I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Violetcarson- Sun 30 Dec 2007
This storry RULES!!!!!! I love it soooo much!! And the ending, was absolutely perfect. Amazingly wonderful!
nice story, very good
That was so .....great...wow. Only thing is, kagome got really occ at the end, when she said yes. For me anyways, but hey, it was still great. I would love to have more to read but it doesnt need anything else.
Ami- Tue 07 Aug 2007
It was great, ended fast and had a few too many errors in it but that was covered by the good story line. Bravo!
wow!!! anamzing story! I just loved it. so unique and beautfully written. i loved the disply of emotions and everything! i just adored it!
Pincess Tsukiko- Mon 25 Jun 2007
That was a good chapter i enjoyed it
OMG!
That was amazing!
It was so sweet, I loved it!
It was an original, amazing story.
Brava!
~Sandreline
judzea- Wed 06 Jun 2007
I thought this story different and resfreshing. Of course, the grammar and spelling was not quite up to par but overall, it was a very interesting and captivating tale.
Well done :-)
SesshysKagome- Tue 05 Jun 2007
I loved the ending, it had that special something that makes a story great.
Azgbabygrl- Wed 16 May 2007
OMG wow ... everytime you add a new chapter i get hooked all over again and just feel like reading all the chapters you put up all over again lol ... keep up the good work... i really can't wait for the next chapter ... please update soon
VioletCarson- Tue 03 Apr 2007
This is very, VERY, good. That does not come easily from me. It was amazing! Keep writing!
Hazeru- Sun 01 Apr 2007
Recenlty I was skimming the website and discovered your story. I must express how refreshing it is to read a orignal plot like yours. I enjoyed every single chapter and then reread them. But, then a horrible thing happened the story left me in suspense. J/k Please don't leave me and the many others who look forward to reading your story in suspense so long. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us.
Take care,
Hazeru
Hazeru- Sun 01 Apr 2007
Recenlty I was skimming the website and discovered your story. I must express how refreshing it is to read a orignal plot like yours. I enjoyed every single chapter and then reread them. But, then a horrible thing happened the story left me in suspense. J/k Please don't leave me and the many others who look forward to reading your story in suspense so long. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us.
Take care,
Hazeru
helikesitheymikey!- Fri 30 Mar 2007
SESSY HAD BETTER NOT HAVE KILLED HIMSELF OR GOTTEN HIMSELF KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean this beautiful story would be ruined if either he or kag die.....
PLEASE DON'T DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!
angela- Fri 30 Mar 2007
I like your story so update plz! :)
Wow this is really good! are you going to continue?
Inuzands- Fri 30 Mar 2007
I have really enjoyed the store this far. You've done a great job of sucking me in and reducing me to one who begs for updates. :) Please please continue!
jestergirl- Fri 30 Mar 2007
This story was wonderful , I loved it.
azgbabygrl- Mon 19 Mar 2007
OMG this is such a good story... i got hooked into it like right away ... ican't wait till you update again... keep up the good work
khandi- Thu 08 Feb 2007
please please please update soon this story is under my skin now ans i need to know how it ends so please update soon
helikesitheymikey!- Tue 06 Feb 2007
woah..... so what year is it???? Like, I'm betting a couple hundred before the modern era???
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is Kag gonna adopt Shippo or Rin or both????{maybe in the modern era}
Can she talk??? or most importantly will she???
Will Sess and Inu meet her in the future{modern era}???
Will Kag go to America and get involved in business and own her own company in the modern era and then meet Sessy and Inu in a discussion involving their companies????
DEFINATELY UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
adding my request cough>::gets down on knees:: plea!!! to continue with this story!!!
zen- Mon 05 Feb 2007
I love the story so far. Update Soon!!!
~zen
mai- Mon 05 Feb 2007
yay...another chapter finished...keep the good work up!..we're all waiting for the next chapter!..... :)
angela- Mon 05 Feb 2007
U-P-D-A-T-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I give you much credit very original. Please update.
purp1ebabe- Mon 05 Feb 2007
so did kagome escape or are they still trapped...
sins- Sat 03 Feb 2007
AWWW please update your story is so ORIGANAL AND I LOVE I T!!!!!!!!!!
Mars- Fri 02 Feb 2007
Great story! Very original! Love it! However there are a few grammatical errors like your use of past and present tenses and some spelling mistakes. But I hope you continue. Cant' wait till your next chapter! thanks
Mars- Fri 02 Feb 2007
Great story! Very original! Love it! However there are a few grammatical errors like your use of past and present tenses and some spelling mistakes. But I hope you continue. Cant' wait till your next chapter! thanks
lady fairy goth- Thu 01 Feb 2007
omg how many chapters are gonna be in this story are we going to go to kagome pov next and when are they going to meet again and i think its unfair that sesshoumar cant mate kagome any way continues and update soon cause i loves this story
katya- Thu 01 Feb 2007
omg, that was an amazing fic. i hope that you continue with it.
katya- Thu 01 Feb 2007
omg, that was an amazing fic. i hope that you continue with it.
island_girl- Thu 01 Feb 2007
You have to complete this story. So far, it is one of the best stories I have read; and I have read a lot of fics. Your idea is so original, I've never read anything like this before and for that I thank you. It seems as though every story out there had already been told. But this is ORIGINAL. Thank you! I appreciate that the grammer and punctuation were well done. There is nothing I hate worse than struggling to read a story because the author can't spell or punctuate. Keep up the excellent work Koimiko. I love your story.
no no no nnnnnoooooo. you can't end like that I just won't let you. I have to know if they find her if she's really mute, or if Kikyo gets torn apart and ripped to shreds.
helikesitheymikey!- Thu 01 Feb 2007
PLEASE TELL ME THAT ISN"T IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!?!?!?!?!?
I NNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KKKKKKKKKKKKKKNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did Kagome find the well???
and please tell me Kikyo got either sealed to a tree for all eternity or decapitated....
Trice- Thu 01 Feb 2007
This is a great story. I hope you continue this story. I am already wanting to read more. I like the spin you put on this story and I really would like to see how it ends.
angela- Thu 01 Feb 2007
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
purp1ebabe- Thu 01 Feb 2007
so interesting... poor kagome being sold off. i wonder wut is happenin w/ her. i hope to see the next chappy soon!
Fluffy- Thu 01 Feb 2007
Its soo sad! Poor Kagome getting whipped =( And poor Sesshy for being such a jerk. Lol =P
Great Story btw
mai- Thu 01 Feb 2007
it's soooo sad... i was gonna cry! next chapter please.. :)
fluffy-kins- Wed 31 Jan 2007
Ack! My heart! X.X
misuti Kaze- Tue 30 Jan 2007
It is a wonderful story. I would gladly read more, if you could send me the chapters? or update on a-single-spark? thank you
misuti Kaze- Tue 30 Jan 2007
It is a wonderful story. I would gladly read more, if you could send me the chapters? or update on a-single-spark? thank you
Marilyn- Wed 24 Jan 2007
please continue! I beg you oh great one! I love it! Only the first chapter and I have been sold. I must know what happens next! Don't make me suffer, please continue!
Marilyn- Wed 24 Jan 2007
please continue! I beg you oh great one! I love it! Only the first chapter and I have been sold. I must know what happens next! Don't make me suffer, please continue!
eila- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I like your story -nod nod-
cant believe kikyo did that.
I wonder what will happen to kagome now that shes sold... will she still have her spitfire?
CottonCandyIceCream- Sun 21 Jan 2007
ok my curiousity has been captured, can't wait to see the next chapter, if you poast another one, liked what you had hough, very intreaging (and if that is spelled wrong i can't spell worth a shit b/c my head is filled with all the stuff i just studied for chem lol)
lady fairy goth- Sun 21 Jan 2007
omg can you please continue and make it longer than a one shot i have to know what happens to kagome surley sesshoumaru go's after kagome i have to know please
YukiTuki- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Aah! Continue! Please! Sesshoumaru has to get Kagome back! T___T
Poor Kagome! Here come Sesshoumaru to save the day! :D
Kara- Sun 21 Jan 2007
I loved it. I was very good. You must make more chapters. You can't just leave it like that. ^-^
sweet- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Please do a squeal!!! The ending has great clif hanger
Gentleillusions- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Oh! Your story is soooo good and the theme is so sad. Plz, continue updating!
dawn- Sun 21 Jan 2007
oh i thought this was wonderful!!!!!!!! Id love for you tp post more! i would like to know what will happen and what has happened! everything!!! please! its great!!!
mangadreams- Sun 21 Jan 2007
luv the start:)
oh please keep writing.. was kagome a servent to them or something. i want too know, was she and sesshoumaru friends in any way. what happens
.........>.> Is there going to be a follow up to this? Because this story was Frosted Flakes!! If you're going to update, update soon!!
Black_Sakura_Blossum- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Either im really emotional right now or this was a really great fic because i cried!!!
It was so sad but very descriptive, you have to write another chapter please, please, please
Kimonno Rose- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Don't stop there please. This story should be longer. It was so sad and I think that it should have a happy ending. Please continue the story. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!
Oooooh! Sounds interesting. I'd love to see some more chapters!
Please?
you simply must post the next chapter of this...how can you leave us hanging like that? that is cruel. Please update.
kuma- Sun 21 Jan 2007
omg i love it update soon please
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