Loved the story, when you described them laying on the bed with Rin I was sure that Kagome was going to be shot or something haha..

I was thinking, maybe the Merchant of Venic?

Thanks for the great read!

-Alyssa

i was literally crying in the ending it's so sad plaese ake a sequal

you r so fantastic... i think i love you.*pu

You should name the story the Taming of the Sesshoumaru. Do a complete reversal of the original story. It'd be hilarious. Keep it going!

Dude. Naraku should have TOTALLY been Mercucio and you should have made him do the Queen Mab speech. That just keeps running through my head over and over and over again and let me tell you one thing

It rocks.

Well, I really enjoyed the story. I read about how you are planning to write a "Taming of the Shrew" version. I know that play, and I think it will be perfect. Although, do you really think Kagome can be tamed?

Well, I think you did a great job, love your writing style. Keep on writing!

P.S. Maybe Hamlet? *grins*

Aw that was so cute. I loved it i really did. Later!

I am curious as to why you suddenly decided to do Shakespear...I thought your story was good, but I think that there were a few jokes in there that your audience might not get, like with the on your back thing with the nurse. I had discussed that play with a group of highschool kids, and none of them got it until they were told. Not saying that people are stupid, its more of an 'of the era' thing. If you played off the jokes a bit more, you might have people 'lol'ing. I also think that, with the way you ended it, you should write a sequal. ^_^

lol, that was cute...the love letters were kinda over the top though, very OOC. over all it was a good fic. very unique, i really like the idea of a Shakespearian Series. My next suggestion? A Midsummer Nights Dream. You can have all the characters in it! you can have SessKag InuKik and SanMiro lol, the roles are totally up to you! i could help if you want ^.^ i've always wanted to try this, but i never got around to it...gimme a holler if you like my idea! even if you don't you've given me the inspiration to start it finally! thx XD

I liked it, I'm a big fan of Shakespeare and The 12th night has always been a favorite of mine that or Hamlet

OMG I LOVE YOU!! *glomps shakespere* Muahahaha...I love this ending much more than the original. >3 And I would kill to see Taming of the Shrew. I saw that play on "Shakespear on the Lake" at Lake Tahoe one summer. It was done as a comedy, and I instantly fell in love with it. As for another play? Hmm...cant really do MacBeth... Othello...can't remember the plot to that one.. wait...YES Do Othello :D I member now x3...but... It'd be all angsty -.-;;. Oh well, twist the plot >3 myahahahaha. Good job! Keep on Truckin!

I loved it! I was worried about the ending, since Romeo and Juliet die, but I liked this ending. I didn't want Sesshoumaru and Kagome to die! I would have punched my dad if he started screaming at me like that. I mean honestly, wanting to kill little Rin? I liked how you portrayed Sesshoumaru's father too, he seemed more understanding than Kagome's parents. I can't wait until the next installment. What's this one going to be? I haven't read any other Shakespeare play other than Romeo and Juliet. I wonder if these will count?

Oh man do Taming of the Shrew! That would be awesome! ^__^

aww nice story. i'm glad you didn't make them kill themselves though. too tragic XD

i think you did a great job at this and you should do another of shakespeers plays. good luck on your future work!

OO I love it. It was cute. I think an As You Like it, and Love's Labor Lost would be pretty fun I'd like to see a Twelfth Night but I can't figure out how it would be done.

Looking forward to the next one and chapter in Innocent till Proven Gulity

Pretty good. Honestly though, I thought you were going to kill them off. Anyway, great job!

I love it , at least they aren't dead, like the Romeo and Juliet novel

I love it , at least they aren't dead, like the Romeo and Juliet novel

That was totally awesome.. I loved reading it.. You did the story proud..
I like your ending better then the orginal..LOL..
Great story and u should continue with writting these onshots.. I think others will enjoy as much as I have,,
Cant wait for the next one..
Take Care
Mari

Wow... this is a really amazing story. Great Job! ^^

Very fantastic story I can't wait to read more of your stories, I have also read most of your stories and they are fantastic too so keep up the good work on them. :^)

Nice. since I am a hopeless romantic, I am grateful you took creative licence and changed the ending from the tragedy.

Hmmm...I like your other suggestion. The Taming of the Shrew sounds like it could be fun. What about the A Midsummer's Night, orpossibly Othello (Assuming you also take license with that one)

Loved it! I would love to see A Midsummer Night's Dream or The Tempest!