one word that i dont know if it exsist..awsomness...

So this fic is incredibly sweet! I would never usually describe a fic like that but when I finished this little one shot it was the only phrase that came to mind. I love the way you described the way Kagome tastes.

wow... intense.... loved it

Great fic. Only one problem. Too short. It was like it only just got started, and then it was over. Regardless this is well presented and very well written.

Simply fantastic!

Here's hoping she's somehow turned InuYoukai in the battle. Cliche but preferable. A nice oneshot. Good imagery and characterizations.

Wow, that was beautifully written. I'd demand a sequel, but it ended so well that it doesn't need one...although one would be nice hint hint

WOOW! That was beautiful!! Goddamn well done! And, don't make any sequels, it's good as it is....
Romantic, poetic, simply lovely! Great work!

Nooo, you can't leave it like that update, make a sequel but do something more with this great piece of work please!!!!!!!