hwen will you update?

hwen will you update?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

your story was very amazing. i saw the whole picture in my head.please do a countinuing story about sesshomaru and kagome. for the next time they meet. i give you a 10/10. that was a perfect story. good job.

That was awesome! I loved it.

I know this is a lot to ask but can we have a continuation? or another story? Way cool. G'nite.

-Dani.

"no one disservices" - it's spelled deserves.

When you had Sesshoumaru talk to Kagome and not say her name, he called her woman. It's not women, that's plural. It's woman, with an a, not an e.

You spelled plate wrong. Plate, as in what we have our food on when we eat, you spelled it - plait. It's supposed to be plate.

You also could have used punctuation in places where you didn't have it.

It is an over all great story, but you DEFINITELY need a beta reader. Please continue, I would like to see where you will take this.