Can't wait to see how this turns out!

wow....this is really good..more chapters please!!

wow i really think this is great please update soon i cant wait to read more
TTFN

Great story, but why is it posted three times in the same chapter?

so luv the story i hope u update soon . kagome is just a little angel ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

wow love

Hey this is cool. I like it. Please update and be a good author. Good authors update quickly with few mistakes. If you want I'll beta for you and make it nice and pretty in a very timely fashion. KK? Ok see ya.

i love this story its so cute

HAHA! Yura was about to get her but kicked by a little baby! She should have done it! LOL, please email me when you update! luv tha story, so by all means, continue!

Oh Wow that was... new. Kagome was going to kick yura's ass! LOL. Can;t wait for more chapters love this story.

cant wait for the next chapter

wonderful! I just love it.Can't Wait for more. (take your time okay don't over do it)

please update soon I can't wait!!

wonderful keep up th good work ok i luv it update soon if u can thankx love it

Your story has an wonderfull and very, very original plot.
I know this must be very hard on you to update soon because of your family affair, but please consider my plea and update as soon as you can.
Thank you and please continue to write because you have the talent and it will be a shame if you don't act upon it.

Hello!! I just started reading this fic and already I love it! Whoever those bastards who were flaming you were, I hope they realize just how much of a freakin asshole they are! I hate people who flame, its wrong!! I write too, and I unstand that it isn't always a walk in the park to write on command! If you are reading this, then I shall inform you that if you flame, I will rip out your left kidney! Yes, the left one!!!! Ni!!!!!
I can't wait for an update!

Love it. Fantastic. Great fic.

PLEASE email me when you update PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *anime eyes*

If enyone says you're a sucky writer, they're retards. plz write more!!!!!!!^-^

update soon plz thakx

That was beautiful. Please update soon.

u need to update soooon please please please its soooo goood lol sorry for all the ooooos in the words hehe but really u do its an AWSOME STORY YAY!!!!!!!! HEHEhehe

HEY!
I liked it. So PLEASE make MORE!!!!
:)
BYe,
FaBy 14

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

pleas up date soon

well i guess i'm a stripper for my name is crystal XP.
anyway i like your story keep it up and pay the flamers no mind. they only do it to make them self feel big and plus they have nothing better to do with their lives

This was a good chapter and can't wait for more.Update soon.

I love the new chapter I hope you post soon oh where did you get the idea for kagome to be an angel

this is a cute fiction, i just read it and go aww how cute. and i totally feel you on the betrothed thing, my grampa tried to do that to me, i got llucky though my other grandparents intervened, and while i was vistiting them my 18th bday, i eloped lmao man were my moms parents pissed 18 yrs later, and three great grandchildren they forgave me

dude RIGHT NOW CONGRATS BUT YOU SHOULD SOOOO IF YOU SEE HIM KICK HIM IN THE BALLS AND THEN SAY JUST KIDDING LOL and tell him its like when you were 11 your jokin around lol i did that to my cousin on "accident" -ponders- i think i just wanted to kick someone in the balls then lol i was swimming away and i did it when i "found out" i was like OH MY GOD IM SO SORRY (not) lol its a great life lol anyways i cant wait for your update this is a great story

EEEEE! so cute!! please update soon

I can't wait to read more so I hope up will update asap please.

can you please write more

Hi there i compeletly understand ur trouble. I won't critsize u anyway i like ur fic so far! so good luck and make more CHAPPIES;-) i have a web site and fans always do shit like that 2 me byebye

This was a great chapter kagaome sounds so cute. Update soon.

AWWWW CUTE!!!!! i love it!!!! update again soon please

it's so cute please write more

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I like it so far!
I've never read something of this sorts before.
I think that you on on your way to becoming a wonderful writer!
love~
Ai

I really was looking forward to the new chapter of your fic. I really liked it.

Got a few things ta say:

1. Ignore the flames. They are not worth your time.

2. Im sorry to hear about your great grand mom. I lost mine a while back to so i can sorta understand.

Please continoue with your story. C ya! :)

TOTALLY AWESOME STORY! Keep up the good work! Like all trash, sweep out useless snipes and flames! Don't dwell on them! Show them your amazing creative writing and they'll be silenced! All the best!

Dear FallenAngelKagome,

I am very sorry to hear about your great grandmothers death. I like you were lucky enough to have met and spent wonderful time with my great grandmother. I know few who have had that privilege. I am also happy that your grandmother is trying to stop the betrothal. I don’t think anyone should be made to marry someone that they do not love or respect. Everyone should have the right to find the one they know in their soul that is the person they love. A loveless marriage to me is a prison. Continue to fight for your hearts freedom. But on to the story, I very much enjoy it. It is a new story for me, in that the base of it is different. Its not the norm where kagome is with InuYasha then is with Sesshoumaru, but totally is your own. I am greatly looking forward to more from you. Please take the time you need, so when we do have you back you will write for you and not out of obligation to us.

Best wishes

I love your story and I can't wait to see how it all turns out!

I love your story! Especially when Kag and Sess talk in their Inu tongue. It is so cute! I can't wait until you update. Please post more chapters soon!

I Love your story and i hope you will update when you can. ~_^

Hey, don't worry about what ppls say. It is a learning process. You learn how to write better as time goes on. Nobody automatically knows the best way for their story to look. What is important is that your plot is good which i can't say for all stories that i have read. I like your story very much and can't wait to read more of it.

it's a great start of the story can't wait to see the next chapters of it!!

Sounds great!!

I just wanted to let you know I think your story is fantastic, I read alot of fanfiction and yours is one of my favorites. I am also sorry to hear you are having such a hard time. I hope every thing goes better.

awww! you're a fantastic writer :) i love how this is going and Kagome talking in inu tongue is absolutely adorable. A suggestion, please take no offense, can it be a little longer?? Just wondering

You really are a miracle you now that Kagome. My little tenshi, you will make Inuyasha beg for you not to kill him one day won’t you. I will protect you, I promise.”


The funny part for me is that you/Sesshomaru is/are already thiking about torchering Inuyasha! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story but is it kag/sess romance?

I like the plot of your story so far, i understand people can be pains in the ass. So just ignore them, if they don't like your writing they can read something else. They are not forced to read yours. So unless they are just being nice and criticing you i say the can shove their problems. O.o can't wait till you update. Ja Ne

People can be idiots sometimes its usally fun to ignore them and don't let them stress you out.Hope for better days and hope you update soon. Bye.

hey, your dad is actually trying to get you betrothed god you must be high up in the world you have no worries i hate it when people flame me to matter of fact this one person flamed my 1st fic and i e-mailed her or him real nasty e-mail i love this fic though its perfect for a quick boast of happieness please update when you can
luck be with you my friend
signed: Darkness

I luv it u have to update as soon as posible please

please update soon i luv it

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I read the first few chapters and I really like what I read and can't wait to read the rest

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

How will Inuyasha react to her? Will he feel jealous that his father and especailly brother toke a liking to someone who isn't blood?

How will the other Lords and Ladies react to her as well?

Great jobs.
Please update ASAP.

Love the story so far! Please update soon!!!

i love ur story so much, i cant wait for u to another chapter

i love ur story so much, i cant wait for u to another chapter

Update soon plZ!!

that was so cute. please review.

this story is good . if it is ok with you may i be in the story when kagome gets lder can i be her best friends i also wanted to write a story but i cant and i would be really happy if i can be in the story of my heart. and if you do want me in the story email me and kagomeandsango1993@yahoo.com and u can ask question bout me to get to now me better bye.
Lady Jessica sesshomaru/'s mate Jessicaxx

You have a great start going so far. The whole idea and concept is very interesting. :) Generally I like the story. Though i would make a suggestion or two.

When people talk it's kinda hard to figure who's talking when, as they're all in 1 paragraph together. I know someone mentioned this before. Everytime someone new speaks new paragraph :)

Longer chapters too perhaps. I don't know about anyone else but i use another word program to type up mine and gage out a certian number of pages to fill before moving on. like the first 2 chps could be made into one in my opinion seperated by those fun little ~*~*~*~*~*~ thingies Because you have different concepts in each chap maybe do stomething like chp 1 part 1 ect ect with the name in the fun ~*~*~ things again :D

Other than that like i said i think it's a great start. Don't rush it, just because you have stress at home don't add to it and stress over getting a new chp out asap all the time. :)

~Sesshomarei~

i was about to cry.... that was so cute please write more chapters. ps it wouldn't hurt to write more in the chapters you write lol

YAYYAYYAAYAYYAYAYAYAYYAYAYYAYAYAYAYYA
OMFG UPDATE AGAIN AND NOOOOOOOOOO flipping a/n's again okay thx. now stop reading and update LOL

yay!!!! can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

Ok I don't get it in ch. 2 you said Sesshomaru found the baby, then ch. 4 you said Inu No Taisho found her. So who really found her? Keep up the good work, would love to read more. So I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.

I would love to see longer chapters. And I love the way the baby(a.k.a. Kagome ) picked-up Sesshomaru's claw I thought it would of been cuter if she had put it in her mouth. Anyway can't wait to read the next chapter.

Okay, listen up you stupid people who are sending flames. This fanfic is just starting and she can't help it if she is stressed with her perfectionist parents or any other problems she might have, so don't read it if you are just going to critize without making positive coments!!!
It gets really annoying.

P.S. FallenAngelKagome
I really like your story and keep up the good work and don't let these idiotic retards get to you with criticism. Don't worry, Im 13 too and am currently dealing with idiotic retards just like those in my school.
I hope you continue and review a.s.a.p. dont stress over it and update when you have time.
Good Luck!!! Ja mata!!!

*~*melissa*~*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Hey, I like the story, but you need slightly longer chapters. Also space out the Speaking parts and the paragraphs. Its not a formal essay so spaces are allowed...

Luv the story, please continue

~zen

That chapter was soooo sad...pleas write moor

That was really good.........and as for a suggestion for the fanfic. why not mention him finding a baby one day????

Well O.K I am goiung to try to calm down but who ever put the anonymouse review has made me super pissed off . Look anonymouse person you don't understand at the begining of this fic with the authors note I said that I would try and update as much as I could . I am sick and I am righting this note to you because my oride is hurt and that is my greatest weakness . I refuse to alow you to go and say that I need ten more years of work do you know how mean and nasty that is . Iam 13 years old .i dont have the time to take care of my sick brother he has lung probles. take care of my cousin who is a big bitch and be A+ student so you now what if you don't like how I right my storys then don't read em.

****FLASHBACK****
He was standing in front of Sesshoumaru. Kneeling on one knee and had his hands on his shoulders. He was looking at him with expectant eyes. “Sesshoumaru your mother was killed two hours ago. “ Sesshoumaru had never been the same after that.
~~END FLASH BACK~~

...

wow

What a great flashback. I was, AMAZED. Really I was. It was thrilling. Enchanting. Fullfilling.

You could have explained that all without it sounding pathetic, you know.

This wasn't a chapter, it was a paragraph. Go learn the definition of a chapter. It's certainly not this short.

I know this sounds like a flame, but remember that a flame is something said in anger, and is pretty stupid if you ask me. I'm just telling you the blunt truth. I also have read too many fics such as this one, and I am too annoyed to give constructive criticism to them now.

This is an ok story, but I suggest you forget about it, and start it over in 10 years when you'll be a little better at writing and making a story.

Ja ne.

Okay is Kag gonna be a youkai or miko or both or neither in this story?

Yeah I can understand a lack of sleep.....though what I'm wondering is if you where tutoring till 5am how did you post this at 4am??o.O :P

IS SESSY GONNA HAVE TO CHANGE KAGGIES" NAPPIES!?!?!?!?!? {diapers}

That'll be weird later on!
And he'll forever have blackmail on her....and she'll have drool on him...so in the end it all checks out I guess!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Sounds good so far so keep up the good work, can't wait to read more so I hope you update as soon as you can.

This is a good chapter. update soon.

Plz update this is good! I can't wait to see what happens

aw! that description of kagome was so cute

btw, when a new person is speaking, a new paragraph must begin

also it makes your story a lot easier to read if each sentence or couple of sentences is its own new paragraph

also, don't worry about writing very formally, a casual tone is my favorite and usually the best stories written in a casual way

anyway, that's my two cents, feel free to ignore me, and great job so far!

That was cute. Please update soon.

AWWWWWWWWWW how kawaii I like it. update soon okay.

Hey guys don't worry about the summary any more . The first chapter is on now.

SO we're supposed to help get you a new summary with just the little info the original summary posted??

btw WHO exactly finds the bundle?
It's ambiguous. It could either be Fluffy Sr. or Fluffy Jr.

COULD YOU JUST POST THE FIRST CHAPTER ALREADY!?!?!?!?!?
It would help alot with getting you a new summary.

I just have one suggestion. Here's what you have:

Sesshoumaru's father Inu No Taisho has desisded that it is time for a change with his ice prince of a son . what happens when one day when he is going home he sees a small bunndle .

Here's what I'd put

Inu No Tashio has decided that it is time for a change with his ice prince of a son Sesshomaru. What happens when one day going home he sees a small bundle?

I love the summary but its a full on let-down for me when I see it has a chapter and its just an A/N you know. I just was hoping to read it alittle but I can wait, ( Okay mabe not too long But I can.) Pleas update soooooooooooooooooooon!

Your summary is really good, it caught my attication. Plus this sounds like a fantastic story just by the summary.