soooo creepy! xD

You have a marvelous touch with the horror genre, dearest manipulator of shadows. The revelation that Kagome had spiritually gone back in time to save Sesshoumaru and his certain knowledge that she was dead made this a delicious story to devour. Have you ever thought of extending your warp and weft into the traditional summertime ghost stories?

Thank you for your bit of halloween fun! very festive of you. It was a bit spooky i must admit.

You know I must say that reading this again just makes me more impressed with your talent for writing. I am ashamed though that I never reviewed this one. So I am now and this fic was one of the best Halloween stories I've ever come across. Thanks for reposting it. It was worth re-reading again. Hugs, Jen

that was so good that story had me at the end of my seat that was really good

that was so good that story had me at the end of my seat that was really good

Wow! Nice piece! A really unique story, and that's unusual. It took me really long to figure out that the green scaly thing was actually Jaken, talk about me being dense! XD Now I'm gonna go on to the next story on your shelves. ;)

That was really cool! For a bit I felt just as confused as the girls in the story. I do wonder if Jaken and Rin ended up back alive as well? You just have to love Sesshomaru...sighs he makes this world seem boring hehehehe..

It was short .. but U didn't skip anything nothing happend to soon i t was perfect i loved it. . your storys are AMAZING!! lol ..


--Rin

ok, i officially love you. i love halloween and scary stories... and ... i love how you had the change in the past effect the future. you rawk. that is all.

Haven't even read it yet, but I know it's going to be great!! Your work is always great!! Update on Tears soon!! I totally hooked!! Ja Ne!!

awwe man!! you should so make a sequel to this! this story was awesome!

wow, just wow, you are amazing!!!

Great Halloween Story!....I wish I had read it on Halloween!

Tell me your going to make a sequel to this story. Like does fluff'ems save kagome from being killed and what did happen to rin after kagome saved sesshoumaru. Please don't leave me hanging here.

you should make a sequal other than that it was great

ever since i came across The Story, i have been reading all of your fics like crazy. *lol* you have a great writing style, and your plotlines are all thought out and very easy to follow once given the hints. i especially liked this one for its suspense quality, almost bordering on true horror. well written, as usual. if you ever get the inspiration and the time, i think it would be neat if you followed up on this concept by composing a piece on how Sesshy saves Kags life. that would be cool. other than that, keep on with Tears. it's a wonderful piece!

I love the story but as much as it pains me to say it Kagome's friend is a bitch. I am glad she got put in her place. Again I say I love the story update soon. Sorry about the statement but I had to speak my mind on that part.

That was an amazing story! Short and sweet(?) Anyway, I can't blame Kagome for falling on her ass like that, I probably would have done the same.

Many kudosto you for a great ghost story. I loved it. You are one of the best storytellers on my list. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

holy crap. you are definitely on my top 3 list of authors--and that's saying something. i almost wish that you would have continued with the story, but then it might have developed a "cheesy disney movie sequel" feel to it, so i'm glad you ended it where you did. i was so scared that kagome was still going to die after everything was said and done! nice suspense. this is most definitely one of my favorite fics of all time. keep 'em comin'!
oh! and if you ever have time, please send me an e-mail or something, k?
-nohbodi

holy crap. you are definitely on my top 3 list of authors--and that's saying something. i almost wish that you would have continued with the story, but then it might have developed a "cheesy disney movie sequel" feel to it, so i'm glad you ended it where you did. i was so scared that kagome was still going to die after everything was said and done! nice suspense. this is most definitely one of my favorite fics of all time. keep 'em comin'!
oh! and if you ever have time, please send me an e-mail or something, k?
-nohbodi

After years of reading fanfic, this is by far the best one i have ever read. I was so drawn in and left in shock i can't even describe how much i enjoyed this story. You should start writting your own stuff, you could really be the next big author! If you ever do publish let me know, i'll be the first in line to buy a copy!

What a fabulous story!! The story of Sesshoumaru and Rin is so sad!! I'm glad that Kagome was able to change the outcome!! Thank you for writing this incredible fic!!

Wow, this story had everything a good story needs.
Phew I'm still completely excited and out of breath from reading... you should see me haha.
But why not to continue with the story, it seems Sesshoumaru knows that Kagome is going to die while fighting Naraku. Please continue the story.
I would love it soooo much if you would write more. PLEASE!!!

Encore!!! Need more!! You really shouldn't leave us hanging like that!!!

O.o*gasp* that’s not…you can’t…that isn’t the End END is it?? That’s so not fair! Being in the future with a relation to the past and then into the past but future past…Ok now I’ve confused myself. But please, please tell me that there will be SOME kind of continuation*puppy dog eyes* your not that cruel, not to a little puppy*whimpers* Lol, but it kicked butt!! Its so original –then again all your stories are- but I love it!!! Yes, even with the tormented agony my brain is running through trying to consider the time stream thingy...thats it I’m just saying the heck with it!! It is as it is an that’s that. But this is what I really wanted to do for you *cheers and throws confetti* congratulations on the completion of your epic tale!! Bravo!!*standing ovation*. There you go!! The sleepy,
~Chaos

This, I have to say, is one of the best stories I've ever read! I absolutely LOVE how it ended!

I really love this story. It was beautifully written and very original. Which seems to be harder and harder to find. You did an awesome job and thank you for the awesome reading. Keep up the wonderful writing. I enjoy reading your other fanfics too.

that was very good... brovo..... though i would really like to see a sequel

amazing! =D

this is totally awesome

it would be awesome if u can write a second story to go with it

Too lazy to sign in... xD lol. But... I just wanted to say that I LOVED this short story! It kept me guessing nearly the entire time and I loved the ending. It's so unique! I'm adding it onto my favorites! Great job!

Great story! Well written, dramatic yet utterly romantic at the same time----BRAVO!!

WAIT WAIT WAIT
! does that mean that Sessh saves Kagz from dieing by Naraku's hands? OOOO! I hate that you ended it there, but all in all it was awesome! i loved the story! Hope you do more stories again soon!

NICE!!! Mwa hahahahhaaaa! I love it when the audience knows whats going on. Silly Yuka, don't you know that the spirits of the dead can cross over on all Hallow's Eve?? Poor Sesshy and Rin, I'm guessing that is who the story is about. Was it Kohaku who was the boy she fell in love with? Or am I way off on this? On to the next chapter!

NICE!!! Mwa hahahahhaaaa! I love it when the audience knows whats going on. Silly Yuka, don't you know that the spirits of the dead can cross over on all Hallow's Eve?? Poor Sesshy and Rin, I'm guessing that is who the story is about. Was it Kohaku who was the boy she fell in love with? Or am I way off on this? On to the next chapter!

That was really great. It almost demands a sequel.

I loved it.

Wow. I'm a fan of My Experiment, and your work is awesome! Thanks for this story! I had nothing to do this Halloween. You made my day. ^^

I've really enjoyed this story. The twist of having Feudal era friends as tortured ghosts is quire refreshing.
Thanks for a fun weeks worth of reading.

Wow!

I loved it from start to finish. I read My Experiment a few weeks ago and fell in love with your writing then. You are truly a fantastic writer, and to write so cleanly while maintaining such wonderful plot, I am in awe.

However, that was mean ending it where you did, i want more!!

Loved it, I look forward to more of your other story, Tears.

Ha I see meanness is spreading!!!! Hows he going to return the favor??? I mean really is he going to give her a piece of candy or just a piece???

At least with my suspense factor... eventually you will know what happens. But with this were suppose to be in suspense for all eternity!

Mean... mean... mean...

Better yet this is some kind of sick revenge isn't it?? Sadist :)

see ya
nikkari

Wow...just...wow....that was awsome!! And the end...no, I didn't want it to end...
You should make a sequal!! A small sequal where Kagome and Sesshomaru have more time together...yeah, starting off with the party...

It's not fair!! I loved this fanfic and all but only the last two chapters had Sesshomaru in them!! But I still loved it...you should really really do a sequal..

What a fantastic Halloween treat! It makes being way too old for trick-or-treating bearable! I still want a big bag of candy, but...I'll live. ^_^

Again - great job. I really am in awe of how you can write so much so quickly, and still maintain quality. Looking forward to the next chapter of "Tears"...though you left this one open-ended...perhaps you'll consider continuing it?

I loved it! Many treats for you tonight.

This wasa great story!! Happy Halloween, and thanks for the very "Holiday" story ^^

You're a great writer. I read My Experiment from start to finish with enjoyment. I'm enjoying this one as well.

Many treats for you if you could just get the last chapter up tonight, but if even if you can't, you still deserve them for giving us this great story. Thank you.

This is very good and very original. I've never seen or read a fanfiction about Halloween before. I've read all the chapters that is up now and I have to say that this is great. ^^ Please keep up the good work.

- Lady Hana Mizuki

Well, cliffs just seem to be your forte! But its all good. Stupid Yuka being stupid. Of COURSE she was evil. I mean honestly, who couldn’t see that?*crossing fingers* I picked up on it a little bit that she was just a little too trigger happy but when she killed Jaken I was like ‘ NOO!! That’s my job!*glares evily*. Yup, yup. I would totally make this review totally more awesome if I wasn’t so tired. The candy must have been drugged. I guess my parents were right when they said to not take candy from strangers!
The loopy,
~Chaos

Wahhhh. . . its halloween. where's my update?? You must have a life and be at a party or something. I feel so sorry for Jaken, Eri and Ayume. Unless you are planning on doing a re-do by having Kagome go through the well and save the day, this is going to be a really dark fic.

Ahhh she killed Jaken... poor little toad guy. And now her friend has been taken by Rin. Damn ghosts always taking stuff. Can't wait to see what sess does to them.

Oh and I know your frustrated with me and the whole box thing in the red, but I know what will send your frustration level through the roof. The endiing to Suspension is absolutely going to kill you. So here is my apology ahead of time.

I am very very oh so very sorry!

see ya
nikkari

I like this story so far ... Very halloweeny ^^. Update soon, please =D

‘This undead Miko would like a treat.’
AHAHAHAHAHA
Oh god that is my favorite line ever. :D
This is good. OOooooH! :O Rin T_T Poor Rin! Poor Sesshoumaru.
HERE COMES KAGOME TO SAVE THE DAY!
:D
Lets get her a cape. ^_^
Can't wait for more, but update whenever you get the chance. ^~

THAT WAS EVIL! EVIL EVIL EVIL! How could you end it like that?! HUH?!? That was just evil! lol but awedsome chapter, and very mysterious... but I don't think I can take thinking of Sessh being killed by who I think he was killed by.... (weird woring much?) lol anyways hope ya update soon!

Oh!!!*shakes fist angrily* You definitely weren’t kidding when you informed me of that horrible, HORRIBLE, suspenseful cliffe. Grr!!! Lol, BTW, reading it in the dark does add a certain ‘horror’ appeal to it, especially when your family is in other parts of the house randomly making loud banging noises. The Drama! But I have to say thank you SSSOOO much for Kagome’s ‘kill Yuka’ moment. Ever seen someone jump into a computer? cause that’s what I was about to do. That wench! She deserves to be…whatevered…by that youkai, not Eri( even though Eri was second on my list. Stupid groupies and their stupid pressuring!) Keep up the spooktacular-ness. Can’t wai for your update. Look, I rhymed!! Currently becoming sick on candy,
~Chaos

I love this story, it gave me chills and each moment I was wondering on what was going to happen next. I can't wait for Sesshomaru to come into the picture!!! Yuka is annoying and I would love to kick her ass, but without her, none of these things would happen

I just can't wait for Sesshomaru to come into the picture. That is going to be my fave part!! Sesshomaru, where art thou Sesshomaru!! Heeheehee

AHHHHHHHH! this story is truly freaky...

I LOVE IT!

please update as soon as possible

omg loved it. a haunted house in the middle of nowhere. (hmm... middle of nowhere...? i have always wondered that if somethng was in the middle of nowhere, then wouldn't it be somewhere instead of nowhere? does that even make sense?) Oh well anyways like i was saying a haunted house with four hormonal teens spells nothing but T-R-O-U-B-L-E

'Tell me what in the world you`re doi`n A-L-O-N-E' got a little off base there. nothing like a little travis tritt to get ya going for the day.

my original point was that i loved it. there got it out. can't wait to see what happens next. oh and exactly how short are we talkin here? another 2 chapters or more than that? you must tell me... why i don't know but you must!

ok now i know i'm loosing it so that means i must call it quits for the day. civilization is far to overwhelming for me to handle right now so i suppose i will go make a bed out on the cold cold ground and reconnect with my 21st centruy self.

see ya
nikkari

I have a question.

The purifying arrow didn't work on the enchanted door right? Could Kagome just expanded her own aura to form a barrier into which she can encompass her friends into her barrier so that they could pass safely through the door?

I love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Poor Sesshoumaru. Killed by Rin b/c she fell in love with Kohaku. . . I have to say, Kagome bears some responsibility for this mess. she had more knowledge than Yuka, and should have put a stop to it. She could have explained what she knew, at least a little of it, and been more forceful, esp. after sensing the youkai.

I've finally found an awesome Halloween story that I want to keep reading! I'm a big scary story freak, and I'm only going to say this plenty of times.

This is AWESOME, GREAT, and amazingly SPOOKY!

OH! Wow! this story is so awesome! It's very suspensful! I love it! plz update soon!

HEY THIS IS GETTING GOOD SO PLESE UPDEAT SOON! PLESE PLESE PLESE PLESE! PLESE

HEY THIS IS GETTING GOOD SO PLESE UPDEAT SOON! PLESE PLESE PLESE PLESE! PLESE

Ohh!! You are so bad! In a good way of course. Keep it up! From now on I think I'm going to be reading these updates with the lights off, just to get the full experience. And for our randomness of the day I present to you that I like exclamation marks!!!!! Lol. Loving your shadow endings,
~Chaos

Ohh...it was scary...not. But it was a funny read that kept me on my toes with suspense! Write more!

-Dani.

Ah, Inuyasha the BumbDog. Has a nice ring, no? Quirky but cute and also totally frustrating. Sometimes I just want to bash those friends of Kagome’s into a brick wall or something. How stupid can they be? Honestly, ‘poor little sick Kagome’ sure looks like all she does is lay at home with utterly fantastic diseases. Gah! But anywho, happy Halloween to you too! Now, if only demons really did come out to haunts us. I would have a bag of bacon treats sitting by my side! Heart,
~Chaos

Hey!

Cute story! I like where this is going. Your descriptions are great, and I like the way you put things in order; there's no sudden change and no unfinished details. Good job. I hope to see more come out of this...