| i love this story please update soon
swtdrm01- Tue 21 Nov 2006
| That was interesting. I hope you update soon because I want to see what happens next. This story has certainly caught my eye.
Ashley- Mon 20 Nov 2006
| This seemed very, very rushed. You just put many things into one chapter one after the other, and it would be better if you allowed us to see how the characters interact and their personalities. No offense intended.
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