This is a very interesting story. I really like the poem and how it sometimes reflected what happend in the story and sometimes not. I adore it when Kagome becomes more than human. Please continue with the story.

strange but good. okay really strange but like i said it is good.

I like the story. Kind of sad that it is only a one-shot. Would have liked a little more story to it! But like it none the less.

Sweetness!

This is pretty good .