Reviews for The Story by ShadowsWeaver1

TheMikoShivae- Sat 15 Mar 2008
evil ending.. xD

Christina- Sat 16 Feb 2008
you are soooo evil... lol, that was an amazingly well thought out story... it may have been the best put together... lol => good job. hope to read more of your vexing stories in the future..... *salutes*

Christina- Sat 16 Feb 2008
you are soooo evil... lol, that was an amazingly well thought out story... it may have been the best put together... lol => good job. hope to read more of your vexing stories in the future..... *salutes*

Tainted Sins- Thu 14 Feb 2008
Aaaah, but then.. and then.. and..!
-Grudgingly- It was a good story, but it lacked closure.
And I didn't like the alternate ending.
But that's just me.
Continue writing other fics,pwease!

bloodmoon goddess- Mon 28 May 2007
please write more of this story, it is so very good.

lindajrjt- Sat 05 May 2007
Neat little story if I do say so myself. I liked the idea of Inu no Taisho having control when he was supposed to be gone from the world. This would make a good story on its' own.

Lena- Mon 30 Apr 2007
Oh man i was so confused, but all a dream! no way!!! so Inu Yasha....no real tripping ahhh you gotta explain this, and i vote for you writing the story not us picking...it makes it less confusing! And i love Sess in this fic..then again i love him in all ur fics!

lilmoe31- Tue 03 Apr 2007
That, ...that...... you.(screams) What the HELL was that . Ok, I'm ok. I still love. You are surely a weaver of twisted stories. But I love them they are truly some of THE best stories I have EVER read.

michelle- Sun 04 Mar 2007
umm. is this really really the end of this fic?please say no! i don't really get it if it was all a dream!


sssc- Tue 30 Jan 2007
love the story
please update soon

Sola- Wed 24 Jan 2007
Most original, Shadow-sama!
All dream, ne? Very funny.

lover- Fri 19 Jan 2007
wow hot hot hot i can not beleve it i hope you wright a sequal to it

uonlywishuwereme- Mon 04 Dec 2006
A good rule of writing..is that you never finish your story with...."it was all a dream" well its wise not to atleast, but you did do it ina good way. But still, try and stray away from it..

Rose-Chan- Sun 03 Dec 2006
HENTAI-TASTIC!!! ^___^

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Sun 03 Dec 2006
-chokeing for air- OMFG THAT WAS FING AWESOME>. i loved it

Pontas-Metallika- Sat 02 Dec 2006
....So....It was all....ALL a dream? ;0; *sobs* MEAN. EVIL. VILE. EVILE. ;-; Now, to make up for it, you have to finish Tears of the Fallen and make it as fluffy as possible, woman! ;0; And make sure to throw a lemon or two in there! *is shot* Jk...xD Now..Update Fallen...pwease? O=3

AccidentalGoddess- Fri 01 Dec 2006
OH MY GOD!!! That was a seriously mean trick! Experly done, but mean none the less. I actually had to go back through the begining chapters to see just where it was the story diverted into a 'dream'. MEAN! Dear lord. Still, I gotta wonder, with everything you outlined in the explination...is that all hooey, or is the dream one of the ways of Tensaiga effecting Kagome? It would be another interesting twist...especially since now Sesshomaru doesn't know about it. Or are you going to take it completely elsewhere. I know you mentioned that you're going to be focusing on Tears for a bit (which I love) but you've got me wondering about this one now to....damn you. Why must you be so wonderful?

chaoswingdragon- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Ok then, I totally wasn’t expecting that! I mean yeah I knew there was going to be a lemon( mmm, that was some good lemonade*smacks lips*) but for it to turn out to be a fantasy-ish thing threw me for a loop. The only thing I have to wonder is if Kagome shouted that last line out loud. I’m mean hey, it would be embarrassing enough to wake up from a sex dream and know that your buddy knows but to wake up screaming said buddies name. I definitely would have blushed so hard my brain would be cooked. The little death my right butt cheek!...wow that was random and out of context. Lol.
~Chaos

autumngold- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Oh, you're so mean!! How could you make the whole thing a dream? However, with the way you ended it, Kagome in bed with Sesshomaru nearby. . . . maybe it could still happen!! :) Great story!!

Witchie SheWolf (scruffy wolf)- Fri 01 Dec 2006
What the hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't do this!!!!!!!!! EVIL!!! Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyy??????????y?

Kohana- Fri 01 Dec 2006
That was good!! While reading your lemon I was like where did Inuyasha go, hes not just sitting in the corner, but seeing as it was a dream......anyway good job so far

Tana-san- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Ahh, my dear and wonderfully skilled friend. Like I said... You ARE my Hero. Just like me, if only in my dreams, she got THE best lovin' a girl could wish for and with the most gorgeous piece of man/demon flesh that walked the earth. Yeah, maybe I read too many stories filled with repetitious storylines, but girl, you got the gift to make it GOOD!!!!! Your writing is always entriguing and entertaining that it spurs me to keep reading, whether it contains lemons or not. You ARE a mighty fine storyteller and writer. You gave me a great "high" to float on until my{and Kagome's} real desires can be fulfilled and again I bow to the Master, I ,a humble slave to fanfiction, am truly grateful for your indulgence to my hentai mind. I will forever be your faithful folllower as you were so allowing as to give into my whim of desire. Jen

Airy- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Great Explaination. Can't wait for the lemon.

Pontas-Metallika- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Y'know, I'm up here at TWO AM, with SCHOOL TO-...DAY, and still have HOMEWORK! Now, you whipped out your juicemaker so let's see ya make some lemonade, Missy!....xD Hi! Btw; You rock. Can't wait for next chappie. AND Fallen Chappie. XD; Oh~ *sobs* The end of Remembrance (and the fact it didn't end in fluff, with Fluffy and Kags together) almost made me cry~ ;-; You're too good a write for your damn good! Now, enlarge that ego, grab some Caffeine, and TYPE before we start getting out our pitchforks! *random obsessed readers hide pitchforks behind backs*...Erm...please? ^^'''

autumngold- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Great explanation!! I hope Sesshomaru isn't mad now that he knows the truth!! Thanks for all of the wonderful updates!!

autumngold- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Great update!! Thanks for giving us all of the choices!! You're the best!! Can't wait for more!! (Sorry about your sore fingers)

Tana-san- Fri 01 Dec 2006
ShadowsWeaver1... YOU"RE MY HERO!!!!{quote taken from Ferris Bueller} I SO KNEW you would never disappoint me. You have such a phenomenal mind and yeah, you do know how to torture one sooo VERY well. I applaud you my dear girl, you have a wonderous talent. When do you find the time with living this thing we call "life"? I'm waiting on baited breath for the rest and this is one I will copy off on paper so I can never have the chance of losing it. You have given this disabled gal who rarely sees but only her own home, a truly happy few days and if you ever decide to do another fic such as this I'm all for it. It's been quite the experience for me.

Inu_Twins- Thu 30 Nov 2006
YAY!!! I loved those chapters and can InuYasha get any stupider? Don't answer that question. Plz update soon!

dark_miko66- Thu 30 Nov 2006
explanations!!

Inu_Twins- Thu 30 Nov 2006
can you do both A&B because I want to know what was going through both brothers head at the time!! Plz!!!

Miara- Thu 30 Nov 2006
C - what the heck is going on?

autumngold- Thu 30 Nov 2006
Excellent update!! Who cares about Inuyasha, I pick "B" because I really want to know what Sesshomaru was thinking!! Especially during the kiss!!

AccidentalGoddess- Thu 30 Nov 2006
That was great. Classic. I loved it. Frankly, I think you're right about the lemon, most definately should not be rushed, though I'm looking forward to it when it does come about. I agree with your view of plot then plunder...it makes the plundering so much more satisfying. As for the next one...I'm gonna vote for a mix of A and B, kind of a lead up with Inuyasha searching and getting there followed by Sesshomaru's once he is there. I think it would go nicely. As much as I want the explination as well, I think it would round it out a bit better. In any event, I leave it up to the master. Looking forward to the next one! -AG

phxazkyote- Thu 30 Nov 2006
B & C! lol this is just too funny

Tana-san- Thu 30 Nov 2006
Hey Shadow, girl, my daughter and I bow ever so graiously for you being amused at our terminology of this most enjoyable act that I myself love to read to much of.{after heart surgery to repair a damaged valve, my daughter refers to me as a "sex monkey" and pities her father} I am leaving this one up to you my very talented friend. You already KNOW what I want,but, I would like you to make me squirm for every ounce of pleasure that can be derived from your so talented mind and let me enjoy your torture until the end. {I would so like it to be with Sesshoumaru and Kagome now and InuYasha bursting in later,but... alas, I know I am truly a wanton female in need for ... So, torture away, my friend, I humbly,if not hungerly, await your move for this next chapter. I hope maybe if there is time,you may still write more tonight. I am a night owl as my husband works the graveyard shift and we sleep in the day. I just couldn't help checking in when I briefly awoke to see if you had updated and I sqealed with excitement at the knowledge you had. I'll look in later. Ta for now!!! Jen

Silver_Drache- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I vote for A. I am really curious how Inuyasha found them and what took him so stinken long. We have been with Kag and Sessh long enough, we need to add in a new character.

nostalgic-maiden- Thu 30 Nov 2006
this chapter was good! and i agree with what you said in your a/n, there's no point putting useless smut in a fic just to make it smut. it should have more of a reason/feel to it. great job=D

Darkness- Thu 30 Nov 2006
B please pick b

Nyx- Thu 30 Nov 2006
Hmmm.... How about all of the above? Not D, though, so A,B,C. If I had to choose just one... probably C. No maybe B. But C... Ok, look,I can't pick just one. Either one (or both =P) would be great. Keep up the good work!

PS. I agree with you about the lemon thing as well. I did like Rememberance, though. =)

Kohana- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I think B!! I really don't care how inuyasha got there! i will assume he walked :)

Beckie- Thu 30 Nov 2006
How about option E. a chapter each for options a and b?

sesshou_lover- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I'd really like to know that explanation, but vague with hot steamy sex works too.

Airy- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I'm thinking "B" I just don't want the story to end so fast. Besides I love Sessh's thoughts, and maybe an argument with his beast.

Darkme- Thu 30 Nov 2006
hmm can't you combine a-c for chapter 12?

sesshou_lover- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I'm going to have to vote for b. C could at least come after the explaination.

Jessy- Thu 30 Nov 2006
C, I chose C! I'm kidding, honestly. As much as I enjoy a good lemon, it might be a bit soon for that.

Anyway, in all seriousness I think "A" would be my choice. By now Inu HAS to be worrying about where his friend...err shard detector...went. Goodness knows the hanyou would never admit he had actual feelings for Kagome, but it's agiven that he's going to bust in at the wrong time and complete ruin the moment and be all misunderstanding. lol. I look forward to the next chappie. :)

J

clavira- Thu 30 Nov 2006
definitely b)
I really want to know what Sess' Dad has to do with everything!!!

Darkme- Thu 30 Nov 2006
ok chapter 11 vote right here
I'm going with B, but could there be lime in it?

autumngold- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I love this last chapter!! Sesshomaru is so sweet!! I love his reaction to Kagome in the clothes he picked out for her!! For the next part, I choose "B"!! As much as I would love for some hot Sesshomaru/Kagome smut, I really want to know how Sesshomaru's father is involved in all of this!! Can't wait for more!!

Tana-san- Thu 30 Nov 2006
Shadow... I so want to smack you good for that last option!!! You just know you've been tempting us all the way!!! Why"d you even write such a great lemon as in "Remembrance" if you weren't going to use your "practice writing a lemon" to see if we liked your rendition. OK, Girlfriend, I'll relent, even though I'm still wanting them to jump each others bones...hard and fast and thorough. I'll pick...hmmm...{discisions descisions}...Let InuYasha barge in. You've been hankerin' for the whelp to mess with them from the beginning...but, I just know you WON"T diappoint when you finally let Sess and Kags have their "mad, wild,passionate monkey dance". {my 19 yr old's daughter's expression for sex, like you couldn't figure that out on your own} Truly love your work Shadow. Your are a force to be reckoned with. Jen

Robb Tripp- Thu 30 Nov 2006
I think that perhaps A, then, B would be a splendid shift in the plot. Reason being that if Inu Yasha were to interfere, he could take Kagome away for a while and Sesshoumaru, as well as Kagome can meet again later to discuss it (maybe when Inu Yasha is preoccupied or perhaps instead of Kagome going home, she instead goes to relax and get away once more.)

CH- Wed 29 Nov 2006
i want to hear the explanation how does kagome know sesshomaru and inuyasha's father? so b it. ;-)

vanadiel- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Chapter 11: A... lets get Inuyash in and out so that selection C can happen!!! lol

Airy- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I'm going with choice "A," better to get Inuyasha out of the way. Besides it is his father too.

Lady- Wed 29 Nov 2006
B) Inuyasha? Are you kidding me? Who needs the mouthy hanyou anyways? Sess and Kags are doing just fine on their own

Tigeris- Wed 29 Nov 2006
A.) Inuyasha bursts into the scene, profanity and all.

I dunno... he has to come sometime! There is no way he would leave Kagome alone for any length of time. Introduce the conflict already! etc etc.

Leo of San d'Oria- Wed 29 Nov 2006
i guess i'll pick the 'finally bring inuyasha into the story option* (a)

nostalgic-maiden- Wed 29 Nov 2006
great chapter! put please, don't make a lemon yet. omg they've only started talking for like...what, a day or something? that's way to quick...-_-

Something-or-other- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Oh, you are sooo horrible. Steamy sex scene, finding out the plot, steamy sex scene, plot, sex, plot, sex...AH!!! Can't you just do both? You know...reveal the plot...make Kagome and Sesshoumaru do the matress macerania...that sort of thing? Why torture your poor, dear reveiwers? How can you possibly ask us to pick between the plot and a steam sex scene? So...how about B. and C.? Please...? Pretty please with a Sesshoumaru on top? Well, or bottom, whichever you prefer.

jarakuheart- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I pick B!

chaoswingdragon- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Hmmm, I going to go with A. That girl sounds like a smarty!! Lol. SSSOOO hard to resist that steamy love scene though! J/P. I’m to curious now to be distracted^^. Keep it up. Rah Rah Rah!!*does little dance and ends with spirit fingers* Gotta book it,
~Chaos

…wow, not only did I pick one option I didn’t write an anecdote! I’m so skilled ;D

sumire- Wed 29 Nov 2006
B! :heart: Who needs Inuyasha anyways! Exactly! (He can barge in during the aftermath >:D)

Sasori- Wed 29 Nov 2006
B then C lol

Katie- Wed 29 Nov 2006
C) mwhahahahahahah

zen- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Let InuYasha in sometime people! (I pick A)

~a nut shot to sesshoumaru would be funny... That should be placed in it sometime

~zen

Silver_Drache- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I have to go with A, especially since it makes sence and you can have a decent plot going. Although I'm curious as to how Inuyasha would have been able to find them in that storm.Tracking would pretty much be impossible.

dark_miko66- Wed 29 Nov 2006
STEAMY SEX IN A CAVE ON THE PILE OF FURS....then Inuyasha can make an entrance..bahahha

Inu_Twins- Wed 29 Nov 2006
C!!! you should never have put it because I will always vote for this so C!!! Plz update soon

Amestisti- Wed 29 Nov 2006
My choice is D this time. And I was right about the "Twist of Fate"! You did a great job. To use italics do i > before the text you want italized and / i > afterwards. Of course remove the spaces. I'm not sure if a Review will italize it or not so I put the spaces just incase. Continue and hopefully you'll soon get over your writer's block for Tears of the Fallen...it's one of my favorite stories up here ^_^. Ja ne!

Catherine- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I pick C. It just seems a little too early for fluff.

Airy- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Absolutely "D." Love it! Can't wait for Sessh and Kagome's understanding moment.

flyingteapot- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Oh and to italicize text, I think it works like that: " i >" to turn it on and
to turn it off: " / i >". (without the spaces, of course)
I hope I'm not totally wrong here...

vanadiel- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Chapter 10: D!! hehehe

flyingteapot- Wed 29 Nov 2006
This is getting better and better, the plot thickens and oh yes, Inupapa can come, too? Whee! XD
This time's choice: C.) The situation is serious and there is no time for fluff...yet?

autumngold- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Two more great chapters!! Thank you so much Shadow!! You're the best!! I pick "B", because I then I can still hope that Sesshomaru tells her no!!

sesshou_lover- Wed 29 Nov 2006
I'm more fond of C. I just can't see Sesshoumaru being that nice so soon without it freaking out Kagome. Great story so far.

Tana-san- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Good thing Kagome didn't get to kick him in the family jewels cause that would have been her final act upon this great Earth. Sesshoumaru was totally OUT OF CONTROL yall. His inner beast would NOT have STOOD still for that to even happen. His senses are way to keen,especially in beast mode. I would still like her to...well...you know,so I say D and let them fly high before telling InuYasha a thing. It's raining and InuYasha can't scent them in the rain...Right? Yeah..so I'll be waitin' real close.

Beckie- Wed 29 Nov 2006
D) The same as C, but with the addition of a fluffy moment where Sesshomaru offers his…well…fluffy…to keep Kagome warm in the pouring rain. I don't think she would tell his secret to InuYasha

Jenna- Wed 29 Nov 2006
OMG!! That was so good!! I can't wait to see what happens. I think you should do D...where Fluffy-sama gives Kagome his boa thingy..then go off to the cave :]

Silver_Drache- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I say that kagome demands that they go to Inuyasha to tell them bot at the same time, but I doubt that Sesshomaru would listen. He would probably just demand that she tell him right there, or at least kidnap her for a little bit of time.

CH- Tue 28 Nov 2006
d... although b sounds pretty good too

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Well...nice and steamy! I think you have goten very good at limes so I want to see a lemon! Later, not now.

update soon.

-Dani.

Serena- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D D D D D!!!!! that one would be good

Yuki Asao- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D!! D!! Great chapter! Please update soon. D!

Phxazkyote- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I vote A. What is a kag/sessh fic with out the brazen inuyasha?? There has to be the internal struggle on kagomes side to yeah know.

Jade- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I'm going to say C... because it's too early for the pda ness... it would be ooc.
Maybe he could say something evil that would warrant a kick? ^.^ I like the idea behind this fic!

nostalgic-maiden- Tue 28 Nov 2006
XD this story is so good so far! i love how you let us kinda have a say in how your fic goes, but still keep it within your own ideas and stuff =) great job! and i really don't have a preference as to what comes next, although i wouldn't mind a couple of funny "SIT!" scenes *winks*

Fluffy Owner- Tue 28 Nov 2006
d D d D d mwaha

Inu_Twins- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I want D!! This fic is so good plz update soon

Sesshy's_true_love_1818- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D) The fluffy thing wait isn't it his tail? well any way I pick d so please do D) and i might pick Inuyasha....no its not a bribe "I think she's catching on Naraky we better finish this up" hehe

chaoswingdragon- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Alright, I’m goin with… CAB. They head back to the cave alone and Inuyasha busts onto the scene in his normal ‘its not like being stealthy would help’ fashion where he finds Kagome vehemently telling Sesshomaru that Inuyasha deserves to know and she won’t say a word until they meet up with him. Wow, you really are determined to get Inu into the story here, eh? Feeling bad about ‘neglecting’ him?*snickers* It’s all good, I’ve been keeping him in my room. Boy can that dog give a mean massage! Alrigty then, nighty nighty Shadow.
~Chaos

Kohana- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I pick D! D! D! that was brillent tensega fuels his beast loved it!!

Shadow's Angel- Tue 28 Nov 2006
i like dDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Monica- Tue 28 Nov 2006
So far your story is great! keep up the wonderful work. Im thinkin' that D is my favorite answer at the moment.

AccidentalGoddess- Tue 28 Nov 2006
OMG. This fic is fun. Very entertaining. Personally, I think option B would be fantanstic (the good, swift kick) and if it doesn't happen here, it should happen somewhere else in here. Unfortunately I don't think it would fit, since it said she saw 'something' that would save them. So I'm gonna have to go with Twist of Fate. It could be a stick, she could throw it for him to catch or she could infuse a little miko power (not too much mind you) and smack him with it. Or maybe she finds some stinkweed and assaults his nose with it. Just a couple suggestions, but I shall leave it up to you O' Great One.

Kohana- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Kick him!! hahaha it would be funny!!! but a twist of fate hmmmm I can not decide!

Leo of San d'Oria- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D! PICK D! Lets see what your twisted mind has came up with! heh heh

Ithilwen- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I vote for option B
XD it would be really funny

dark_miko66- Tue 28 Nov 2006
a good kick in the nards sounds good right about now..XD

Desert Rose- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Since keep on putting him there, I'll pick Inuyasha. This story is really cool. I hope you keep writing!

phxazkyote3507- Tue 28 Nov 2006
B! And heres a good set up.

K = Hey Sesshomaru! Whats the capitol of Thialand?!

S = ::Blinks while contemplating this answer::

K = BANG COCK! ::Whacks sesshomaru in the jewels::

haa haa haa haa haa

Catherine- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I pick D. I think a good surprise would be perfect!

CH- Tue 28 Nov 2006
with the way the last chapter ended i can't believe inuyasha will set them free i vote for twist of fate

animlover22- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D

sesshy_pup- Tue 28 Nov 2006
i think that you should go with the kick in the groins.

Tana-san- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Oh Shadow, you must have known how thw majority would rule. Go for it, Girlfriend, twist the fates as only you can do best. Let the man? demon? Beast? whatever do as they both know they want to do but make it really amazing. I'm still unsaited and really need some fulfillment. Go Shadow Girl Go.

clavira- Tue 28 Nov 2006
The Twist!!! (thetwistthetwistthetwist)
definitely!!!! though a kick in the groin would be fun, I know you can come up with something better... (btw: when are you going to update "Tears of the Fallen"? I was kinda looking forward to the next chapter and finding out in general why Sesshoumaru is so mad at her...)

Amestisti- Tue 28 Nov 2006
So far so good...but what will happen to our little Kagome, hm? I choose D...you're a really good author and any of the others are just....mean...'specially b! Lol...Well, I'm gone....keep it up ^_^

flyingteapot- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I still can't see the point where Inuyasha is the right choice, heh. So, D.) I leave it to you, surprise me!

Beckie- Tue 28 Nov 2006
) Twist of Fate. (Just leave it to Shadow! She’s always got a wicked plot twist up her sleeve! But, of course, it wouldn’t be a twist if you saw it coming.)

Kohana- Tue 28 Nov 2006
I think She should run into inuyasha, i didn't want him in the fic but i think Sesshoumaru's beast should watch as inuysha picks her up and wipes mud of her face and says shes clumsy. The Sesshoumaru might need to try, i dislike when its so easy, i love how this story is going.

Beckie- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D) Sesshomaru (Still out of control)
and then a lemon. Remeberance was really good!

nickel- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Definitely D)!!

Tana-san- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Now Shadow, as great and wonderfully alluring Remembrance is you can't honestly believe we wouldn't want the lemonade that you have already put in Sesshoumaru's eyes,ne? I say Out of Control Sesshoumaru. You're already setting us up for them to want to jump each others bones, so than go from there. Guess I'm just in the mood for hmm fun and my husband is working the late shift. Come on...go for it!! Jen

clavira- Tue 28 Nov 2006
InuYasha, I think it's time to give Kags a break...

CH- Tue 28 Nov 2006
out of control sesshomaru...

autumngold- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Fabulous updates!! I think I'll pick "D", just because I want you to write about how Sesshomaru gets himself back in control!! I don't think the chase after Kagome would do it, so I would love to see how he solves the problem!! Can't wait for more!!

Robb Tripp- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D) Sesshomaru (Still out of control)

Never run from a dog gone crazy.

Sicilia- Tue 28 Nov 2006
D!!!!

this is really good....a great idea...i think it should be Sesshoumaru OUT of control...please update again when u can

sumire- Mon 27 Nov 2006
UHM.. B! Naraku! And then Sesshou should go out and save Kagome :D

jarakuheart- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I choose D ^_^ pretty Sesshoumaru out of control!

Beckie- Mon 27 Nov 2006
) Inuyasha barges in! (I just know that one of these times you guys will pick Inuyasha ;P)

sumire- Mon 27 Nov 2006
...BWAHA B!!! B! (never with Inuyasha XD)
And then Sesshou should run after her and see Kagome all shivering and wet in the rain... and then... he warms her up... and... XDDD meeheeheehee *squee*

hurray for fun interactive story!

Vulcana- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Hey I will go for option B

BTW you are doing a wonderful job. I really wasn't sure about this story when I saw the first chapter but your chapters are rather well written given how fast you are producing them.

Catherine- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I pick C! It just feels like the right ending for chapter 8. Keep up the good work! It's a great story!

Shadow's Angel- Mon 27 Nov 2006
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Jenna- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens. I think you should do letter c...where sesshy tells kagome to leave the cave.

Vandiel- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Oh man chapter 7 is a tough one... so.. can we chose two? lol
B and C (¬_¬ )
But if I can only have one choice... choice... C ;_;

Kohana- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I pick B! I love the thrill of pursuit!! this story reminds me of those choose you own adventure books from when I was little!

Chocolate-Pudding- Mon 27 Nov 2006
C) Sesshomaru begins to loose control of himself because of Kagome’s proximity and demands that she leaves.

I love this story(definetly better than mine) so keep it up!!!

Inu_Twins- Mon 27 Nov 2006
C plz that is really good but no InuYasha not yet any way!!

jazz- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Pick C for chapter 8

Tigeris- Mon 27 Nov 2006
A or C... hmmmm. I would say A but now I'm all curious about what exactly is inside the cave. And B just seems a little too OOC for Sesshy. So I guess I'll have to go with C... then again...
OK its decided I pick C!! There. I'm almost sure.

CH- Mon 27 Nov 2006
C.... C.... C.... :-)

chaoswingdragon- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Well it seems like my picking problem is cropping up again! I have to work out my ABs so thats what I’ll go with. Maybe distraught-ness could turn into anger and as a sopping wet puppy is about to charge into the cave an enraged Kagome grabs him by the ear and drags him away. *cackles madly* I love ear dragging, it always works on my brother!
~Chaos

flyingteapot- Mon 27 Nov 2006
This turned out to be hilarious! And seven chapters already, what a treat!
This time I vote C.). Inuyasha can barge in another time, option B. would seem too rushed and so I want to see Sesshoumaru squirm some more, heh...XD

Tigeris- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I pick c! 4get inuyasha, he is way overrated! :P Though i guess it would be reasonable for him to check up on her.
Cute fic so far, but I hope you can get back to Tears of the Fallen soon. Though i totally understand, I get writer's block like nobody's buisness.
*hugglez*

Yuki Asao- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I think choice C, she hears thunder

Beckie- Mon 27 Nov 2006
C) Kagome hears a crack of thunder in the distance and decides to seek shelter...Sesshomaru’s sheltering place.


Sesshy's Grrl- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Wow! Six ch's in one day and we decide what happens next? I love it! I vote for "A" since I know they'll eventually head to the same shelter anyway, and you cant beat their banter w/one another.

Serena- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I vote "C"! he he he *cackles evily*

Sesshy's Grrl- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I love your story! It's off to a great start and I cant believe how entranced I am by it already.
I vote for "B" 'cause you know Sess would not tolerate Kags to dismiss him like that. Cant wait for the next ch. !

autumngold- Mon 27 Nov 2006
This story is so much fun!! Of course I vote for "B"!! No one should ever turn their back on Sesshomaru!! Can't wait for your next chapter!!

Beckie- Sun 26 Nov 2006
B) Like Sesshomaru would let her turn her back to him. That’s like rejection! And we all know that no one in their right mind would reject Sesshomaru

sumire- Sun 26 Nov 2006
...MUWAHAHA B, B! B! XDDD Or, if that's too obvious for you, A... because then Kagome could make fun of Sesshou's supposed perfection, and then Sesshou could get angry and then UST ensues and.... you get the picture XD

Shadow's Angel- Sun 26 Nov 2006
CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC AND C

chaoswingdragon- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Wow, five chapters! Now if only I could bottle that work ethic and sell it on E-bay. You’d make me rich! I have to commend you for I’ve noticed that you’re getting some limey practice.*gives thumbs up*

So, Sesshomaru ogling a practically naked Kagome and Kagome imagining an ‘I’m too Sexy’, regal, flowery Sesshomaru. I just love the taste of new stories in the morning…err, or whenever! Okie dokie then, for your options how about some BA BA black sheep? Sesshomaru is about to go all ‘I’m a dog don’t turn your back on me’ and then the snake demon’s massive family swarms out of the hidden cave. Like a nest of rattle snakes or something. Now, why the heck can’t I seem to just pick one option? Do I have an over picking problem? Can it be treated? Why do I seem to like dramatics? The über poetic,
~Chaos

CH- Sun 26 Nov 2006
i chose b, i chose b ;-D

JinJin- Sun 26 Nov 2006
B) Like Sesshomaru would let her turn her back to him. That’s like rejection! And we all know that no one in their right mind would reject Sesshomaru

Thing 1- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I think you should make inuyasha come and have him get all jealous because kagome is ractically naked with Sesshy!!!!!!

Kris J- Sun 26 Nov 2006
B!!!!

Darkness- Sun 26 Nov 2006
i would have to say chose c. 'cause it is the coolest

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Make her pissed off at him. She has every right to be! xD

Inu_Twins- Sun 26 Nov 2006
OMG its has ot be B followed by C that would be so funny!!

Jupe- Sun 26 Nov 2006
This is an intriguing idea! And your writing is oh-so-fun to read in general, which makes it even better. xD

I vote for choice B, because it seems like a very Kagome thing to do. -nods-

Catherine- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I think B would be good. It just seems like something Kagome would do. She seems to let her temper get the best of her, especially when her abilities and worth are insulted. Great story by the way! Love the idea!

chaoswingdragon- Sun 26 Nov 2006
‘Ello, poppet! I just love finding these little surprises whenever I get on ASingleSpark. They make my day and after a 12hr car ride I needed a day maker.

So, when I read the first part of your story, I was thinking this sounds kick butt and then I went to the reviews to see what people had picked (I’m stupid and forgot that you had several chapters up). This stupidity affected me when I was reading the reviews and I noticed several people had picked option C. I was like ‘*scratches head*…there is no option C…” but now I’m all better. So, lets see. How about some BAC action? She gets really angry,bitches, does the angry sigh and maybe has a Zen moment and so she apologizes and then Sesshomaru says something about how the word of an almost naked person doesn’t hold that much water. Well, maybe I should stop procrastinating now and do some homework. Hehe, like that’ll happen! Peace,
~Chaos

Tana-san- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Hey Shadow!! I am truly intrigued with this concept. Yeah, I like this game?interaction?...whatever. On the next one C and then B seeing is how you believe you'll use two of the three anyway. Let the sparks fly as they say. I'll be watching for updates. Jen

anon- Sun 26 Nov 2006
B) Kagome allows her anger to get the better of her and yells at him for dousing her in goop, which raises his ire and causes him to act against her. !!

animlover22- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I say C, I think that would be prettty cool, question-are you thinking about making a sequel to "My Experiment"?

Pontas-Metallika- Sun 26 Nov 2006
FF.Net Tears of the Fallen fan coming onto A Single Spark and reading your other stories.xD; *waves* Hi! =3 Name's Mari, btw. Number two. Third person omnipotent. *sighs* Gotta love Sess/Kag. OH! Love and Humor 333 *sobs* Those angsty fics can get a girl depressed after a while.
;-;
Good luck With Tears of the Fallen! You absolutely ROCK as a writer. 3
Update soon!
-Mari

sumire- Sun 26 Nov 2006
...you know you want to write C XD *laughlaughlaugh* funfun interactive! ::heart::

>:D i wonder if sesshou would be the one who reminds her of her undressed state (keffpervertkeff)

Aurora Antheia Raine- Sun 26 Nov 2006
xD Just to prolong the story and make Kagome a stronger character, I vote for Kagome to save herself. ^-^

Kate- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Third person. :D

I know how writer's block is. Here's to hoping you get the best of it soon! :D

-Kate

Shadow's Angel- Sun 26 Nov 2006
C C C C C C C C C C C C C definately C

Beckie- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I like third person unless it is a one shot.

Leo of San d'Oria- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Oh this is going to be fun! (But I would rather be reading another wonderful chapter from 'Tears of the Fallen' but until then this will work for amusement.) And if i had to pick one of your three options i suppose it would be ummmm i guess the demon waiting for a meal?

Katie- Sun 26 Nov 2006
choice c. Heheheheh

Sarah Stoll- Sun 26 Nov 2006
hey im not really one to review but you have caught my interest. i think that you should go with the hungry demon you know get a little action in it early lol its not easy to write a good action scene but you do a really good job of it im looking forward to your next chapter of tears of the fallen
have a great day
sarah

Anneliesse2006- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Well...I vote for a beautiful waterfall! xD yes, I'm crappy...

dsm1980- Sun 26 Nov 2006
After having a wonderful time reading "The Experiment", I would be more prone to say I'd like to see another of your fics written in 1st person. I believe it's not as easy as writting in 3rd person, from an observer's POV, as it demands that the writer identifies with the character. However, you manage to pull it off nicely. Even though I love "Tears..." and the way it's written, I feel I've come to 1st person writing as your particular style. In any case, have fun putting this new story together ;)

Amestisti- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I think A would be the best choice. It seems more into the characters that way.

Lady- Sun 26 Nov 2006
i pick third person

flyingteapot- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Hmm, you have me intrigued here and because I adore 'Tears...' I give everything you write a chance.
So, I vote for B.) third person perspective.
No matter how or what you will write in the end, I'm looking forward to it!

Aurora Antheia Raine- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Ah. Another story by ShadowsWeaver1 that is sure to please everyone! I can't wait. xD

I vote for Third Person Perspective. ^-^

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