this was a fantastic read. I really enjoyed the way the story flowed and the characters were phenominal. I cannot wait to see if there will be more. I look forward to reading more from you on this.
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Wed 29 Aug 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Where's Kagome?! Did she really go back to her time, or is she elsewhere?
Please don't leave us hanging too long!
Yukilunny598- Wed 01 Aug 2007
Awh come on you guys/girls arn't fair. you left the cliffys agian.
omg! okay I finally found time to read your story line! it is really good and well written but when you type the dialect try and re-read it so you find the missing words.
I hope you update more soon!
Ja Ne!
swtdrm01- Wed 25 Apr 2007
Wow. That was great. Please update again. Did Kouga or Sesshoumaru find her?
Goshness ... Dat Was ... Emotional ... Cant Wait To See Wuts Goin To Happen Next ...
hime jun hi- Tue 24 Apr 2007
I vote for a FULL YOUKAI PUP!!!! OH and can the WHITE DOG be HER TRUE DAD?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can SHE be a YOUKAI under a concealement?!!!!!!!! Can it be REALEASED right as the child waS BORN?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
don't keep us waiting too long
hime jun hi- Fri 13 Apr 2007
Soooo? Is she PREGNANT?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
swtdrm01- Wed 11 Apr 2007
Thank you for updating. It got suspensful towards the end and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Dark- Mon 26 Mar 2007
okay so i like the story thought the writing seems just a bit forced like you're trying to make them sound old-fasioned but it just makes it a bit awkward , however that's not what i have the biggest problem with it's the fact that you have Kagome learn the "code of the samuai" while i was reading something kept nagging at me and i finally realized what it was,
Inu-yasha takes place in the warring states era, (some time in the mid fifteen hundreds) just before and during the time of Oda Nobunaga (the man who began the unification of japan) and the "code of the samurai" wasn't written until the seventeen-hundreds well after japan had been unified and a good hundred aught years after Inu-yahsa takes place. so i find it disconcerting that you would put such emphasis on something that hadn't even been invented yet.
~Dark
Arryelle- Fri 23 Mar 2007
I like this story it has potential. its just there isn't a clear definitive interaction that indicates a budding relationship with Sess and Kag could you please show more interest for one another with them it seems like everything is going on smoothly except that but so far its good keep it up
Arry
swtdrm01- Fri 23 Mar 2007
Thank you for updating. That was great.
nicole- Thu 22 Mar 2007
Yey, I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORI!!!
nicole- Sat 17 Mar 2007
GRAET FIC YOU GOT THERE
Nichole- Tue 27 Feb 2007
i actually enjoyed reading this story and i hope that you will update it soon. i've been getting bored with sess/kag fics lately because they all jump into a relationship too fast. but this one is slow moving and it has some really cute moments in there that continues to hold my attention. great job and keep up the good work.
Eternity of Tears- Sat 24 Feb 2007
this applies for ch. 9-12
hehehe
anyways, great chapters! I love how you're inculding the code of samurai into her training, very cool =D
oh! I also liked the borther-sister bonding with kouga, it's cool to see them together, but not romanticly.
=)
well, great job, and thanks for emailing me! ^_^
hm...maybe a little romance will sprout between them? ^_^ Inu deserves to suffer his fate for neglecting Kag.
-dani
update soon plz
hime jun hi- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I LIKE it................. but were's the FLUFF?!
I very much enjoyed what you have gotten written so far and I hope you can update again soon!!!
Dark Topaz- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Inu needs to geta reality check.
swtdrm01- Fri 16 Feb 2007
I love your new story. Then again all your stories are wonderful. I hope you can let me know when next you update. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
loved it... more please
more, more, more.... you must update soon!!
Unseen Watcher- Mon 15 Jan 2007
Good. Survival instinct seems to be a rare trait around there. Maybe Sess can force her to rest and shoo off any annoying pests.
Update soon, this is a well formed plot and interesting.
-Dani.
lookin' forward to it.
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