I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Please update soon. ... I really like the first chapter. What will happen to Kagome??? to Sesshoumaru???

i hope that kagome and sesshoumaru wont end up together like the story pyratic victory or i think thats how its spell. Anyway i hope that u can update faster i cant wait to see sesshoumaru suffer for hurting kag.

I hope you finish this story. :)

cant wait to see the next chapter and hurry up and updated the next chapter i can't wait to see sesshoumaru suffer

Ia'M gOinG tO kIlL yOu

SesShOumaRu! gRrr.........

oH aNd plEaSe UpDatE sOon!

Ty. LiKe Your StoRy plEaSe uPdAte

Cool plot...but please update a.s.a.p.!!!! And I must say, you have me wondering whats going to happen in the following chapters, you know due to the fact that Sesshoumaru is not very OOC in this fic. And is Kagome going to be stronger or wallow in self pity until he comes back? Please update!

*cries* i hate you! update now! *pouts*

Then hurry up and do the second chapter I love the story. You just have to update soon. UPDATE SOON!!!

...I looked. ^_~

Anyway... I liked the original version but this newly edited version... I like even more! Can't wait to see what you do with it!

what's next, what's next, what's next, what's next, what's next, what's next!

OMG! I love this kind of story and your writing style. Keep up the good work and update soon!

oH kAmi PleAse upDate Soon! I'm

FrEaKiNg InSaNe nOw aNd I diDnT

waNt 2 w8

g0od j0b anyw@y$

so ur vietnamese!!! cool!!! me too!!! anyways love ur story so much!!! plz continue to write ^_^

SESSHOMARU IS A BITCH!!!! And please update soon, the more chapters you have the more reviews

i really enjoyed reading ur fanfic!

please update soon.

can't wait to see (or read) what happens!

I love this fic!! I like where the story is headed so far. And I can't wait to see what happens between Kagome and Sesshomaru. But there are just a few grammatical mistakes like the switching between past and present tenses and a few spelling mistakes. Hope you don't mind the constructive criticisms. Please update!!! thanks!

this is a great story so far I hopeyou update soon. I am addig my review so you will crawl out of your hole and do so

Chelsea

This is a pretty cool story. I first I didn't think I was going to like it but is growing on me. It will be interesting to see the reason why he really left and what his reaction will be when he finds out he has a son. Don't be discourged about your reviews, you have a good story and I can't to see what happens next.

REallly awesome, but how could he do such a thing? jeex what a prick, and yet I can't see Kagome with out him... lol anyway awesome! i loved i an dI can't wait till you update!

Though I hate cliffes I love your story. I swear I felt Kags pain while reading the story. Her character seems so fragile that I wonder if she will be able to make him pay for what he did or just faint when she sees him. I can't wait to read what prompted Sesshos change of heart? Did he realize other women were more into his money and title or what? Please update soon.

this is good you should update soon.to let you know i read everyday to see if the storys got updated.

great story:)

HEY, THIS FICTION IS REALLY GOOD SO FAR AND I'M HOPING U DON'T STOP UPDATING OR WAIT LIKE 1OR 2 MONTHS TO UPDATED. I REALLY HOPE THAT UR FICTION IS COMING ALONG REALLY GOOD, SOMETIME I LIKE A GOOD DRAMATIC FICTION.

Very interesting start. Great job with characters. Well I'm wondering at his reasons for his actions but hopefully find out soon. I noticed he wasn't overly mean with Kagome. Cold, rude, and demeaning but he gently detached her from himself( if he had no feelings whatsoever he would've pushed her with the way he was talking). It also seems the night before this she was with him, so right he he seems like a total dick. In the next chapter, he seems to think that he didn't do too much damage( or its easily fixable). And now he wants her back. He seems a tad bit overconfident. Must wonder at his reasons and motives. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I want you to update as soon as possible and make him pay.

I loved the story.

common please update !!! cliffhangers SUCK!!!!!

I'm definitely reviewing this because I like your first chapter idea. Sesshoumaru didn't sneer at Kagome, didn't
call her in any way bitch, stupid or anything derisive and I liked the fact that you kept him in character (even if he is a bastard for cheating and even if he
broke her heart. I suppose drama makes for a better start at a story.)

One has to wonder why he would wish to come back to her after giving her the
cold shoulder and abandoning her. (oh well, Kouga might be there to console poor Kagome! *take that you heartless dog demon*)

I hope you update soon as
I'll be following the progress of this story - regardless of the fact that there seem to be no alerts on this site. Lots of luck with your next chapters! *thumbs up*

P.S: I Hope Kagome shows Sesshoumaru that she can be strong without him. Even if afterward she does cry
that he's back in her life. (if she took Inuyasha she can take Sesshoumaru)

(sorry for that confusion. I'm resending you the review - shortened version so please delete that last one. I think I was looking at KogasAngel profile page and made a confusion so there's no need to post anything at your next update. My klutzy mistake dear! >.> Feel so embarrassed.)

omg that ass hole!!!lol i loved the fanfic you must up date please!!!!l8r

This going to be a good story I hope you update it and not going up on it.

so good. add soon!

i'm dying to see what happens next and can you please make it longer like 5 times longer because its way too short

hurry and update the next chapter and make it even longer cant wait to see what happens next

OoOoOoOoOoOo i loved that!! can't wait till u write more. i hope shesshoumaru isn't that mean in the whole story. my heart really went out to kagome. how could anyone not LOVE her?! LOL
K&K

Hey, this is good. Now as every other annoying, talentless(at writing)person does and asks for an update. Pretty please?

~zen

i love this story please update soon

i really like this fic so far, it could be great.

Please Updata soon

So sad...SO SAD!!...

i love it!!

pelase update as soon as possible!!

Interesting, I can't wait to see what is next.

wow, cn't wait for more of those amazing chapters=-)

What a good start for this story..
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and find out why he left..
Sounds interesting to me so far..
Hurry and update the next plz..
Take Care
Mari

wa poor kags sesh is so mean waaaa

pLeAsE uPdAtE FaStEr!! I caN'T w8

tO rEaD tHe sEc0nD cHaPtEr.

may I asK hU iS seSsHoUmArU'S

fiAnc'e? PlEase

It looks like you started off with a bang. You have my attention. I can't wait until the next chapter.

wow that was good is there going to be more?