Oh My Fucking Gosh this was soo good i couldn't stop reading you have to write more soon i loved it seriously you have to write more this is like my new favorite please write more soon im on my knees begging here so write more

very good chapter.
weren't you a little mean
wasn't whore a little much.
you made me feel bad for her.

It's been awhile I was just wondering when the next chapter will be out

I was wondering when there was going to be a new chapter

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

please update soon can't wait to see what happens next

Love The New Chapter ... Can't Wait To Read More

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some chapters?

omg! i love this, i can't wait to read the rest (i'm sure i'll review again)


buuut you wanted to know about spelling errors.

somewhere in chapter 4:
well you wrote "stocking" as in stocking up on goods. i think you meant to write stalking.

anyways that's all for now! thankx for the great chapter!

-eva

on inuyashas' and sesshoumarus' swords, they are spelled [inu] tetsusaiga and [ses] tensaiga.
great story!
til death do us part.
[without spaces.]

Like The New Chapters Can't Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

That was a great chap. I can't wiat to see what happens next. Keep up the great work. Hope that see more soon.

Nice i finally go to the last chapter i hope you upload the next one .

I Realli LIke Ur Story Its Really Good I Cant Wait To See Wuts Going To Happen Next!

I love the fic. it sounds that it was be really great!!
I'm glad that kagome found the shikon, but it's really sad that she lost her brother at that price. Great fic, keep up the good work.

I was just wondering when you are going to up date this story

I was just wondering when you will update I really like this story and would like to see how it ends

I was wondering when the next chapter will be

yeah another chappy =)

Update. Continue please.

oh i am so gonna cut you! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!

I don't know if i hate you or love you. a dream it was a dream. how could you do something like that. OMG. i thought i was gonna die when she pushed him out.and it was all a dream. good one.XD

nooooo! how could u do this 2 me? please update soon and no more cliffies.

Loved it!! Update soon!!! Can't wait!!!!

update again soon

OMFG!!!! NO!!!!!!! Don't let this happen!!! Ahh!!! Please hurry and update soon!!

oh please dont let her die or them. please oh please, i was almost in tears please let her live

OMG i cant believe u ended it there.... please update soon im like on the edge of my seat in anticipation i love this fic.

Laura :)

OOoohhh hell no.. What a ending... I hate cliffy's...
Good chapter though..Can't wait for the next one...
So plz hurry and update..
Take Care
Mari

Love the story i hope you update soon

i LUV it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can u update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

"i like it, i ilike it like that" oh please write more i love this story!!!!!!!!!!

I read the new chapter and really liked what I read and can't wait to read more soon

LIME MY FAT FLAT ASS THAT WAS SO LEMONISH AND YOU KNOW IT lol I LOVED IT LOL AND I AM PISSED WHY THE HELL DID YOU STOP -GROWL- UPDATE I LOVED IT OHHH HOW I LOVED IT lol ja-ne

oh please write more i like your story what happeneds next? do they back off their promise of waiting for summer or what happeneds nexts and please update soon

I read the lastest chapters and I really liked what I read

I read the new chapters and I can't wait to read the rest.

hey i sooo loooovvvvveeee this fic its awsome please please update soon i cant wait!

Laura :)

PLEASE PUT ANOTHER CHAPPIE IN PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Another good chapter.. Can't want for the next one... I want the lemon ,, you were getting pretty close to it.. LOL..
Well anyways hurry and update.. Good story so far..
Can't wait hurry plz..
Take Care
mari

oh please write more

GRRRRRRR......GRRRRR.....i hate cliffy's and you were getting to a lemon weren't you........darn them dam cliffys.

i want more more more, please write more Chapters

this can't be..........this story is to great to stop you must continue on!!!!

AWESOME FANFIC!
i love it!

I Love this fanfic. Not only does it have my favortie sport but it also has my favorite couple. Keeping writting it rocks.

this story just keeps getting better and better plz update soon.

plz hurry with the next chapater i will be great to read it as it is i'm only allowed on every once in awihile.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAY thank you for spacing it out

i love you so much!
even though I have no clue who you are =D

well I can't wait for the next chapter

yay!!! i love this story so far!! keep workin on it!! i bet it will turn out wonderful!^^

I love your story and its very interesting

but not to be rude or anything like that can you please space out the paragraphs??
i really do love your story but its kinda hard for me to read it o_o

please and thank you!

awesome story! update soon please =]

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

update soon! I like it, and ice berg? That's one hot icicle tho!

-Dani.

i like it can you write more please

I really like what I read of this story so far and can't wait to read the rest

oh goody another update. I can't wait to see what happens at the party. keep up the good work.

Your story is great. Please update soon! I want to know what happens next.

this looks like is it going to be a realy good story . I do hope that you update again soon.

i like it can you write more please

Like the whole street race thing