Awesome story. Please update soon.

I really like what you've got going so far, Kagome seems so cute. I think she's kinda obsessed! "Sesshomaru's blood....hmmm. let me touch it and have erotic fantasy's!" Jk, Awesome story, I wished the chapters were a bit longer, though.

I like i Luv i come on hurry and do more chapters it's killing me i could almost croak awsome work.

I like i Luv i come on hurry and do more chapters it's killing me i could almost croak awsome work.

I love this :) great really great :)

I can't wait for you to update this story.

Your story is going along very well so far. I like how you change everything up from the usually Kagome observes Kikyo and InuYasha together, she runs away and she meets up with Sesshomaru. Hope you update soon. :)

I like it. Do I need to say more?

That was a really good story........

Sigh oh well but you know what you can do to make up for it




Thats right update again with a really good chappie

i cant wait to see her unveiling update soon

very good story. I like it. Just a little bit confused about Naraku, but then again that's what he lives for. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter!

PLEAZE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPPIE !
I not critsize black wings 4 short chappies! PLEAZE

i like it can you write more please

uuuuuuuuhhhh but i want more guess I'll just have to wait and hope you post soon. if you could give me a heads up thanks keep writing them and I'll keep reading them.

nice chapter!! hurry update soon okay!

very nice. timing is ok, not perfect. I will wait for the next chapter. Later!

yay! I'm super happy that you updated! Nice Chapter! ^^

Nice fic so far. I like it! Update soon!

It's good... but so very short. *sigh* Oh well, I understand it's hard to write long chapters when you have things to do or no time to write.
Please continue.

-Sereneth

I like it. Can you please update and no more kaggie with other characters lol =) i not mad just a lil irked

please update .. though the plat is over used its really good .. for a high school fic :D

Keep on writing, Keep on writing. I'll keep reading, I'll keep reading.
Post soon. ThAnKs.

bye bye

Yay! I really liked this chappie, and I'm really really happy that you updated. I can't wait till the next chapter ^^

hi low :)
i like this story and i'm a fan of your (sister?) killing perfection's story's i even try to help out with the story's :)
she? recomended reading your story's and i like this one... and i'll see about the others :)
continue with this story its a good one :)

Other then small chapters (I undersand about getting kicked off) this story is progressing well and I can't wait to see what will happen next to kagome. though I still stick with the fact naraku is creepy ~shudders~ If you can give me a heads up when you post antother chaprter that would be great.

awesome chapter!! can't wait to find out what happens!

i like it bue why does she care if ppl see the real her and I was wondering if i could use ur idea of the glasses?

it sucks that you keep getting kicked off the computer. Great story. I like it.

Hey, it's ok. Not everyone is granted peace and quiet. But, in the name of Murphy's Law, it seems only the people who actually need the computer are kicked off. But no sweat. Just please make sure that the next chapter is a bit longer, k.
Waiting for an update,
DedicatedReader

I really like this story so far. It's cute and really catches my attention.
I know you've been getting a lot of "Can you make the chapters longer?" stuff, but since I don't really want to say it, i'll just.... (look back to the part where it says "...")
^^ TTFN

hi i am an author and i wish for you to continue please to the best you can ok please hurry with the next chapter

hmm i was think while i was reading your fic why don't you have Kagome run off anf change into a kimono and look different since they wouldn't know how she looks without everything so it would seem like a mysterious girl to them.
I wonder why she always looks towards Naraku maybe you'll clear that up later on lol ^^

Ja ne

P.S. your fic is awesome but can you make you chapters a little longer please -gives puppy eyes-

Going good. Can't wait for the next update. Try make the chapters a little longer, 'kay. Its annoying to see an update and only find an A/N or a short chapter. Waiting for an update.
DedicatedReader

The story has a lot of potential but will take forever to get there at this pace (I mean the short chapters.) Anyway, thanks. I really do like it so far.

plez!!! im begging u!! finish this fanfic!! i luv it so far!! oh and welcome to single spark , im new too!! lets be newbie together!^^

I'm actually quite amazed at seeing a guy on this site. Lol, well I'm not complaining. I'm curous as to how you will develop your story. It's refreshing when there's something new here. Anyway, I like the story so far... There are only two things that I think I can name that lower the rating. As I was reading your chapters I noticed a few errors in grammer and other things. If you would like I could edit your stories for you. The other thing is that the chapters -are- a bit short, but that's just me being annoying because I understand you can't dish out 10,000 words in one night. Well, please continue!

-Sereneth

(I wrote too much.. Lol, I'm sorry.)

I like. I like very much. you must continue to write. Give me a heads up when you post if its not to much truoble.

Hey, this is starting to sound pretty good. Please continue it. I want to know what happens next. Waiting for the next update.
DedicatedReader

ahh!!

you need to update soon!!

i love your fic and i hope that you update soon!!
please and thank you!

Hey good luck, awesome story!! Great the way you him her knight in shining armor!! Great way to make her crush make more sense!! I totally can agree with hiding a pretty self image!! I am a victim of that as well, before I got bf, that is, then I simply didn't care so gave up the baggy clothes and started only wearing my glasses in class!! update soon!!

Totally love that he was her temporary knight in shining armor!! Great way to start it off!! He saved her from utter humiliation!! But I gotta say, NO WAY should Inuyasha make her lose her voice!! That's not fair!! but I get where your coming from and this is your story so you wing it the way you want to!! Update soon!!

Is kagome going to fall in love with Naraku? Why would she hide her body? Overall it's a good first chaprter with a good cliffy. ~_~

This one is interesting. ^_^ Please continue on with the next chapter and soon!

I like it.

Such a short chapter, yet I have so many questions...
Why does she wear glasses if she can see better without them? Where's Sesshoumaru?
You do know that this is a Sess/Kag site?
So what's up with Naraku being nice to Kagome?
Why'd Kagome live with her aunt? You do know that you have like 15 mistakes... do you have a beta? Why does she wear such baggy clothes?
Why do I ask so many questions?

I really really really like how this fanfic is written, I hope you choose to continue it and I look forward to reading more. ^_^

I really really really like how this fanfic is written, I hope you choose to continue it and I look forward to reading more. ^_^

that rocks. Keep up the good work.

Please update soon!! You have gold there, don't give up on it!!

I really like this story. Please keep on writing it.

update as soon as you can and I have to go because my sister is tickling me!! in a very disgusting fashion!!!! GET OFF ME!!!!!

I think you have a good start to a good story, but just one chapter isn't enough to tell right now. I do see alot of potential though! I really hope you decide to continue! I think I like the idea of her hiding her beauty. Now I'm dying to know the reason!

Welcome to A Single Spark!!!

sounds good!

me likes!

great grammer and spelling...

i just have one quick question...actually two....

1) you said her vision cleared up ONCE she took the glasses off...does that mean she doesn't have to wear them but puts them on...cus....well...i have no idea....

and two....

2)how come she lived with her aunt before and not her mother?.....hmmmm

o welll

keep up the good work and i hope u update soon....

-Ashley

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!!!!!!

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I LOVE this fic! It's really awesome!! You should definately continue on with this fanfic, AND HURRY!!! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! ^___________^
~Best of luck!

I LOVE this fic! It's really awesome!! You should definately continue on with this fanfic, AND HURRY!!! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! ^___________^
~Best of luck!

I LOVE this fic! It's really awesome!! You should definately continue on with this fanfic, AND HURRY!!! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! ^___________^
~Best of luck!

I LOVE this fic! It's really awesome!! You should definately continue on with this fanfic, AND HURRY!!! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! ^___________^
~Best of luck!

I really like the start of your story, and I do hope that you continue. It sort of follows some of the story lines that have already been created, but you can turn it into a orginal with a little bit of planning and tweeking. Please update soon,
Bruce n' Charlie