it was great but u should add onto it

This story is a rip-off the romance novel Suddenly You by Lisa Kleypas. You have the exact words except for the changed names. That's called plagiarism, m'dear.

I really like this fiction it's not lacking interest it develops. so far this story has set my mind into hopefully reading more upcomming chapters very soon. excellent work keep it up!!

that was an awesome chapter can't wait for more chapters. Hope to see more soon.

this stroy is so great!!! i love it! u r a wonderful writer. please update ASAP!

I enjoy the story line. I have saved the link to your story and will watch for updates. Just a few questions... Is this set in England in the 1800's??? Seemed that way to me (I like it). Also, in one spot you said Kagome was 21, then she was 25 in the next chapter. Sess said he was 35, then you had Kagome thinking he looked young for 31 in the very next sentence.

I'm saying these things to hurt your feelings, I think you write beautifully and have the talent to put your imagination into words. I have imagination, but sorry to say my biggest talent is the ability to remember details in the stories I read and especially in the stories I like and follow.

Just a helpful hint, it is easier to read stories that the paragraphs have spaces between them and that the paragraphs are broken up and not just run on and on. Your paragraphs are broken up and don't run on and on, but there is no space between them. Don't get me wrong... I'll still be reading your story cause I think it is really good, but it would just be easier on my old eyes if there are spaces between paragraphs.

Well, that's all I can think of. Please keep up the good work. Hope to see an update soon.
Rhonda

love this review if you could e-mail me that would be great.

this fic is really good so far! i starngly agree that you should keep going on this story!! well entill next time.

I like it. It has a lot of potential and I think you should definiately continue.

i like it so far keep it up

Yeah, interesting beginning. Let's see what comes next.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!