure bye. Well one more thing.
~CONTINUES SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~ LOL

Well the good news is I read the new chapter before it got me, the bad news is when I looked and found it in the room it was on fire. (maybe I shouldn't have read it out loud). OH and I have to say THANK you for dedicating that worning to me. I can't wait to read more of your stuff all you'll have to do is say it's your and point me in the right direction. (I'm bad at maps so that wont work, sorry.)
~SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~

hugs and puppies

PS by the way as soon as I say the worning I went and got ice and turned on the AC and a fan. Just so you know I live in Minnasota so that tells you how cold it isat night up here. OK love ya and now for sure bye. Well one more thing.
~CONTINUES SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~ LOL

Well the good news is I read the new chapter before it got me, the bad news is when I looked and found it in the room it was on fire. (maybe I shouldn't have read it out loud). OH and I have to say THANK you for dedicating that worning to me. I can't wait to read more of your stuff all you'll have to do is say it's your and point me in the right direction. (I'm bad at maps so that wont work, sorry.)
~SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~

hugs and puppies

PS by the way as soon as I say the worning I went and got ice and turned on the AC and a fan. Just so you know I live in Minnasota so that tells you how cold it isat night up here. OK love ya and now for sure bye. Well one more thing.
~CONTINUES SUPER LONG LEMON HAPPY DANCE~ LOL

about your thig with the threesome, it's been done befor. so yeah go ahead. i would love to read it. i was wondering, do you like my story 'surprizes from afar' ? it may be a little quick, but i'm sure that when it's time for the lemon, it'll make up for it... i love it when i can do that!!!! perhaps a should write one hell of a long one shot, with a threesome in it? or mabey, i should add anubis in there... i was reading a story with anubis in it by rinseternalsoul. it's called 'as death gives life' have you read it? if not i REALLY recromend it. lots of hentai in it. at LEAST 3 lemons in it. i also recromend galaxy gladiator's, also by rinseternalsoul.... LOTS of threesome action. it's very long too... i'm such a perv!!!

Yayness does happy dance while trowing rose petals. Hot, steamy, delicious lemon. That was great and I am finally glad it is here. So as always keep up the great work and update soon.
Sakura

*squealing in delight* you updated again. Thank you thank you thank you. Loved the chapter...it was smokin' hot. ;) I can't wait to read Inuyasha's response to Kagome's choice. Please update soon.

-laughs then coughs- no worries about me being late today. Too sick to go to school. heh heh. OMG lemon!!! YAY! I mean, great chappie! ^^

that was a little confuseing. I thought she slept with Sess not Inu.

ok now that little preview was just weird, i does not fit into the current story but oh well.let the story continue and update quickly.

sigh...reading such a good work makes me wish i still wrote. Great work my dear. If you ever run out of story ideas drop me a line i've got a ton i'll use, but somehow i dont think that'll be a problem for you.

OMG that lemon was fantastic I bet your pervered side loved writing that chapter. I will now think of you as the queen of great smut. Jane

ahh....your new story seem to have caught my eye as well. ^.^
anyway i'm about to update my own story, no later or sooner then april first....might not amount to yours but....it's worth a shot!

wow I can't believe I almost missed reading that chapter it was soooo GOOD and I really enjoyed sesshomarus confession it was really sweet. Ja Ne

ahhh nooooooo, poor kagome what will she do, but then again poor sess, 500 years is a long time. I can't wait till u update i hope it's soon! I wonder if there will be more action between sess and kagome, i hope their is!

This is GREAT.....and thank you for actually updateing regularly.....I cant wait for the chapter

Dude, that teaser was an evil, evil thing. I hope the next chapter has the dots to connect it. If not................... something will happen.....I'm not sure what it is, but it WILL happen............

uh,
Zen

YAY!!!!!!!!! pweeeeez post the nex chapter!! hurry pweeeeeeez!

OMG OMG OMG....can't wait to read the next chapter. It better be a GOOD ending...or else ....(you don't wanna know *smirking evilly*). Please update soon.

oh good grief... what a tease.....

POST, GOD FUCKIN DAMN IT!!!!!!
THIS STORY IS TOO DAMN FUCKIN GOOD!!!!!

Wow! Sesshoumaru's speech was on point! You captured Inuyasha's inability to express himself well.
I enjoyed it and your little snippets of A.N

Ooh late this evening! It's close to late this evening!! -waits with baited breath-

Woo!! Go Sesshomaru!!! Great chapter update soon!!

*pulls on hair* Oh the suspence! i cant take it no more! *Looks around* someone say lemony goodness? oh yay!

I love your fic. It is well written with a solid and suspenseful plot. I must say though, that these teasers are torturous and even though they do provide the wanted reaction of increased suspense and curiosity they are also painful in denying me the ability to continue reading your story. So quit with the teasers and post the next chapter, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

thank u i almost had a haert attack tlast night thinking about this storie

EXCELLENT UPDATE! Sigh....how very romantic. Okay now I have to apologize....apparently, I can be a total priceless ASS...see InuYasha is not alone. I did not select the right chapter and thought you had not updated....so mea culpa, mea maxima culpa.

Nicely done, and don't rush ending this. It is just too damn pleasurable reading this fic. I always approach it with a smile on my face and as I said before that is largely due to fact that the characters remain canon regardless of era. it truly is a pleasure to read. Oh and do feel free to spank Sesshy...wooooooof!

So poor innocent ElegantPaws gets excited....beams with glee upon seeing an update notice for "The Telling"....then...realizes MoonDoggie is being her incorrigable self...."Dont make me spank you woman!" LOLOL! Grrrrrrrrrr....the anticipation is killing us...hell with US ...ME DAMN IT! I love this story. Am also curious how you will handle the "space time continuum " issue.

I have every faith you will handle it. Again, I shall sit here with a paddle and a raised eyebrow...anticipating an authors spanking....hehehehe

I very much am enjoying your fic, i had my hopes up and thought u had updated, only to find out that it was a AN. I hope you update soon. I curious to see how u figure out the time issue, some authors pull it off some don't. I'm thinking if Kagome goes back in time and is with the "past" sess, what will happen to the present one? Will he be alone still or will he have a "present" Kagome. Keep up the good work! and please update soon it's killing me to find out what is going to happen.

Wow. Your fic is so cool :P Another tip of the hat for ya :)

One thing I like is that you aren't making Inuyasha out to be a complete and total asshole. I mean, I actually feel sorry for the guy...awwwww. So many writers just make him out to be a complete and total bastard *I even saw a couple of fics where he attempted to rape Kagome*, but you actually keep him very very VERY much in character, and make him believable. Great job, and the teaser has me anxiously awaiting for the next chapter :)

oooh you're evil. two teasers!? omg.

naw, I was there on time... with like 30 seconds to spare... Anyhoo---omg this chappie! You're a devil for keeping it from us!! but a good devil cuz you wrote it, ne? ^^;;;; Much lovage!!

Update!!! I order you to!!!!

Oh my god I don't think its evil I think its genius, I mean I love how Sephy has to work for it. Hell even kiddapping Kagome to * Ahem* show her why he should be the one, hell he should take her and just keep her til se say yes, even better he should convince , and convince till she concevies. XD or the other alterner could be Inuyasha cheated on her with another. I mean the story could go either way. But I like sephy coming to get her and show her.

Killing you its killing me. ~looks around and sees shadows coming with knife~ you better post before it gets me. ~looks back and sees its right be hind me~ ~SCREAMS and runs~ hurry its ganging on me. I'm going to hide in with the computer, (I hope that no one tells it where i am.) ~wispers~ post before it gets me.
can't wait! ok I know its not a chapter but I just have to do it. ~silent happy dance~ ssshhhh can't let it find me.

hugs and puppies

PS sorry really tired and hyper does not mix but thats what I am right now.

no!!!!!!!!1 why why why why why why why you are making those who are up late be anticipated for nothing because you dont have the chapter up yet!!!

omg...OMG..... OMFG!!!!!!.. i love you plzzzzzzz write more i begggg oooffff uuuu plz for the love of god his self plz write more!!!!!!!!

Damn it WOMAN! You are a tease...never mind Sesshoumaru being undone....I AM UNDONE...very sexy....hehehehe...okay so I feel a smidge for the cute earred pup but GET OVER IT. I vote for Sesshy....then again....WE ALL DO. Nice chapter...and you are a collosal tease...evil evil evil evil girl...giving us a teaser for the next chapter. I suggest you spank your puter for bad behaviour, but good things are ALWAYS worth the wait. Nicely done.

Oh why are you doing this.....i'm pulling my hair out, THANKS TO YOU!!!
UPDATE! ^.^

*narrows eyes and you can see the glint of metal* I warned you....*sigh* I really love your story, but did you have to make it a sad ending? *sigh* =(

Ooooh, the ever-so-anticipated confrontation! I'm so happy to see that Sesshoumaru is more honest with himself in the modern era. I mean, hey, it only took him 500 years to learn, right? Haha.

I have a feeling that Kagome is going to be torn up even more now. Perhaps BECAUSE of Inuyasha's impending confession. Man-oh-man, I can't wait until the next chapter! Thank you for the hard work, and I eagerly await more.

i was reading the last chapter... horay for citrus!! i love smut. those are the only knid of stories i read. they have to be rated nc-17, or i won't read it.but yeah, being a perv is great. oh and i am also an author, and i'm not to happy with my first chapter. and i don't feel like rewriting it. but i hope that one of your next stories happens to be a sessxkagxinu ... i love threesomes!!! well hope you write! oh and don't be afraid to try and get in touch with me, just leave a message on my account, of wich is also sesshys_girl06 i hope you write a complete and full citrus soon.

arrrrrgggghhhh...I hate you. So evil.... I can't wait to read the next chapter ;)

Oh so mean anyway I can't wait for the next chapter and great job on chappie 24. I can't wait for the next chapter oh the suspense.
Sakura

evil.. but it's best there's no other chappie up yet.. i'm late for class ^^:;;;;

wow. I stick with my former opinion and will await you next update. until then... ja ne!

Lmao. Poor Inuyasha. That was really good and really funny lol. I like it a lot!

garmish was a fun mini vacation. did discover japanese women adore my son. Good job on the last 2 ch. I'd like to see sess explain her dying if she mates inu. Hope that's in the next ch i cant wait to see

You Evil Authoress! I love you! :-P *Cheers for Sesshy*

thank you I loved this chapter and and its nice to know you like more then my happy dances.~sniffle sniffle~ Well I have to say that this chapter gets the blood going. I've come to a conclushion I review just to hear what you'll say to me. I like you that much! I was worried that it would take forever for your next chapter. write soon.

~mega happy dance~
hugs and puppies

I adore this story!

Omg! I've been waiting for this chapter for the past week! That was amazing. The time travel is a little confusing because I don't understand how something happened then didn't happen and yet everything is the same, but I'm gonna go with it because this fic is so freakin' awesome! Boo Inuyasha, Sess makes him look stupid. Keep up the amazing work!

When I said depressing I meant the fact that kagome died. But moving on that was an awsome chapter and I was laughing so hard at the end when inuyasha looks at sesshomaru and Says "what the fuck" I can just picture the look on his face hehe well until next time Ja ne

OMG that was a great chapter !!!!

ok its tomorrow, hello?

Oooh...I love this. I love how you've came up with an original plotline to have Sesshoumaru and Kagome get together, I love how you keep them in character, and I love me some citrus :P That being said, I tip my hat to you, and now, I must go drink a gallon of cold water. Hope to see the next update very soon :)

i thought it was well thought out. the mix of humor and overall presentation was well werth reading.

i also thought that your abillity to keep the characters close to their original outline was admirable. i look forward to the rest of this story and if you would update soon i would be very glad.

thank you

more!!!

Favourite current line of last read chapter:

"Well, the carpet matches the drapes."

Now how many can combine a sensual observation with humour and so tastefully too lol.

Very nice.

good job!!!

Bravissima! This is excellent, and what is more, the "voice" of Sesshoumaru-sama is CANON COMPLETELY...I know I am going to love this piece. What else have you written? Well done thus far. Looking forward to further updates....

woohoo liked that chaper

OMG OMG OMG...I love the twist. PLease update soon. I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next.

this is a really good story. are you sure this is ur first casue you write like a pro. this is one of the best sess/kag stories ive read so far and i've been at this for about 5 years. congrats.

this is a really good story. are you sure this is ur first casue you write like a pro. this is one of the best sess/kag stories ive read so far and i've been at this for about 5 years. congrats.

Interesting, indeed. Dying in childbirth wouldn't have been my choice--either. I think that is one time paradox I would risk, too. Can't wait for the update!

Yes, definately touching...I'm no nut. But I guess the real question is if this has happened before. The him in the past has no way of knowing if the him in the future had been there when Inuyasha showed up or not...and she mated him anyway. Then again...this is ASS, so hope lives. Going to be difficult to explain the timeline descrepencies or if everything is just changed. Then again...does he plan to make her the mate of the future Sesshomaru? There wouldn't be any issues there...

Thus the plot thickens... 0.0
Damn rapscallion! *shakes fist at stupid Inu for his Kikyouing*

;.; omg... What a wonderfully thought out chapter!! Please! Please write more!! This is fabulous!!

Lol A review race? I've not heard of one yet! Very cool idea! I shall be a good studeous, avid reader! ^^;

hm... interesting twist... update soon can't wait to see what happens

Awwww how sweet!!! Sesshoumaru in regular attire with short hair? H-o-t-ness ^_~ buuuuut, if Sess of the past saw Inuyasha dive into the future, when is Inuyasha going to come? ^_~ If you make it a sad ending I will kill you *eyes narrows*

Update!!!!

That is just so sad. For Sesshy to have so completely lost the one that he cared for so very much, know we can only hope that he is able to do something that will change the past events and allow he and Kags to be together.

I have been thoughly enjoying this fic and can't wait for the next chapter.

Now that was somewhat unexpected but I liked it..... I'm thrilled at having a future Sesshoumaru in the picture it proves that he can change and will be determined to take what he considers his.... I wonder what Inu Yasha will say or do when he finds them together..... Let the fur fly.... Update soon...

Oh I mean alot to you don't I all I'm good for is my happy dances. see if I give you anymore. huh.
................Ok I can't do it my happy dances must go on. At least you appretate them thats good enough for me. Oh and no I wasn't in a corner I was on my bed, which let me tell you it's hard to do you fall backwards and/or almost off the bed.
~snoopy happy dance~

hugs and puppies

Wow so she dies after giving birth thats depressing put it does happen. So wow you finished another chapter really fast this story is still really great and I'm sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. Well I look forward to the next part of this glorious story and until then Ja ne.

Ok so that was totally unexpected and worh the wait. Anyway great job and can't wait for the next chappie. As soon as i post you will be the first to know.
Sakura

wait, wait, im confused!!!
so when did sesshomaru meet up with her? before inuyasha came to her time to have sex with her? i loved the story, it was just a lil too confusing and needed more drama

Oh my, I'm completely in love with this chapter. To see that Sesshoumaru is so devoted to Kagome, even after 500 years, it makes me want to cry! I'm so glad he found her, and I can't wait to see what happens with them next! Thank you for the story thus far, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

I don't think that chapter was that bad. I liked how Inuyasha finally found out. I kinda felt bad for the guy... Anywho... I love your story, and I juts can't get enough. I'm kinda sad that it's coming to an end soon, but I also can't wait to see what happens next! Hope ya update soon!

love the story i don't want to be put in the one shot thing because i'm more of a reader then a writer
but watever
can't wait for the next chapter

So, the plot has many twists and turns. I love the way you pose the love triangle, or is it a square? May Kag end up with sess!

~zen

holy F-ing hell! This story is amazing so far. I am sad to say that reading this story has indeed turned me into a puddle of goo. ah well .that just means that it's good stuff. well until the next update... ja ne

I love this fic..it's very original and I've seen none of that Kagome sees Inuyasha with Kikyo and runs to Sesshoumaru stuff. It's way over-used. Anyways, please continue and update soon! ^_^

love the story. too bad it's coming to an end T_T! But keep writing looking forward to your next story
love katasuya

Thank you for the new chapter and for saying I make you laugh. I just thought that I would tell you that everyone else tells me I'm crazy too. I was going mad waiting for this chapter I even cought myself rocking back and forth one time.

~pent up happy dance~

hugs and puppies

What an interesting story! I am so glad that there is a sess/kag out there that doesn't depict Inuyasha as an evil bastard! After all, we all fell in love with Inuyasha, first, ne? Nice job, and please continue!

Ah that is ok i don't think you would kill me but sometimes it is just beter to jump in head first and et it over with. oh i am going to be posting my first story soon. Anyway great chapter and i can't wait for the next one.
Sakura

Great job on your filler. Honesty is great when dealing with any relationship (i'm talking from experinece here) even one in a fic. Hope you have the new chapter by the time i'm back from Garmish on frid.

Hey this is Jade. I'm actually going to write something lol. I'm waiting for my verification code that hasn't come... 0.0

I liked how Inuyasha was NOT freaking out in this chapter. It shows definite character developement. (and another BEAUTIFUL lack of cliches^^) Keep up the good work!

Hehe, a pair of golden eyes huh? Didn't Sesshoumaru say something about how she would never escape him? tsk tsk, she might have to be taught a lesson ^_~ lol or not! =P your choice but I still can't wait to see what you decide ^_^

YES! Totally loved that! Absolutly pervertedness to the maximum, and I enjoyed it all! I just loved that scene, an di also liked how you put their emotions in it so well! the detail is awesome, and i totally loved how you kept Kagome's innocent stage, but she also retained the womans natural ability to please her man.... lol anywho, hope ya update soon!

fucking beautiful!!! i mean, sure it's basicly a sex scene, but you can feel the underlining innocence in the words, feel the passion, love even. he's forcefull, she's gentile, he's sweet, while she's rough. i would most definitly read this fanfic and other fanfics of yours, Moondoggie! terrific work!!
lost love.

Smut is Gooood. Long live the Hentai Minded.

omg omg omg........WOW.
I loved the smut it was sooooo good it left my legs feeling all gooy and weak lol.
well done hope u keep up the great work you've out done urself.
hope you'll let ur biggest fan(ME) no when u write ur story next. ^__^
cya

omg omg omg...... WOW i love this story i feel like i can walk for a week with the way my legs r feeling after that story. omg wow well done plz plz tell me when ur writing next i love this story.

^_^ welldone and great story from ur greatest fan.....lol nah realy i'm ur biggest fan lol ^__^

WOW that was hot I can not wait to read more.

i need a cold shower, i think i forgot what i was going to write. maybe next time ill remember what it was.

You know that I'm a henti but you just keep updating and we coll k?!!! Update like tommorow ok?

Yeah great work. But how is she going back to camp naked? I do feel kind of sorry for Inu though.

that was great, screw the glass I need a bucket. Anyway can't wait for your next update.
Sakura

Yay hentai! O.o I mean... it was a good chappie.. ^^;

Very hot my dear, very hot... I am very jealous of Kagome right now... Damn don't i wish I could be her, having Sesshoumaru at my mercy while suckling his lollipop *laugs*, yep, jealous.
My favorite hentai authoress, your moving up the list for favorite authoresses all time, tho one has to wonder if Sesshy barks and growls when one does that... What else will he bark for? And what other sounds will he make.... Thank you for brightening my day and for turning up the heat *laughs*. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

With love,
Aria-Chan

That was great!

...........................................................................ICE SOMEONE GET ME MORE ICE I'M BURNING UP HERE!!! Man oh man that was hot thank you for the warning. And now for your ~SUPER LONG HAPPY DANCE~ thought I should get to it before I die of sexual frustration!! I mean I'm alive but only hanging on by a thread and that thread is the promise of your full length lemon. I think that I'm going to go take a shower now a very long and cold ICE COLD shower.

hugs and puppies

Dear LORD!! Let me go to sleep after reading this so I can have a wet DREAM lmao girlllllll I just hope that little boy Iunyasha dont mess up there fun!

That was quite possibly the best smut I've read all year. So where do they go from there and what about inuyasha not that I like him so much but does he find out about them soon. Well I'll review the next chapter yay for SMUT hehehe ;-)

Extremely satisfying scene.

yes, we are in business XD
Finally a fic where Sess doesn't repress his moans. (or try to lol) I'm sick of cliches. :P *bows before authoress of greatness*

Evilllll cliff-hanger! haha cant wait for more!

well i was not expecting suh an adrupt ending, but man was it like the perfect place. At first i thought 'heh, no more' then it came to me, keep the readers wanting more, since i do it all the time... hehhheh anyways, i liked that chapter. A real filler in on how Inuyasha feels and how the whole thing affects the group/ I didn't think of how badly it could cause a ripple in the gang... interesting.. and i'm blabbering..... errr.... really great story! and i can't wait to read the update!

This was one of those chapters in the middle that you need but at the same time doesn't progress stuff much. T.T You cliffied us lol.
Can't wait for the next one! *sitting with rapt attention*

Awesome!

Ahhh you left us with a cliffie how cruel all I want to do is continue reading and then the chapter ends ARG. Oh well you did mention something about your pervy side and writing the next chapter so all is forgiven lol I can wait hehe

Too true Dahling, being his willing slave has its amazing appeal too, especially when it involves snarling, purring, licking and... ah... everything else, but if he doesnt want to in the beginning, a backup plan is always nice... Even nicer when it involves the gorgeous Demon Lord tied to my bed, naked as the day he was born for as long as it takes for him to ah... come... around... :-P

And Honey, being my favorite Hentai Authoress is a big honour, especially considering the fact that I'm a slave to NR-17 Sesshoumaru fics.... And have been for a while now.

With love,

Aria

i'm always looking for something unique and i'm glad i have come across this keep up the good work and update soon

~happy dance~
Loving your story like always. can't wait to find out what sesshoumaru has planed to make kagome submit. Though I do know I would love to be her when it happens. LOL. Hope to read some of your hot lemons soon this hentai at her wits ends. HOPE YOU POST SOON!

hugs and puppies

Whoa... that was HOTT! Possessive Sesshou gives me tingly feelings. Lol. So Kags is tryna stay away from Fluffy? I can't wait to read about his reaction towards it. This is a cool story! Keep it coming!

I am curios on how thi will unfold. Keep up the good work and post again soon.

i was just skimming through the fanfiction site when i found this little baby and even though i was in the mood fro a oneshot, i read the summary and i was like 'what the hell could it hurt? Sounds like a good story' little did i know i would be sucked into a world of amazing, tantilizing, sexual bliss! By far some of the best sexual scenes i've read and they haven't even gotten to the main show yet. I love the plot, and I like how you display the emotions, even Sesshoumaru's in his subtle ways. I can't wait until you update again.

but truthfully, i just can't wait until the hentai stuff... lol

I hope you update soon!

-squeak- wait wha? Where's the next chapter? ;.; -pout- oh damn, I got used to just flipping the pages....so to speak... Write more soon please! It is an unique and exciting story! I can't wait to see what happens!

Darling, I think a month would be enough to turn him in to my willing slave, catering to my every whim... Faaar better then having him chained to my bed and snarling at me no? And with him, it would take at LEAST forever to get enough of that scrumptious piece of demon. Dont you think so my favorite hentai authoress?

Yeah its here your chapters and it was good.

I've desided that when I read your citrus I was a pill of goo when I read your lemons I think they'll be so hot there won't be nothing left.
WELL POST SOON

~happy dance remix~
hugs and puppies

Yes sometimes characters do have a mind of their own and you just have to flow with it. But seriously your stroy is very well written and your characters like I said are very much in character the vast majority of the time. Oh and I can't wait to see what kagomes next visit to Sesshomaru will bring her...Hehe I'm a perv too lol.Yay I Cant wait for the next chapter.

Wow! This is getting more intense I wonder what Inu Yasha plans to do now that he knows Sesshoumaru is after Kagome. Let the fur fly.....Update soon,

I enjoyed that chapter. The confrontation between the brothers was great.

Yayness Smut I Love Smut. Great Job Update soon.
Sakura
Happy Dance ( double dance)

This is really good. Keep writing.

Wow there is just no other way to describe this stroy. I love your portrayal of the characters mostly because they're only ooc when in situations that are sexual which is good because I dont think anyone is the same in an intimate setting lol.

Oh that was hot very hot. If that's your citrus whats your full length lemon going to do to us. Your really going to have to put up a warning for your lemon something along the lines of: COUTION MAY MELT ALL ICE AND SNOW NEAR YOU, IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANY YOU MAY WANT TO TURN ON THE AC OR ANY OTHER COOLING DEVICE. LOL. Purring, barking, and growling when you think about it, it usually leads to the same thing as long as what ever is growling isn't pissed off. Heard it from a friend couldn't help but say it. LOL

Just for that chapter I'll give you

~Super long happy dance~
Hope to hear from you soon.

hugs and puppies
~continues happy dance~

I have to wait for more climaxes? Interesting.

dani

YAY FOR CITRUS!

But I'm waiting for Kagome to return to favor. Fellatio, anyone? xP

I think this is a great story so far, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Yes, you should be punished! :-P Ah the citrus-y goodness of it all... Damn how I wish I could be Kagome... Sesshoumaru is one Sexy demon!! I wouldn't mind having him shackled to my bed for a month... or 200 :-P

yay they are together again but, will it last?
damn i sound like a soap opera comercial, oo well good story yes verry good.yay they are together, yay!( does happy dance)

Wow, I just love your story, I loved how you made Sesshoumaru OOC but fit it in with the others thinking about how he is acting.
GREAT JOB!!!

AAAw, sooooo evil!! That cliffy is beyond evil!! I can see why you do it :P Thank you very much for writing and please, please, please update? Please? Pwetty Please?

xxxx Aria-Chan

This fanfic keeps getting better and better---keep up the great work!

LMAO I'm liking how this story is going Though I agree with Kagome Sesshoumaru was purring and that's that.

hugs and puppies
~HAPPY DANCE TECNO STYLE~

can't wait for tonight now I have something to look forward to after 9 hours of work thank you god. Your getting 2 happy dances from me to night. I have to say that I like that he apologised for his beast taking over and that he's going to protect her from now on.

Hugs and puppies

SEE YOU TONIGHT!!!!!
~HAPPY Dance~

Ah another great chapter as always. Anyway keep up the great work and update soon.
Sakura

i love your storie it's like wow and some people forget the fact that inuyasha can go full demon so your storie gets 9 out of 10 because there where some miss spelling or typing problems so you should write more stories and tell me what happens in this one to thank u

Ok I can forgive you this time I hope it don't happen again, though I have to admit that its kind of weird having Sesshoumaru spying and not inuyasha. Well I'll give you my happy dance but not my special happy dance at least not until sess and kag's lemon.

Hugs and puppies

~Happy dance~

update update update update more more more more

great chapter!!

......Urg. heh.

As always great job. To bad for Sess but i imagine he will get his soon. Anyway he can view that as punishment for what he did. Anyway keep up the great work and update soon.
Sakura

hey, hey hey! what's the hold up here! i'll get you arrested. so Go update!

someone is going to bejealous...[looks around and faces an angry Taiyoukai] uh maybe not? Anyhoo will both hot inu brothers get the girl and share the Western Lands making it united against enemies, with an inetlligent miko as their mate? Will they combat Naraku togther and get over their jealousy? And when will the lemons come? Or maybe just more limes...

-Dani.

MORE PWEASE! ^_~ it's gettign steamy up in here

grr... write another chapter... lol i was getting into it all good... lol love your fic

Ah yes work I understand that alwaysbusy and never have time for anything else. Anyway i can't wait for the lovin'. I am a closet hentai, I just love a good tasty lemon, so when your ready just sit for all of us to read. Great job on the chapter and keep up the great work.

Yeah I did my happy dance for you before and after. Now if only I can do it again soon and by the sound of it for a lemon this calls for an extra special happy dance.YAAYYY.

I don't know about everyone else but this black moon inu is a hentai at heart through and through.

hugs and puppies

PS this is just for you HAPPY DANCE!!!! ~Starts to dance~

man i wish i could zap my dog when he's bad like kagome did to sesshy.......humm maybe that would haved saved my futon?!?! (sighs) probably not my dog is reaaaaaalllllly stupid I don't think he is capeable of comprehending the idea of cause and effect ie. push mommy toooo far and....zap. hopefully seshoumaru isn't as dumb as my boxer, and one partial purification is enough for him. I guess we shall see!

If by 'what's about to happen' they're going to do what I think they are.. (wrinkles nose). No amount of later SessKag action will keep my mind off it. (shrugs) Silly Hanyou. Go chase something!

Ok, as soon as I get time I will try and post something, great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Sakura

i think that inuyasha should explain to kags that she was in heat in doing so she might not be as mad at sess.

damn! this is some hot ish! pleeze update soon, this fic is hot!

That's fine. And maybe this will make Sesshy realize that Kagome is not the run of the mill type of female?

-Dani.

That's fine. And maybe this will make Sesshy realize that Kagome is not the run of the mill type of female?

-Dani.

Poor Sesshy! He did kinda deserve that tho... I wonder how Kagome will react when someone tells her that she is in heat... Hoorray for Lemons too!! Cant wait :-D Thanks :)

xxxx Aria-Chan

ps if you wantsome help or w/e, send me an email

terrific chapter!!! luv that iut was Kagome who saved herself and stopped the fight!!! 60 hour week brutal sorry about that.

Man oh man I understand about work and all, but I can't wait. Every time I see moondoggie on the screen for newly posted I do my happy dance. Well I'll be waiting for your next chapter and good luck with work and please get plenty of sleep so you don't get sick.

BYE BYE

I got it and I say thank you I just hadn't read in a while with work when I read it I was so happy THANK YOU.

BYE BYE

this is pretty kool
can't wait to see what happens next

Great Story!! Loving the Hentain-ness of it... Kag-Sess is the best pairing ever... and one of the most wicked ones... Thank you very much for writing. Kisses, Aria-Chan

Ah, interruptions. So it goes. Probably a good thing at this point in time. They both need to think things over. Still... (sigh)

*flaps hands wildly* Nononononoooooo!! I didn't mean to imply that YOU are heartless! (mutters about needing to go to a speech class) When I write reviews, I think only of the characters and rarely address myself personally to the the
author(s). I was just thinking about how I hoped his fall/dissapointment would be cushioned somehow. If you were heartless, you'd have done something much nastier than not let him get Kagome. I was just realizing that I've been hard on 'Yasha in the past, but that I don't want him completely crushed. Self-realization, only! (ducks head) I am no flamer. Flamers are people who don't realize how hard it is to put a decent storyline together. I DO respect your author style. HONEST! (covers face and moans in complete embarrassment).

I really like this fic, and I cant wait to see where it goes. Would it be possible for you to email me when you update? I found you on ff.net, but you dont have this stroy posted there. If you could just let me know, I'd appreciate it!

I will think about it. I have a few ideas and some of them written down I just don't know where to go from what I have. Anyway if and when I decide to post I will think about using you as my beta, because Iwill most definitely need one. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next update.
Sakura

I really liked the last chapter!

SessKag fan all the way, but I hate the idea of 'Yasha thinking he's worthless. He's annoying, but even I'm not that heartless.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!

-Dani.

o_0

Hot!....I'm glad that u didn't make Miroku such hentai that he liked Sess. I'm not against yaoi in fact I LOVE it-but I want him to be either or. Having Mirou like everything remotely pretty is boring. Mir is a wise hentai.

-Dani.

Great job, I have beenthinking of posting a story but I haven't worked up the courage to do it. What made you decide to? Anyway great work on the chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Sakura

luv it!!!!!

Alright moondoggie I'm giving you until the count of 10 to post another chapter 1........2........3.......4........5... OH look there goes sesshoumaru..... wait what was saying again oh well post soon. Now where did I put that fluffy's hair brush.

sorry haven't slept yet and kind of crazy.

BYE BYE

I really enjoy reading this! Can't wait for the next!

why?, why? did you stop write more plz!!! ^_^

This is a great story and I can't wait for your next update.
Sakura

I must say that I am really like the story so far and hope that you post soon. It is one of the better written story that I have read and it has a good feel to it. It is refreshing to read a story such as your.

What a hentai! I love it, and the way Inuyasha and Sesshy are acting. I wonder...will she mate with both and the Western Lands will be completely united? Not to mention som ehot threesome scenes!

-Dani.

whatever u decide just update soon

Awe this is so good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon :)

Yes, she is clueless isn't she. Her having survived this long is due to the efforts (and wounds) of allies...someone needs to spank her. heh

Coolieo nice work now update please oh and i saw no mistakes if i did i would tell you

Enjoyed reading the first two chapters they were great!!

My only critque would be a space between the paragraphs would help for flow during reading.