hey i like the story i never really thought of the invincible monster but still was a Berry very good story

that was terrible! i am guessing that you are a guy because the words you used were unbarable! i seriously don't like how you kept haveing sheshomaru call kagome his 'bitch' and HERSELF calling her 'hs bitch' that is afull!!! i am very affended!

no girl should ever be called those things and never should call herself such things in the manner that was being described! you are sick!

GOD!!!! I LOVE THE STORY!!! Please post another chap. soon!!!!!!!!!

oh... um i forgot to ask what was the thing that hurt her? the invisible thing... was it like her past coming to haunt her? or all the bad memory's or something?

you should post up just one more chapter explaining it :)

wow! that was good :) i liked this story :) i hope you don't stop writing like that :)

Let's talk about playing fair...

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOUR DONE WITH THIS ONE!?!??!?!

you can't be done!
there has to be more! you not just gonna leave me hanging like that are you!?
don't make me start begging!!
hehehe

alright you asked for it

*gets down on knees beggging*

please please please please pleaseeeeeeeee continue... please!

It's a miracle. She actually listened to her instincts and stayed away after hearing warnings. She CAN be taught.

I doubt there was any way you could have worded your review in that situation and have it be taken as nice. There's just no winning with some people. I also don't like self-inserts, but that's me. Like your fic!

Oooh thats not nice you cant just leave it there write more or make a sequel PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!! pretty please? See here i am begging you and im not one to beg so plz plz plz write more

Thank you.

Wonder how much Sesshomaru will get his work gone, now that Kagome is in his life.

Love the story so far!! Please update really soon! I can't wait for the new chapter!!

Why the fuck did you stop? And it was just gettign hot, damn! ^_~ I guess I have to wait...

-Dani.

How can I complain if the same things happens to me in my stories? On emoment you're not a hentai but then...and a hot Sesshy! Anyhoo, you get the picture.

-Dani.

I like it rough too! [for my scenes you perv, I'm still a virgin actually]

I would be turned off too. She should have used Kagome and her own scene, or given the credit to someone else.

-Dani.

ps

I like ur story, it is very nicely written.

Well its just her inner vixen coming out,hehehe. He just brings that out in her. Not all guys can do that but when you meet one, oh boy what a difference. Hehehe

Sooo she likes it rough.....hehe you called her slut....hehe. Yea l like your story so you better hurry up and update annnnnnnnnnnd Happy Holidays to you too. @(^_^)@ Happy Monkey

Stuff like that bothers me too, if you want to put a lemon in your story, you write it yourself. If you can't then you're not mature enough to handle one. That's what I think anyway. So you weren't harsh at all just telling the plain truth and if she freaks oh well. Haha. Update soon! Happy Holidays! ^_^

Very interesting.

Why was Kagome being attacked near Sesshomaru's lands and how come Sesshomaru didn't see it?

What will happen if she goes back to Inuyasha?

Who was that, that warned her not to?

Please update ASAP

If possible could you send an e-mail when you have this posted, since there's no actual alert to let you know.

No, you weren't being mean. Offering advice is always good. A writer can't improve without a bit of criticism here and there. Of course, always try to word it politely, no sense in making someone feel bad. Yah, know?

Update soon! That would probably bug me too with the writter writing in her own name instead of Kagomes, but i would get over it and continue reading, with a new light to watch out for any and all switches between the two names for the future.

I don't think you were mean

yeah, that would bother me a lot too. it's not only distracting, it makes it... wierd. i don't think you were being mean. i think she was being wierd.
anyway, love the story! please make the chappies a bit longer, but i love it anyway!
:kisses:

his? Whats next? Mating? :D Will you write a lemon? please continue you're like a teasing teaser who tease the teased reader.

i like it anyway about the chick putting her name int he story, that is just a little odd but if it was like once i'd just ignore it and continue on, but if it was coninueous that would be jsut a little littl little weird... anayway happy holidays

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
It was getting so good. I want you to update very soon. PLEASE!!!!!!!!

No, that would have bothered me too. and confused me, it is probably a good thing that you corrected her, before her ratings went down. That way she ould fix the story.

I get overly anxious having to wait for updates! Especially when the fic catches my interest right off the bat like yours did! It's very good, please continue as soon as you can.. i'll try and be patient till then no guarentees on that though lol :D

And thanks for reviewing Santa Baby ^_^