simply amazing

awwww

Well, I read the story and then the reviews. And in my honest opinion you have become an incredible writer! I have very high standards for reading a fiction work and will not read more than a chapter if the work fails to meet those standards. I do believe that you have thoroughly underestimated yourself.

Each and every one of your pieces that I have read have been not only captivating and well written, they have also been beautiful in their own way. And each of your stories is presented with an almost poetic justice.

You should be very proud of yourself! If you ever have doubts, just come read these reviews - that should fix things right for you!

And one more thing, if you were shy about this story, then I suggest you continue to be so for your future endeavors into this realm of writing. It serves you very well!

Setsujitsuni,
MS Cascata

This is a good one shot; but even with the lemon it is sad knowing what she lost. At the end I was hoping he would pick her up and take her with him instead of leaving her there. Keep up the good work.

This is up to your other stories' standards, I think. The lemon was intense but not over the top. You should be happy with the result; although, when my husband walked up behind me to ask a question, I minimized the screen lol. I look foward to your updates to for the other fics. Thanks

omg that was sooooo intence that i was acctually crying. i can not believe it u put so much efort and heart into ur stories that i can not fathom the right words to tell u how i feel about ur work. all i can say is well done. if ever1 wrote like u did and put there time, heart and efort into there work like u do. all fanfiction writers and readers would be captured. thankyou for the honer and pleasure of reading ur stories. dont ever give up on them.
Tamara Melton
ur faithful reader.
p.s.
let me know when u have writen more on ur stories plz thanks.

One word for you - WOW! - the lemon was good, the idea was genius, and the way you wrote it was breathtaking... You made me cry - I mean in a good way.

Your story convid emotions.

The only critic - There are some typos that made me reread some part of the fics.

I adore your work, "Remembrance" was amazing and "Tears" is leaving me wanting more.

Continue your good work,

love and kisses
FT

Great lemon.

One of the Best lemons I've ever read for this couple. Keep up the great work!

wow. knock yourself out with the horde of compliments that came and are coming your way. i mean seriously. intense? what an understatement! i couldn't cry, but i think that tight lump in my throat was definitely screaming for tears to happen. definitely.

you are an excellent writer. EXCELLENT. an advice for you that you should definitely heed is GO WRITE A BOOK! if you haven't written one yet, go do it!i mean look at your stuff!becoming a professional writer is your career path! i could only hope to achieve such writing stds when i'm old and sallow!how i envy you girlfriend...how i envy you...

simply wonderful, i love your work, it is always so original and so beautiful!

A beautiful lemon. Very well written. Very poetic at the same time as it is intense. Perhaps not a very plausible story, but I still like it alot. Don't worry about writing lemons in the future, you'll do great, I just know it. :)

....Wonderful (bows).

This was a wonderfully moving piece; I was almost in tears as I was reading it. You are such a great writer and I applaud you on the beauty of this piece.

I had to chuckle at the end, however, because all I could picture was Kagome standing alone and naked in the middle of the battle field as Sessho walked off. She was freed alright, right down to those restricting clothes!

(Annoyed of me yet? hehe :P )

Very good. Intense and loving, even though we know Sesshoumaru was only showing her life, and that there was no love between the two. I think this was a lovely lemon and you wrote it with just enough realism to go with the passion and gave it truly amazing meaning. Wonderful work, as always.

I know you wrote a lemon but it is not a typical one. Why? Because everythign you write packs with it a great verve of emotion and depth. You are a true writer. Soemday you shall start writing original stories, I know that you have the talents even though you say you are uncreative you are not. I think you should think seriously on this and write professioanlly.

-Dani.

Do not let doubt get to you, you are good, Damn good.

*Cries* This is the best fan fic I have ever read. So good yet so sad.... You're an excellent writer and I hope that you will continue to write these beautiful stories!

Loved it…
Sweet, touching and very well written.
^_^ Besitos Z.Z.

Man that was totally awesome!
You did good!!!!!

Beautiful fanfic. It made me think about my outlook on life. Kinda... Well I enjoyed this story very much and I hope you get over your writer's block. Ja ne!

Wow that was intense. I so loved it, but I expected no less from a great creator such as you. You did great with this story and I'm sure you will triumph over your other story. I love reading your work.

I thought it was a very powerful expression. I'm glad you had the courage to write it. It was my pleasure to read.

I loved it! It left me with hope that they will join again. Very touching and beautiful.
Well done!

This story was beautiful. I loved it. Great work !

............Sheer brillance.

~Azari~

Excellent!

Magnificent! This has to be one of the best one-shots I have ever read. For someone who isn't used to writing lemons, you did a fantastic job and could give a lot of professional romance writers a run for their money. This piece was poignant, sensual and a delight to read--Well Done!!

Wow, that was a hot story. You did great. I especially like the ending and how you made Sesshoumaru always finding the right words for Kagome.
Wonderful.

if all you wanted to do was to pull it off, you definitely did. I love it. great job

I really liked it! It was sexy, but still tastefully done. There were no crude words that always seem to draw my attention away from the story, and more into the "eww" range. =) I thought the premise was very thoughtful and intelligent and it seemed plausable. I know it is embarrassing to post such personal things up, but I think you did a very good job! Two thumbs up! *hands Shadow a cookie* Now, after all those encouraging words, don't you feel like writing a lemon for 'tears of the fallen'? LOL

WOW!
omg that was a masterpiece.Thank you for sharing that with us.

Oh my God... That was the most intense, the longest, and the hottest lemon I have ever read in my life! I don't know anyone who would flame or criticize this! Great job!

Wow! That was great! I totally loved it!!

Beautifully written and truly intense. You needn't be concerned about your descriptiveness in writing such intimate scenes. You mastered it well. I have read all your works here on A Single Spark and have thoroughly enjoyed each one. Write on, Shadow. You are one of "The Greats". Jen

Excellent story, but so sad!! I hate being alone, so I feel so sad for Kagome because now that's the way she is going to have to live her whole life!! Poor baby!! Thank you for having Sesshomaru give her the will to live!!

You…oh my gosh…it’s…A LEMON!!*glomps* and you told me you couldn’t write one. Ha! I found this just before I went to bed so my lights were off and my blush lit up the whole room! Well, I’ll be sure to have some nice dreams tonight.*grins wickedly* I thought it was excellent, by maybe I’m bias. Oh well. Psst!*whispers* just so you now I have a taser to get those who dare to flame you. So, now I’m going to try and go to sleep with naked a very delectable Sesshomaru dancing in my head. Its kind of weird because hes eating turkey and talking about a pool of gravy…0.o. Right. Great job!
~Chaos
P.S.- I guess its obvious that I got an internet connection in the boonies. Pretty cool, eh?. But alas, sadly I am not the first to review. *pouts* I was gonna offer you some cherry pie in celebration! Geeze, your story sure has my mind in the gutter. And I seem to be having technical difficulties do if my review is posted like 3 times...umm I guess I'm just overeager.

That was a very good lemon. I come across lemons often while I read and very few come close to the intensity that you put in this one. Sometimes I get stuck with alot of "smut-words" in stories and it plays out horribly in the plot. This was perfect. I hope you come to terms with your embarrassment and write more. Great Job

kawaii!!!! ^_^

This was just really good. I liked it alot. I like how even they slept together he did not automatically mark her like in other fics. It was very good.

graet chapter- intense but great.

take care
ta!
Silk_worm