This was one of the best sesshou/kagome fan fictions that i have ever read, your really good! and you didnt drag on and on with like 79 chapters as one person from here did!
you are really talented!
i only hope for my story to be half as good as yours was when i post mine up!
Libertine- Tue 17 Jul 2007
I love this story, and may I say I also adore the clash, although I think I prefer London calling more then should I stay or should I go. Well anyways enough about that. I really enjoyed this story and you are a talented writer. I can't wait to read the sequal. But what could be more exciting then almost giving birth in a school?
cute cute!! kagome is the girlfriend of book boy!!
omg SOOO CUTE!! That was quite possibly one of the cutest things I have ever read!! Kagome playing the part of Cinderella as her prince charming woos her to the delight of the children!! Wonderfully done! If chapters 1 and 2 are so wonderful, I can hardly wait to see how the rest of the story goes... onwards and upwards-- to chapter 3!
Cerulean Lady24_21- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I love your story! Especiallt the fluff! There's a mess-up on the part about Kagome telling Rin about the laminated bookamrk, don't you mean so the bookamrk won'r rip you wrote that so that it would rip. GREAT STORY!
Kelli- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Oh my God! I just love this story! I loved how Kagome and Sesshomaru flirted throughout the whole chapter. It was completely different from anything I have ever read on this site. I am definitely going to rate this story, a 10!
luna- Mon 21 May 2007
omg i hadnt realised that i had missed the ending to such a great fic until i looked back through the titles, i must have missed it when i was sick. i just wanted to say that that was a graet ending and is there any posibility for a sequel cause there are many unanswered questions like what would sess's father do after he whent missing? wouldnt they get caught with all of kags family just going to america all of a sudden, who was the misterious woman at the airport? but if there is no sequel still the story was super wonderful.
one_winged- Mon 30 Apr 2007
that was beautifully written. it really does justice to the saying, love can be found at the most unexpected places. a job well done. =)
Kris- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Really good story. i loved it. I just had to read the whole thing in one sitting. i think its time for some food!
I LOVED THE ENDING IT WAS SOOO CUTE!!!
faye- Sun 29 Apr 2007
I read this whole story in one sitting.. for shame, i should be outside in this nice weather. Bravo!! I almost cried! I'm happy they moved to Michigan though! That's where I live! now if only I could find a man like Sesshoumaru (not married of course, haha)
update update update please
I have just discovered a work which was recommended by another author I rather like....I have read chapter one and I am in love....a completely DIFFERENT voice from the usual...GOD BLESS you...yes, I love this library encounter.
Me Likey I Cant Wait To See Wuts She Is Goin To Do !
dark anbu- Fri 02 Feb 2007
i......LOVE THIS STORY!!! i mean, doesnt every woman want to meet a sexy, mysterious man who wont give u his name and yet unconditionally loves u? ahhhh *stares off into space*..*shakes head after a moment* anyways i give high copliments on this ^^
update update.... what will kag do.... update soon... thanks
Siruka- Mon 08 Jan 2007
I love the chocolate theme..lol..please update soon.
...O-M-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!i luv the plot of this story and i love the name 'book boy'...i might name sumone that *laughs evilly* but anyways i love this fic, im going to add this little treasure to my favs^^
Thats okay. Just try too if you can! Can't wait!!
omgsh plz continue u made me cry in sum parts lolz yay there finally TOGETHER lolz!
Heather- Sat 06 Jan 2007
YES!!!!!! This story is amazingly good! Please update it very soon.
Jenna- Sat 06 Jan 2007
Yea!! Sesshomaru and Kagome are back together!! I'm so excited to find out what she decides on!!
yes,i need lots of chocolate while waiting for the next chapter to be updated! haha...i certainly hope she goes with sesshoumaru to america...i'm so addicted to this story!!
this the best fic... it will be so sad knowing it will be ending.... but can't to see what will kag choses.... until next time.....
gina- Sat 06 Jan 2007
greata chapter!!!! she has to go w/ him.. he loves her and the baby !!! =) well i will wait for more awesome!!!!! =)
D.A.T.A.- Fri 05 Jan 2007
Wonderful story. and YAY!! for Michigan ^-^
Will there be a sequel??
~Lady Kirara
I'm gonna guess that she goes. Either way she'll be very happy. Good luck with your exams. ^_^Ja ne!
Gotta love the class
Darlin u got to let me know
Should I stay or should I go?
If you say that you are miiiiiine
I'll be here till the end of time
sooo you've got to let me knooooow
should i stay or should i go?
Seli- Fri 05 Jan 2007
Sesshoumaru is moving...here...IN MICHIGAN! MWAHAHAHA *does a little nerdy dance* Now I can hunt him down and lock him in my basement. I knew there had to be something good in moving to MI. Hehehe, and I will keep him in my basement till someone buys him off of E-bay from me for a very high price x3. Anyhoo, I love this story, a bit depressing at a few points, but flawless grammar and spelling from what I can remember. Hm, could of dragged out the drama longer, but oh well. Squishy love, and more chocolate. 3
NOOOO!! don't kill sesshoumaru!! haha...i love reading sweet stories and i think yours is one of the best so far...continue writing great stories! rock on!! :P
oh.... more please... great chap... what will happen to kag and her baby.... will sessh ever find out... update soon... and let us know...
Kai- Wed 03 Jan 2007
Have Sesshoumaru killed off you say?! How scandalous and cruel to us, the loyal reviewers. I just want to hug Kagome. I feel...bad for her. I know she doesn't want pity, but...damnit go back to Sesshoumaru already!! I love them together. 3 Happy New Year!
Jenna- Wed 03 Jan 2007
Awww...I feel so bad for Kagome. Hopefully everything will turn out all right. Keep up the great work and update soon :]
gina- Wed 03 Jan 2007
no no please sont kill sesshomaru it would kill kagpme !!! =*( love it!!!! =) you rock reallycan't wait to read more!!!
I love it.
I have some ideas that you can use to lengthen and develop the story even more.
What you should do (suggestion) is have Rin and Kagome continue to contact each other by notes through Saya.
Sometimes Sessy should leave notes for her, Kagome would read them after thinking about it for sometime and be too devistated by his words to anwer, too angry and betrayed by his actions before.
We should have some insight on Rin's thoughts and emotions, maybe have her toss about the idea of telling Sesshomaru of Kagome's Pregnancy. Even some insight on any conversation that Shippo and Rin might have while away from adults. Maybe have Saya, Kaede, Jakotsu, Shippo and Rin try to get the two together again. It could work....
Only suggestions. But is sounds good right?
And when are we going to meet Miroku??? He has yet to show up!!!
Well I love it. Please update ASAP...
If you ever need help for ideas I can definately assist...
Gothic Lust
Tenchi- Tue 02 Jan 2007
i love it but you have to let it have a happy ending k
tenchi
Oh I love this story. I just wonder when everything will be alright...Godd luck with the new year. ^_^Ja ne!
Awwww....it's still so sad. >>sniff, sniff< But I hope everything works out. You updated very soon. I am so glad!!! Keep up the good work!!! Well I hope you update soon!!!! Bye! HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!
Okay So I Love The Chapter ... I Wanna Noe Is Sesshomaru And Inuyasha Brothers And If So Is That Why Inuyasha Hurt Her In The 1st Place ... Well Thats Bout It Update Soon Otay!
loved it... a bit depressing... i cried... more please... hehehehee
kat- Tue 02 Jan 2007
you still haven't fixed things yet... they must be fixed... update soon
Kara- Tue 02 Jan 2007
i love this fanfic. It is one of my favorites. Please update soon. I must know what happens next. ^-^
Kimonno Rose- Tue 02 Jan 2007
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Kagome and Sesshoumaru have to get back together soon.
THey are the best couple and the chapter did say tat he was sad.
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!
Emmi- Tue 02 Jan 2007
This fanfic is soo good! I totally felt for Kagome when she found out the truth. Way to go! Keep it up!!
10/10
Jenna- Tue 02 Jan 2007
Ahhh!! *cries*
This chapter was so sad!! Update soon..I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
tif- Tue 02 Jan 2007
ow poor kags.... will she go away so that seshh wont find her??? naraku will take good of her wont he???? neeee dont be so mean pls.... onegai....
PhantomGoddess- Tue 02 Jan 2007
I LOVE THE STORY i've been readingit from the start lol and i love it even more at friest i thought it was going to be another(sp) sess is a demon in hiding i lovr the little twiest (sp) man i can't spell lol well keep up the sexy work lol let me now when the next part is up ? ~^^~ mewoof !!!~^^~
meows- Mon 01 Jan 2007
heyhey! happy new year! (: i must say, i really like your story! hurry update! i am eager to know what will happen!! haha... keep up the good work!
kat- Mon 01 Jan 2007
omg!!! you had so better update this and soon!!! and fix it!!!! this is not how this is supposed to go... grrr... update soon please? i'm begging here!
gina- Mon 01 Jan 2007
happy new year !!! great story sad!!! i thought it would happier!!! =( still great!!!
OMG U SOOO GOTTA UPDATE! U REALLI DO I GOTTA NOE WUTS GOIN TO HAPPEN NEXT!
This chapter was just so heartbreaking, such a wonderful story
omg... that was so sad. and he doesn't even know about the baby. poor her... and him.... but what about kikyou???? that has me so confused.
i love the mystery that you had him play out. even the oh so cliche first meeting. that was quite funny.
i love it. please let me know when you update again...
Gothic Lust
Inu-Miko88- Sun 31 Dec 2006
That...(sniffs) was so sad. I feel so sorry for Kagome. I wonder how Sesshoumaru's going to react when/if he finds out about baby?
swtdrm01- Sun 31 Dec 2006
I loved it. That was intense. I hope you update soon 'cause this is getting steamy. Great job.
I've never been one to read stories that are written in first person POV, but I have really enjoyed this one. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
sumire- Sun 31 Dec 2006
CRUELTY, THY NAME IS LILITH-SAMA! *cries for days (well, that's an exaggeration, but...)*
SESSHOUMARU, YOU EVIL BIZNATCH, GO MAKE UP WITH KAGOME!!! SHE'S NOT JUST A MEANS TO GET TO KIKYO ANYMORE, SHE'S YOUR ONE AND TRUE LOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE STUPID BAST***, SHE'S HAVING A BABY D: STUPID NARAKUUUUUUUUUUU ;_____;
...now that that's out of my system. UGH, cliffhangers are EVIL, EVIL I SAY. BUT, i'm willing to let it slide because this is such a good story and the drama is so intense and the tension is so... perfect? your characterizations and situations are beautiful, and i can't wait to see what happens next (please let it NOT be kagome + baby dying. PLEASE.)
:heart:
ShalafiRach- Sun 31 Dec 2006
You asked for one, so I shall give. I have been reading this from the start, and I love it! It's wonderful ^_^ I can't wait to see what will happen to poor Kagome (so depessing!) I hope everything works out in the end ! :D
kagsesskyo- Sun 31 Dec 2006
That was an intense chapter!!!! I can't believe what just happened! Please update the next chapter soon!! XD
Oh...I knew it would be bad...but not that bad...Oh what's Kagome to do now? See you next year! ^_^Ja ne!
jasmine- Sun 31 Dec 2006
bringing kikyou back in the mix was unexcepted I was thinking he be moreon the lines of an assassin or crimelord keep up the good work review soon but dont rush the longer the story the better
Crystal Redemption- Sun 31 Dec 2006
plz update! i mean, i have folllowed ur story since the beginning ang i really like it. to b honest, i didnt expect the yakuza bit, lol, well plz update as soon as possible but if its a bother, u dont have to
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, OH MY FREAKIN GOD!!! i knew that it was gonna be a bad thing for narku && sesshomaru to meet because he said that he just hated sesshomaru because of "bussiness" but then you, YOU! tottaly throw a curve ball && surprise me!!!! wow, thats great writing right there. amazing. IT WAS ALL FOR KIKYO! dear lord talk about surprise. LOVE your story! cant wait untill you update agine, but take your time. =]
bluemoon_175- Sun 31 Dec 2006
I really hope you don't end it soon and keep on writing, but do what you want. Hope you keep up the good work, so I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE. :^)
rowen- Sun 31 Dec 2006
Good thing you were in tears too, makes me feel like less of a wus
njade1- Sun 31 Dec 2006
I love the story. Well all but that last chapter because it was so sad made me cry. Also maded me want to kick the shit out of book boy. I can't wait to read more and see if thier's a happy ending. So up date soon
Happy New Year!!! Everyone
njade1- Sun 31 Dec 2006
I love the story. Well all but that last chapter because it was so sad made me cry. Also maded me want to kick the shit out of book boy. I can't wait to read more and see if thier's a happy ending. So up date soon
Happy New Year!!! Everyone
Kimonno Rose- Sun 31 Dec 2006
Oh my gosh.
YOu did a great job with this chapter.
You have to update soon.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
I don't know how long I can wait until I find out what happened to KAgome.
The poor thing. This chapter made me cry. I NEED an update ASAP!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!
TaiYoukai- Sun 31 Dec 2006
How horribly sad!! Oooh, I feel so sorry for both of them!!
Tai
Update soon
Oh. My. Gosh! How could that have happened to Kagome. I cried!! That was just so sad. You really did a good job on this chapter. Yet it was oh so sad. Poor Kagome, She is heartbroken. What will become of her...and what of the baby. I really hope you update soon. I really wish to know what happens. And ....Happy New Years'!!!!!!
this story is getting more and more interesting by the second! i wonder if sesshoumaru is involved in some shady business? hmmm...good luck on the next chapter and get over your writers block! :D
gina- Fri 29 Dec 2006
amazing story i really love this!!!!!great great great!!!!! =)
loving it.... loving it.... more please, heheheheeee
Oh wow....shes pregant. I wonder how "Book Boy" will take it...lol. I hope you feel better. ^_^Ja ne!
kagsesskyo- Fri 29 Dec 2006
That was an awesome chapter!!! I can't believe Kagome's pregent!!!! PLease update the next chapter soon!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Kimonno Rose- Fri 29 Dec 2006
I love this story.
Now it is getting so good I don't think that I'll be able to wait for the next update.
PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need to know what happens next. I waited so long for this update. Please don't make me wait any longer. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
I didn't like the chapter...I LOVED the chapter!!! It was awesome!! Please update soon!! What gender will the baby be when it's born??
Addah- Mon 25 Dec 2006
Please Update.
kathy- Thu 21 Dec 2006
oh my god. you, it, its ... "sigh" Its just to good for words but I will say one: amazing. Oh yea and two more, update soon!
I loved the new chapter!!! Please update soon!!!! Can't wait till then!
you have to update soon! I am dying to find out what happens next! until the next chapter... ja ne
Oh wow! Love it. ^_^Ja ne!
blackrosewitch- Sat 16 Dec 2006
this fic just keeps on getting better and better i look forward to your next chapter
Kimonno Rose- Fri 15 Dec 2006
This was without a doubt my favorite chapter. It was so sweet and I loved the way that Kagome said that Book Boy was the one. This is my favorite book without a doubt. I love this. But is there even a bad guy in this story? If not good.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
another great chap... evolving into some mystery.... so,when will kag find out book boy's identity.. and what's he's hiding.......or at least his name.... hehehehehe ;)
localsamurai- Tue 12 Dec 2006
Is sesshoumaru an inuyoukai?
kagsesskyo- Tue 12 Dec 2006
This chapter was awesome!!!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chapter!!!
gina- Tue 12 Dec 2006
one of the best stories i have read in a long time!!! you have a great talent, and thanks so much for sharing!!!!!!! =)
you must write more please oh please i am like your biggest fan here please don't let me down
*squee* this is so CUTE, X3 I LOVE IT!!!! Thank you for updating! :heart: I can't wait to see where the plot takes the story, and hopefully Kagome will learn Sesshou's name without any conflicts and they can live happily ever after :D (although that is unrealistic, it would be so romantic, right?)
:heart:
Leafeknight7- Mon 11 Dec 2006
I love this story to death! Its one of those that you just cant get enough of at all. Update again soon. ^_^Ja ne!
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next
Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next
Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next
Seli- Mon 27 Nov 2006
:squeals and runs around in tight little hyper circles: I love your story. It's very witty and cute!...even though it is out of character for me to read something below R, I absoutly adore this! Keep writing, and btw, Of Mice and Men is an evil book that my evil 10th grade teacher assigned...evil I say!
kuma- Mon 27 Nov 2006
its awesome i love how uve gotten all the characters in it update soon
I enjoyed reading this, so far! I think it's very cute and it makes me laugh when Kagome embarrisses herself infront of book boy. *Chuckles* update soon, please =)
the Dah- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Very lovely. Romantic.
MidnightTimberWolf- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I actually found a story with something more than the usual writings. I give this story two thumbs up! I loved it how could one not when your living your own little fantacy. Though I disapprove of Book Boy not revealing his name to Kagome he has his reasons. I wonder when Inu Yasha or Kikyou are going to show up. What will happen when Book Boy learns that his hated half brother dated Kagome before leaving her for Kikyou. Oh the things to come are endless I cannot wait to read them. Update soon.
B.A- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I love it! Its so adorable and sweet! aww...I just can't get over it! YAY!
please write more you were so mean stoping when it was getting to the good part so please write
bluemoon_175- Sun 26 Nov 2006
I have never been more excited to wait for an update. I hope you keep up the job well done, also this story sounds fantastic. So PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
swtdrm01- Sun 19 Nov 2006
That was a beautiful chapter. I hope to see another soon.
meow- Sun 19 Nov 2006
hey there! i really like this story! it is very interesting! keep up the good work! (:
orchid- Sat 18 Nov 2006
loved it... great chap... until next time....
Vulcana- Sat 18 Nov 2006
You have an interesting concept going here and I enjoy reading it.
Please keep up the good work
I want to tell you how much I'm loving your fic. I'm a hopeless romantic as well and each time i read this, I'm left with 'ugh, why'd you end it!' lol. it's just so sweet and so beautifully written. I get this huge smile on my face everytime I see it's updated and I drop what I'm doing to read it immediately. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us.
mangagirl3535- Sun 12 Nov 2006
awww! i love your story. keep writing, so i can keep reading! lol...i hate romeo and juliet as well...lol.
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