oh my gosh this was soo good!! better infact to the point where i started to tear!! i know lame but thats just how good i thought it tobe!! u need and i mean NEED to update and fast!! i wanna know what happens!!

wow O.O bitching about everyone who gives you a bad rating.. wooot.. ego getting big? maybe she/he gave you a low rating because of all the clichés? or maybe she/he doesn't like your writing style? or maybe because she/he got annoyed by your huge ego?

I really like this story the plot is really interesting and i cant wait for Kagome to wake up. Please update as soon as you can =)
Luv Jesiica Your reader and fan

I really like this story the plot is really interesting and i cant wait for Kagome to wake up. Please update as soon as you can =)
Luv Jesiica Your reader and fan

Hello there,

First off I would just like to say that I love your style of writing. It is very fluid and it transistions very well.
Second, I really liked the last scean where Sesshomaru told off Kagrua.
Third, I am sure that you get alot of this, and I am sad to say that I sometimes get a little impatient, but can you please update soon. I can't wait to read what happens. *rolls eyes at self*
Sorry about that.
Any Way Love the Story and I can't Wait.

hey,
i love they way u totally wrote a whole chapter about that girl that was really mean. lol good job!! ok now about ur story. I LOVE IT!! it is the best i have ever read..please hurry and write the rest of ur fanfic.
luv lindsey

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Great chapter, I loved it ^_^ I hope you update soon...

Forgot to add one little thing: my friend and I will try our best to get your rating up =) You really deserve it woman!

Bye for now!

Hey! I'm reviewer's friend... yeah, we both read your fic together so I wanted to have time to give my own review.

She pretty much said everything that I wanted to say, so I'll just add on to it.

As Noacat and your other reviewers said, don't let that hater get you down. People are stupid, they like putting people down because they can't come to grips that their own life is pathetic.

Just keep writing, darling! We all love your fic, looking through all your reviews you have yet to receive a flame, let alone a constructive criticism, so keep it up!

Your writing is fantastic and I honestly don't know how to express how much I love this fic. God knows, we need more original fics like this. There's just too much cliche/overdone plots out there (like, Kag sees Inu kissing Kikyo, Kag runs to Sessho, Sessho comforts her and Rin gets sick, Sessho gets Kag to take care of her, they fall in love, etc etc). I honestly cant stand it when i see those O.o

Hey! I just wanted to comment on your awesome fic. Don't worry bout that person giving you a hard time. It happens to a ton of authors and with a fic as good as yours it was only a matter of time when someone saw it, got pissed because you're just that good, and wanted to bring you down.

In a way, be happy that the person is rating you down, I think it's actually helping to attract more readers. Cuz people just look and say "wtf, 1000 ratings?" and check the fic out. It's just sad really that the person is soooo desperate to try and get you down that they'd actually try to rate you low that many times.

So if you little idiot is out there, you're actually helping her by doing this. ^____^ We'd actually start thinking that you're a fan by helping the author out so much. All you're doing is attracting more readers and getting more support for the author and more people pissed at you. You don't see anyone taking your side, right?

Update soon, and forget that little idiot out there. She's just a immature little pre-adolescent with too much time on her hands.

how could he!!!! anyways it just makes the story seems interesting....i like your story and it's the best one so far!!! hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.... :)

Damn you Kagura and your slutyness!!!

Great chapter! update soon!

*second day she is cheerful again* Upped the ratings! Good chapter my dear.

Don't let idiots get you. Ireth said that she'll be with me for raising your ratings so we'll do our best! *peace sign*

not enough my friend, that chapter was not enough...but it'll do for now lol.
chapters are never long enough when you're into it.
to sum it all up:
-Inutaisho, killed how? who?
-Kagome... how long till she awakens?
-Sesshoumaru is a nervous wreck
Kagura....eh...no comment?

I love your story. I also really like te way you write. Your story just flows really well please update wen you can. thank you for shareing your story!!!!!!!

Hey, what a great story! This fic definitely deserves waaaaay better than an 8 rating. I have to say, I was drawn to this story because I was weirded out at how much ratings it got... I mean, 1000+ rating for just 2 chapters? Goodness! Not even the best of the best fanfic writer can boast of that!

But after reading your Author's Note, it explained a lot. That's really sad that someone's giving you all this crap. I agree with Noacat (love her fics by the way, you gotta read em if u havent yet) that you should be flattered by all this attention. As they say, there's a fine line between love and hate. Who know's? Maybe the person hates you so much that she might actually learn to love your fic xD

I do disagree when Noacat said that you're sad by all this. I don't know where she picked it up from but I think you're really more amused by all this fiasco. Just keep doing what you're doing now, head up, chin high, and ignore the pathetic lil person out there. She's not worth the dirt under your feet =)

It's great that you updated so soon. Kudos to you woman for not letting that creep get you down. ; )

Ignore that 'haha' fool - surely they have no idea what amazing work is!!! This fic is wonderful, and i can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
~Sandreline

I'm glad you updated your wonderful story ^^ I will await till your next one.

Omh! This is such a good story! It kinda reminds me of one of my stories 'Apples and Cinnamon' ...

You have amazing spelling and gramer...Character portrayal is very well done as well...

I also think you are handiling the flamer well! ...

Most people would just get pissed off and suck but not you! Stick it to the man...er...person? ...

Anywho...great work on your story!

I really enjoy reading this!...

I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru is going to dig himself out of this hole when Kagome wakes up!...

But don't you think she might be a little understanding? ... I mean...he was being pressured to take a wife...and he obviously loves Kagome...

Just as long as he doesn't love Kagura then the world should all be cool!...

right? ...

Well anyways, terrific job and I hope you can update again soon! ...

Ja Mata! ...

From Sesshoumaru's Most Beloved Fiend: Ashley *winks*

Ooo, I really hate cliffies, but I really like your story, you evil, evil person >.

Anywho, I hope that annoying person gets what she deserves.

Update Often so I don't have to panic! ^.^

~zen

ooooooooooh another good chapter =) yeah, isn't it cool that we share similar names? and omg this person who's pulling down your ratings really has no life. when i first reviewed, your story was at a nine, but then only a couple hours later it's down to a 7! honestly, how low can they go, spending so much time trying to lower the ratings of a good author? anyways, hope to see you update soon!

In a way you should almost be flattered that someone hates you so much. Seriously, they devote their every waking hour to hating you. To me, people like this exist solely for my amusement. Because they really are quite funny. And anyway, it takes way more energy to hate them back than to laugh at them.

Just think of all the hours they've wasted rating you down and leaving nasty reviews. That's time they'll never get back... Sad really, someday they'll realize (hopefully) how much time they've wasted on such a pointless pursuit. Best to just ignore them, or treat them as pleasantly as possible. (I find courtesy enrages idiots to such a spectacular level that it's much like watching a Fourth of July fireworks display gone wrong. You're amused and saddened at the same time.) In any event, keep writing and don't let haters get you down.

Wow. Please continue. Soon.

Daaang girl, you update nice and fast! Glad to see you're still up and running despite that little bitch's pathetic attempts to get you down.

I'm still all for this story, girl! 10/10 for you as usual! Update soon baby!

This is a great story and I can't wait for your next chapter. I read the preview and it sounds like it will be great. I'm just sad that about what happened to Kagome and the Sesshoumaru has to marry Kagura. EWWW!!! Poor Sesshoumaru.
Anyway great chapter and can't wait for the next one.

awsome please update soon

Psh, don't look at the ratings, in my opinion they're a stupid feature because they give ppl the perfect opportunity to abuse them. I still give you a 10/10.

And to that person giving you such a hard time, fuck her =) They apparently have nothing better to do. Jeez, it's really sad to see how stupid humans can really be.

Just continue writing your story and pay no attention to that idiot. I'll visit her profile at fanfiction.net one of these days and give I'll give her a piece of my mind, so dontya worry.

3 Your FIC!

i'm sorry that someone is giving you such poor ratings - i think you have an excellent story, and i hope you'll keep updating =D i'll be waiting ;)

Hahahahaha, yeah Ireth, I commented on her self-review too. I made up an account at fanfiction.net just for her so I could leave a little flame on her story.

I doubt that she's smart enough to actually listen to my advice though *sigh* We'll just have to endure her repulsive presence I guess.

I agree with royalbk. I looked at that person's profile at fanfiction.net and I almost laughed when I saw her story. She wrote a review for her own story, can you believe that?! I laughed so hard, and here that person is accussing you of rating your own self. What a poor little hypocrite she is =)

I'll be right along royalbk's side and try to raise your ratings. Looking at your reviews, someone said that you even had a perfect 10 before clumsy little-what's her face- lowered your score.

But I'm glad to hear that you're not affected by all this, ULTIMATE KUDOS TO YOU GIRL! Don't let a little ten-year-old control your life, just ignore her. I'm sure she's just begging for some attention. I almost feel sorry for her, actually..... not. People like her need to grow up and just LEAVE US THE HELL ALONE!

So if you're reading this, clumsy girl that kills, just stay in fanfiction.net... this place is for QUALITY FICTION ONLY FOR QUALITY READERS... not poor little girls who hold an illogical grudge like you.

*is utterly cheerful in her intentions to murder idiot reviewers* Just rated this fic (ten of course) and I think I'll rate it again because sincerely I can't stand people who give their opinions based on God knows what nonsense.

This fic is really good - I like the summary and can not wait for her to wake up. *grins* It's been a long time since I've seen Sesshoumaru properly tortured and I think I need to remember the satisfyoing feeling of Sesshoumaru feeling guilty for what he did to Kagome. (the what is different for fics but the feeling is the same. Ah the sheer evilness!)

Cheers. Can't wait for an update. And don't worry - if I see those ratings drastically decreasing II'll raise them again. Had one of those people do that to me too so I know what you feel.

^_^

hmmm very interesting...indeed. now, will they know that she was attacked and who attacked her? ahh i can't wait. i like sesshoumaru in this fic.

Looks like this is going to be a good story so far.. Can't wait for the next chapter.. Plese hurry and update..
take Care
Mari

I like the being of your story I hope the stupid person who wrote that review didnt turn you off of writing this story. Please continue to write it for it is awsome, it usually takes me a while to like a story but you got me hooked after the first paragraph.

A great start to your story and a tantalizing summary to the upcoming chapters. I think it will be a brilliant story and you are a top 10 author in my opinion. Also, a great scathing commentary to the immature idiot you spoke of in your notes. He or she is just jealous of your writing abilities. Update soon and as often as you can. I hope you will be able to finish this with a happy ending...I just love happy endings *sniffles and smiles* Great job. :)

That really sucks that someone is doing this to you... and to answer you, "haha" I'm one of those people who's giving Lingering Nostalgia repeated ratings. I
find myself obligated to do so since her ratings were originally a perfect 10 before you came along.

So don't accuse Lingering Nostalgia of rating
herself. I'm the one who's trying to jack up her ratings back to their original high score.

And yes, please follow her advice and do find a hobby.
My god, if my life were as pathetic as yours I'd commit suicide before continuing such a pitiful existence.

That was great and i love the preview! Sounds like it's going to be a great story! It is just the kind of story i like. Please update soon!

i think that this story has great promise, and i cannot wait for the next chapter.

Well done! Well done! I can't wait to read more of your story, it is very original and very promising! 10/10 for you =)