This was a first erotic scene? Hard to believe... it is one of the better ones I've read; very erotic, but not coarse. I thought it was a wonderful short work. For those of you who haven't read it yet, Mere Digression combines wonderful erotica (lemons) with a plot that is developing nicely... let's all tell Elle how much we love her work so she'll continue that story as well as the other current on-going projects she is working on.

*Adds both Author and story to favorites*

Ok, when I said all parts at the end of Part 3, I didnt realize that this was part of it. Er, where was this passion and detail in the finale of Part 3????? I wasnt going to mention it cause I figured you just didnt want to write so much sex into the story, but... dang, this is good and I would have liked to see something like this in there as well. Still say the story was wonderful, just thinking it was missing the smut that you've got here. (And I do mean smut in the best way possible!)

After reading that heavy story of yours this is a lemony vacation hehehehe. Keep up the good work!

God bless pointlessness....MORE pointlessness please *chuckle*.

This was great... I enjoyed reading it... can't wait for the actual event in the story.. If thats where it will end up at...
I wouldn't mind being punished by him... How cool it would be.. LOL..
Well any ways just wanted to let you know that i enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from you...
Take Care
Mari

O_o Oh my god. No comment, please... just, no comment... *blush*

omg! plz write more. i know this is one-shot, but... I seriously want you to continue

god, i'm so jealous

Hmm...fantastic. I will have some nice dreams tonight *smiles & moans seductively to ones self* ;)

All that I can think to say is I wish punishments were like that. I would get into more trouble but it would be worth it in the end.

OMG!!!! Awesome lemon!!!! I can't wait until that happens in Simple Legacy II. YAY!!!!

ouch! hot!!! haha that was... well... uhmmm..... lets put it this way.. i need a break to handle some uhhh.. things.. yeah things,...

......wow....i feel jelious.....lol

*whistles* I loved this...a nice spin from the long story!

*adds it to favorites*

OH MY GOD! That can not be your first lemon, it was great. That was one of the better lemons that i have read.

(0_0) Wow! That was great. I really wouldn't fit in the story but damn that was great! Wow!

oh my...*blushes*
that was some mighty fine mindless smut, if i do say so myself! *nods vigorously* i really liked how at the beginning (when it was still serious XD), we got to see that scene through kagome's POV. nice touch!

can i look forward to more pointless smutty side-lemons? *hint hint* *winkwink* NUDGE.

DO MORE.

PLEASE.

thank you for your hard work!!! write more and more and more!

(if i seem stranger than usual...it's because i'm tired. it's 2 am...)

you should continue it as an alternate ending.wow, that was so hot congrats on your writing skills.

you should continue it as an alternate ending.wow, that was so hot congrats on your writing skills.

Just couldn't resist eh? Well spinoffs are almost always welcome. Well put together without being crude. Nice.

Wow. I di dnot think you could write smut, but you can, surprisingly well. I know it does not coresspond with the other story and yet i can imagine what would have happened if it did and it sates my hunger for that lemon I wished for you know. I was just thinking before, "I would not have averted my eyes!" and in this one we get to see what woul dhave happened if she had looked, and wow did she get an eyeful! I found this to be a wonderfully written lemon for all your Hentai readers, such as myself. Now update your story so we can get to the good part! You left us on a dismal cliff laden with emotion and hidden secrets.

-Dani.

Simply Hard is Simply Too Too Delicious!!! BRAVO!!!

hey that was great haha

So umm did that happen in the story or what? It was good though very very good and I cant wait till you update the story I really like it

*stares at you with mouth hangin open* ah-* tries to find words* you-*eyes get big* de-dearest lORD SESSHOMARU THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!
I CANT- I MEAN Even....*faints*