this is an awesome story but no offencee u can spell schedule lol so k i couldnt eather lol and heres another review please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please write more this is a asoma fanfic.

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there goes the start of reviews its good and sess is out of character a little

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

write more plz?!?!?!my mom puts limits on da computer and our "privacy service"decided dat the nxt chap wuz 2 risky 2 b on so it blocked it!!!!do u beleive dat!!! ps:peace+luv+respect=happiness

awsome story i cant wait for the next chapter

please update

I like it. I know there are a lot of stories with this kind of setting and all but i really enjoyed the way you are going about it. So get that next chapter out. I have not gotten reviews for my story Rebirth, darkness, and light. Then again it really doesn't bother me since i have been writing forever though i would appreciate knowing what people think. Anyway. Keep up and i cant wait for the new chapter.

oh i really hope you finish it it is funny

wow i like this story
OMG!
so when's the next update?

OMG PLZ UPDATE, UR STORY IS SO GOOD! PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE

PLEASE!!!!!..........UPDATE SOON!!!....

IM DIEING HERE!...lol...jk....BUT FOR REALS>>UPDATE!

This is a pretty good story! I look forward to reading more.

love it please update

hey up date please!!♥

come on!....please!!!!...update!...im diyong here!!..

hay i really like the whole swimming class, and sleeping in his bed thing. more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love you and your fan fics !!!!!!!!!!! update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I read what you have so far and I can't wait to read the rest

i like your story update soon

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You are so mean. I love the storry and would review regularly but you just stop wrighting_---- Starts to cry------_

its good and i think i started reading it before but i could be wrong or did u start over or am i crazy..............please up-date soon!!!!!!!!!!!

its good and i think i started reading it before but i could be wrong or did u start over or am i crazy..............please up-date soon!!!!!!!!!!!

Ray,
So far your story is really good. I would love to read more of it. If you want I can be a beta if you want. Think about and let me know. Sorry about the other review I sent my computer is really guy that's all. keep on keepin' on. Bye and please update. Thanks. Jamie

I really like this story. I cant wait till true feelins start to show. I also love that Kagome is a demoness.

Hey really am loving the story. I love the fact u made kagome an inu demon. Also i love the fact it takes place in high school. I love to read these types of storys.
So can u gimmie gimmie the rest of the chap.
Jah bless

Hey, I heart this fic soo much its adorable, lol ive been waiting for like ever for an update and i noticed it and im like OMG! updates!!!, keep it goin plz your doing a really good job. Luvies

Hey, I heart this fic soo much its adorable, lol ive been waiting for like ever for an update and i noticed it and im like OMG! updates!!!, keep it goin plz your doing a really good job. Luvies

do you have spell check or do you have to use a wp like notepad? i ask because there were a lot of spelling errors. i've listed some of them in hopes that it will help you out:
Squedual – schedule
Moned – moaned
Sense – I think you meant since
Either – either
Barrow - borrow
Deamon – demon (yeah, that one gives me trouble too)
Instead – instead
Girls – girl’s (the way you used it, it should be possessive not plural)
Extreamly – extremely
Collage – college
Capartment – compartment
Stairing – staring
Fasinating – fascinating
Armrest is one word
Sprawled – I think you meant scrawled
Cabie – cabbie
Expencive – expensive
Buzzar – buzzer

lol i really like this one,please keep writing lol.
Sharilynn

I love this fic!! update soon. u did a really good job.

Do not be discouraged Ray. Remember, the one who strives and thrives on knowlegde is the one who will most likely survive the longest. Please email me if you ever find the need to talk to anyone. I would also greatly appreciate it if you would look over some of my stories. Perhaps I will email you one?
Yours Truly
Cadence

This is like another good good really good story please write another i want to see what happends

way to funny....more chapters please!!

holy shit awesome fanfic cant wait till the next chappie is up e-mail me if u can ttyl cya

holy shit awesome fanfic cant wait till the next chappie is up e-mail me if u can ttyl cya

so luv the story i hope uk update soon please really great or i will get my revenge on u mahahaha

grrr..you left off at a good part..what happens next..you are a good writter love the story

I like the way your going with this its really getting goood Keep up the great work!

YAY!!!!! another chappie!!!!!!! *does happy dance* LOVED IT! keep on writing...love love love love loved it!

You get cookies!!!! *Hands over cookies*

Update soon. Great story.

this is a really good story! Keep up the awesome work!

i know there isnt mush in this fic yet but u really love it so far its the whole kagome being a bad ass type thing and i love it please try to update it quickly all the fics i like are really slow lately
thx with luvies BmC

plz update soon

Update soon. Very good.

can you please write more

It's earphones not earbuds.....other than that i have no qualms. Update soon!!


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Please review soon I can't wait!!!

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! keep up the awsome work!!! you get cookies *hands over some cookies*

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UpDatE sOoN!!

ThaNks!!

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This was a nice story. I read your other one too. Sticks and stones may break my bones but chains and whips excite me. It was rather good as well. And when I say rather I mean that as a BIG complement! I really don't express my feelings well so parden me if it sounds a little cruel. I look forward to your next chapter. By the way I'm in ninth grade too. The work can be a bitch but when you go to college and get some high paying job, then you can give all your employees lots of paper work! Just remeber it all works out in the end!
Yours Truly
Aki-kawa

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i lOvE iT!! i eVeN lOVe uR lemony

OnE!! pLEAsE UPdAtE sOOn!!

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HAHA! She call's Sesshi-wesshi blondie!!1 Funny... ok, i'm kinda hyper, sorry. I have a good excuse, i've been in japan for the past couple of weeks. Japan+Angel=hyper. Japan+Angel+watching Inuyasha everyday+finding Sesshomaru key chains, etc= OMFG! HYPER, HYPER, HYPER, HYPER.... and etc. Anyway, go girl! keep writing!!!

Continue this one as well your a really good writer

God DAMN! What got me was that he gave her his pencil, he was so focoused on her beautiful he lost his mind, loves it! damn, need more.

Can't wait for the next chapter .Hurry and update

Can't wait for the next chapter .Hurry and update

I like it. Do you need a beta? If you do, just email me.

he handed her the pencil he was using.....i love it lol now he doesn't have a pencill wat a goober update soon like right now

cool. i like it now ahem update and either update more chappies at once or make longer

Blondie that was funny.. Haven't heard him called that yet..
Good start so far.. Seems to be an interesting story..
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens between Kags and Blondie.. LOL..
Hurry and update ..
Take Care
mari