I have been looking for this for a long time and I wish it was update but I still love it anyways
isisco28- Sun 09 Mar 2008
Omgosh i loove your story very much it was one of the first fanfics i have ever read and i absolutely adore it. hope you upload more chapters soon, and if you need a beta or new ideas (since your experiencing writer's block) don't hesitate to ask, keep up the excelent work
missy71- Sun 17 Feb 2008
Well I just love your story. It has an original plot line. Hope that you continue it, I know that sometimes it is hard to keep thinking things up. Just know that we are here and we all can't wait to see what happens next!
SilverWolf- Mon 21 Jan 2008
i relay like this story it is one of my fav. pliz hurry and write more i cant wait bye ^_^
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Sat 20 Oct 2007
Update damn you, update!
Amy- Fri 31 Aug 2007
this a very good story i really hope you finish it.
oh a splendid chapter!
I love each and everyone of your fic's and hope to read more updates soon!
Ja Ne!
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Wed 25 Jul 2007
*Spotaneously burst into flames*
Whoa, man it is hot in here!
*Fans self and continues to read, but only makes it worse*
Damn, but that was one HELL of a lemon! Love it!
*Finally realizes she is on fire*
Well damn, look what you made happen. I hope you' re proud.... Seriously though, I really hope you are.
Now, if you excuse me, I must put myself out before I recieve 3rd degree burns.
*runs off screaming while friends chase her*
Hot hot hot....I'm glad you finally updated this story again. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
Chaos_Queen77- Fri 20 Jul 2007
AHHHH! i read it all in one night and went to hit the next chapter link only to discove it has not been posted yet. I about cried. *Teary eyes* Please post an other chapter soon it pains me to have to wait.
Chaos.
They had fun huh?
Metis- Wed 20 Jun 2007
I hope that, after the heat, she must freely accept him as a mate. No presumption on his part. He better learn to have a personality and empathy.
-pokes the computer screen-
Hey!
Hey you!
Yeah you!
Who else could I be talking to?
Hurry up and update!
Yes that's an order and no I will not leave you alone!
Update now!
Must know what will happen next so update now!
-pokes the computer screen again-
Did you hear me?
Then get to typing now!
-grins evily-
Ja Ne!!
I love it....Arrrgggghhh, hate cliffies!!!! Please update again soon.
Kawaii_Kilala- Tue 19 Jun 2007
Wow! it was nice you gave us sesshy's response, and not just Kags pov! And, why couldn't you have added the lemon to this chapter? it would have been a great chapter!!!!! well....great than it was, anyways...
Will you up-date as soon as you can!? PLEASE!?
TTFN!
joanne!
(ps, i gave birth to a little baby girl! now i have four boys and two girls! YAY! :-) )
Jean- Mon 18 Jun 2007
I am so glad you had time to gift your fans with another chapter. Excellent. Don't mess with an aroused woman in pain.
Hey! that was a short chapter no fair!!
-grumbles-
hurry and type the next chapter soon so I can find out how this will go about. Your so mean to make it a short chapter and to make me wait even longer for this!
Ja Ne!
ren- Mon 18 Jun 2007
So Sesshoumaru is finally here. Atlease the other yokais were smart and left. Stupid elements, so arrogant. PLease update soon
Red-Smartiez- Mon 18 Jun 2007
that was an awesome preview but i cant wait for the chapter!!!!!
PLEEEEEEASE PLEEEEEASE UPDATE FAST!!!! THANK YOU!! ^_^
P.S. lemons pweez
Cosmos Writer- Sun 17 Jun 2007
This is a great story, I love the plot line. One thing that I would look out for though is grammer, it's kind of a big deal. This shouldn't present a problem though, just run it threw word spell check. Well please update, I am looking forward to reading more. While you're at it, check out my storys too: One White Lily and First Through Your Eyes, Then Through Mine. The first is only one chapter long, but some positive feedback would get me moving, the second is a poem.
-slams fist down on to the desk angrily while knocking the mouse off the desk top clumsily and begins to growl out evily-
That is not even promted as a chapter woman! Get back to finishing that and updating as soon as possible!
It's not nice to leave your readers angry with such a short preview!
Get to work and make me happy!
-picks up the mouse and slams it down on the desk still fumming angrily-
Ja Ne!
-stalks away from the computer angrily to sulk off the fume-
darn you! hurry up and get back to updating as soon as possible I must know what happens next!!
Ja Ne!
Love it...can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope there'll be more action between our two fav. characters.
ren- Sat 16 Jun 2007
ohhh its getting interesting. a free for all battle. PLease update soon.
Kawaii_Kilala- Sat 16 Jun 2007
OH! poor kags! she wont be a virgin anymore after this!...or will she? lol, if i wasn't married, and i was kags, i would most likly jump on the chance to mate with sesshy! hes just so muscular and handsome! *starts to get lost in thoughts* lol! JK!
i cont wait till the Estrus stage! its just gonna be so much more fun! and i wonder how the other males will react when he shows up? will they just leave, or will he kill them?
well! TTFN!
joanne!
Metis- Sat 16 Jun 2007
Hope they all fail.
sleepy tuna fish- Sat 16 Jun 2007
how evil to stop at the good part XD
Megan Consoer- Thu 07 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
ooo... the metaphorical cat's out of the bag.
i'm anxious to see just how much of a problem Sesshomaru has with Kagome being Kagome. if she's in heat, i doubt he'll have a big one. err... (poor word choice)
anyway... *waiting for update*
Jean- Mon 14 May 2007
Welll now everyone knows. Sesshoumaru seems to hold on to his prejudices, Kagome's heat seems to be coming at a bad time, and the introduction of the Lady of the East is coming soon. Not a good time for chaos. Great chapter.
Yukino- Tue 01 May 2007
I've just notice that all your fanfics have Kerira. Who is that? The cat mononoke that Sango owns is named Kirara.
Your story is written well. It's just that some of the Japanese names has been misspelled like Sesshoumaru and Tetsusaiga. Most of the writers in ASS spells Inuyasha's sword as Tessaiga but this is wrong as this is not how it is actually written in Japanese romanization. It is written as Tetsusaiga and pronounced as Tessaiga.
For research, I suggest that you try watching the original Japanese version subbed by fansubbers. I don't trust the DVD's that are being sold by VIZ. I watched one episode which was released by them and it has a lot of errors. They haven't really gotten into the real context of the Japanese words.
I also suggest that you check out this site: http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha
This site contains the ongoing manga of Inuyasha. This is the real thing. The manga contains a lot of stuff that was not shown on the Inuyasha TV series and movies. For the translation I suggest you view the text version will all the original Japanese speech. Enjoy!
ShadowChick- Mon 30 Apr 2007
it's really good i like it but i do hav one question.. wut is a kijo? i've never heard that word before
ren- Tue 24 Apr 2007
wow. its getting hot but wheren't they in the middle of a battle? lol. awesome chapter but there were a few grammer and spelling mistakes here and there. but oh well. one thing that i thought was funny was that it took kagome a few minutes to explain what happened to her while it took 3 hrs to tell sango. not to mention that inuyasha was okay w/ just sitting around waiting for sango to get back. i look forward to ur next chatper.
OMG!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it....Finally, some action between sess and kag. Please update again soon. Thanks ;)
Crys777- Tue 24 Apr 2007
You mean You leve a cliffy ( Crying anima face) Please more soon!?
SesshysKagome- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Wow, I wasn't expecting sesshy to kiss kagome and I loved it as a surprise.
DarkAngel495- Tue 24 Apr 2007
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
oK, Now PleaSe uPdaTe?? i LoVe It!
I waNnA kNow WhaT wIlL haPpEn
NexT! ThAnKs!!
^^
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Thanks for updating! Poor Kagome, but Inuyasha is not worthy of her...
-Dani.
haley- Tue 10 Apr 2007
love the story, but what happened to using her fighting skills instead of the swords, and not being able to tell anyone?
haley- Tue 10 Apr 2007
love the story, but what happened to using her fighting skills instead of the swords, and not being able to tell anyone?
haley- Tue 10 Apr 2007
love the story, but what happened to using her fighting skills instead of the swords, and not being able to tell anyone?
This is torture! To read, "coming soon" it makes me think that either there are only going to be 2 chapters, or that you don't have those chapters and had an accident when adding your last one...
-Dani.
pwease update!
Jenn- Fri 06 Apr 2007
love your story but for some reason ch 18 is missing and you have two copies of ch 17
sesshou's gurl- Sun 01 Apr 2007
Update!!!! Now1!!!!!!!
Great chapter!!!Please update again soon.
Metis- Wed 21 Mar 2007
This ought to be interesting! Let's see how far Sess can shove his foot in his mouth. heh....she's still way too impulsive. But it's not your fault. That's how she unfortunately is.
It made sense but ti was kind of you to answer that for others; please update soon? WIll Sess realize why so many men want her?
-Dani.
ren- Wed 21 Mar 2007
Thank you for updating. Poor Kagome. Inuyasha is married and Sesshoumaru is being himself, an ass. There were a good number of gramtical and spelling errors. Have u tried grammer check on MSWord? I know it saved my butt a few good times. I look forward to ur next chapter.
Ren- Wed 21 Mar 2007
Geez!! U uploaded this chapter for a 3rd time. How many times are you goin to renew ch 17?!?! Its quiet annoying. I do like ur fic but everytime I c this fic i have to make sure its a new chapter or else I just get dissappointed over and over again.
Amber- Wed 21 Mar 2007
like i said before, amazing plotline...my eyes are aching for more!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
Amber- Tue 20 Mar 2007
well...i haven't quite finished everything written thus far...but this has to be the most developed story as of yet, with so much relevance kept with the actual manga plotline. by far the most developed in terms of characterization and just wowed me. keep up the good work...amazing...now i have to fulfill my itch in finding out the rest.
Mai- Mon 19 Mar 2007
I love it and please update asap!!
lover- Mon 19 Mar 2007
wow so cool i mean wow can not whait for some more!!
LOL...how interesting. I loved it!!! PLease update soon. I can't wait to read more.
Metis- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Kagome caved. How did 'Yasha survive for 200 years?! SOMEone should have swatted him by now.
Ren- Mon 12 Mar 2007
YEAH!!! They get to finally see each other again. Though what will Kagome do? Will she run or will she meet them head on? Great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
DarkAngel495- Mon 12 Mar 2007
WaT Will HappEn? WILL 'He'
rECOgniZe heR? oR wHAt? i CaNt
wAiT! oH iTS ETEMpTIng! iLL wAiT
for yOUR nExT uPdAtE!
WWTF sEE YoU
Metis- Sun 11 Mar 2007
She won't hurt him too badly, but his mouth is REALLY going ot put him in dutch! HAH!
Ooohhh...I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next. Please please update soon.
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Sun 11 Mar 2007
good chappie make more plz rawk on XD
Magik- Sun 11 Mar 2007
Good! I can't wait to see what happens!
DarkAngel495- Sat 10 Mar 2007
Oh pLeaSe uPdaTe sOoN!!!!!!!
^^ TTFR
DarkAngel495- Sat 10 Mar 2007
Oh pLeaSe uPdaTe sOoN!!!!!!!
^^ TTFR
I love the way the chauvinistic imbecil was repriminded...quite contrary and tiltillating!
-Dani.
Don't we girls know just how to kick some ass? ^_~
Interesting, thanks for updatingm'dear! [smiles benevolently like Miroku, groping for more chappies]
-Dani.
Metis- Fri 09 Mar 2007
The parties descending ought to make her palace more interesting. I look forward to Sess' reaction. And I'm sure there'll be some ego clashing as well. heh.
Ooohhh..please update again soon. I can't wait to read more sessxkag action. Please update soon. Thanks :)
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Thu 08 Mar 2007
hi ,
i very much liked chappie 15 it is excellent but pleaze SUBMIT NEW CHAPPIES
LUV a busy lady of the west,
Kagome-sama
Metis- Tue 06 Mar 2007
A fic of male ego deflating. I could get used to this.
Haley- Sat 03 Mar 2007
Love the story!!! i remember reading something exactly like this before instead of kagome turning into a demon they found sessomaru in stone and then he came to life and searched kagome out and they were at an archeaology site, but anyways. i looked for that story forever did you happen to edit the story or something? again absolutely love the story and can't wait to read more, are you in the process of editing some of the earlier chapters? i'm just wondering because it keeps popping up at the top^^ can't wait till you update!!
Chai- Sat 03 Mar 2007
Im so very excited about this fic!! I cant wait untill the next chapter!! I hope that you can update soon.
hoku- Sat 03 Mar 2007
hey!! i LOVE your story!! but when it says you've updated the is no new chapter. i dont know if your aware of this so i just wanted to inform you of this. cant wait for the new chap!!!!
=hoku
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! This is my favorite story, and I keep on wiating, and wiating....
-Dani.
it is evil to deprive me of your writing
jesse- Sat 03 Mar 2007
please update soon. can you email me when you update i would love to finish this story.
HOLY SHIT!!!!LOVED IT!...wait sjit isn't holy.....CHEESE IS! anyways plz update asap...i tottaly love this fic....how do you do it?? write such good fics...where do you get ur inspiration from?and how do you keep it from leaving you??
clock-winder- Wed 28 Feb 2007
master what can i do for you? please continue!
shavostorm- Wed 28 Feb 2007
I just love all of your story. It's a cool look for Kagome, and I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru will play out in it. Please cont. I can't wait!
elizabeth lowman- Tue 27 Feb 2007
i would love to read more about what happens next in the story.
Witchie SheWolf- Mon 26 Feb 2007
I love this story, and I wouldn't change a thing. I hope to keep reading soon... *hint hint*... but I understand that great works cannot be rushed. Excellent writing!
Aria-Chan- Sat 24 Feb 2007
Great story ^_^ I love seeing Kagome treated like she deserves :P I noticed one little mistake though, Kina you said, does not know how to read and write, while after you have her read the list that is on Kagome's desk. Just a little point. I love where you are taking this and I will continue following this story with anticipation :) Thank you very much for writing it. Arigato. xxxx Aria-Chan
I woke u[ this morning ex[ecting an update, I was so excited! Yes, you have me hooked. It's okay, you've done a good job of updating, I'm just getting greedy! 8-)
-Dani.
I love your writing, it's so interetsingly complex. Or is that your description? Anyhoo...me want more!
yeah, she can kick those guards butts! ^_^
-Dani.
Ren- Fri 23 Feb 2007
Oh so the cleanning has begun. At least there is some progress in this chapter. The last one was a bit boring. So much to do, so litlle time. I'm surprised that Kagome hasn't yet tested the guards to see who was reliable and trustworthy. Then she could send some around Japan to find the evil guy. Well, thanks for the update, I look forward to reading more in the future.
bluemoon_175- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I love this story and can't wait to read more so I hope you update asap please.
SUGOI! I got an update yesterday and TODAY! This was also long!^_^
ARIGATOU! And I love the thinking Kagome and now faithful servants-smart move on her part. I also had forgotten about mino lords and all that, it makes the tale more authentic, you are right, lands and positiosn were given as the ruler[s] deemed.
-Dani.
UPDATE SOON!
I luv it. Kagome can kick ass, be true to her beliefs and yet you didn't change her essential character.
his best beed room voice...XDDDDD I fell of my chair when I read that I love your fic update~!!!
Thanks for updating! Please write again soon and I want to know how her people and guards react.
-Dani.
heather- Thu 22 Feb 2007
i love this story please update soon
Metis- Thu 22 Feb 2007
/I/ would certainly hate to be jerked around and wish particular diseases and difficulties on whoever was doing the manipulating, gods or no. Questioning their parentage would make me feel better too! :)
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Thu 22 Feb 2007
HI i suggest KAGOME USE a FALSE name when she's writing the letter, telling her people, etc. I like ur fic so far keep up GOOD WORK and PLEAZE SUBMIT NEW CHAPPIES
LOVE, Lady Kagome-sama
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Thu 22 Feb 2007
HI i suggest KAGOME USE a FALSE name when she's writing the letter, telling her people, etc. I like ur fic so far keep up GOOD WORK and PLEAZE SUBMIT NEW CHAPPIES
LOVE, LAdy Kagome-sama
WAH!! I thought I had an update...guess you must have updated today real early in the morning and I thought it was yesterday. Too bad.
-Dani.
KAWAI! Strong Kagome, totally snarky! UPDATE SOON!
-Dani.
can't wait until she meets Sesshy!
Trice- Tue 20 Feb 2007
This was another good chapter. It is really starting to get good. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome and Sess finally meet. Until next chapter.
Trice- Mon 19 Feb 2007
This story is starting to get really good. I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to read when Sess comes into the picture.
kita- Mon 19 Feb 2007
up. date. soon. please.
ren- Mon 19 Feb 2007
I like this fic. The plot line is really interesting. The only complaint I have is that you have some spelling and grammatical errors. For example: you use their instead of there, to instead of too, etc. I look forward to reading more from you soon.
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Fri 16 Feb 2007
Dear chicke,
i 2 am a writer of fanfics' anyway please submit a knew chapter!
i have really come to like ur fic so far, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
from a mate of Sesshomaru A.K.A Fluffy sama,
Lady Kagome-sama
ashley_kun- Fri 16 Feb 2007
wwwrriiitttee mmmooorrree ppplllzzz!!!!!!
this is a good start i just wished that you would not make her a demon
i like when she stays kagome but can live through time looking like her self with all the extra power
Magik- Thu 15 Feb 2007
This is very good...I look forward to what you do with this!
It has potential and could be highly original. Looking forward to seeing where it is going to go.
anonnie mouse- Thu 08 Feb 2007
THAT HAD BETTER NOT BE HER BONES AND OUTFIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as long as it isn't and Sessy and Kags live in the end {together} please continue
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
btw you MIGHT want to cut down your long blocks of questions.....I think I skipped reading a few...
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