I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I think this story has a lot of progress, and the reason why i didn't reply before was because i bacame a member or learned of this site after you first started this story....I really like the plot, what i can make out of it anyways....and hope you continue it soon....
And i noticed in your AN that your stories seem to come to a stop for a while at the third chapter....lol
Up-date soon please!
ttfn!
joanne

please update soon...

More Please I Want To Read MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As you stated that chapter does have both its weak points and its strong points. I do believe that you are making Kagome look a little TOO childish, like on the spoiled rotten EXTREME side.

Also, your Sesshomaru needs a little bit of work, one momment he is concerned about her knowing about her family, the next he is saying he doesnt give a damn about the 'wench's feelings' which is so contridictory its mad.

I cant believe you got three reviews, when I post my first story, I got three reviews, but only after I posted three chapters, so you have a very good story going so far ^____^

Cant wait till the next chapter, Peace.

No matter what is said and done, this story is your story and you can and have every right to ask what people so far think about it. Yes, please do give us a chance to get into the story, but opinions, whether good, bad, at the beginning or end of the story, are always welcomed 'cause it only makes you a stronger person.

This is a great story and I think that you should continue to update. Many people won't start to update till later on, about four or five chapters into it. This is because they want to see that the story is actually going some place. And when they see that your story actually had truthful facts in it they will want to read more. Anyway alot more people read your fics then you might think. Many people really don't understand the value that authors put into the reviews. I personally really like where this story is going. I think that it is great and hope to read more.

I read your story and I do love it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please do not discontinue. There is a lot of wonderful creativity and potential outcomes to this beautiful story of yours.

well I really like this story and would love to read more soon.

Hey, I really do like your story so far, but there doesn't seem to really be much point to a review because you haven't really written much yet. Plus, in my experience, people don't generally review or even read a story until it's got at least 6 chapters and a 15,000 word count. I read this story on a whim and loved it and will keep reading it as long as you keep updating.

I just read your story, and I like it. I'm sorry if we aren't reviewing. It's unique and I can tell you put your heart into your writing, its refreshing. I hope you continue writing. Ja ne~ Eila

I know that it can seem unfair to no one to update (sry it took so long ^.^') But I hope that you decide to update... Cliffy's are evil ya know?

Good Luck~

~zen

So far this is starting out to be a great story. I cannot wait for the next chapter (or installment - volume 2).

Wow, what a great story so far I am really impressed, one of the best startings I have read in awhile. Also, you go into good detail enough that I can actually see it happening. Kudos to you for taking that extra time and effort to make your story really stand out.

There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that can be easily overlooked, and there was something else I noticed....

But I forgot ^.^; so it cant be that important.

Anywho to finish off, great story, cant wait till your next installment. ^____^

can you write more please

please update ASAP!!! GREAT STORY!!! ^_^