| it was good till you just stopped, terrible 'ending'.
DarkAngel495- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| impresine, i like your story, could you make another chapter? thisd time kagome and sesshoumaru where together, i like your poems too, they are somehow touching i gives you a little hope in like about continueing. but the way good job
ELSY- Mon 12 Feb 2007
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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judzea- Sat 11 Nov 2006
| It would be nice of you to do a third poem to give us a glimpse of what happens to their lives. I'm for happing endings...but hey, this is your poem/story. Good job. :)
Heather- Fri 03 Nov 2006
You should continue this story . . . Maybe make it a two-shot??? . . . ^-^ . . .
This was also very well done . . . I dont usually read poems . . . But i really liked how it flowed with the story . . . Please write more
Noone- Fri 03 Nov 2006
| OMG im crying ur poems are touching..........very.........please continue this story
Nikki- Thu 02 Nov 2006
| Wow! You have great talent here. I love how you made the poem sound so ... professional. It completely sounded so Kagome in this one-shot of yours. Good job and keep up the good work!
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