Please update soon!!! I just reread the story and have once again fallen in love with it, this is beyond a doubt the most creative sess/kagome story I've ever had the pleasure to read. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!
You haven't update this story for awhile and I really like it so far. Please continue with this story!
Hally- Tue 15 Jul 2008
I came here from your link and I absolutely love!! your story for Through the mirror!!!
I hope you update soon! =]
If you can do me a favor and send me an e-mail when you update for this story, that would be great!
blkntandogs- Wed 02 Jul 2008
I am in love with this story! I really hope that your plan on finishing it! It's such an original idea, and so well done! Please Pleaes Please Please Please don't abandon it!
Thank you for your time!
Blkntandogs
blkntandogs- Wed 02 Jul 2008
I am in love with this story! I really hope that your plan on finishing it! It's such an original idea, and so well done! Please Pleaes Please Please Please don't abandon it!
Thank you for your time!
Blkntandogs
Kenna- Mon 30 Jun 2008
Is the group eventually going to go to Scandinavia to meet Sesshoumaru's clan? That would be so cool!
And just a little tidbit that makes me like your story all the better - My name is from Old Norse, so I feel like it really makes me connect with your story - I love how you have Sesshoumaru use all the words from the language.
...and I know I'm an obnoxious nerd for asking this, but it would be so cool if you used the name Kenna or something like it for the name of an OC later in the story....:)
Thanks - and keep on writing Through the Mirror!
Houkakyou- Mon 30 Jun 2008
Through the Mirror is absolutely amazing - are you sure you're a 'newbie author'? :P
(I actually printed it all out and keep it in a binder in my bookshelf :D I'm insane about it - please update! )
And I wanted to suggest that you put your stories up on fanfiction.net or mediaminer.org or even your account at Dokuga - when ASS goes down, people won't be able to read the pure awesomeness that are your stories! *hearts you*
Gahh!!! Why'd you have to leave it there, lol?! This is so awesome! I was hesitant at first 'cause you totally changed Sesshoumaru, but it works, lol. Update soon!!
Jirru- Wed 11 Jun 2008
Your story is beautiful! I love it. :) I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
PlayingWithDemons- Mon 09 Jun 2008
will you be continuing this fic?
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the "dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the "dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the "dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
ok. So i just finished all that you have updated thus far and sooooo wishing for more. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =]
btw: just a few questions. Im not sure if i had just completely missed it while reading or someone had already asked but... where is shippou and rin? it was one thing if you completely disregarded them in the story but im pretty sure shippou was mentioned by inuyasha in like ch 20*? and was never mentioned again... or so i think (maybe i had just read over it and missed it) .. and rin's probably at the western home but i was just hoping for a confirmation.
regardless, i just wanted ot let you know i love your story. Especially sesshoumaru's courtly old world manner.
just wondering if you have ever read the
"dark series" by christine feehan. its a bit repetitive but i think you'll love it.
lol sorry. long review hehe
Im currently enthralled by your story and i have just finished ch 18 and saw the poem "the tyger" by william blake. ^_~ I LOVE THAT POEM. its been my favorite poem since i read this book several years ago called "in the forest of the night" by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. from then on i love tigers. So therefore, i absolutely adore the tora twist to the story. ^_^ i so recommend that story to you. its about vamps though. not sure of your preferences but its so good. totally pro-feminism. keke. but anway. i'm going to finish your story now.
I keep rereading this fic in the hopes you have added a new chapter. This is one of those stories you just can't forget ( so GOOD!!!) Please continue .
I keep rereading this fic in the hopes you have added a new chapter. This is one of those stories you just can't forget ( so GOOD!!!) Please continue .
Kono-chan- Mon 02 Jun 2008
I actually really liked how you dealt with Inu Yasha. It was necessary, I think, and with how your story-line goes, it worked very well. So whatevs. Haha, I never liked Inu Yasha that much anyway. ^_^
Marquel- Wed 14 May 2008
*tears steam endlessly* Please continue, I have waited patiently for nearly a year hoping against hope that you would continue this beautiful story. Please tell me it has not been in vain. I need to know how this plays out or I shall always have it on the back of my mind as it has been since July of last year.
I am sorry for the begging but honestly the only reason I have refrained from commenting was the repeated reading of what you do have written. If you stopped for need of a beta I will happily do so for you. I am a Literature major with hopes at becoming an editor, I would be happy to hone my skills.
E-mail me with your reply at typebelow@hotmail.com.
With my hopes bared,
Marquel
Oh my god.
This fic must be something crossed with extacy and laced with crack because I'm totally addicted.
I started this at midnight and I'm stil reading!
(it's six am and I'm on chapter 21... >_)
I love it!
I keep ranting about how cool you've made Sesshomaru and how much I love you for this fic.
Oh mann, it's just amazing!
I love it and you.
lol
3
Ai
Moira- Sun 11 May 2008
Please update soon! I love the story and you're a really talented writer!
Angi- Sat 10 May 2008
I always enjoy your chapters! I am truly in love with your fanfic^^
this chapter brings totally new options in the whole story. But what will be? Sango can't leave Miroku an dshe haven't even noticed that she is pregnant. I can't just simply believe it!
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
You are a great author!
Please keep going!!!
May- Fri 09 May 2008
hi! Love the story so far, awesome plot! are u going to keep updating?!
Maja- Tue 06 May 2008
... It seems I sent my review unfinished... -_-'
What I tried to say was: lovely characterizations...
I am from Scandinavia and yet I cannot recognize the language Sesshomaru speaks...
You talk of Norway, but Norwegian resembles Danish and that certainly doesn't sound anything like that. Is it Faroese? I am confused...
Maja- Tue 06 May 2008
I love this fic. It has humor, plot and and lovely cara
Naka- Fri 02 May 2008
Wonderful story! But you know what would make it even better? Updating!! Please do so, you can't leave us all dying for more and I'm pretty sure that everyone who's read this is wanting more! ^_^
Azera- Fri 02 May 2008
Wow you havnt updated in a while, please do so!
tina- Thu 01 May 2008
I am in awe right now , this is a beautiful story and I can only hope and wish you will pick it back up and finish it
Ashley- Thu 01 May 2008
PLEASE!! PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!!!! IT IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE AND I'VE BEEN DYING ALL THIS TIME WAITING!!!!!! PLEASE!?!
Dark- Tue 29 Apr 2008
"His beast hissed, threatening to slip his skin in it's temper. " I absolutely love this sentence, the imagery is very powerful; and I really do like your writing style even with the occasional typo...but hey everybody makes little mistakes...
I look forward to reading the ending, and all that leads up to it.
~Dark
Everyone's beloved story... 35 full pages of reviews.. we, your devoted readers and fans, deeply wish for more.
As someone else said below, this story is so intricate in its characterizations, so beautifully original, and wonderfully written, it is one of those epic stories that are in a class of their own.
It doesn't matter what the flavor of the week might be (not that it wouldn't be a decent read) but this story transcends those which are enjoyable but eventually, forgettable. There are so few stories, that, like one, inspire so much devotion and desire to read more.
Please write more if time allows... of course real life comes first, but if you can, it would make all of us so happy - I know that any day a chapter of this story were to come out, my day would be made by it, just as it would be when a favorite author publishes a new book.
I can't wait to read morel
OhBrother- Sat 19 Apr 2008
gah! i love this! please, please update soon! and near the beginning in an author's note you mentioned a notification list. (or something similar...) could you e-mail me when this story updates? i love this and hope to see more chapters up soon!
-OhBrother
I have never read a fanfic where the characters are so lovingly and intricately characterized. I agree, Sess is off the map OOC, but he's still incredibly addictive to read....I want more of this story!
Also, you have teased me with Inuyasha's redemption and restoration.....where does this lead? I like him now, and I want to know more!
MORE! MORE! MORE!
Ok, now that I've had my little tantrum, may I politely ask the very talented author to update this most engaging and entertaining story???? ;-)
Therisa- Mon 07 Apr 2008
I've read this story atleast five times and I love it more each time! It's such a great story! I love that you've made Sesshoumaru into a tora youkai, it's the first time I've ever seen him portrayed as anything other than a inu youkai or a human in some AU fics. And, if I read the update date on Progression correctly, you're back! It's absolute torture not having you update, your stories are so amazing! I's so so so glad you're writing again! This is, without a doubt, my favorite fanfic ever, and I've read quite a few good ones. Thank you for returning,
~Therisa~
May- Sun 06 Apr 2008
I absolutely love your story =P i noe this is probably often asked...but i can't help it since your story is irresistably intriguing, when are you going to updatE?! lol
jessica- Mon 31 Mar 2008
wow wow wow awesome i loved it plesae keep going and can you email me at jessica_cocom@yahoo.com when you add a new chapter
みはる- Sun 23 Mar 2008
I wanted to congratulate you on the fabulous fic that "Through the mirror" is.... It's just marvellous how you can blend so much in such a small space.... But I was wondering why has the story been "on the shelf" as it may, for so long... it's simply so wonderfull a story to be left behind....
I can't wait to read the next chapter...!!!!!
Yay! I love it! Can't wait for more. If you're doing the update thing (I honestly can't remember, since it's taken me up to four days to read it, because of work) then my email is theannoyedangel@yahoo.com Just email me and I'll read and review, know how much it means to me when my readers do the same thing. Anyway, Thanks and peace out.
~TH~
Oh what weds you'd weaved ^-^ This is just too good. And I bet it's just going to get better!
I love the new look for Sess-sama ;3 To me he fall down the semxy tree, hit all the branches on the way down, then the tree fall on him...or was it the forest? Oh well....
And poor Freyr I just want to hug him >.>, Whoa what happens if Sango picks both!? *blush* That would be hot having two guys. Wow I'm a pervert! Damn you Miroku-sensei....!
I hope you update soon I'll be looking forward to write another review!
Hikari hime- Tue 04 Mar 2008
Wow!!
This was.... unexpected. Good though, I don't mind being surprised once in a while.
The scenario is very original, so I enjoyed it, and your style of writing is just honey for the eyes.
Sesshoumaru is very OOC, but the character makes sense in your story so I appreciated it.
Dewa mata
Hikari chan ^^
Jen- Sun 02 Mar 2008
I just found A Single Spark yesterday. I stayed up until 5am reading this story. I just wanted to let you know that I thought it was wonderful, and hope that it will be continued soon.
That's it...I'm hooked. I seriously want to know what will happen next. Sesshoumaru as a feline...somehow it fits and I think I may have fallen even more in love with his character. Drop me an email when you update again please. :P
kagslovessess- Tue 26 Feb 2008
hey Sidhe when are u gonna add a new chapter to TTM? i really love the story and i cant wait to find out what happends next
FluffyLady- Wed 20 Feb 2008
aah!!! i didn't realize the end of what u had written was that close. oh i love this story, even if i am partial to canids rather than felines. lol. neway, update soon plz. u've got me hooked!!
FL
ps, if u could send me an email when u update, i would be most appreciative. *bows*
Inuzands- Mon 18 Feb 2008
I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story. It hooked me from the very beginning, and the fact that you can make Sess not only Scandinavian, but also a cat, and do it believably, is quite commendable. I also can't decide if Sango should stay with Miroku or give Freyr a chance. I feel so bad for him. Anyways, I hope your muse decides to revisit this story, because if not, I will be doomed to a pathetic existence made up of reading this entire story every week. Le sigh. But anyways, well done, and I look forward to reading more of your writing, be it 'Through the Mirror' or any of your other fics.
Dehlia- Mon 18 Feb 2008
I love this story! I must've read it over a hundred times now. But I need to know what'll happen next. Please update as soon as possible (Preferably in the next couple of days).
Luna Angel- Wed 13 Feb 2008
Wow this is so different but i like it its like i cant stop reading cuz i want to know what happenes next! i hope u update soon! unlike me who has trouble updating on fanfiction! grr lol well its AWSOME and i hope u write more REALLY soon! lol
Luna Angel
soulfire- Wed 13 Feb 2008
Awesome fic!!!
Can't wait for the next installment!!
RoyalAdmant- Sun 10 Feb 2008
Can I just say that this is a fasinating story so far! It has me enthralled and bursting with laughter so randomly I think I'm starting to laugh at myself. Bows to the mistress of the fic!
hentaivixen- Tue 05 Feb 2008
omg!! i totally love it so far!! please up date soon!
K.M.- Sat 02 Feb 2008
It's been a long time and I almost have this story memorized, but I still come back to it. When are you going to update? You have me on edge for a while now and I'm going crazy. Please update!!
mimi1000100535- Mon 28 Jan 2008
Hey there Sidhe!
First off I love ur story! I have reread it 6 times now it is 1 of my fave stories ever!! Sol I hope u update soon!!
Your's truly
mimi1000100535
Lizzy S.- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Hey, I'm only on chapter 12, but I just have to say that your Miroku is so awesomely badass. Anways, great story- I'm gonna keep reading now. XD
Hi! This is one of the best ideas for fics that I've ever seen!! Hope that you try to finish it... Good Lucky
burgundyburning- Sat 19 Jan 2008
If you're stuck, I think you should just skip to some fight with Naraku when you kill off Miroku ('cause he's gotta go) and proceed to the Viking goodness. Good Luck.
Nikki- Tue 15 Jan 2008
OMG that was great. I loved the dragonlance metion. I am glad to see that someone other than me is willing to put a D&D touch to a story. I hope you continue with this story. I would love to see where it goes.
Mujitsu- Mon 14 Jan 2008
This story is so intriguing to me, I can't seem to keep my mind off of it. I've been checking weekly for an update, and I do hope you are still continuing this story. The plot itself is so original, as well as Sesshoumaru's character. I love the interactions you have between the characters, it makes for a wonderful read. Great stories are hard to come by nowadays, but yours sucked me in and made me addicted. I do hope you'll update soon. I'll try to wait patiently.
Mujitsu
Jade_Fox- Mon 14 Jan 2008
I really love your story. The description is soo good. Sess and Kags is such a good couple and ur story is so cute and romantic. What about Naraku? Why hasnt Miroku said anything yet? Will there be a confrontation betweent the two guys? Please continoue ur story. Ive been waiting forever.
2 Souls 1 Body Half-Girl- Fri 11 Jan 2008
This fic is absolutely wonderful I love your creativity for the storyline. It's refreshing to read a fic with such original ideas. I must admit, I am highly delighted and impressed to create pressing situations for all your characters. It is very much appreciated that you mamaged to make all p.o.v's so interesting. I find myself relieved to know I wouldn't dare skip through any of the story, for fear of missing out on the delicious plot. Keep up the excellent and intresting work.
OVER & OUT from 2 Souls!!!
Rek- Thu 10 Jan 2008
I LOVE this story. In fact I check every day to see if the next chapter is out yet. You are a wonderful author. The whole Tora twist is absolutely beyond awesome. I have a binder at home for my favorite stories called 'Epic'. "Through the Mirror" is joining them. Highest praises.
dreamer789- Wed 09 Jan 2008
AHHH! i LOVE it! i wonder whats going to happen with sango now... she was pulled to him in his demon form, though she didnt really act on it. OH i cant wait to find out what happens next. PLEASE update soon i cant wait!
dreamer789- Wed 09 Jan 2008
AHHH! i LOVE it! i wonder whats going to happen with sango now... she was pulled to him in his demon form, though she didnt really act on it. OH i cant wait to find out what happens next. PLEASE update soon i cant wait!
Shelby- Wed 09 Jan 2008
wow!....You are amazing, I have read a great many fanfics and have found this one to be my overall favoirte! I hope you continue to work on this one, I look forward to see what else you have in store for your readers.
xoxox
Shelby- Wed 09 Jan 2008
wow!....You are amazing, I have read a great many fanfics and have found this one to be my overall favoirte! I hope you continue to work on this one, I look forward to see what else you have in store for your readers.
xoxox
Samantha- Mon 31 Dec 2007
I love this story.. its freain awesome.. plz plz continue to update and e-mail me whenever u do.. ty ty ty
Uwaki Aisu- Sun 30 Dec 2007
I'm dying to know what happens! I'm even going to bookmark the pretty story...
Uwaki Aisu- Sat 29 Dec 2007
Scandinavian? I can't say I saw that coming, but it's a pleasant surprise.
matimay- Fri 28 Dec 2007
write more! please!
Saeko- Thu 27 Dec 2007
What happened to having more time to write, Sidhe...? I'm DYING here!!!! UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That said, really loving your story -- but you need to work on typos.
hope your hectic life changes soon. have you heard of computers for schools? in Canada, you can get free computers. computers for schools is a program that finds old computers, fixes them up, installs some necessary programs, and then sends them out to those who have ordered a computer. and best of all it's free. mabey you should call them.
Dehlia- Sun 23 Dec 2007
Aw, poor Freyr. I don't even know what outcome would be more painful: Sango could fall in love with Freyr and he would get the love he diserves, but Miroku would be crushed or she could stay in love with Miroku and Freyr could have his heart broken. They're both SAD! I just hope that Thor or somebody else has a just solution.
Dark Druidess- Thu 20 Dec 2007
I love this story... and have read it at leasr four times over so far., will you continue it at some point?
Wowzers- Wed 21 Nov 2007
I am extremely impressed with this story! You give your characters unique quirks and faults that blend wonderfully. I am not worried that you won't finish your stories. I know how hard it is to get back into the swing of things and hold on to your inspiration. Hang in there, k? Inuyasha is finding himself. (Good for him) Norse-Tora Sesshoumaru is truly amazing...and he has hot, lovable brothers too! Can we say swoon? The only thing I feel squicky about is Sango's new love interest. I feel there was growth and great build-up in her and Miroku's relationship, and now it seems it was all for nothing. What about the kids? I would love S/M to come through even stronger because of this new competition. I can't wait for more Sess/Kag action or maybe mating! Best wishes!
Avoria- Sun 11 Nov 2007
Okay, so I really like your writing style - you're pretty good. But there is just one thing that is driving me up the wall; on your Mirror fic, you keep using the word "currant" in the capacity for time. That particular spelling of the word means berries. The word I think that you were looking for was current. Really sorry; I blame my fussiness on my mother.
clusterlizard1- Sat 10 Nov 2007
im warring between saying this is the better story to idiot's guide. but im gonna stick with saying that they are both at equal level. i love thor freyr, they're all so cool (can i have one?). cant wait for the next chapter... and please email me with update notice and url...
~clusterlizard1
well.. once again, it seems that you are taking months to update. actually, if i remember correctly, it's been about 3 months... what happend to you? are you ok?, did something happen? if something bad happend, i hope your ok... I'm getting worried.....please, if your ok, then at least say something! *is worried* *paces back 'n fourth, wearing a hole past the carpet, floor, floorboards, and into the apartment beneath me.*
GG- Sun 04 Nov 2007
why younot update yet? whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?!
i think i gonna cry! boo hoo hoo!
snowbird- Wed 24 Oct 2007
Please, I'm whining and begging for an update. Also, when are they going to mate? What's the holdup? I know at first he was waiting for her to give him the go ahead. Well, she did and that was a while back. So now what's the holdup? If I was Kag, I'd be wanting to know what he was waiting for. Also, I think it's a nice touch that you have a Rin-like child following inuyasha instead of Sess. It's just a little confusing as to why her parents let her go with him. After all, he's a complete stranger and a hanyou, even if he did save her life. I guess I'm thinking from todays views that you have to protect your children from strangers, even if they seem nice. I hope Sango gets with Freyr even if she is pregnant since it seems Miroku is reluctant to make the final commitment. I've always liked it when they mate other characters in stories. It adds a nice background twist to the plot of the story. Anyway, enough rambling from me, just update. I check this story almost daily from my favorites list. If you can't update for some reason, at least leave an A/N so your fans will know you haven't forgot about us.
Bluumberry- Mon 22 Oct 2007
I started reading your story yesterday and it's been a wonderful read so far.
Your original plot twists have been a joy to read and the characterization has been true to each of them in my opinion.
Inoticed the lack of Shippo's presence in the story and although you explained it later it felt like a rushed out explanation for his absence. I was also pondering about Sesshoumaru's "true form". The inu one I mean, was it all just shapeshifting in the past?
The newest plot twist to Sango and Miroku's relationship is interesting and I look forward to reading what will happen. You also haven't really tapped into the completion of the jewel part of the story which I see is coming along at some point.
I'm a bit concerned about where you are going with the story, any other destination except Kagome and Sesshoumaru's eventual mating? Because you have hinted that Naraku won't be a problem for them to defeat, and Sesshoumaru's trip to his Grandshire but whatelse are you going to come up with?
Well I guess I'll see later ^^'' Thanks for a great read!
Sarah- Sat 20 Oct 2007
Wow, I've read through this entire story today and I'm hooked! There's so much to say but I'll just go with the most recent plot twist. That was completely unexpected and I can't wait to see how it plays out. Will poor Miroku gain a child but lose his love? Will Freyr be doomed to a loveless existance? Oh, the angst potential! Count me in as a devoted fan who can't wait!
GG- Fri 19 Oct 2007
okay- so i read your story, then my computer goes crazy- all the history vanishes and i can't find your story again. then i search for it for a month- and finnally find it, to see that you didn't update. why? why? why? why why why why wwwwwhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyy? why do you hate me soo? plz plz update. this is my favorite stoy!
snowbird- Thu 18 Oct 2007
HEY!!!!!!!!!! Hello out there! Where are you? You said back in July that you would have more time to update more oftern. There have been no updates since then. If something has happened to prevent updating, please let your fans at least know something. This is such a beautiful, unique story and I'm anxious that it does not get ignored or abandoned.
tuffyfluffy- Fri 12 Oct 2007
update.......update.........update...... please :):):):):):):) its just so wonerful.....
blackest hell dragon- Thu 11 Oct 2007
wheb r u going to update emial me when u do at dreamergarden@yahoo.com plz and thank u cant wait for next chap
Miko53- Tue 09 Oct 2007
This is a great new story and I would like to see more updates as there are few stories out there these days that have the same quality as these. Some of the newer authors should never write a ff as they can not appreciate this particular couple. Your stories are well written and capture the couple quite nicely. Please keep up your fine work. Hope to see an update soon.
Thanks so verrrry much.
Amanda- Fri 05 Oct 2007
Great job,on the whole story thus far. Omgosh.. I was so excited tonight when I looked and found like FOUR new chapters to read...yes it was that long ago that I last checked..oops.. oh well. I guess I can start checking daily for updates again ahaha :) keep up the awesome work. I just love how the whole thing flows adn the descriptions and EVERYTHING! xD
Please update soon. It has been two months and I am having bad withdrawal symptoms. :-)
courtney- Tue 25 Sep 2007
this story is absolutely fantastic. i really enjoy this story. i cant wait to finish it. and i hope that you continue writing stories because i think you have a wonderful talent for it. so best wishes on your future stories.
naughty angel- Mon 24 Sep 2007
I am begging you to please continue!! It has been so long since we had a new chapter! Please stop depriving your loyal readers! It is too good of a story.
rosegarden of youko- Fri 21 Sep 2007
love this story one of thr best ive read so far update real soon plz
Jenn- Thu 20 Sep 2007
I love love love this!!!!!!!!! You don't even know how much and now I'm bound and you must keep writing!! SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!! AHHHH!! I'm so jelous and I wish I was actually in it!!! T_T I love it!!!! WOW!!! All I can say is WOW!
The_Mad_Dragon- Tue 18 Sep 2007
Egads. Located the story through another webpage, read the first chapter, and found myself firmly and securely hooked.
My first, and initial, comment is to applaud your characterisations. Rarely have I had the great pleasure to read a story with such emotional deep and varied characters. Each have their own personal quirks, and while being as unpredictable as one could expect, they act within the bounderies set of their personalities.
Secondly, I adore your version of Sesshoumaru. The details about his ancestry, his nature, and his kinships are wonderfully done, and it is by far the best 'AU' characterisation I have ever encountered.
And then, I cannot say how much I squee in delight at the mix of the Nordic culture and mythology. Not to mention the language tossed in here and there.
*squee* and such cliffhangers! I'll be keeping an eye on the story for any further updates - this whole mess with Freyr, Sango and Miroku is so very intriguing and riddled with possibilities.
Seli- Thu 13 Sep 2007
Oh my fucking god
DRAGONLANCE!!! 333333333333333333
Im sorry, I am officially addicted to -anything- from that series. Epically a white haired black-robed mage named Raistlin.
You should base a character off of him...that would kick so much ass...either that or Chemosh...mmm Chemosh.
I love this story so much...I think I have some earlier reviews...havent been reading Sess/Kag fanfics as much anymore...I have a life --;; (By that I mean school, job, boyfriend, the works)
Honestly, add a character or two based off of Dragonlance characters...DAMNIT do Tas for the love of god. The comic relief!!! xD
Update! UPDate!! UPDATE!!! There Will Be Hell 2 Pay If You Don't Update Soon. I Love This Story It's Different From All Any Story I've Ever Read!! So Please Author 2 Author You HAVE 2 Update!! Until Then,
AristocraticAssassinLover
Lawrence- Sun 02 Sep 2007
Where's chapter 33?
Miranda Sapphira- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Wonderful story! cant wait for an update!
omg i love your story. it keeps me on edge.
i must say. the moment i think or dare to assume i understand what's going on you throw in another surprise. right now my mind is just spinning... so much going on and i'm still trying to piece it all together.
so sess is more than inu. i finally get that.
inuyasha's a jerk, that's clearly established.
kagome's gonna mate sess... duh.
sango's pregnant, possibly twins and doesnt know, but miroku kinda does... woah (seems like he should be propsing any day now)
sess has two other brothers (cute might i add)
one of those brothers want sango, but realizes he can't have her... bummer
the shikon jewel clearly has issues and secrets and is afraid of sess's brother... interesting
inuyasha's in a tree with a little girl... which is kinda weirdly confusing, cute, and strange all at once
and throughout all of this i wish to ask.....
where is shippo?
this about sums up my review. i do hope i am not missing anything. i think i kinda somewhat understand what's going on. if not i'm sure it will become clear soon enough.
while waiting for you too udate i was re-reading some chapter's and fonnaly relaized who sesshomaru reminds me of in this story. Edward! from twlight! love your story, please update again soon
rowdysgirl- Fri 24 Aug 2007
i love this story so far. i love your writing. if you ever go professional, you have to let me know. yeah, i would spend actual $$$ to ready your stories. i can't offer higher praise than that.
sparky- Fri 24 Aug 2007
Where'd you go?
I love your fics. I hope you come back and update soon!
Shanalir- Thu 23 Aug 2007
I missed the last couple of updates, and I don't know how it happened! It must have been during a couple of periods where I wasn't able to get on for a day or two. Anyway, now that I'm caught up, I have to say, I love what's happening with Inuyahsa and his new companion/ward. He's really becoming someone you can like again, and it's great to see. And poor Freyr! I feel so bad for him. I hope things work out OK for him. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope you can post it soon!
Jay- Wed 22 Aug 2007
This is my favorite fan fic so far. I love it! Please continue.
matimay- Thu 16 Aug 2007
finaly your writing agian. i absolutly love your story its nothing like the others and sesshomarus past is highly...intriguing. if you were to change names and stuff you could easly have a well known book. well good luck to you and your muse! :D
itachiiyoubastard- Tue 14 Aug 2007
Question.. Where the bloody hell are you?! The great, Sidhe-sama has not updated in her orgasmic stories in a millenia and I'm growing very feral. (My apologies if you have more important things to do and are therefore busy, but I hope you don't leave your adoring fans hanging. Especially one that goes psychotic at a seemingly updated, HIGHLY FAVOURED story, but turns out to be nothing.) *salutes you*
KawaiiDemons- Tue 07 Aug 2007
Uh oh! Big problem huh? Solution: kill Miroku off! Muhahahaha! LOL, just kidding...maybe. Anyways, love this fic too, do add me to this update list please? Oh yeah, *gasp* Sesshoumaru's a CAT!
K.M.- Mon 06 Aug 2007
I'm finished!! And now I demand you either psot a chapter for this fic or An Idiot's Guild To Dog Demons. It dosent matter I like them both and both are great!! so I'm looking foward to the next chapters!!!!
Jade_Fox- Sat 04 Aug 2007
Awesom fic. Im so glad uve updated it. I thought this one would remain unfinished. I am so glad i was wrong. Cant wait for the next update. Keep it up. Ur a real good writer. Finding out that Shessou is a Tiger is really something. Hey does Rin or Naraku show in this fic?
Update soon :)
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to read the next installment of it!
K.M.- Wed 01 Aug 2007
Wow!!! I really like it so far I'm on chapter 18, but I have to go so I'll finish later. Sesshoumaru a cat!!! He is a tiger right? Oh and the poem at the end it's from a book I've read I can't remember the name of it but it was the one before "Demon in my View". Keep up the good work!!!
YAY!! More Sango In the Story! I Hoped Something Would Happen!!!! But I Feel Mad 4 Miroku Now....I Wonder Which She Will Chose? Or Will She Even Have 2? Hmmmm....Well, Please Update Soon!!
Ciao Darling!
Kagome-Chan ♥
Libertine- Fri 27 Jul 2007
I have complete faith that whoever Sango ends up with will be the right one for her, mainly cause you're an amazing writer and any way you write it will still be interesting intriguing and well reasoned. I doubt she'll just dump Miroku run into Freyr's open arms and it's over. No this twist will only make the story more interesting. Tension and angst and love, Oh my! I'm so happy you've updated, and I can't wait till the time to do it again!
Ashley- Wed 25 Jul 2007
update request. I love this story. i read it in one day and fell in love. it is just amazing. i have to say that it is one of the best i have read in a long time. congrats. you have done a magnificent job with this story. the charactors are well portrayed, the story line never seems to drag on. keep writing and update soon!
nobody- Tue 24 Jul 2007
This is going to sound mean, but i don't actually want Sango to go with Freyr. Sango should end up with Miroku, i was never very fond of her, but please don't have this "affair" go on for very long.
I also think that you should add any more of your own characters. although if you do so, remember that they should play smaller roles.
ps. i love all of your fanfics!
Akasha- Mon 23 Jul 2007
I'm so glad that you have updated but between this story and the other you will have your hands full trying to update both. I love them both and will try to be patient as you update them. Keep up the good writing.
yay update... too short... more please... on another note... i'm not sure if i like about the situation between sango and the demon... i feel bad for the demon but i'm a sango/miroku fan... oh well... update soon so we can see how it turns out but i prefer more kag/sessh interaction... and also what's with yash and the little girl....
Sesshys1-n-only- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Poor Freyr! Sango has a confusing attraction to him and he her, but neither can act on it. how frustrating! cant wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
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